characters
Princess Vanetta - first born, older sister, 'the princess who wants to rule'
Prince Rolac - first born SON
concept
the eldest daughter, upset at being passed over for the throne, learns magic to gain the power to be king of her kingdom
Princess Vanetta and her brother Prince Rolac grew up together in Afeldel. As children, they were inseparable. They went everywhere and did everything together. Vanetta is older, but as first born son, Rolac was crown prince, set to inherit the kingdom when he married. This angered Vanetta, as she didn't understand why the fact that she was a woman would matter. She argued with her father about this frequently, who said men ruled because they are bigger, stronger, and smarter, until he sent her off to live in the south court, where other princesses of the kingdom's lived.
There she met the three princesses from the three neighboring kingdoms, and how materialistic and competitive they were about her brother (boasting about how they were going to win him). They also made fun of her for being the 'princess who wants to rule', vulgarly explaining that a woman's way to rule is through her King's cock. The whole affair sickened Vanetta, and so when she accidentally saw a wizard using magic (a rare thing), she followed him, and stowed-away in his cart as he rode out of town.
When she awoke it was dark, the wizard was gone, the cart was outside a strange looking house, and the forest around her looked strange. She sees some (specific things) which are only present in the forbidden forest. She's suddenly terrified. She runs for the house, only to have the wizard magically appear, trip her, and playfully ask what she is so eager to get away from that she would follow a dangerous wizard into the forbidden forest. / Inside, he makes her some warm food, and offers to take her back in the morning, which she's very thankful for. After some silence, he mysteriously offers an, 'Or.... you could stay and train as my apprentice.' / we see some kind of wax/on wax/off type magic training scene, where she's learning magic but not very good. we see her impatient to know how she can use magic to save her kingdom. we see her getting stronger, and the wizard surprised at her strength. / one distant day, she wants to go back. she seems calm, and happy for what the wizard taught her. she rides the rickety cart with him back into south-kingdom.
there she starts to hear that things are much worse than she thought. Her brother married (queen/maiden B), the king fell ill and then died. Her brother instituted new taxes, held the grandest ceremony ever for (queen/maiden B), and did some other atrociously improper things for maiden-B or kingdom-B. Vanetta makes her way back to her home kingdom.
Once in her home kingdom she meets with her brother, who insists on meeting her with his queen present, for his queen is always present. Vanetta brings up her concerns, but the queen smugly coaches her brother not to consider them seriously. through the use of magic vanetta sees that the queen is fingering his cock under the tablecloth as they talk and eat lunch. she's disgusted. / Vanetta tries to find a way to reach her brother when he's not accompanied by the queen, but only succeeds in catching the queen on her own. The two of them have an exchange, the queen quite frothy about how easily her brother fell to her cocktease, and how profitable it's been for her home kingdom. How even as they speak, her specially selected handmaidens are servicing the frenzy she's driven him into. She pulls a blade on the queen, and the queen taunts her for the fact that she won't kill her.
At court, issues are heard where the King rules fairly, but in favor of his queen's house. Princess Vanetta is introduced. She declares that she was first born, that Rolac's mind has become tainted by his Queen, and that she is the rightful air to the throne. Everyone laughs. She calls on the right for brothers to settle their disputes with armed combat. Everyone laughs. She asks if he is afraid to fight a woman. Nobody laughs. The queen whispers into his ear, and her brother accepts the challenge.
The fight: In the combat ring she takes no weapon and no armor, while he has a longsword and shield. He tries to reason with his sister, to call off this duel. She refuses, and merely stands firm, apologizing to her brother. When they call for the duel to begin, he circles around her, not able to swing a blade against his sister. She, however, kneels down. A humming can be heard, and wind is ruffling the dirt below her, along with the bottom of her tunic. She looks up, "Brother, you are under the spell of your Queen, and have blighted our kingdom. What I do now, I do for the good of our people." Then she stood. The crowd gasped in awe, as she stood easily a full head taller than him. Calls in the crowd asked for the sorceress to be struck down. He looked around, confused, then saw his wife, the queen, draw her finger across her throat. He didn't know what had happened to his sister, but he knew this was sorcery. He flew at her with his blade. Instead of slicing through her, she simply waved her hand, and his sword flew aside. She extended her palm in a slow punch, and though she didn't physically connect with him, he flew back several feet and to the ground. She knelt back to the ground, the humming getting louder. Her brother was in shock, not knowing what had happened. He ran to his queen. She told him he must kill her, now. He must get his sword and kill her. He slowly made his way to where his sword had fallen. His sister asked him if he would yield. He simply picked up his sword and charged. This time when she rose to her feet, she was more than three heads taller than him, and visibly huge. He stood beneath her, wanting to swing, but crippled with fear. She looked down at him. "It's okay my brother. You are weak, but now I am strong. Yield, and I will rule." A loose of arrows came at her from the side, but she merely held her hand up, and they bounced away as if they hit something. She dropped to one knee, and the humming returned, louder still. This time her growth was obvious to everyone present. Her head went from his chest-height, to over his head, and kept rising. She dropped her tunic, showing that she was covered only sparingly with form-fitting metal-plates on her breasts, pelvis, knees, and forearms -- none of which seemed to be held on by anything. When she was twice his height, she took his sword out of his hand, squeezing and bending it between her fingers before tossing it aside. Then she pushed him onto his back, holding him down with one of her huge hands spread across his entire chest. "Do you yield, brother?" She saw him hesitant, confused, unable to make his own decision. "She cannot help you now. Yield. Yield or my next move will be to take off her head." He suddenly pulled his helmet off, and struggled to see his queen, still held down by Vanetta's fury. His queen was pinned against a wall, held by a mysterious force. Finally his voice called out loudly. "I hearby yield, to my sister, Queen Vanetta."
The speech: She took her hand off him and rose, as his Queen fell to the ground. She now stood three times the height of any man. "Dear people of Afeldel, a declare myself King Vanetta. I pledge to restore to you that which is rightfully yours. Any who have colluded with the treacherous (xyz) shall be given fair grace to return their wrongful spoils, or receive my wrath. As a show of my mercy, (xyz) will be allowed to continue the excellent royal service she has offered my brother, and if she should choose to leave my brother against her will, I will bring vengeance down on her family. Are there any among you who oppose me, or oppose my agenda?" The crowd was justifiably silent. "Then it shall be." Suddenly, and somewhat unexpectedly, the crowd cheered madly for her."
King Vanetta walked the castle hallway towards the former Queen's chamber, wearing her provocative battle armor. She remained a head taller than any man, for appearances more than anything else. Within the castle her magic was power enough. The guards outside did not dare impede her. She waved at the Queen's door, tossing it open. One of her handmaidens was face down between her legs. "I see that my brother is not the only one controlled by what's between the legs." The handmaiden's head poked up at the interruption. "Begone," she instructed, and the woman skittered off into the next room. "xyz, i have not seen the outpouring of returned funds I expected from your kingdom. was I not clear about my edict? has my reputation not sufficiently spread?" / xyz tried to close her legs, to sit up, but she was held, frozen. "I...I...I believe they are having trouble, because the funds are already spent." / Vanetta stood between her legs looking down at her. "you tell your kingdom, I'm coming to ABC-city to give them a demonstration of my rule, and that if they load a cart with an impressive patronage, I'll spare the other cities, for now."
how is she going to smash things?
keep kingdoms in line
maybe she selects men from the losing army, and makes a show of destroying them
new enemies?
after she gets bored at home, going on a raid?
how is she going to get intimate?
maybe she gets volunteers at home, from the army
maybe she picks random big-looking guards in the castle
has fun humiliating them for how much stronger she is
what else happens?
she assumes control of her brother's life, and his sex life through xyz and the handmaidens
she publicly spars, assuring anyone they will not be harmed
this becomes an entertainment comedy more than anything
maybe one smaller participant is especially funny, and she takes a liking to him
issues?
what are the limits to her magic? (right now it's just all powerful)
what does the wizard do?
why does her magic become so powerful all of a sudden?