The Link, outline
Larger story arc, possible act 1/2/3
Andy, in danger with reslink
angelique
Andy, and his normal-time crush on Angie
future girls help (male pheramones?)
Andy, and his desire for Angelique (who at this point is a spy that's captured Steven Lindstrom).
turns out it's a dream, and that angelique was his fantasy of angie
Andy, and his realization that reslink is evil
Andy, and his desire to return to future-time (after he's back) (father takes away the machine)
steven lindstrom returns, they track him down, and he helps
Andy, and his desire for closure with his father (fifteen year old takes over the past)
Steven Lindstrom, and his ultimate desire to return to his own time
Angelique, and a desire to reintroduce men into society (reslink turns out to be evil)
steven lindrom is the hero, and organizes society against reslink
Characters
angie
angelique - black hair
catlin -
suzanne
tina
gina -
Larger Outline
part 1/2:
link developed
transported to the future
Steven Lindstrom / 'rogue scientist' (Angelique)
arrival
initial collection
overheard meeting
andy / reslink science team
arrival
morning/shower
part 3
andy/reslink
medical scan
accidental pheramones
suzanne collection, explanation: 'ground rules' (sharing, resist tendancy for female one to one bonding, labcoats, pheramones)
steven / 'rogue'
associate interaction, 'dress technology'
internet access, what the scientist learns about society
proper collection
part 4
andy/reslink
strange experience watching tv
education/school
reslink is talking to sam (he showed up the next day)
andy sees angelique in the lab (she's talking to sam)
catrina's comments about trying to track down steven lindstrom
they have to rush andy home, send observer (heather) with him (wearing collar)
steven / rogue
apartment is empty, but he overhears conversation with sam/angelique
watches information on the computer, figures out that angelique 'stole' the link
gina stops by to check on him, make sure he's taking his samples
part 5
andy (back at home)
sam doesn't believe the stories (on the phone)
heather controls his father (then andy?), surprised at the potency
heather explores the control w/andy
sam arrives, heather maintains her story
steven
gina interaction. reverse pheramones? steven experiments with it
??
steven discusses the link stealing with angelique, she confesses and explains how she severed the first link
part 6
andy
andy pushes about her disappearing with boys (is jealous)
school year continues, heather gets taller
observer control of principal
observer tests control of a classroom (removes collar)
new plotline, sam (heather?)
witnesses observer 'control' of andy's father
observer spots him, and puts the control on sam
observer tells sam to check in with reslink
steven
more audio on the link... andy this time, he's talking about the 'observer gone wrong'
angelique explains why the girl in the past is a problem, explains pheromones, adolescent pheromones, reslink evil
angelique and steven steal the transport and bring andy to angelique's
angelique sends steven away with gina
part 7
sam/heather
create cover story for andy not to be around
andy
andy explains his pheramone trance, though he understands it, he had to get away
starstrukk at angelique and gina (no labcoats)
steven
part 8
sam/heather
observer gets frisky with sam, asks him about his interest in girls at school
sends him home, implied friskiness with andy's father
next day at school, observer looks for boy to take back with her, sam wants to come
observer fetches angie as an example girl, intends for sam to play with her
steven lindstrom
gina's home in the mountains
gina's friend
andy
angelique
random ideas
andy's dad is going to tear down the shed, they have a fight about it
andy and sam move the equipment into the basement, worried it won't work when they are done
andy stays with a family (oni's?)
6.5' fifteen year old, over-potent pheramones
she comes home from school while oni is away
andy starts to notice the smell from a distance and asks her to stay away, also asks her if she is in yer cycle
she insists she isn't, and they continue talking
he gets closer and they kiss, he smells her neck and can't get enough
she tells him to stop and he does, she asks him why and he explains the urge, when it happened before, danger of imprint
she realizes what this means, and asks him what he would do for her -> anything
she tests it, then lets him close to her neck again
asks him more about his time
asks him what it will take to imprint
makes him promise not to tell anyone about this
? imprint
control via pheramones?
heather ideas
forcing andy to show her how to harvest a sample
using andy as her pet slave (school busywork, organizing her samples, shopping for her clothes)
harvesting samples from representative groups (athletic, music, math)
steven lindstrom / gina ideas
how does he accidentally find out about his pheramones?
? he asks her to do something and she doesn't stop
? she comments on how she feels different, like she would do anything for him
? he says he wants to leave, and she starts getting ready to take him, he quizzes about what angelique will think, and realizes she's in a bit of a trance
andy's father is taken by gina
andy knows his father has gone through, but he ends up in the lab
sam's good-with-women turns out to be pheramones as well, he enjoys control over xxx (angelique?)
6.5' fifteen year old visitor to the past? turns out she has over-potent pheramones.
controls andy's father, poses as andy's girlfriend at school,
time tie-ins
giant sandal in the opening
'important test object' sent in the beginning turns out to be a mini-mesh, "hide this in your bedroom"
Where is this all going?!?!?
possible endings
it's all andy's dream (tie in with angie/angilique)
Steven turns the tables in the future, and sympathetic women help them (climax = steven lindrstrom's public announcement)
andy's father returns home, but accepts that andy is staying
andy returns to the past and helps his father escape from pheramone enslavement
Original Outline
1
male scientist perfects a new communication device which he believes has no transmission time
female party on the other end starts to communicate with him
2
a teenage boy finds a device in the broken down shed of their new home and begins communicating with a young scientist
1
the scientists spend their time trying to orient the other side of the communication channel, also, the woman hints that they are having trouble in their society without revealing the details
the male scientist begins working hard to figure out how to send objects through the communication channel
2
the young scientist tells a tale of her world, and the genetic wars that occured there, how man created a virus and destroyed themselves
the young scientist sends pictures of herself, as well as a strange live animal
she invites him to visit her world, explaining how he can send things through, he sends some simple objects
after some considering, he returns and initiates the sequence
1
the scientists make a breakthrough in sending objects, animals etc
after much considering, he shows up at the device, and travels through the device
(the characters don't know that they traveled through to meet eachother's contacts)
1
the scientist is dwarfed by the woman, who is easily 9" tall. She excitedly smiles and then quickly rushes him out of the lab and into her home
2
the young boy is greeted by a stunning woman, over twice his height and 12" tall
after just a short amount of conversation, she realizes the the boy is not her scientist partner
She sits him down to figure out how the mixup occured. The logs tell her another subject came through. She must find him.
The lab cameras show her it was the young scientist.
1
the young scientist realizes the mixup, but plays with her guest anyhow. her ambition to control the key to natural reproduction is driving her.
Consulting her computer, she finds information about how to force him to provide a 'specimin'
...
2
the scientist talks to the young boy politely. for her research she would like some of his reproductive cells.
he's embarassed and stays quiet, not knowing how to respond
she can tell she's embarassed him, so decides she will ask him again in the morning.
She shows him to his room in the lab complex, which is spartan but hugely over-proportioned.
he need to use the restroom. she directs him down the hall, and he does his best at using the oversized equipment
a short while later he falls asleep
1
she's locked him in a closet which is quite large, and dressed him in a very long shirt
he can hear her talking with a group of 'associates' outside
(overheard conversation)
they want to see her specimin, she refuses and they leave, except for one
the conversation turns private, 'have you, you know?' -> no, 'is it here?' -> yes
her associate talks about him as if he's not even a person.
the door opens, his captor gestures him out.
2
when he wakes it's bright. he wanders down the hallway
He can hear the noise of a busy building, though he walks quickly and only sees one person briefly before slipping into the bathroom.
before he finishes, he can hear two other women enter, talking, and then the sound of water. As he opens the toilet stall, they are both naked and showering.
He hides and stares for a while.
Another women enters and asks the two women showering if they have seen the subject, they look right at him, 'he's been watching us from the stall, we didn't want to frighten him'.
she opens the stall and kneels next to him, greeting him for the morning. Telling him what his day will entail, and then telling him he should quicky shower before breakfast. She walks him over towards the shower area, and sets his clothes down on a bench. He's reluctant and a little embarassed as the two other women are still naked in there and now just staring at him.
'it's okay they don't bite', 'do you mind if he shares the shower with you?' 'no not at all'. 'im tina, and this is suzanne'
his guide pulls at his shirt, slips it over his head, and then tells him where he can put his clothes to be washed
his guide asks if the other two can help him. 'thanks, that'll save me from having to get dressed again', bring him down to the cafe when he's done. Ohh and try not to get him too excited, (chief scientist) would like to get a reproductive sample this morning if possible.
1
her associate says seeing him makes her feel kind of 'tingly'. 'do you feel it?'
he briefly describes what the associate looks like.
she asks if she can touch him, 'only carefully', she quickly picks him up, and sets him to sit on the edge of the table, sitting in front of him
can he talk? "yes i can talk."
she asks why he keeps looking down her shirt. embarrassed being caught in the act, he says nothing, and his captor explains the male arousal mechanisms.
the associate is fascinated, and pulls the long shirt up to expose his waist
the captor discloses 'i need another sample today anyhow', and talks her through the process of stimulating him
the associate has fun with it, but it's over quickly, 'ooh, i still feel tingly, can he do it again?'
the captor explains the limits of arousal, and the associate is determined to try.
she pulls her shirt up over her head and removes her bra. he's trying not to look, but she encourages him to.
she's getting excited as well, and she rubs him against her, first in the interest of starting him up again, then because of how much she enjoys it
in no time he's excited again, and she asks for another sample container. the captor is surprised, 'i may have to use that trick later'
the associate comments 'what i wouldn't do to get him in my bed later', you have a real find here girl, did you think about selling more than his specimens?
2
as the guide leaves, he gingerly begins disrobing
while his embarrassment had calmed down his natural reaction to the naked women, he tried his best to ignore them
he makes his way over to an unoccupied shower, and can feel the two of them conspicuously watching him
the controls are too high for him to reach, and as he looks up, one of the women towers over him as she turns on the water, 'would you like to do this yourself, or do you need some help?'
'i can do it myself, I just need some soap." she squirts some soap into her hand and lowers it down to him
after taking a scoop of liquid soap from her hands, she steps away and water rains down over his head
the water is raining down his face so much he can't open his eyes
he does his best to soap himself up, but the soap has already been washed out of his hand, "maybe i need some help afterall."
as he moves out of the stream of water, he bumps into something solid, "no problem. Suzanne, you get the shampoo, i'll get the soap"
clearing his eyes, he can see that he bumped up against Suzanne's legs. The two of them are both using the dispensers high on the wall.
Tina bends over in front of him, "i recommend you close your eyes," he's distracted by her breasts hanging down from her frame, but complies as hands squish shamoo into his hair.
"arms up", and a moment later he can feel soapy hands squeezing their way down each of his arms, her fingers wrapping all the way around.
As her hands wrapped around his sides, her fingers slid between his back and Suzanne's leg he had been bracing against. All the soap at his feet made it slippery, and he lost his balance, his arms grabbing Tina's wrists for a handhold. "oops gotcha," her hands tightened around him to keep him from falling, before lifting him completely clear of the ground.
"We're almost done. Suzanne can you finish off his legs there before I rinse him." I felt her hands from behind. soaping my feet, squeezing there way up my legs, and then slipping underneath my crotch. Keeping my eyes closed had been a blessing preventing me from seeing them both naked, but straddling her fingers as they cleaned my crotch and butt was too much. I felt myself instantly stiffen. "Ohh, you better stop that Suzanne. He's getting excited."
"Is he? Let me see what it. " Her fingers were still massaging me, it felt so incredibly good. "Look at that. Is it still getting bigger?" I let out a whimper as her fingers slid around my soaped up erection. "Ohh, you like that do you?" I nodded. "We're under strict orders not to get you too excited." She let out a girlish giggle.
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