2007 FRQ #2
Post date: Jan 24, 2014 9:34:59 PM
(Suggested time—40 minutes. This question counts as one-third of the total essay section score.)
Read carefully the following passage from Dalton Trumbo’s novel Johnny Got His Gun (1939). Then write a well-organized essay in which you analyze how Trumbo uses such techniques as point of view, selection of detail, and syntax to characterize the relationship between the young man and his father.
The campfire was built in front of a tent and the
tent was under an enormous pine. When you slept
inside the tent it seemed always that it was raining
outside because the needles from the pine kept falling.
5 Sitting across from him and staring into the fire was
his father. Each summer they came to this place
which was nine thousand feet high and covered with
pine trees and dotted with lakes. They fished in the
lakes and when they slept at night the roar of water
10 from the streams which connected the lakes sounded
in their ears all night long.
They had been coming to this place ever since he
was seven. Now he was fifteen and Bill Harper was
going to come tomorrow. He sat in front of the fire
15 and looked across at his father and wondered just how
he was going to tell him. It was a very serious thing.
Tomorrow for the first time in all their trips together
mind I’ll get up early in the morning and meet Harper
and he and I will go fishing.
35 For a little while his father didn’t say a thing. Then
he said why sure go along Joe. And then a little later
his father said has Bill Harper got a rod? He told his
father no Bill hasn’t a rod. Well said his father why
don’t you take my rod and let Bill use yours? I don’t
40 want to go fishing tomorrow anyhow. I’m tired and I
think I’ll rest all day. So you use my rod and let Bill
use yours.
It was as simple as that and yet he knew it was a
great thing. His father’s rod was a very valuable one.
45 It was perhaps the only extravagance his father had
had in his whole life. It had amber leaders and
beautiful silk windings. Each spring his father sent the
rod away to a man in Colorado Springs who was an
expert on rods. The man in Colorado Springs
50 carefully scraped the varnish off the rod and rewound
it and revarnished it and it came back glistening new
each year. There was nothing his father treasured
more. He felt a little lump in his throat as he thought
that even as he was deserting his father for Bill
55 Harper his father had volunteered the rod.
They went to sleep that night in the bed which lay
against a floor of pine needles. They had scooped the
needles out to make a little hollow place for their hips.
He lay awake quite a while thinking about tomorrow
60 and his father who slept beside him. Then he fell
asleep. At six o’clock Bill Harper whispered to him
through the tent flap. He got up and gave Bill his rod
and took his father’s for himself and they went off
without awakening his father.
he wanted to go fishing with someone other than his
father. On previous trips the idea had never occurred
20 to him. His father had always preferred his company
to that of men and he had always preferred his
father’s company to that of the other guys. But now
Bill Harper was coming up tomorrow and he wanted
to go fishing with him. He knew it was something that
25 had to happen sometime. Yet he also knew that it was
the end of something. It was an ending and a
beginning and he wondered just how he should tell his
father about it.
So he told him very casually. He said Bill Harper’s
30 coming up tomorrow and I thought maybe I’d go out
with him. He said Bill Harper doesn’t know very
much about fishing and I do so I think if you don’t