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Your class has had a discussion on the best ways of improving the general health of people in today's world.
You have made the notes below.
What's the best way of encouraging people to lead healthier lifestyles?
television advertising
government campaigns
education in schools
Some opinions expressed in the discussion
There's so much TV advertising of junk food - no wonder everyone's overweight.
It's up to individuals to decide how they live, not the government.
If children understand the importance of good health, there won't be a problem in the future.
Write an essay discussing two of the ways in your notes. You should explain which is the best way of encouraging people to lead healthier lifestyles, giving reasons in support of your answer. You may, if you wish, make use of the opinions expressed in the discussions, but you should use your own words as far as possible.
1.
It is commonly known that active and healthy way of living makes you bright and happy, helps keep your mind and body flexible and strong, and prolongs your life. I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to encourage people to adopt a healthier life style because it raises the standard of living and, consequently, helps facilitate society being developed, civil and tolerate.
I suppose that all the means serve the purpose but the most effective method is to start from the very beginning. I mean that if children lead to a positive outlook on sport, day in day out physical training and active games, it will certainly stand them in good stead in the future. What is more, they will form a very robust new generation who will not need to be explained the benefits of being as sound as a bell. However, it is not enough to stand out this part of education and upbringing because children often take the parental model as a basis of their own lives. That is why it is essential to engage adults in doing daily exercises and setting the right example to their kids.
Involving ordinary people in doing, for example, everyday jogging could be hard which steams from their quite rigid bodies and minds, let alone the force of habit. I deem that in this case it would be sensible to use an invincible power of TV ads so that to persuade folks to try some, for instance, injury-preventative activity. Not only does it support a positive image of a healthful person but also helps the body of nation get better.
Concluding, I would like to say that education in schools and advertising campaigns on being physically fit are the main means to get athletic, creative, energetic and optimistic people all over the world.
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It is commonly known that active and healthy way of living makes you happy, helps keep your mind and body flexible and strong while prolonging your life. I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to encourage people to adopt a healthier life style because it raises the standard of living and, consequently, helps facilitate society being developed, civil and tolerate.
I suppose that all the means serve the purpose but the most effective method is to start from the very beginning. I mean that if children lead to a positive outlook on sport, day in day out physical training and active games, it will certainly stand them in good stead in the future. What is more, they will form a very robust new generation who will not need to be explained the benefits of being as sound as a bell. However, it is not enough to stand out this part of school education because children often take the parental model as a basis of their own lives. That is why it is essential to engage adults in doing daily exercises and setting the right example to their kids.
Involving ordinary people in doing some everyday workout could be a hard task due to their quite rigid bodies and minds, let alone the force of habit. I deem that in this case it would be sensible to use an invincible power of TV ads to persuade folks to try, for instance, some injury-preventative or aerobic activity. Not only does it support a positive image of a healthful person but also helps the body of nation get better.
Concluding, I would like to say that education in schools and advertising campaigns on being physically fit are the main means to get athletic, energetic and optimistic people all over the world.
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Correction
It is commonly known that an active and wholesome way of living makes you happy, helps keep your mind and body flexible and strong while prolonging your life. I believe wholeheartedly that it is crucial to encourage people to adopt a healthier life style because it raises the standard of living and, consequently, facilitates society being developed, civil and tolerate.
I suppose that all the means serve the purpose but the most effective method might be to start from the very beginning. I mean that if children are led to a positive outlook on sport, day in day out physical training and active games, it will certainly stand them in good stead in the future. What is more, they will form a very robust new generation who will not need to be explained the benefits of being as sound as a bell. However, it is insufficient to highlight this part of school education because children often take the parental model as a basis of their own lives. That is why it is essential to engage adults in doing daily exercise and setting the right example to their kids.
Involving ordinary people in doing some everyday workout could be a hard task due to their quite rigid bodies and minds, let alone the force of habit. I deem that in this case it would be sensible to use an invincible power of TV ads to persuade folks to try, for instance, some injury-preventative or aerobic activity. Not only does it support a positive image of a healthful person but also helps the body of nation get better.
Concluding, I would like to say that education in schools and advertising campaigns on being physically fit are the main means to get athletic, energetic and optimistic people all over the world.
299
B2