32 Toh Kai Xuen

PRAISE - I found out that I am able to recreate intricate designs such as the wreath over the Order of Garter and the neckpiece of the Order.I can also find ways to make the designs 3 dimensional through folding the cardboard for the ribbon on the cloak.I am also able to find the tone on my face,making it more closer to reality.I think that the flourishes are also very interesting as it is looped through the ribbon on the top.

POLISH - I could have improved on designing the suit as it is quite plain and does not have as much design as the Order of Garter.this problem is important as it could affect how  the art would look like from a general view.My hair could also be more dense as some parts are not covering the hair as much.However that problem is generally because of the velcro as the alignment of my hair and hair backing is almost impossible due to an irreversible error when I pasted my head backing.