Big Scare - outline

  • todo

    • ?let Addison be on a civilian motorcycle. Addy/Regan ride up on Addison's bike? (pic pic pic pic)

  • story

    • four of them are out somewhere crowded (amusement park, festival, etc). ash goes missing. addy kicks into police gear, recovering him.

    • The four meet somewhere crowded one afternoon, (amusement park, festival, music, carnival)

    • Luna/Ash are waiting at the front of the entry, looking for Regan's car...

      • when they roll up on Addison's bright red sportbike, parking right on the sidewalk.

      • As Regan dismounts, Luna heckles them for October being a bit late in the season for Motorcycles

      • Regan sauces back about how much she likes a, "a hot piece of ass between her legs. you wanna ride with me on the way home?"

      • addison objects, something about Regan almost dropping it the last time she rode

      • Luna hands Ash over to Regan, "how about you just help me get a hot piece of Ash into his carrier?"

    • Inside the event, Ash is in a carrier on Luna's back, looking over her shoulder.

    • they wander, and we get to see what a crowd is like...

    • Regan/addison are going to ride the tilt-o-whirl - ask Luna to join them. Luna 'you know i don't like roller coasters'. Regan 'that was *before*. you're going to love them now. plus, it's not a roller coaster. come on.'

      • setting up, they remind them smaller riders need to sit on the left.

      • Regan strategically places herself addison on the right, Ash/Luna on the left, and sits strategically between Addison and Luna, even though technically she's the largest rider.

      • addy makes some comment about it ("Regan, aren't you supposed to sit on the outside? Ohh, I get what's happening here. You and Luna could just go make out and get it over with.")

      • Regan turns and without warning dives down Addison's throat for a few seconds, leaving her a little gasping for air. "Honey. There is no room for jealousy in my tilt-o-whirl sandwich fantasy."

      • The young pretty attendant comes around, she suggests to Regan/Addison "you two on the end might want to switch". Regan and Addison both simultaneously answer, "we're good." / "okay, make sure your child stays on the.. ohh! you're a man! excuse me! i'm so sorry." she reaches out, casually touching Ash's hand, and paying him a little too much attention Ash figures she's 17 or 18, as she has a beauty that's even more youthful than the perpetual youth healing offers all women. "sir, please stay on the inside, for your own safety. Alright?", Ash nods twice before she breaks eye contact, lets go of his hand, and heads off to the next passengers.

      • Regan teases, "Ash, I think she liked you. We could find out if she needs a date to prom."

      • Luna defends, "Hey! my man!"

      • --

      • the ride starts. As it whips around the first revolution, Addison puts her back to the outside wall, Regan's body pressing into her. "hey honey."

      • Luna holds on for the second and third spins, but then there is too much force, and she's tossed sideways against regan. She still has an a comfortable hold on Ash.

      • As it whips faster and faster, the wind is too loud to speak, and their little sandwich compresses.

      • At first Luna doesn't like it, but as she rights herself, and gets a hold of Ash, she grows to like it. The kind of frantic swishing force, all of them laughing and smashing together. The feeling of holding and protecting Ash from harm.

      • --- more Ash observations/experience.

      • They depart from the ride, laughing, dizzy, stumbling.... they talk about the experience, luna admitting she liked it. Regan telling her she knew she would. They follow the turnstyles out of the ride.

      • Regan asks what they would all like to do next. Luna wants another roller coaster. Addison wants a funnel cake. "How about you Ash?" Luna turns to where she expected him to be, but he's not there. "Ash? Where's Ash?" She turns around again, going increasingly frantic as they all start to look for him.

      • Somehow, he's suddenly missing.

    • Luna/Regan are in devastated shock. ("when did you last see him?" / "he was right in front of me through the turnstiles. then he was standing right there. i'm sure of it" / "he can't of gone far. maybe he just wandered off.")

    • Addy immediately kicks into gear, "give me your tracker". A wave of relief dawns on her as she realizes he has a tracker. She turns on the watch, looking at it, puzzling at his dot moving away from them. Addy demands again, "you're tracker, give it to me. now." Luna senses the urgency in her voice, and gets frantic again, clawing at the clasp to get it off her wrist, finally shoving it into Addys hand. Addy takes one look at the tracker and sprints off.

    • Luna looks to Regan, "Ohh no, what have I done?" She sits down, right in the middle of the sidewalk, putting her face in her hands. "You two keep him safe for years, and I have him (XYZ) and he's already missing."

    • Regan comforts her --- ???????

    • --

    • Luna's tracker to follow him across the park, seeing him carried into a van.

    • She hops on her police motorcycle to make chase (still wearing her street clothes), making chase for the car. As she rides, she calls into the station, giving them the tracking number. requesting an immediate tracker hunt. (which will take some time to organize)

    • back at the park, luna/regan are freaking out, but comforting each other. regan talks about addy, how she'll get him back. luna is crying and blaming herself. she wasn't ready to be a guardian. she should have listened to them more, let them keep watching him. Regan notices them drawing a crowd. someone asks if they lost a child, she answers that they lost her husband. the crowd starts to whisper and gasp. regan says they should go to the station. leads luna out of the park in tears.

    • inside the abductor's van, Ash is coming to, fully juiced. the women talk about their escape plan as Ash is so horney all he can do is admire them and jack off. they notice the police cruiser chasing them, and start talking about it. (shouldn't have taken him with that cop parked in front. / there is no way she could have been onto us so fast. he must have a tracker. i thought i told you to cover that.) the girl notices ash jacking himself off, comments, then wraps a metalized band around his thigh to try and block the signal. they make an evasion plan.

    • behind them, addison finally has them in sight, and is calmly weaving through traffic, closing on them fast, trying not to be seen too early. a status update comes in over the radio about the tracker hunt, how they lost the signal around (location). addy says she is tailing them (heading), van description, plate number.

    • .... more dramatic chase

    • luna/regan arrive at the police station, comforted by an officer... who knows Regan, and explains the situation to them, what's currently going on.

    • Addison is fully caught up to them, demands they stop. they ignore her, swerving their van to try to block off her approach. Addison requests permission to use deadly force. her captain is surprised (with no sign of a gun? no way. totally against protocol. our priority is his safety. if that car crashes, he could be killed.) tells her they have two squads closing on them.

    • view from inside the van, as they freak out at the squad cars, but then are able to abuse the fact that they won't risk their passenger to force the squads into nearby obstructions. They are thrilled. Motorcycle is still on them. Woman directs the other to buckle Ash in, and throw some jacks to take out her tires. Ash lustfully grabs for her as she triest to move him to his seat, and she kisses him, causing him to climax again, his head to swim, and him to pass out.

    • Addison is alone again, on the radio asking for permission to take out a tire. her captain reminds her the conservative strategy, keep them running, they'll run out of gas before she does. The van doors open, and the woman throws out a spray of tire-spikes. Addison flares her inner-fire, stands on her motorcycle, watches the jacks in slow motion, timing a hop of the bike to pass the mass of them on the pavement. She clears most of them, but she hears a puncture sound, then the 'clink' as the tire spins and the jack hits the pavement.

    • She can't lose them, she has no choice, she guns the cycle, standing as it rams right into the back of the van and throws her inside. Inside just seconds, she catches herself, grabs her gun, puts a bullet through the leg of the assailant in the rear at point blank, then puts her gun to the head of the driver.

    • Her inner fire fading, she repeats her demand for the driver put her hands in sight, and slowly come to a stop. The woman starts to flinch, and Addy presses the pistol hard into the back of her head. Then she finally takes her foot off the gas, and brings the car to a stop.

    • Ash is fading back into conciousness as Addy holds the driver at gunpoint. He hears sirens arriving around them, and someone pull the driver out of the car, as Addy turns to him, stowing her weapon in the back of her pants. She's asking him if he's alright, seeing clear signs that he's been glimmered, the look in his eyes, the wet soiling of his pants. "can you hear me ash?" he doesn't respond.

    • Ash thinks she's the sexiest woman in the world, as she unbuckles and pulls him out of the seat, hugging him. Ash grabs her, kissing her neck, humping into her chest as best he can. She steps out of the back of the van, walking past officers standing over a cuffed woman, bleeding from her leg.

    • A moment later they are in an ambulance, and ash is still trying to get release. Addy is talking to the EMT staff, explaining his state. They confirm what she suspected, that they fully juiced him, maybe more than once. They check him for signs of wounds or bruising. Noting some severe brusing on his arm where they grabbed him, possibly a fracture. The nurse talks Ash through what's happening, unbuttoning his pants, telling him she's going to help him out. THen she proceeds to jack him off, relieving a climax quickly. She makes a medical note ("lets see if that settles him down.")

    • the four of them reuniting. ultimately shows four of them that they are much closer than they realized.