14 Zhang Xinyun

My Self portrait

Praise

I generally put in a lot of effort to do this art project and make it look well and learn in the process of doing. I thought of ways to improve my artwork and tried to fix some of the mistakes so that the artwork could still look well, like removing the cardboard shirt and pasting again to add the flap. I think that in detail, I did my hair well as I added different cardboard to add white to it and make it look more well designed and interesting. I tried to cut small cardboard strips to paste onto the backing to make it look better instead of just the plain hair.

Polish

I think that I could worked and focused on my shirt even more by choosing a cardboard with more design so that the colour of the shirt and collar looks more fit. I could also have made a shirt with more details like laces with more interesting design to make it look more three-dimensional.  I should also make the process more organised and making my surrounding neater when doing so I will not be looking for pieces so frequently and could have more time to focus on artwork. I should also have put the cardboard pieces in place to check its position instead of just pasting it so i will not have to remove it and paste it again when I noticed that some pieces are not in place.