Post date: Dec 6, 2012 12:23:53 PM
Please work on your Embedded Assessment #2 drafts (or do them if you didn't have them done for today. Gr....)
Give each other feedback on your projects and keep the feedback positive, yo. :)
Feedback would look like this:
I really like how you used the Bandwagon advertising technique to encourage 2016ers to read To Kill a Mockingbird. The way you described the fight scene at the end of the book really played on people's sense of sympathy for Scout and Jem. You also did a great job by using imagery to help readers understand the sting of the punches and the smell of the mud as Scout hit the ground.