Peer Editing Story

Ask someone you respect (e.g. student, former student, graduate) with a Gmail account to view your MF Picasa

album which has your complete story with your scenes/Illustrations and the story's text in the caption. Have them read through your story and ask them to make comments on only how to improve each scene. Tell them to comment if something does not make sense or if part of the story is confusing. They can also comment about your designs in AI.

Give feedback on how to improve in the comment boxes below every picture:

• Title, author, and dedication composition, typography, layout, text/element sizes, and colors
• Backgrounds: layout, colors, clarity, perspective, angle
• Characters: colors, use of the mesh/gradient tools if used, quality, placement, proportions
• Story: edit any spelling or grammar mistakes and suggest ways to improve the story
• Narration: watch their video and suggest ways to improve the narration speed, voice changes, etc.
• Also on the narration page, insert a comment for each of the following (you should guess, do not ask or try to find the right answer; you will not be counted off for guessing wrong; this helps the author know if their story is clear). This particular comment is optional.