Comments

Get Comments

Email the following people to post a comment summarizing the following on your stories:

It is recommended to ask more people in case some forget or don't comment. It is your responsibility that they post by the due date on the calendar.

• Have your partner (if you have one) comment on your ideas (later you and your partner will choose the best idea from the both of your ideas combined)
• One classmate in any current computer class who you think is creative
• One student who already took this class in the past

Hi,

Could you help me out? I am writing a children's story for kids in computer apps and I came up with six different ideas using various methods. Could you make a comment on this link, ___________, and sign in with your facebook, twitter, or posterous account to make the comment? The comment is suppose to cover the following:

• Tell me which idea you think is best and explain why
• Please give me one or two creative ideas you have to improve or build upon the storyline...it is suppose to be creative, original, and not predictable

Story Decision

After you have all of the needed comments and after reading the comments from others about your ideas and lots of thinking, decide on a winning story idea and write a comment on your post of your previous ideas under the people's comments you asked to comment on the previous checkpoint.

In the comment, thank everyone for their comments and let them know which story idea you are going to choose at this point.

Take a screenshot of the comments when finished and post to posterous along with the link to the article that shows the comments. Then copy and paste the story idea you want to go with and edit the idea based on your helpful comments or additional ideas you had to make it better. Also, follow the directions below and attach the photo to this article checkpoint which you will be later be inserting into your story on the author page:

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