January 2015 Kukai

Dear Friends,

Here are the results for the January 2015 Kukai, wherein our Kigo subject was NEW YEAR VISITORS, and our Free Format subject was EYEWEAR.  If you find any errors, please let me know so I can correct them online.

 

Congratulations to ***Vinay Leo R.***, winner of our Kigo section and to ***Radka Mindova***, winner of our Free Format section!

 

VOTERS' comments are indicated by "**"

POETS' comments are indicated by "^^"

Kigo Theme:

NEW YEAR VISITORS 

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First Place -  30 Points

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New Year morn...

on the beggar's rags

a new flea

 

Vinay Leo R.

(1,5,17) = 30 pts

 

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Second Place -   28 Points

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New Year visit

a gathering of shoes

at the doorstep

 

Billy Antonio

Laoac, Philippines

(1,6,13) = 28 pts

**A lovely picture, and the imagination can provide the story.

 

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Third Place -   22 Points

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New Year sunrise

the cheese is gone

from the mouse trap

 

Harvey Jenkins

(1,6,7) = 22 pts

 

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 17 Points

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first visitors

around her gravestone

snow angels

 

cfc

(2,3,5) = 17 pts

 

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16  Points

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New Year's open house

coming in with the cold

the warmth of friends

 

Adelaide B. Shaw

(1,2,9) = 16 pts

 

 

New Year visitor

an insect rides in

on the firewood

 

Tom Painting

(0,3,10) = 16 pts

 

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 13 Points

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the first visitor

for the New Year –

a crow

 

Tomislav

(0,5,3) = 13 pts

 

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 12 Points

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New Year visit -

one more stray dog

around the homeless' plate

 

Lavana kray

Romania

(1,3,3) = 12 pts

 

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11  Points

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first day sunrise

waiting on my porch

the neighbor's cat

 

April Serock

(0,1,9) = 11 pts

 

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 10 Points

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New Year night...alone

waiting for the shooting star

to make same old wish

 

Natalia Kuznetsova

Russia

(1,3,1) = 10 pts

 

 

New Year’s Day--

another room emptied

at the nursing home

 

Carole MacRury

(0,2,6) = 10 pts

 

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 9 Points

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in the bare tree

New Year Visitor

who who who

 

Bernard Gieske

(1,2,2) = 9 pts

 

 

new year's evening

more and more footsteps

through my neighbour's gate

 

Irena Szewczyk

(1,1,4) = 9 pts

 

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 8 Points

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a knock at the door --

these old bones that just won't

go

 

Angie Werren

Amelia, Ohio

USA

(1,2,1) = 8 pts

 

 

New Year’s Day

our first visitor

in the mousetrap

 

Ann K. Schwader

(0,0,8) = 8 pts

 

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 7 Points

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new year visitors

all night

passing my gate

 

John McDonald

Edinburgh Scotland

(1,1,2) = 7 pts

 

 

First customer at the Dollar Store:

his bright voice asking

if they sell engagement rings

 

Sheila K. Barksdale

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

New Year visitors -

a snow man smiles in the front

of the grandpa's house

 

Cristina Oprea

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

new year ―

a house fly beneath

the cat's paw

 

Roberta Beary

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

fresh fox prints

surround the bird feeder...

New Year visitors

 

Elinor PIhl Huggett

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

with no other proof

of her visit

angel wings in new year snow

 

Michele L. Harvey

New York, USA

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

 

New Year's Day —

adding another notch

in my old belt

 

Carl Seguiban

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

 

New Year's fireworks

somebody else's cat

in my shed

 

Paul Hodder

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

 

first freeze -

the furnace repairman

brings his boss

 

Laurene

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

**A fine haiku -- and immediate sympathy for the situation!

 

chickadees

on the cardinal's bough...

New Year's Day

 

S.E. Buffington

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

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 6 Points

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New Year's visitors:

chronic illness, solitude

tea-kettle's whistle

 

Sandra Friedlander

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

new year-

the sea takes off

its nakedness

 

Rita Odeh

Haifa. Israel

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

New Year visitors –

among the blacksmith's sparks

fleeing moths

 

Svend A. Doggfall

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

grandson flies home --

to lower the showerhead

I climb on a stool

 

Beverley George

(1,0,3) = 6 pts

 

 

new year’s storm

a ladybug lands

on my desk

 

Ruth Powell

(1,0,3) = 6 pts

 

 

Out of the blue

the first snowflakes-

New Year visitors

 

Vasile Moldovan

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

holiday fatigue--

as soon as the last guests leave

we throw out the tree

 

John Thompson

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

**I admired the honesty of this one!

 

New Year visit -

in every champagne flute

a full moon

 

Archana Kapoor Nagpal, Bangalore, India

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

 

winter visitor

the robin

welcome always

 

Frances O'Keeffe

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

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 5 Points

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dying fire

in new year snow

two eyes glow

 

oga

(1,1,0) = 5 pts

 

 

New Year's Eve—

the physician's visit

too late

 

Gautam Nadkarni

(1,0,2) = 5 pts

 

 

New Year visitor

a fieldfare

at the trellis

 

Miorita

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

 

Baby New Year—

wailing

everywhere

 

Bill Gottlieb

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

 

once again the stars

new year visitors

 

Bill Hudson

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

 

New Year visit

camellia

at my door

 

Kevin Knezevic

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

 

 

New Year party-

in the unknown lady's hair

known flowers

 

-Kashinath Karmakar

India

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

New Year visitors

crumbs of fortune cookies

mark their way home

 

Kirsten G.

Goessweinstein, Germany

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

no visitors

for the New Year

snow's falling

 

Yukiko Yamada

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

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 4 Points

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New Year's visitor

with one long-stemmed slender rose

and lots of chocolate

 

Horst Ludwig

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

January one

freeze alert -- at the door

pizza delivery man

 

Brenda Roberts

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

new year visitors -

her grandparents

bring the Florida oranges

 

Carmel Lively Westerman

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

new year's visitors their calling cards crisscrossed in the night snow

 

Donna Bauerly

Dubuque, IA

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

New Year visit

the preacher stares

at an empty six pack

 

Edward

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

 

into the new year

santa sprawled on the neighbor's lawn--

deflated

 

carol bleichert

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

 

New Year's drive

she tells me

there are regrets

 

Anne Curran

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

 

New Year visitor

still calling me kiddo

my wife's uncle

 

Samar Ghose

Australia

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

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 3 Points

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old folks' New Years

we go to bed at nine

hoping for the morrow

 

Garry Eaton

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

New Year visitors –

a group of fireworks

knocks into the sky

 

Ana Drobot

Bucharest, Romania

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

linesmen!

January warm enough

for freezing rain

 

maxianne

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

New year's dawn-

a wedge of egrets balance

the crumbling fence

 

Anonymous

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

new years dawn

the gentle tapping

of rain on the roof

 

Nancy Smith

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

last night's dishes -

a piece of the day moon

comes in a bucket

 

Arvinder Kaur

Chandigarh,India

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

The old hermit -

only the wind blowing to his door

on New Year's Eve

 

Petru-Ioan Garda

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

New Year delight --

the new arrivals follow

the mother hen

 

Kumarendra Mallick

Hyderabad India

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

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 2 Points

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New Year visit

my dream full of

growing glaciers

 

Oddbjørn Aardalen

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

New Year's morning

raccoon tracks by the back door

 

assu

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

New Year…

visitor frozen

in place

 

D W Skrivseth

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

first twilight

of the new year

geese call from their "V"

 

Tony Nasuta

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

first midnight of the year…

the cuckoo’s gift

of telling age

 

Alegria Imperial

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

from his hand

the year's first coffee

drenching my wreath

 

mechaieh

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

feasting on

the New Year's Eve leftover

mouse honeymoon

 

Petya Gleridis

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

new year visitor –

noise in the attic

squirrels again

 

Mike Warner

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

New Year’s Day—

unexpected visit

from the garbage men.

 

Lyn True

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

new year 's day

diverse scats

on the front step

 

Barbara A. Taylor

Mountain Top, NSW

Australia

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

New Year visit

grandfather with grandson

greets the new day

 

Jacek Kielich

Poland

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

day after deer season

my rhododendron

falls victim

 

Alan S. Bridges

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

new year visits

pairs of smiles merge

into kisses

 

Ajaya Mahala,

Pune, India

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

New Year visitors--

molehills near

the eighteenth green

 

James Dobson

Prudhoe, UK.

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

start of the New Year...

prodigal son comes home with

new resolutions

 

Keith A. SIMMONDS

Rodez, France

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

After a snowstorm

New Year's first visitor

an old sun

 

Juhani Tikkanen

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

a new year's magpie

has something in its beak--

shadows on the snow

 

DeVar

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

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 1 Point

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January

wolf moon shines

snow on snow

 

Tom Conally

Gibsonville, NC

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

come along

and talk, I'll listen ---

new year's eve

 

Michael McClintock

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

death’s first visit

sparrow-shaped vacancy

at the bird feeder

 

Ignatius Fay

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

new year visit

brilliant water in a puddle

splashing the sky

 

Ken Sawitri

(Indonesia)

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

cold and snow

New Year’s perennial

visitors

 

Anonymous

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

warmth

of that presence

now memory

 

Binnoo

India

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

pristine calls ...

the milkman dressed

with a smile

 

Ramesh Anand

Bangalore, India

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

New Year's service --

a toddler climbs on the lap

of the priest

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

(Ireland)

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

New Year’s visitors

an air freshener masks

the smell of fish

 

Terri L. French

US

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

the year's first sky –

between fleecy clouds blinks

a dozy moon

 

(Ramona)

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

simmering ham bone

for hoppin' john . . .

the twitch of a mouse's nose

 

Ellen Compton

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

last of the year . . .

what's left

of the fly on the window

 

Bill Pauly

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

whistle, sizzle, boom

the wild southern cousin

lights his way home

 

Doris

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

first night-

stopping at church for service

after my shift

 

Hazel

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

New Year visitors

at our gate; three waving mittens

and a flying hat

 

Anne Zooey Lind

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

First guest of the year-

the courier won’t stay

the books he brought will

 

Cristian Mocanu

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

winter kitchen

two buzzing flies

where did they come from?

 

Meredith Cavalieri

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

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No Points This Time, Sorry.

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death, with scythe

beginning the year

with a funeral

 

Tanja Cilia

 

 

new year’s day

the doorbell rings

it’s not santa claus

 

RD McManes

 

  

new year visitors

i serve pickled herring...

a stroke of luck

 

Pat Geyer

 

  

early morning

workers pray for a busy new year

at the toupee shop

 

Carol Raisfeld

 

  

a mouse

in the mistletoe . . .

e-e-e-e-e-e-k

 

Kirsty Karkow

 

  

New Year visitor -

sparrowhawk enjoying a bath

in my garden pond

 

Daniela Bullas

 

  

still bitter cold--

but today yellow sun

and first junco

 

l/c. jill

 

  

whose silver trail

from the cyclamen pot?

New Year visitor

 

Barbara Snow

 

  

Knocking at my door

Corn cob pipe! Button nose??

Come 21 March!...

 

Jim Thoune

Bowling Green, KY USA

 

  

a knock at the door

tall, dark stranger stands outside

good luck in his hands

 

Deirdre Godwin

  

 

first-footing

a divined stable

star-crossed gifts

 

Hansha

 

  

on the expanse

of fresh new year snow

only rabbit's tracks

 

Jane DeJonghe

 

  

happy new year

her polish nurse raises

the roller shutter

 

Ralf Bröker

 

  

cat eyes

the sluggish ladybug

winter kitchen

 

Diane Mayr

  

 

a new year

sweet grain pudding

for each guest

 

Beth Powell

  

 

on New Year's Eve

I'd love to pour wine for you

under this bright moon...

 

Tuvshinzaya Nergui

Tsetserleg city, Mongolia

 

 

 

weary Jan. 1

late night fireworks and

attic squirrels

 

Anonymous

 

 

 

New Year visitor

more and more

candy

 

Barbara Campitelli

 

 

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General Comments:

 

 **I love the haiku reminders that we have a new year!

 

**The haiku are so good that it is a great challenge to judge them.

 

**Thank you as ever for the kukai and for the haiku collection. It is always a pleasure to read them and cast my votes after reflection.

 

**Thanks again for this opportunity to read through and vote on some excellent haiku.

 

**a few struggles to reduce this selection of New year poems to 13, and after that it got even tougher

but here we go

 

**I admired the honesty of this one!

 

**This was a hard one to write to…

Free Format Theme:

EYEWEAR 

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First Place -   26 Points

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class reunion

we all read the menu

through glasses

 

Radka Mindova

Bulgaria

(0,6,14) = 26 pts

 

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Second Place -  23 Points

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reflected

in the traffic cop's sunglasses

her best smile

 

Paul Hodder

(0,4,15) = 23 pts

 

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Third Place -  22 Points

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auschwitz visit -

thousands of eyeglasses

blinded

 

John McDonald

Edinburgh Scotland

(3,4,5) = 22 pts

 

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18 Points

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a blank sudoku...

on the dusty mantlepiece

grandpa's spectacles

 

Arvinder Kaur

Chandigarh, India

(1,3,9) = 18 pts

**This haiku tells a story written by a caring poet.

 

new glasses—

now she complains

about the mirrors

 

Carl Seguiban

(0,5,8) = 18 pts

 

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16 Points

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Halloween treats

the young pirate

lifts his eye patch

 

Edward

(0,3,10) = 16 pts

 

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15 Points

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winter solstice—

through grandpa's eyeglasses

the tilt of the earth

 

Gautam Nadkarni

(0,3,9) = 15 pts

**I would have ended the second line with just "glasses."

 

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13 Points

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the blind man

wearing new shades

. . . sunny day

 

Michael McClintock

(1,3,4) = 13 pts

 

 

his faraway gaze--

Dad cleaning

his clean glasses

 

Bill Pauly

(1,2,6) = 13 pts

 

 

first glasses -

each leaf on the tree

has an edge

 

Ruth Powell

(0,3,7) = 13 pts

 

 

old school photo

needing glasses to see

my high school sweetheart

 

Alan S. Bridges

(0,1,11) = 13 pts

 

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12 Points

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first pair of glasses

not angels on the far fence

just chickens

 

Harvey Jenkins

(0,5,2) = 12 pts

 

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10 Points

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keeping my glasses on

...until the call

of the whistling thrush

 

Anonymous

(1,2,3) = 10 pts

**Attentive to experience and nature in a wonderful way.

 

new lenses--

the moon reveals

its pockmarks

 

Carole MacRury

(0,2,6) = 10 pts

 

 

winter night --

looking for my glasses

with my glasses

 

Angie Werren

Amelia, Ohio

USA

(0,1,8) = 10 pts

**Quiet and moving.

 

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9 Points

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binoculars ...

much closer to my balcony

the lenten moon

 

Archana Kapoor Nagpal, Bangalore, India

(2,0,3) = 9 pts

 

 

Ophthalmologist.

Now I see this word clearly,

and I'll look it up.

 

Horst Ludwig

(1,3,0) = 9 pts

 

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8 Points

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the fog lifts

the top of the mountain

new glasses

 

Bernard Gieske

(0,4,0) = 8 pts

 

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7 Points

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at the party

her false eyelashes

tickle my cheek

 

Barbara A. Taylor

Mountain Top, NSW

Australia

(1,0,4) = 7 pts

 

 

dusty yule log

steaming pea soup

fogs my lenses

 

Ignatius Fay

(0,3,1) = 7 pts

 

 

through my goggles

i look at fish

looking at me

 

Aalix Roake

New Zealand

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

‘cover one eye’ --

on the tenth visit I chant

the test chart by heart

 

Beverley George

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

without my glasses the mirror's lie

 

Samar Ghose

Australia

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

**Many meanings/feelings in so few words: beautiful.

 

chat –

she looks at herself

in my sunglasses

 

Tomislav

(0,0,7) = 7 pts

 

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6 Points

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wearing new glasses -

frightening the life out of me

owl eyes in my face

 

Daniela Bullas

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

train platform -

a broken pair of spectacles

waits.

 

dsnake1

(1,0,3) = 6 pts

 

 

new monocle--

a singular view

of the moon

 

James Dobson

Prudhoe, UK.

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

Halloween:

the little pirate wears

a velvet eye patch

 

--Kirsty Karkow

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

 

sunglasses

the world inside

mine

 

Ann K. Schwader

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

 

bifocals-

the up     of

.............down....

all the steps

 

-Kashinath Karmakar

India

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

**Bravo for a bit of experimentation—and the haiku’s content and form matches the moment of experience, just as these “visual” haiku are intended to do.

 

golden wedding

mom is still wearing her

rose-colored glasses

 

(Ramona)

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

**1 point (though I think it should read “golden anniversary”)

 

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5 Points

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first pair of glasses

first time noticing her

ears are crooked

 

Diane Mayr

(1,0,2) = 5 pts

 

 

finally able

to see through your lies –

​ex-ray vision

 

Susan Burch

USA

(0,2,1) = 5 pts

**Always appreciate a clever, apt pun in a haiku, particularly when heartbreak and humor are combined.

 

piano recital

his glasses also

out of tune

 

Roberta Beary

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

**Somewhat surprising -- different and enjoyable!

 

snow ball fight

our snowman

sports an eyepatch

 

Michele L. Harvey

USA

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

vanity mirror

adjusting her glasses

for a finer look

 

Tom Painting

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

**This text would have been better with "new" in [L2] (“adjusting

her new glasses”).

 

searching, searching

how I wish I could call

my glasses!

 

Anne Zooey Lind

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

**we've all experienced this, alas!

 

foggy glasses--

the smell of books

that have been wet

 

DeVar

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

 

indian summer

on the scarecrow's nose

a pair of glasses

 

cfc

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

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4 Points

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separate green leaves --

an eight-year-old's first glasses --

miracles and math

 

Sandra Friedlander

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

cloudy day -

assuming sunglasses

after farewell

 

Anonymous

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

Global Warming Lecture:

monster daisies

adorn her spectacles

 

Sheila K. Barksdale

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

**Love this: says so much about the “seriousness” and reality of the problem and the tenor of human response, in a witty, intimate way. (Would have given it three points had I not really liked five others.)

 

trotting

the Milky Way

the horse with sunglasses

 

Oddbjørn Aardalen

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

with new

glasses and hope

girl in kabul

 

oga

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

late sunset

rereading her old love letters

wearing eyeglasses

 

Billy Antonio

Laoac, Pangasinan

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

large dark glasses

hiding her famous face

but not her voice

 

Adelaide B. Shaw

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

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3 Points

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I call,

wind calls back...

broken glasses

 

Rita Odeh

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

lavender fragrance

sleep mask tied with silken threads

beautiful dreamer

 

Tom Conally

Gibsonville, NC

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

VR goggles--

another world I haven't a clue

how to move through

 

John Thompson

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

the dog races by

with dad's bifocals --

morning chaos

 

Carol Raisfeld

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

overlooking imperfections

a scratched lens

on his eyeglasses

 

Terri L. French

US

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

dirt goggles

a long skid

to the finish line

 

Beth Powell

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

I put my contacts in

so I can

 

see my

eyes

 

Bill Gottlieb

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

new sunglasses

he places them

backwards on his head

 

Carmel Lively Westerman

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

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2 Points

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this year

new glasses--

John Lennon's

 

jill

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

distorted world--

sleet freezing

on ski goggles

 

Barbara Snow

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

Another birthday...

a reluctance to pull up

the sunglasses

 

~Devika

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

the freckled boy

they used to call "Squinty"

new eyeglasses

 

Elinor PIhl Huggett

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

with my glasses off

the landscape blurs

as i read a map

 

RD McManes

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

blurry glasses

also the autumn rain

takes a detour

 

Svend A. Doggfall

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

sunglasses

every leaf

glowing red

 

Barbara Campitelli

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

dark sunglasses--

grandpa's first selfie

post cataract

 

Yesha Shah

Surat, India

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

the tape on his

eyeglasses

"rayban" in crayon

 

Brenda Roberts

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

new spectacles

words grow larger but meanings

remain the same

 

Gerry Bravi

(Canada)

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

stirring the pot

my glasses

steam up

 

Meredith Cavalieri

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

**I can read this poem with two meanings.

 

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1 Points

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rose-coloured lenses

turning happenstance

into serendipity

 

Tanja Cilia

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

floods-

the dog licks a pair

of glasses

 

Nelson Christian

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

your broken bifocals -

time to know me

better

 

Lavana kray

Romania

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

no mirror around -

every girl on the beach

is wearing sun glasses

 

Cristina Oprea

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

blindman's goggles

the unchanging evening

of a rainy day

 

Ajaya Mahala,

Pune, India

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

broken specs

tender rose petals smell sweet

nonetheless

 

Binnoo

India

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

Sunday worship --

a stained glass window

caught in my glasses

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

(Belgium)

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

the whole world

looks out of focus...

glasses needed

 

Natalia Kuznetsova

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

eyeglasses…

puckering still

puckers the words

 

D W Skrivseth

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

closing date

the head official raises her

eyebrow piercing

 

Ralf Bröker

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

deserted monocles

of blinded pagan gods

The Seven Rila Lakes

 

Petya Gleridis

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

lovely and useful

the reader's friend

new eyeglasses

 

Frances O'Keeffe

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

**maybe it's the almost childlike wonder expressed so simply that makes this one somehow charming

 

new years day

no need for eye shadow

this morning

 

Anonymous

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

his glasses

she takes her glasses off

and starts crying

 

Boris Nazansky

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

new eyewear --

she slices the moon to fit

the frames

 

Kumarendra Mallick

Hyderabad India

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

the old haijin's

new third eye

Google Glass

 

S.E. Buffington

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

 

"It's not you…"

sunglasses

conceal her eyes

 

John Hubbard

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

 

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No Points This Time, Sorry.

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dark sunglasses –

bending trees

reflecting

 

Ana Drobot

Bucharest, Romania

 

 

 

helping hand

your eyes for glasses

blind

 

Jacek Kielich

Poland

 

  

reading the different dreams

glasses

on the shop

 

Ken Sawitri

(Indonesia)

 

  

her bright red glasses

are nowhere to be found

I read the labels

 

assu

 

  

upside and down...

wearing rose colored glasses

i emerge

 

Pat Geyer

 

  

TV at her parents' house

looking for her glasses

when they come home

 

-Garry Eaton

 

  

double sun

her eyes turn into

sepia rainbow

 

Ramesh Anand

Bangalore, India

 

  

hot Christmas sun --

even my granny sports

new sunglasses

 

~ Catherine Njeri Maina

(Kenya)

 

  

small enough letters

to wear reading glasses

New Year's card

 

Yukiko Yamada

 

 

 star watching

first time after surgery--

her rhinestone eyepatch

 

Bridget Cougar

 

 

 Glass eyes,

Eye glasses,

What do you see?

 

Jim Thoune

Bowling Green, KY USA

 

 

 nearing my birthday-

garnering courage to admit

its bifocal time

 

Hazel

 

  

new term for “main-frame”

a computer on my face

science fiction lives

 

Deirdre Godwin

 

  

the lecturer sees

through clear glasses

the student's... tinted rose

 

Tony Nasuta

 

 

 

legal eagle

the fine print appears

less blurred

 

Hansha

 

  

behind his goggles her carapace breached

 

Alegria Imperial

 

 

 

where ever you go

the fashionable ear wear

cell phones

 

Bill Hudson

 

  

champagne cork

grazing my glasses

blurry bliss

 

mechaieh

 

  

driving to conference ...

she wears loose

Ray Ban sunglasses

 

Anonymous

  

 

​eyewear too much computer time

 

Donna Bauerly

 

  

bevy

of bathing beauties

all wearing cat's eyeglasses

meow

 

Doris

 

  

shimmering sunshine

upon the snow-capped mountain...

dark glasses slide down

 

Keith A. SIMMONDS

Rodez, France

 

  

the postman has left-

drops of contact lens cleaner

on the Christmas card

 

Cristian Mocanu

 

  

warm again -

Into the house

glasses fog

 

Mike Warner

 

  

green glasses –

the dry grass

becomes fresh

 

Miorita

 

 

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General Comments:

 

**Seeing again through others' eyes!

 

**if I would have chosen to vote for mine, I would have given it 3, but then I am prejudiced.

 

**Thank you for giving this opportunity to read such lovely poems. A very difficult job to award points.

 

**I related to many of these, am regularly searching for my specs...

 

**I couldn't think of much to say about glasswear. It's not any easy topic.

 

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