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1. Take a sandal. 2. Put it on a horse. 3. Vote. 4. Repeat steps 1-3 until Com'c is #1 on TWC.
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Yes, Ella addresses Cal as "mr. Meletie". The str'p originally put a little more focus on this than in the end result by having Cal ask her not to be so formal, but I had to cut those lines for space. This is one of a few ways her behavior may change slightly now that she has a personality. I'm just going to admit that this is a minor retcon.
The picture on the wall (Vee is about eight years old in it) accounted for a lot of the work behind this str'p, and I'm personally pleased with how it turned out. I might make a version with a higher resolution later. In the meantime, here's a sized-up version:
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