September 2012 Kukai

The Shiki Monthly Kukai

September 2012 Kukai

Dear Friends,

Here are the results for the September 2012 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was DROUGHT, and our Free Format subject was CLOUD SHAPES

 

Congratulations to *** Michele L. Harvey***, winner of our Kigo section and to ***John Soules***, winner of our Free Format section! 

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The haiku are listed in order of total points received from voters. The numbers reflect the number of voters who gave the haiku either three points, two points, or one point -- followed by the total points for all votes.

Those who were given less than three points and who requested anonymity in such a case are so noted. 

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In the listing below, after each poem the author is listed, and then a three digit code revealing how many 3-point, 2-point, and 1-point points were cast for this poem by the other participating poets.

(2,1,4 = 12) would indicate that the poem above received two 3-point votes, one 2-point vote, and four 1-point votes.

 

VOTER'S comments are in italics below the respective poems.

 

September 2012 Results

Kigo Theme:

DROUGHT 

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First Place -  30pts

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dry season

stones rise

in the stream bed

 

Michele L. Harvey

(2,4,16) = 30 pts

 

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Second Place -  22pts

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Drought -

between the farmer's eyebrows

deepening lines.

 

Zhanna P. Rader

(1,6,7) = 22 pts

 

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Third Place -  21pts

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drought

the redness of the bougainvillea

deepens

 

Bill Hudson

(0,5,11) = 21 pts

 

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17 Points

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blue moon

the crackle of grass

underfoot

 

carol pearce-worthington

(0,5,7) = 17 pts

 

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16 Points

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waiting

for the water truck ...

dust devils

 

Chandra Bales

(0,2,12) = 16 pts

 

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14 Points

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drought -

dry stones in

the brook

 

Tomislav

(1,4,3) = 14 pts

 

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13 Points

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dry ground --

he leaves without a kiss

again

 

Aalix Roake

(1,2,6) = 13 pts

 

drought

a willow bows down

to the river

 

Tore Sverredal

(1,2,6) = 13 pts

 

water shortage

my next door neighbor

flushes twice

 

Roberta Beary

(0,4,5) = 13 pts

** Living in a dry country, I know the feeling... so well expressed here!

 

prairie night

after the dust storm

the Big Dipper

 

Maxianne

(0,1,11) = 13 pts

** I love the contrast of the dust and starry sky so vividly yet simply described in this haiku…drought yet expansiveness, beautiful~

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12 Points

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dry spell

out of roiling dust

a pickup

 

if

(0,3,6) = 12 pts

 

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11 Points

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another rainless day...

the feel of my cat's

wet nose

 

Keiko

(0,1,9) = 11 pts

 

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10 Points

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dry spell-

all that's left

of mother's garden

 

Michael Dylan Welch

(1,0,7) = 10 pts

 

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9 Points

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parched earth

my tears

water the cracks

 

V.Leo.R

(1,1,4) = 9 pts

 

terrible drought –

my puppy buries his nose

into cracks

 

Andronic Andrea

(1,1,4) = 9 pts

 

drought -

empty silos

still

 

Carolyn Coit Dancy

(0,2,5) = 9 pts

 

summer drought--

stonework appears

in the reservoir

 

James Dobson

(0,1,7) = 9 pts

 

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8 Points

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autumn drought -

the story in

her liquid eyes

 

Stella Pierides

(1,1,3) = 8 pts

 

drought month...

nowhere to race

the paper boats

 

~Devika

(1,1,3) = 8 pts

 

empty sky

the long low whistle

of a passing train

 

Cara Holman

(0,3,2) = 8 pts

 

No rain

still

weeds

 

Dica

(0,2,4) = 8 pts

**So short. So much.

 

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7 Points

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drought -

in the drying pond

jumping fishes

 

Robert Kania

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

**Strong images, worth more than one point. But "drying" is too much for me.

 

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6 Points

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drought again,

even the farmers' tears,

have run dry

 

Hrushi Oka

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

dry rose bud

a dewdrop still clings

to a thorn

 

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

continuing drought

even the children's voices

muted

 

Angela Terry

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

two year drought

another season

without a homerun

 

Susan Sanchez-Barnett

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

drought . . .

the panhandler shakes

an empty cup

 

BILL KENNEY

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

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5 Points

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drought

is not a haiku subject

too dry

 

Mr. PC (Paul Cassidy)

(1,0,2) = 5 pts

 

dust and sun --

the riverbed flies

are living it up

 

Michael McClintock

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

dehydrated lake

my poet neighbor reels in

another haiku

 

Collin Barber

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

draught

even the wind

can't wet its whistle

 

Ben Gieske

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

no sign of rain-

the river too bony

to paddle

 

Kirsty Karkow

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

funeral day --

squinting through

the dust

 

Carol Raisfeld

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

dried-up corn fields

furrows on the farmer's face

look deeper

 

natalia kuznetsova

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

drought

even the birds

can't bathe

 

Barbara Campitelli

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

desolation

between the heifer's horns

trapped tumbleweed

 

Barbara A Taylor

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

conversation

at the watering hole

dries up

 

Paul R

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

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4 Points

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the tree taproot

digging down deep

I find water

 

Ernesto P. Santiago

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

Postcard from Greek beach

to parents in Iowa:

"Vacation rained out."

 

Horst Ludwig

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

drought...

a barren tree reflected

in the farmer's tear

 

Rita Odeh

(0,2,0) = 4 pts

 

shriveled corn -

the cow bawls

for more

 

Carmel Lively Westerman

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

drought ...

every saint has 

a bee in his halo

 

Cezar F. Ciobica

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

withered saplings

a layer of dust

in the eaves trough

 

Harvey Jenkins

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

drought

the trees let go

another gust of leaves

 

aom (tim)

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

dry creek bed

a layer of red dust settles

on bleached bones

 

Liz Rule

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

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3 Points

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terrible drought -

a green lizard steals

in the dry grass

 

Virginia Popescu

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

drought -

into the earth deepness

is slinking the moon

 

STOPS

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

graveside prayer . . .

all the colours drained

from a drought laden sky

 

Ron C. Moss

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

brown maize crops

rustling in the dry wind --

cloudless sky

 

~ Patrick Wafula

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

drought

the corn plant's leaves

coated with dust

 

April Serock

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

empty clouds

the landscape drained of

chlorophyll

 

Barbara Snow

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

finally the rain--

rhythm of drops

on dry cracked soil

 

jill

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

drought --

I imagine fields

of sweet william

 

Angie Werren

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

thirsty hill tops...

leafless trees swaying

in the morning dust

 

Keith A. Simmonds

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

drought

the contrails'

cross

 

gogatsu

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

Zen splash fountain

The only sound of water

This dry season

 

Mary E. Gray

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

drought -

the stream's

white bones

 

John McDonald

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

they talk

of drought -

Sunday service

 

Mike Montreuil

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

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2 Points

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dry river bottom

save one drop

of sweat

 

Alan S. Bridges

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

dark clouds drift pass

brown grass crunches underfoot

broken promises

 

D W Skrivseth

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

High drought...

more and more moist

granny's eyes

 

Ailoaei Cristina

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

i step away from

the parched earth

- why add to its woes?

 

miriam chaikin

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

trimming the hedge --

a fresh green cactus

on the dry grass

 

~ James Bundi

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

drought-dusted corn

an old man sits

on the tractor seat

 

Alice Frampton

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

after the drought

tufts of green

promises I made

 

Donna Bauerly

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

my parched throat

she says just

an old friend

 

Gregory Longenecker

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

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1 Point

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sound of insects

the sun glints off

the drought brook

 

~~Merrill Ann Gonzales

 

parched tundra*

 

Robert Henry Poulin

 

drought...

filling the bird feeder

with sugared water

 

André Surridge 

**There's poignancy in the ironic detail of the last line that got my vote in this haiku. I love how a single word would hint at deep caring, to which even a cat would relate.

 

back to school

a sprinkler waters

yellow lawn

 

Ralf Bröker

 

 a thirsty rose

sharpening its thorns -

lingering drought

 

Juhani Tikkanen

 

 dried up slough

cattle trough's a new perch

for the great heron

 

-- ushi

 

 drought shriveled tomatoes

promise sweet grapes

 

gourdman

 

 long journey --

a herdsman shakes off

dust from his feet

 

~ Kevin Wanjala

 

 dry remark

the sparkle

in her eyes

 

Oddbjørn Aardalen

 

 parched grass

over the hills a mauve mist

of pennyroyal

 

Elaine Riddell

 

 another dawn --

he prays for salvation

from starvation

 

~ iddi rajab

 

drought

the empty chair

this nth night

 

Alegria Imperial

 

 thirsty woman --

she hopefully checks her

water drum

 

~ max kutahi (student entry)

 

 the stream

farther and farther

fata morgana

 

Irena Iris Szewczyk

 

drought . . .

the potter's wrinkles

formless

 

Peter O. Silvani

 

 dry lightning in drought gods tease the rain dancer

 

Anonymous

 

 thunder

all around us

dust clouds

 

John Soules

 

terrible drought -

Grandpa talks in stable

with the cows

 

Petru-Ioan Garda

 

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No Points This Time, Sorry.

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burn ban lifts-

after five years

the lake a wading pool

 

bre

 

squirrel builds drey

dry leaves rustle...

fire nests in my thoughts

 

dragonfly

 

zero chance of rain

a blue van sets off

in a cloud of exhaust

 

Anonymous

 

 relief of

a drought inflicted Earth-

hurricane

 

C.D. Southards

 

an African pond

a hidden crocodile against

some gazelles

 

Reza

 

too long without rain

crops wither in sunbaked soil

farm in foreclosure

 

Deirdre Godwin

 

a crying child

holding an empty bowl --

empty granary

 

~ Irene Mwangi

 

summer's end -

cloudless skies, high over

long parched earth

 

Darrell Byrd

 

death's drought

our kisses dry as

spring lamb's bones

 

Karin Anderson

 

first daffodil:

decisively ends

winter drought of colours

 

-- Chitra Rajappa

 

wilting corn --

children chewing

on maize stalks

 

~ Bamboocha

 

 lingering heat

day and night endless drought--

the corn dry husks

 

John Daleiden

 

my eyes burn-

thick dust sifts up from tufts

of parched grass

 

Marylouise Knight

 

a mother is weeping

her sick child cries -

no rain in sight

 

Leslie Montgomery

 

drought-withered grass

longs for the end

of the hosepipe ban

 

Frances O'Keeffe

 

dogs feasting

on animal carcases --

parched land

 

~ Jane Diana

 

chickadee's cry

even the mother's tears

bone dry

 

Jayashree Maniyil

 

 all eluding rains

farm lands suffer cracks and pains

drought in all, trains guns

 

Purushotham Rao Ravela

 

 hazy sunset

automatic lawn sprinkler

rabbits wait

 

Anonymous

 

football drought

he buys his wife the latest TV

 

Terra Martin

 

 Brown grass

no rain this week

dry mouth.

 

Trevor Camp

 

hot afternoon --

a group of dead animals

beside the riverbank

 

~ nancy otinga

 

 Caked with dust coiled snake barely shaded by coughing scarecrow

 

Kurt W.

 

dust bowl ~

black-tailed jackrabbits

prove the last straw

 

sara winteridge

 

black calf --

it lies still in the

dry grounds

 

~ teresia wanjiru

 

nothing but sun

the glare off the farmer's

windshield

 

--Peter Newton

 

no rain

the garden untended

abandoned

 

Beth Powell

 

January drought --

watering the kale plants

from the sewer

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

 

hollowness in

the stomach of farmer

dry farmlands

 

Ramesh Anand

 

drought--

the starving rivers

of her Motherland

 

Bill Pauly

 

only a trickle --

I skilfully bath to preserve

the water

 

~ Elijah Juma

 

still counting

too many rainless days

the desert waits

 

Mark A. Fisher

 

dry winds flip

a Mayan calendar

thirsting for words

 

Hansha Teki (New Zealand)

 

Safari Rally --

a cloud of dust covers

reporters' cameras

 

~ caxton okoth

 

first light

thick blanket of fog

floats over parched cornfield

 

Hazel A. Witherspoon

 

In old Africa

Long dreamy days

No rain

 

Angelika Kolompar

 

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General Comments:

**Thanks again for this chance of reading and voting for some exquisite pieces.

 

**It has been tough trying to select from the bunch of some very lovely haiku. Almost painful to drop some of them because I could not stretch my 6 points further!!

 

**It's amazing to me that so many entries were similar with such a provocative kigo.

 

**P.S.: I felt that the "drought" kigo must have really resonated with your "kukaiers." It seems like there were many more solid haiku this time out than I remember for a long time--maybe ever. I suspect that this harsh, pervasive drought has moved people deeply.

Free Format Theme:

CLOUD SHAPES 

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First Place -  19pts

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dark clouds

the shape of things

to come

 

John Soules

(0,5,9) = 19 pts

 

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Second Place -  16pts

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fishing ...

the mackerel

sky

 

gogatsu

(1,2,9) = 16 pts

 

AND

 

full moon --

cumulus clouds slowly

form a wolf

 

~ Patrick Wafula

(0,5,6) = 16 pts

 

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Third Place -  15pts

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kids all grown

a cloud

is a cloud

 

BILL KENNEY

(2,1,7) = 15 pts

 

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14 Points

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 storytelling

all the shapes

in her clouds

 

Jayashree Maniyil

(0,2,10) = 14 pts

 

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11 Points

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low clouds --

a landscape drifting

across my street

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

(1,2,4) = 11 pts

 

desert sky -

streaks of blue and pink

on her canvas

 

Carmel Lively Westerman

(1,1,6) = 11 pts

** I really like this lovely haiku and would have given it a vote if it had mentioned a cloud shape.

 

two year old

each cloud

a truck or a tractor

 

Beth Powell

(0,3,5) = 11 pts

 

storm clouds -

the moon etches

silver linings

 

V.Leo.R

(0,2,7) = 11 pts

 

night clouds . . .

the circus muscle man

opens a cage

 

Michael McClintock

(0,1,9) = 11 pts

 

scattered clouds

old lace with

fraying edges

 

Frances O'Keeffe

(0,1,9) = 11 pts

 

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10 Points

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sound of wind -

the elephant cloud

now a dog cloud

 

Israel López Balan

(1,1,5) = 10 pts

 

clouds

skywriting

poems

 

Bill Gottlieb

(0,3,4) = 10 pts

**Without sky- I would have given three points.

 

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9 Points

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graduation day-

a cloud in the shape

of your smile

 

Michael Dylan Welch

(1,1,4) = 9 pts

 

watching through

curtain clouds

moon's eye

 

Ben Gieske

(0,2,5) = 9 pts

 

cloud puffs...

another promise

to quit

 

Roberta Beary

(0,2,5) = 9 pts

 

after meditation

the same white cloud

- but different

 

Paul Hodder

(0,1,7) = 9 pts

 

fall morning

a cloud the shape

of the sky

 

Tore Sverredal

(0,1,7) = 9 pts

 

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8 Points

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the child

hands up in the air

sculpting her clouds

 

---- Aalix Roake

(0,3,2) = 8 pts

 

mare's tails-

the horse I bet on

wins by a nose

 

Kirsty Karkow

(0,2,4) = 8 pts

 

my daughter points out

the shape of blue

between clouds

 

Alan S. Bridges

(0,1,6) = 8 pts

 

above the lake

I search for your face

in the clouds

 

Carol Raisfeld

(0,0,8) = 8 pts

 

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7 Points

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jellyfish clouds

float east

with the wind

 

Bill Hudson

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

secrets-

the absence of

cloud formations

 

C.D. Southards

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

over Central Park

another cloud-free sky

9-11

 

Carol Pearce-Worthington

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

October sky...

a small boy shows me

his cloud cats at play

 

S.E. Buffington

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

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6 Points

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summer solstice

behind cotton-candy clouds

the setting sun

 

Carolyn Coit Dancy

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

from the bridge:

cloud shapes

made of water

 

John McDonald

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

watercolor clouds

when I think I know

what's what

 

--Peter Newton

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

popcorn clouds

we contemplate

a movie

 

Paul Rainville

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

flat skies

she promises me

nothing

 

Gregory Longenecker

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

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5 Points

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seaside

a cornucopia

of clouds

 

Barbara Campitelli

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

climbing uphill

a ring of clouds embraces

two graveyard firs

 

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

teen crush

the man shaped cloud

grows an extra leg

 

-- ushi

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

sardine clouds -

deciding to make

my own luck

 

Stella Pierides

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

childhood

in an eye blink

cloud dragon

 

Ann K. Schwader

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

autumn afternoon

in the clouds

she finds her lost baby

 

quamrul Hassan

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

cumulus clouds--

we head

for the hills

 

James Dobson

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

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4 Points

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cherubic clouds

floating over the graveyard...

the final "amen"

 

natalia kuznetsova

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

Angry-faced cumulus cloud spitting an electric tongue

 

Kurt W.

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

contrails...

only the length of day

betrays summer's end

 

Haiku Rue

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

a turtle crawls

across the sky

 

gourdman

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

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3 Points

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blue sky -

only a cloud like a dragon

devouring itself

 

Petru-Ioan Garda

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

splashes of red

from the poppies

a surging cloud

 

Ernesto P. Santiago

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

Thanksgiving

billowed cumulus clouds

- craving dumplings

 

if

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

pie-shaped clouds

on sentinel duty

around the full moon

 

Keith A. Simmonds

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

virginity lost

a hole in the clouds

becomes a smile

 

Collin Barber

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

painted over graffiti

on the sidewalk

striated clouds

 

Cara Holman

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

David and Goliath

the large cloud wrestles the small one

 

Terra Martin

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

milky clouds --

white feathers run up

the sky

 

~ elijah juma

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

the dispersal

of the dinosaur's head...

divorce papers

 

Rita Odeh

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

dark storm clouds--

spill hail like marbles

on summer's dry leaves

 

jill

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

new choreographer

a pattern emerges

through summer clouds

 

Angela Terry

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

a six-legged pig

fed by dark smokestacks

industrial cloud

 

Harvey Jenkins

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

watching

clouds forming

... kissing

 

renakio

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

a little cloud

becomes an aureole

of the moon

 

Tomislav

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

cloudy sky -

gone with the wind

the white caravels

 

Virginia Popescu

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

hovering. . .

a lenticular cloud shrouds

the volcano's rim

 

Liz Rule

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

midshift break-

gossamer dragon

swallows the moon

 

Hazel A. Witherspoon

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

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2 Points

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one last hymn

high above the graveyard

a cloud antelope

 

Maxianne

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

sponge clouds -

the first drops wipe our

dusty windshield

 

Darrell Byrd

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

on our backs

watching clouds:

camel swallows dragon !

 

-- Chitra Rajappa

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

in the twilight sky

a red dragon fly cloud-

she knits new row

 

John Daleiden

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

fast- moving clouds

have no time to gather. . .

to make shapes

 

Marylouise Knight

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

criss-crossed clouds

tracing

a kanji

 

Donna Bauerly

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

thunderhead

the darkening trail

 

Anonymous

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

cloud shapes

a flock of sheep grazes

my cheek

 

Alegria Imperial

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

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1 Point

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framed

by Mom's windows

cotton candy sky

 

Alice Frampton

 

 seven syllables -

well boned body girl shaped cloud

heaven poetry

 

STOPS

 

 fatal wildfire . . .

cloud shapes explode

into crimson and black

 

Ron C. Moss

 

 billowing clouds catch

a glow from the setting sun

an intent hawk dives

 

D W Skrivseth

 

 cloud castles

the family camper

dwarfs the house

 

Michele L. Harvey

 

 mountain hike

above the peak a cloud

the shape of a boot

 

André Surridge

 

 in the gallery -

van Gogh cypress is dancing

with billowing clouds

 

Robert Kania

 

icy winds

dark skies become an ocean

of drifting seahorses

 

Barbara A Taylor

 

 rising moon --

a cirrus cloud forms

a tortoise

 

~ Bamboocha

 

On my back, in clover -

the dragon cloud turning

into a bear.

 

Anonymous

 

 kanji clouds

brush-less calligraphy

rain extra ink

 

Anonymous

 

 Rolling clouds

now speeding westward

evening rain.

 

Trevor Camp

 

 the cumulus cloud

that reminds me

of a poem

 

Oddbjørn Aardalen

 

 a dragon

turns domestic ...

lonely cloud

 

Hansha Teki

 

thunderheads

so beautiful

from above

 

Mike Montreuil

 

lake mirror -

rainbow trouts scattering

clouds and thoughts

 

Cezar F. Ciobica

 

 

this new coolness --

I watch clouds through 

the open sunroof

 

Angie Werren

 

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imagination--

clouds merging

into cloud forms

 

Robert Poulin

 

Seven Mountains Range -

the prince in the clouds kissing

thirteen year Snowwhite

 

Horst

 

in the sky

fuzzy piper plane

flies to -- chicago?

 

miriam chaikin

 

watching dark clouds

turning to rain

What was THAT about?

 

~~Merrill Ann Gonzales

 

cold winter morning...

clouds float cross the sunlit sky

in drop shadow

 

dragonfly

 

my "teddy" and Sun

Same as my childhood

Fluffy day

 

Reza

 

STOP!

I just see clouds

she watches horses

 

Ralf Bröker

 

stories in the sky

painted white against the blue

inside, TV glares

 

Deirdre Godwin

 

drifting clouds

form a kangaroo --

whirling wind

 

~ Leah Kiarie

 

child's claps

on her cloud cake birthday flames

bow to rainbows

 

Karin Anderson

 

cupcake clouds

the approaching sail flutters

in sunset light

 

Anonymous

 

stagnant water --

reflection of nimbus clouds

moving like smoke

 

~ Kevin Wanjala

 

 

hot summer day-

the children see

scoops of ice cream in the clouds

 

Leslie Montgomery

 

strong wind --

a nimbus cloud reforms

into a star shape

 

~ Gloria Kerubo

 

cloud shadow Titans

march across the mountains

toward Olympus

 

April Serock

 

3-year old

asking name of changing shapes

in the sky

 

--R.K. Singh

 

purple dragons

chasing pink poodles

into the gold

 

Jon Espen Vassbotn

 

a fat sky gull

turned black blue -

thunder squall

 

Juhani Tikkanen

 

vast colors paint sky

in amusing ways, they like

madding clouds, hopes nods

 

purush guntur

 

udder-laden sky--

tires sucking

at the pavement

 

Barbara Snow

 

chafing scales

from a mackerel sky ~

pumice moon

 

Sara Winteridge

 

snowy peak

over the summit

waves of cloud breaking

 

Elaine Riddell

 

cloud shapes

of the beach breeze . . .

the crowded bath

 

Ramesh Anand

 

awestruck--

the cloud in his

image and likeness

 

Bill Pauly

 

moonlit cloud mountains

drifting dreams of silver

melting with the dawn

 

Mark A. Fisher

 

amazing cloud shapes

disambiguation

along with my thoughts

 

Mr. PC (Paul Cassidy)

 

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General Comments:

 **Thanks for this wonderful batch.

 **I was expecting more from this classic theme.

 

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