Story Project Ex IV

Tamas graduated from YISS in 2010 and was one of my top students in skill, ever. He always went above and beyond the requirements.

Check out his story project; his Illustrator skills in his drawings are amazing and maculate. Also, the fighting scene he created with himself fighting the warriors using After Effects is crazy. Although, no project is perfect. His storyline was hard to understand at times, especially the ending. That is why it is so important to have a good storyline that anyone can clearly understand. (He also went way over the time limit and was deducted points.)

Watch the entire video and comment on one or two specific things you liked and one or two specific things he could have done to improve it.

Optional

If you have time, check out his creative video using the same person as two characters like Sharon did with her great video.