September 2011 Kukai

Kigo Theme:

ANY CITRUS FRUIT

 

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First Place – 25 Points

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freshly cut lemons...

the stillness

of the wind chimes

 

Liz Rule

(2,4,11) = 25 pts

 

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Second Place – 19 Points

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old age home —

the tea's lemon slice

out of juice

 

Roberta Beary

(1,5,6) = 19 pts

 

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Third Place – 17 Points

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first days of autumn

adding more sugar

to the lemonade

 

Adelaide B. Shaw

(2,2,7) = 17 pts

 

 

visiting an old aunt

candied lemon peel

in depression glass

 

Terri L. French

(1,3,8) = 17 pts

**I believe I know that lady.

 

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13  Points

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the tangerine peel

comes off in one piece--

harvest moon

 

DeVar

(0,2,9) = 13 pts

**What has one to do with the other? Nothing? Everything? An intriguing jux

 

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11  Points

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tongue twister

grandma's lemon rinds

in the frosting

 

Don Baird

(1,2,4) = 11 pts

 

 

green grapefruits...

monsoon clouds

hang heavy

 

Cara Holman

(0,2,7) = 11 pts

 

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10  Points

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low-hanging sun

a man picks a tangerine

out of the west

 

Garry Eaton

(0,2,6) = 10 pts

 

 

sunrise

a slice of lemon

in a water jug

 

Elaine Riddell

(0,2,6) = 10 pts

**The sunrise made visible through the juxtaposition

 

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9  Points

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talking about marriage

she cuts oranges

to make juice

 

Israel López Balan

(2,1,1) = 9 pts

 

 

sucking a lemon

the old farmer

spits out a seed

 

Alan S. Bridges

(1,0,6) = 9 pts

 

 

fruit flies

in a sunbeam—

children’s songs

 

Ron C. Moss

(0,2,5) = 9 pts

 

 

sour lime...

I cannot do

without him

 

sanjuktaa

(0,2,5) = 9 pts

**Provocative juxtaposition

 

 

Spanish oranges --

another summer

without love

 

Johannes S. H. Bjerg

(0,0,9) = 9 pts

 

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8  Points

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holding the tangerine

holding

sunset

 

Donna Bauerly

(1,1,3) = 8 pts

**What a great picture - I'm there.

 

power break --

a moth dancing in

the light of lemons

 

Cezar C.

(1,1,3) = 8 pts

 

 

the orange in portions

having to share

the children

 

Francine Banwarth

(1,0,5) = 8 pts

 

 

prairie sky--

the sudden spray

from a peeled mandarin

 

Michael Dylan Welch

(0,2,4) = 8 pts

 

 

drought . . .

the old fisherman's shriveled

lemons

 

Polona

(0,2,4) = 8 pts

 

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7  Points

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squeezing lemons ...

she puckers her lips

with promise

 

Svetlana Marisova

(1,0,4) = 7 pts

 

 

letter to Santa

in each child's stocking

a Florida orange

 

Carolyn Coit Dancy

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

cleaning day --

the fresh scent of lime

blowing through the window

 

bre

(0,1,5) = 7 pts

 

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6  Points

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a slice of lemon –

the little child’s first taste

priceless

 

Patricia Lidia

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

due north

Florida citrus

boxed in straw

 

Tom Painting

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

rum punch!

the bartender juggles

lemons and limes

 

Kirsty Karkow

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

fruit market —

the memories of home

an orange brings

 

Gautam Nadkarni

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

after the storm

a wedge of lime soaks

in whisky

 

martin (hiccup) cohen

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

 

dried tangerine rind

the scent

of her new shampoo

 

Angela Terry

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

 

string bag --

against her leg the bounce

of mandarins

 

André Surridge

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

**As a reader, I can see that shapely leg! And the word "bounce" makes

the haiku. This is my favourite this month.

 

pressing out oranges --

sweet memories

of her breast

 

Virginia Popescu

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

 

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5  Points

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night breeze-

orange blossoms

in the moon

 

Maria Santomauro

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

one cherry

and a twist of lemon--

her green eyelashes

 

Maxianne

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

summer's end

a slice of lime

for each lager

 

Beth Powell

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

tangerine juice--

down to my elbow

onto my book

 

jill

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

Moro orange --

the sound of the knife

that peels it

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

(0,0,5) = 5 pts

 

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4  Points

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late Fall sunset

oozing its way through my window

blood orange

 

Stevie Strang

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

 

grapefruit

sudden memory of my

childhood flu

 

Boris Nazansky

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

ripe oranges

glimmering against sunset...

our last supper

 

natalia kuznetsova

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

**Again, a whole story in eight words - leaving us wondering why is

this the last supper  and what's the story-behind-the-story.

 

 

raw orange --

he closes one eye

for the first bite

 

~ Cecilia Wambui

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

harvest moon;

the pomelo on the windowsill

changes colour too !

 

manoj saranathan

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

an orange--

half for me

half for you

 

Alex Serban

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

**Just as simple as it looks; I mean that as praise

 

 

her blue plate--

half a grapefruit

in harvest moonlight

 

Bill Pauly

(0,0,4) = 4 pts

 

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3  Points

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when she crushes

lime and ice ... I don't care

how much cachaça

 

Ralf Bröker

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

jicama, salt, lime

and a small pinch of cayenne;

mexican french fries

 

dragonfly

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

peels fall from

orange scented fingers

--is this an apple?

 

--Diane Mayr

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

orange blue

the half worm

waves from the boat

 

Ewen Smith

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

In the Hawaiian hotel

The body lotion smells

Of passion fruit

 

Angelika Kolompar

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

punch line --

adding the zest

after the juice

 

Michele L. Harvey

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

a mandarin orange

only its scent remains

on the small square of paper

 

Harvey Jenkins

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

harvest day --

ice cubes melting

in her lime juice

 

Juhani Tikkanen

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

tight lips

with each scoop of grapefruit

a bitter mood

 

Steve Mitchell

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

a ripe lemon --

he blinks at the

first bite

 

~ Jescah Auma

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

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2  Points

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the lemon’s juicy wedge

over the trout hills

a fresh welcome home

 

Petya Gleridis

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

in the grocery store.

my daughter shares her apple

with a customer

 

Bill Hudson

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

grapefruit bite

sweeter with each

cloud let go

 

Alegria

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

each tangerine piece

sweeter than the one before . . .

a heavenly gift

 

eric

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

falling leaves

reek of sweet tangerine tea

--- passes by

 

pos

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

cracked fingertips

sharp sting of grapefruit juice

alimony cheque

 

if

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

bitter orange

and a bottle of wine --

shortened days

 

Michael McClintock

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

sharing grapefruit

piquant tang

of anticipation

 

Frances O'Keeffe

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

sangria jug...

orange slices float

on summer love

 

Ruth

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

squeeze a lemon

into my tea

into my eye

 

peter pache

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

roast maize --

I spread the red pepper

with a lemon slice

 

~ James Bundi

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

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1  Point

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weekend over --

bears having fish bones

and squeezed lemons

 

STOPS

 

 

Idd afternoon—

the neighbours' children compare

their oranges

 

~ Caleb David Mutua

 

 

waiting--

the taste of oranges

plucked from the tree

 

Rose Marie Stutts

 

 

last rays of the sun--

in dark room the glow

a bonsai lemon

 

Vishnu P Kapoor

 

 

at dawn . . .

a bite of pink grapefruit

wakes up my mouth

 

Marylouise Knight

 

 

last embrace

she carries a satsuma

in the Blue Train

 

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu

 

 

forbidden sun ...

the bitter taste of

grapefruit

 

Ted van Zutphen

 

 

redneck vegans

replace the clay pigeons

with grapefruit

 

Edward

 

 

tangerine

easier

than pie

 

Bill Gottlieb

 

 

German-for-adults class

we share the Turk’s bag

of satsumas

 

deanna tiefenthal

 

 

kitchen showroom

a fruit bowl with

plastic oranges

 

--Marleen Hulst

 

 

autumn in the orchard--

a windfall orange

drawing my children

 

--Jacek M.

 

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No Points This Time. Sorry.

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Cool autumn mornings

first the knife and then the twist

Mom’s home squeezed orange juice.

 

Robert C. Howard

 

 

bursting juices

a gourmet bushfood surprise

from the finger lime

 

Barbara A Taylor

 

 

lime juiced

added to vitamin drink

start new morning

 

Jim Applegate

 

 

squeezing the juice

from a huge pink grapefruit...

quenching my thirst

 

Keith A. Simmonds

 

 

the quarrel over ...

for him, the sweet peel

of her kumquat

 

Carol Raisfeld

 

 

evil spirits --

she sucks on another

leech-lime

 

Anonymous

 

 

harvest still life

inedible oranges in a

lime green jade bowl

 

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

 

 

bitter orange

autumn moon

marmalades along

 

Jon Espen Vassbotn

 

 

a cup of tea

with some lemon squeeze --

early morning

 

~ Catherine Njeri Maina

 

 

thinly sliced lemons

sugar and boiling water

sweet taste of summer

 

Deirdre Godwin

 

 

the sky

of the demo is so still

smell of citrus

 

Tatsuya Onai

 

 

wedlock night

her lip feels mine to taste

the grape elements

 

Ramesh Anand

 

 

pink margarita

first kiss on first date

taste of lime

 

Anonymous

 

 

his gaze intensifies

I order the double-bergamot

Earl Grey

 

Seren Fargo

 

 

picking grapefruit

on a trip to Florida

in my memory

 

gourdman

 

 

passion fruit

turned to wine

God loves me

 

shanna

 

 

come squat

no --------

kumquat

 

Ben Gieske

 

 

island walk ...

suddenly, “oh, orange

in the sun”

 

gogatsu

 

 

Glands screaming

Anticipating

Fresh squeezed lime

 

Pat Lammers

 

 

orange peel --

she squeezes the juice

in my eye

 

~ SYNAIDAH KALAHI

 

 

Orange

rolling down

rush hour hill -–

swerving sunset

 

Kurt W.

 

 

Citrus tree

squash the fresh fruit

lemonade.

 

Trevor Camp

 

 

Gikomba market --

he loads orange sacks

on a truck

 

~ Andrew Otinga

 

 

fruit stall --

orange peelings

litter the floor

 

~ Jacklyne Anyoso

 

 

flowing tears --

a drop of orange

has hit her eyes

 

~ Jecinta Mueni

 

 

harvest moon

strong hands knead the orange

to ready the juice

 

Anonymous

 

 

sliced orange --

he throws the peels

on the roadside

 

~ Stephen Macharia

 

 

a grapefruit segment

on her poised spoon--

she giggles

 

James Dobson

 

 

yellow teeth --

orange fibers remain

in her mouth

 

~ Dohnalily Atieno

 

 

lemon juice

chokes her throat --

loud cough

 

~ Enoch Johana

 

 

shivering all over --

she drinks a cup full

of lemon juice

 

~ Esther Wagaki

 

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General Comments:

**Thanks again for this opportunity to read another great batch of

[kigo]haiku. It's always a challenge to pick the six that strikes me

most out of a growing number. But a really satisfying one.

Free Format Theme:

RAIN

 

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First Place -- 35 Points

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rain on the windshield

the old argument

back and forth

 

BILL KENNEY

(1,8,16) = 35 pts

 

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Second Place -- 30 Points

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fresh graves

the rain goes deeper

into the earth

 

Ron C. Moss

(1,3,21) = 30 pts

**Accurate observation, and much more

 

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Third Place – 21 Points

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cold harbor

an upturned canoe

sheds the rain

 

Tom Painting

(0,2,17) = 21 pts

**The cold convincingly conveyed

 

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16  Points

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rain barrel

the prairie sky

remains empty

 

Harvey Jenkins

(0,4,8) = 16 pts

**really love [this one] – it speaks very loudly of drought without

using the word.  Great job.

 

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14  Points

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prairie rain--

the windmill stirs

out of its sleep

 

Michael Dylan Welch

(0,2,10) = 14 pts

 

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13  Points

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long drive --

even the wiper

sounds romantic

 

Quamrul Hassan

(0,4,5) = 13 pts

 

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12  Points

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after the rain --

cherry blossoms fill

the Buddha's bowl

 

~ Isabelle Prondzynski

(0,3,6) = 12 pts

 

 

day-long rain...

quietly, quietly

your absence

 

sanjuktaa

(0,3,6) = 12 pts

**Odd but effective use of the adverbial form.

 

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11  Points

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unyielding rain a river seeks higher ground

 

Alan S. Bridges

(0,2,7) = 11 pts

 

 

rainy walk --

the weight of water

on my eyebrows

 

~ Brian Etole

(0,2,7) = 11 pts

 

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10  Points

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rain disappears

into itself

into the horizon

 

Don Baird

(1,2,3) = 10 pts

 

 

summer rain

the neighbor's boy

runs naked

 

Carolyn Coit Dancy

(0,3,4) = 10 pts

 

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9  Points

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endless rain --

my children ask me

to build an ark

 

Cezar C.

(1,1,4) = 9 pts

 

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8  Points

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a bucket

filled with autumn rain

white chrysanthemum

 

Angela Terry

(0,2,4) = 8 pts

 

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7  Points

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gentle rain the tinkling of piano keys

 

André Surridge

(0,2,3) = 7 pts

 

 

spring rain --

the garden gnome's

mud flecked feet

 

Bouwe Brouwer

(0,0,7) = 7 pts

 

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6  Points

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a raincloud

puffs itself up ...

startled cat

 

Svetlana Marisova

(1,1,1) = 6 pts

 

 

what I am trying to say evades me summer rain

 

-- Johannes S. H. Bjerg

(1,0,3) = 6 pts

 

 

rain-soaked day

summer blends

into autumn

 

Roberta Beary

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

 

 

first raindrops...

the robin’s song

dampened

 

Cara Holman

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

 

rain--

closing the door

behind the dog

 

gogatsu

(0,0,6) = 6 pts

 

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5  Points

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here comes the rain...

I reach for a batar drum

to join its rhythm

 

Kirsty Karkow

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

**Evocative and lively all at once.

 

 

last drops of rain

the words speak

for themselves

 

Francine Banwarth

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

 

rainfall

counting the syllables

of its poems

 

Bill Gottlieb

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

 

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4  Points

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rained out --

dry statistics

after the diagnosis

 

Michele L. Harvey

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

 

a kiss

in the labyrinth--

sun through drizzle

 

Jon Espen Vassbotn

(1,0,1) = 4 pts

 

 

an old man dragged

through flash flood waters

by his old dog

 

Barbara A Taylor

(0,2,0) = 4 pts

 

 

Sun anew--

in each drop of rain

the rainbow

 

Vasile Moldovan

(0,2,0) = 4 pts

 

 

Dark rumblings

Tin roof staccato

Rain allegro

 

charlie smith

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

leaves turn silver

backsides to the wind--

the scent of rain

 

Janice Hornburg

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

rain-lit windows

throwing magic stones

on the classroom floor

 

Michael McClintock

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

Friday night rain

slowly her tea grows colder

chapter...by chapter

 

Edward

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

leaking roof --

a raindrop quenches

our candle

 

~ Cecilia Wambui

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

 

grandmother’s courtyard--

only the crows and the rain

harvesting the nuts

 

Patricia Lidia

(0,1,2) = 4 pts

 

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3  Points

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clouds descend--

tap dancing

in the streets

 

Maria Santomauro

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

Rain pounds roofs and streets

Thunder accompanies to rhythm

Lightning beats

 

Philip Mizener

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

 

 

cold rain

warmed by a fire --

the cry of seagulls

 

Tony Nasuta

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

blooming

in your gentle rain --

flattery

 

Steve Mitchell

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

sun beams

capture a rainbow

in a drop of rain

 

shanna

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

one more day please without rain magnolias

 

John Soules

(0,1,1) = 3 pts

 

 

turquoise and feathers--

a rain chant sung

to a cloudless sky

 

Terri L. French

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

rain drops on the roof

the book in my lap

never opens

 

Bill Hudson

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

autumn rain

fragrance of

wet leaves underfoot

 

Frances O'Keeffe

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

too little rain

too much rain

everyone complains

 

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

**The Irish summer all wrapped up.

 

 

spring shower —

the asphalt bathing

in rainbows

 

Ted van Zutphen

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

kayaking —

soft drizzle of rain

in our hair

 

Ruth Powell

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

dry in the tunnel

I count the seconds

between flash and thunder

 

Deanna Tiefenthal

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

 

 

soaking rain —

the constant drip drip drip

of wet laundry

 

Liz Rule

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

**A very very definitely wet haiku! Well observed -- and the slight

undertone of irritation is there too.

 

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2  Points

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the rain’s wet lips

on the grave mound

the earth’s nuptial bed

 

Petya Gleridis

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

rainy day --

sad the dog in the window

missing the cat

 

STOPS

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

summer rain --

invite snails

to a walk

 

Alex Serban

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

tea time

a great summer drops

from the eaves

 

Ralf Bröker

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

gentle rain

a sparrow perched

on the bird bath

 

Beth Powell

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

morning drizzle --

children dancing

in circles

 

~ Esther Obwamu

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

rain on the skylight . . .

children singing

good night to the moon

 

Bill Pauly

(0,1,0) = 2 pts

 

 

rainwater dripping

from foreign eaves

a yearning for home

 

Garry Eaton

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

morning rain ...

a day to myself, wishing

my plate was full again

 

Carol Raisfeld

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

first raindrops

a captive goldfinch

begins to sing

 

Anonymous

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

August rain--

the neighbour's toddler

picking daisies

 

Maxianne

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

he hangs on

to the last bus home --

downpour

 

~ Catherine Njeri Maina

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

Grandma's rocker

another baby sleeps

with the rhythmic squeak

 

Anonymous

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

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silver sea

spots of rain

on the boulder beach

 

Elaine Riddell

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

rain drops –-

a swinging spider

climbs up along its thread

 

Virginia Popescu

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

rain spatters

the bird bath leaves

deep autumn

 

Ann K. Schwader

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

 

autumn rain a caterpillar turns into a chrysalis anyway

 

Stevie Strang

(0,0,2) = 2 pts

 

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1 Point

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first dark rain drops

paint the sidewalk dalmatian

tang of summer dust

 

if

 

 

Deep distant rumblings

rain sheets swept against the panes.

random streaks of light

 

Robert C. Howard

 

 

evening showers--

hawkers and beggars gather up

their belongings

 

~ Caleb David Mutua

 

 

all day long

the sound of steady rain . . .

reading “The Good Earth” *

 

Marylouise Knight

 

*The classic by Pearl S. Buck

 

 

I close my eyes

windblown raindrops

leaving home

 

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu

 

 

sudden shower --

mother hen leads her chicks

to shelter

 

~ Juma Elijah

 

 

after rain

the village green

green

 

Paul Hodder

 

**That sense of seeing the familiar as if for the first time captured

in the repetition of "green."

 

 

he cycles home

through the summer rain--

one wet sock

 

James Dobson

 

 

after the shower

the wooden Buddha

glistening

 

--Jacek M.

 

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No Points This Time, Sorry.

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Drizzling rain--

a little girl cries tears

in the verandah

 

Constantin Stroe

 

 

the sharp tang

of rain quenched earth

-- one day per week this drought

 

bre

 

 

On the street in Waikiki

A sudden downpour

Flip flops slip and slide

 

Angelika Kolompar

 

 

rain cloud hole

street gutters full of light

 

martin gottlieb cohen

 

 

gentle flow of water

soothes surfaces of rocks

so they can sing

 

Toni Dalton

 

 

rains here, eye not yet

may it not like what

it sees and move on

 

miriam chaikin

 

 

under the clear sky

a sudden shower of rain...

tropical magic

 

Keith A. Simmonds

 

 

Rain --

teardrops in the desert

immeasurable

 

Anonymous

 

 

drum beating

to clear skies—

rain on the roses

 

Alegria

 

 

summer concert --

if the crowd claps

the sound of rain

 

Israel López Balan

 

 

comfortable candlelight

we listen to the rain...

in Chopins Prelude

 

Rose Marie Stutts

 

 

the first rain--

itch to get wet

street urchin

 

Vishnu P Kapoor

 

 

slight breeze

gray underbelly of the Aspen

forecasting rain

 

Donna Bauerly

 

 

Autumn, how come?

Warm water pouring

with rain.

 

Juhani Tikkanen

 

 

chill rain pelted down

lightning bolted across the sky

thunder rumbled . . .

 

eric

 

 

cats, fire, cocoa, book

never mind the rain outside

perfect afternoon

 

Deirdre Godwin

 

 

first rain

the pool fish

wipes my toes

 

Ramesh Anand

 

 

stooped horses

flat tails -- frozen raindrops

the long night

 

pos

 

 

fifth month

of above average rain

tomato blight

 

gourdman

 

 

rain patter

on the window pane --

autumn blues

 

natalia kuznetsova

 

 

early night

the moon flamboyant

in the rain

 

Gautam Nadkarni

 

 

rain – how much

before we all float

dry land - a fairytale

 

Ashi

 

 

one cloud shower

with her sandals in her hand

barefoot lady

 

Boris Nazansky

 

 

afternoon rain drops

splish, splashing...my red brick walk is

wet, wild tickled pink!

 

dragonfly

 

 

in the rain storm

a homeless

scarecrow

 

Thera

 

 

after showers --

an avocado blossom

floats on water

 

~ Andrew Otinga

 

 

dark clouds

rain streams down

answered prayers

 

Ben Gieske

 

 

rain pelts the roof--

little cat curls

into my neck

 

jill

 

 

 Deep moist breaths

Walking shrouded hills

Hakone Rain

 

Pat Lammers

 

 

Rain

cooling

coyote’s

feverish tongue

 

Kurt W.

 

 

Tape deck on

rain drumming on roof

soothing music

 

Trevor Camp

 

 

morning drizzle --

a turkey warms chicks

under her wings

 

~ Shamim Mbone

 

 

intermittent rain

a blue jay pecks

between drops

 

--Diane Mayr

 

 

end of summer rain--

the kindergarten student's

first day in class

 

DeVar

 

 

morning news;

anthills and summer rains

sign a truce!

 

manoj saranathan

 

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General Comments:

**Thanks for an afternoon yesterday and a morning today of reading and

re-reading these haiku (Kigo and FF both) - many of them resonated as

immediate, on the spot picture of an instant.  Beautiful, there were a

few others I'd like to have enough votes for.

 

**Looking forward to seeing what the results will be! And thank you

for all your work in keeping these competitions going -- they mean a

lot to the Kenyan students

 

** I wish we had twelve points! There are always about 6 more nice

haiku that I want to vote for.

 

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Thank you for participating in the September 2011 Kukai!

 

The Annual Poets' Choice Kukai begins October 4th and the voting

will stay open until October 17.  We will post the results no later

than Friday, October 21st.

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We will announce the November Call for Submissions on Monday, October

31st.  See you then!

 

With much appreciation,

The Shiki Monthly Kukai Team