Caretakers - pool boy - outline

    • Concept

      • The world is run and cared for by a breed of oversize women (15' tall) called "the caretakers".

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    • Characters

      • Kenneth - pool boy

      • Alita - jamacian caretaker

      • Lisa - blonde/cute caretaker

      • Vanessa - redhead busty caretaker

        • Darryl - one of vanessa's pets

      • ??? - athletic caretaker

    • Kenneth has a job as a pool boy at a caretaker palace

    • He mostly just serves drinks and gets 'teased'.... but one day, suddenly both Alita and Vanessa are after him.

    • Alita asks him to swim with her.

    • Vanessa ????

      • what is her game?

        • multiple pets? - "if you choose, you can become my pet" / "i want you to know how i treat my pets" / "even if i don't own you, all littles belong to me"

        • force for good?

          • maybe she's part of a movement of "caretakers for cherishing pets"

          • maybe she wants to be his 'friend'... get to know him, protect him from abusive caretakers.. help him "choose the right one".

  • ??? where is this going?

    • Vanessa and Alita compete?

        • maybe Vanessa "glazes" Kenneth, and adds him to her collection.... Alita has to "save" him

        • maybe Alita has to "step up her game"... "what does she have that i don't have?" -> "she fondles her pets constantly to keep them loyal"

      • Vanessa "cares", she "gets to know him"...

        • asking him questions about his life outside, while fondling him. asks him to be "friends".

Original Outline....

    • Kenneth gets a job as a pool boy at a caretaker palace. Eventually a caretaker propositions him, and he is incrementally exposed to a secret world he never knew existed.

    • Story:

    • The first scenes are just about the awe he experiences being around them, and the funny ways he has to serve them. He brings towels and drinks out on wheeled carts. He struggles to straighten up their things when they leave their chairs, and clean up after their messes.

    • One day, a caretaker strikes up a conversation with him. He's shocked she's engaging him in conversation. It makes him nervous, which she notices.

    • She's noticed him working for the last few weeks, and asks how it's been. Then she asks if he would like to "expand his responsibilities". He always hoped being a pool boy would just be his way in, so of course he was interested.

    • She asks if he knows anything about the private life of caretakers. He regurgitates some canned public explanation of their social structure.

    • She asks if he's ever heard about caretaker relations with men. We call them 'specials', though I think your slang term for them is pets. He's heard and read all kinds of rumors about caretakers secretly using men for pleasure, in ways that were only sometimes pleasant. He made a vague acknowledgement that he's heard rumors, but he always thought they were just that, rumors.

    • Ohh, they are more than rumors. It is a deeply held secret, but some of us actually prefer the company of men.

    • (she complements him on his looks and personality, then propositions him to become a 'special'. or at least find out more. when he doesn't refuse, she gives him instructions about how later she'll be ordering some bottled water, and how if he's interested, he should make sure he's the one who brings it.)

    • --

    • He arrives at her room, pushing a large cart with her huge bottle of water. He rings the bell, and she calls for him to enter. He announces her bottled water. She tells him to bring it to her in the bedroom.

    • She's lying on the bed, in sexy black sheer lingerie. It was a bit of a surprise, but not entirely uncommon, as they were routinely called to bring various refreshments to caretakers while in various states of lovemaking with their partners.

    • She asks him to join her on the bed, which he's stunned by. When he doesn't respond, she taunts him, "do you find me somehow unappealing or unattractive?" ... which of course he doesn't, and he gushes about how beautiful she is. "Then please, come here and join me."

    • (she talks to him about how she likes to take care of 'specials'. dressing them, traveling with them, confiding in them, and pleasuring them. while she's doing so, she's gingerly making physical contact with him, massaging his shoulders and chest with her fingers, asking if it's okay, then confirming she knows how good it feels.)

    • ???