bigger doors

• Backstory

  • In 2015, world viral epidemic spreads. Killing almost 50% of women, 10% of men.. aspread through kissing, blood, and sexual contact (more m->f). Kills men (10%), dormant in women (15%)... except it ends up causing dramatic growth in exposed women over the next several years. (dramatic height, hip, breast growth -- leading to caricature proportions)

  • we start four years after the epidemic, when the female 'carriers' are 8" to 20" taller. (1 in 3 women, correlated with promiscuity)

    • late teen (16+) full maturation carriers are 6'3" to 7'10" (compared to most men 5'5" to 6'5")

    • 12yo girls are now (avg 5'5" + 18" => 6'11", compared to 5'3" boys)

    • 10yo girls are now (avg 4'8" + 15" => 5'10", compared to 4'8" boys)

  • Epidemic left an excess of women (by killing men), shifting the majority and balance of political power.

  • It also causes competition between carriers and normals for men, making women more flexible about age gaps in either direction.

  • carriers also have increased libido and testosterone, causing their male partners to be more jealous/suspicious/protective

  • first female president elected (a normal republican, the democrats ran a carrier)

  • retail and residential doors are being incrementally replaced with 8'5" doors to accommodate carriers.

  • some carriers display flagrant Chauvinism

• Promises

  • Romance - Daisy and Todd fall for eachother

    • Conflict -> Todd's job puts him in compromising situations (but so does Daisy's). at first it's fine.. but then Daisy gets jealous, and pushes for him to "solve the problem" (take on a partner, or something).... she makes plenty of money for the both of them. Which seems okay for a short while, until he visits the club and Tessa makes sure he catches her in a very compromising situation.... Tessa inserts herself as the 'friend and confidant', and stirs the pot about Daisy's behavior at work.

  • Tessa - will get he karmic result her bad-attitude deserves.

    • ?maybe she gets fascinated with Simon as a non-admirer, pursues him to torture Todd... Simon responds to the carrier attitude, but is ultimately not attracted to the domination and rejects her

• Tradegy - Art has an affair with a carrier. his wife leaves him. elects to get 'juiced', and dies, so Art loses her twice.

• Major Characters

  • Todd Andrews - protagonist - 24yo 5'10" male, no college, carpenter, door replacing business is booming

  • Diana (Daisy) - antagonist - 18yo female (5'5" -> 7'5") - brunette little sister of Todd's old friend Jed . Their mother died from the virus. Jed drifted away from the family, and her relationship with her dad is 'weird' since the change. (inspiration, 9'2" vs 6'3", or 8'4" w/heels vs 5'10")

    • When ted runs into her after the change, she's 7'5" and a dyed redhead.

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  • Tessa - 22yo blond, Todd's high-school ex g/f, (5'7" -> 6'4")

    • self-absorbed, abuser, lier

    • Jordan Carver (pic pic pic pic pic pic pic pic)

  • Jed - 22yo, (Daily's brother) Todd's old friend who went off to college, and didn't visit home much anymore

• Minor Characters

  • Art - Todd's electrician friend, 30. Get's called in on jobs. He's married, but a closet admirer.

  • Simon - Todd's construction friend, 28. he's still working at the company he left. He's NOT an admirer.

• Inspired by story: http://mg-sg.pbworks.com/w/page/5824820/Annette%20By%20MiniMax

• Todd/Tessa/Daisy Story Arc Idea 1 - "Tessa only wants Todd when she can't have him. Love triangle."

  • Act 1:

    • Tessa tortures him, refusing to get back together with him.

    • He reunites with Daisy. She still has a crush on him. They have an evening...

    • Suddenly Tessa wants him back, and is hard to refuse. He gets into hot water with Daisy.

  • Act 2:

    • He tries to make it up to Daisy, only to have Tessa take increasingly aggressive steps to get him back and confuse him.

    • Daisy gets more and more upset, cursing dating an admirer who can't control himself. Finally backing off "letting Tessa have him" so they can be friends.

    • at which point his relationship with Tessa falls apart. (she isn't faithful, screws with him, etc)

    • He starts hanging out with Daisy as just a friend. They have tons of fun, with lots of sexual tension.

    • Tessa tries to interfere with the friendship, but Todd resists.

  • Act 3:

    • Finally Daisy and Todd really get together.

    • Tessa is furious, and tries one more time to make trouble. Daisy protects him from it.

    • Daisy and Todd triumph, while Tessa is thwarted.

• Long Arc Story Idea 2 - "irrational Tessa manipulates and controls Todd, until he finally breaks free and ends up with Daisy"

  • Act 1:

    • intro world changes due to plague, carriers, etc, through Todd's job "bigger doors"

    • Inciting incident: Tessa's sexual control/torture of Todd, over their pre-change breakup (he "kissed another girl" in high-school, she broke up with him for 'cheating on her', he begged to get her back when she became a carrier. She sort-of took him back, but she's not treating him fairly.) Todd is unable to walk away from her torture, because he's smitten by her new carrier self. Tessa treats him like a disrespected slave, giving him only unpredictable sexual attention to keep him controlled.

    • While visiting the Spectacle Lounge with his friends (they are trying to get him to drop Tessa), Todd accidentally reunites with Daisy/Diana.

    • Daisy still has a huge crush on Todd, and practically throws herself at him.. which he's both completely overwhelmed by, and afraid will get him in trouble with Tessa. Still, it's hard for him to resist her advances.

    • Tessa unexpectedly shows up (because she works there, which she didn't disclose to Todd). She "catches him in the act" again with Daisy. He immediately thinks he screwed up, and tries to get himself out of it. Runs off with Tessa. They have a huge fight.

      • It starts in the club. Todd points out that she didn't even tell him she was working at the Spectacle, but she quickly turns the conversation around on his "wrong doings" with Daisy. (I can't be doing this here. This is where I work.) She heads for the door..

    • Todd follows her out the door and to her car, apologizing and begging the whole time. She is making to leave, even "manhandling him" to get him away from her. Finally he convinces her to let him get into the passenger seat to talk.

    • She scolds and discredits him (you are just a cheater. how can I trust you? do you know how lucky you are to have me? only one-in-XXX women are carriers. i should dump you and go find a guy who actually wants me.) Meanwhile he's trying to explain that Daisy is just an old friend, and there was nothing going on. He loves her (Tessa), and he only wants her. He'll do anything.

    • (Tell me why you love me. Convince me.) Todd tries to explain his attraction to her, which quickly turns to thinkly-veiled descriptions of physical magnetism. She starts responding to him, touching, kissing, getting close. Pretty soon she's getting off on how attracted to her he is, even fueling the flames. Just a few minutes after it turns to fondling, and steamy "make-up make-out", she stops them.

    • She wants to forgive him, but she's just so mad at him. She needs a way to get over the anger. You have no idea how much of my day I spend fending off advances from guys, and so to find you with other girls is just this huge slap in the face. She needs a way to get over that anger. Maybe if she 'cheats' on him, she won't feel so mad about it. They will be "even". She's not going to go fall in love or anything, she just needs to even the score. Then she can really want him again, like she used to.

      • Todd tries to clarify what she means, since an unexpected kiss and sitting too close to Daisy were not really 'cheating' on her.

      • She turns on the charm.. trying to convince him this is already traumatic enough for her without getting graphic. She doesn't *want* to cheat on him, she *has-to* in order to stop feeling taken advantage of. She turns on the sex-charm... (Don't you remember how good it was before, when I trusted you? Don't you miss my sexy-moods? That time I stripped for you? Or the way I spoiled you that special football Sunday?) He recalls the Football Sunday, where she finally gave-up getting annoyed for him watching the game. She dressed in a team-jersey and waited on him. At first bringing him beers and giving him a neck rub, then eventually making it hard for him to watch the game by getting incredibly sexual, stripping down to a skimpy team-bikini, then turning the whole thing into a game where she would put him in her mouth during commercials, but when the commercial was over -- stop, tease, and insist he focus on the game. (That's the girl I want to be for you. Isn't that who you want to be with?)

      • (Yes. I just think 'cheating' is a bit of an over-reach. Nothing *happened*.)

      • (Please Todd, let's not rehash this. Don't tell me what I saw was the *only* thing that happened. I thought we were past your denials. Can't you see I'm trying to move past this? I want things to be the way they were. I want to be swept up by a sexy-mood, instead of pretending for you all the time. )

      • (Come on Tess, now you're just being unfair. Daisy is just an old friend, that's it. The last time I saw her she we were all just kids. I understand you think I did something wrong, and you're trying to punish me, but this is a mis-understanding. You care about me as much as I care about you. Don't tell me this is not real.)

      • (Ohh, I care about you Todd. I love you, but you hurt me. Can't you see how hard I'm trying?) She puts her head in her hands, almost sobbing. He feels genuinely bad, and puts his hand on her. He wonders if they are done, and considers just ending it. Then she perks up. (I'm doing it, Todd. I'm going to cheat on you until I have no reason to be pissed anymore. It's my only option, and it's going to be every bit as painful for me as it is for you.)

      • (Tessa, it doesn't work that way, you can't just..) Tessa has flipped her hair aside, and reached a hand around his neck. (...you can't just cheat on me. You can't...) All of Todd's attention is pulled elsewhere, as Tessa arches her back, puffs her chest out, and suggestively cups a hand on the side of one of her giant breasts.

      • (I can't what? Fondle myself for you? Ohh I think I can.) Her hand pressed her breast inward before sliding up to her shoulder. She stared right at him as she pulled her tank-strap down until one breast was almost fully exposed. (I really need to get back to work, but if you like, you can suck one while I give you a handjob. I know how you love that.) Todd felt angry, confused, frustrated. She just declared she was going to cheat on him. He wanted to tell her how it is. Yet it was hard to want it more than what she was offering. "Go ahead sweetie, lie back." Without thinking, he found himself reaching for the seat handle, tilting it back until he was almost fully reclined.

      • "There we go." Tessa reclined her seat before turning and wriggling her six-foor-four frame closer to him. She began a routine she'd done many times before, positioning her giant breast inches from his face. He brought his hand up, fonding and pressing her tit towards into his lips. "Mmm. Good boy. Just relax." He felt her hand fiddling with his pants, until she had unbuttoned them and fished him out into the open. Her fingers just rubbing and teasing at first.

      • ----- Tessa continues her sexual control, until he climaxes and she leaves him in her car and heads back to into work.

      • --- seems like the inciting incident should be her actually "cheating", not this?

    • Inciting question(s): Will Todd break free of Tessa?

  • Act 2: Todd/Tessa torture...

    • Todd gives up convincing Tessa to stop her plan to "cheat to get even and feel good". Instead he just wants her to get it over with.

    • A few of his guy friends thinks he's fucking nutz. The others think Tessa is so hot they would cut off their arm to be with her.

    • Eventually she heads off with a guy to 'do something behind his back'. He's at his wit's end, and has to get some air. -- maybe this is how he runs into Daisy?

    • Ideas

      • Idea 1: Tessa shows up while Todd is out with the boys. She starts an uncomfortable conversation, "are you all cheaters like Todd?" They are taken aback, but generally deny that any of them cheat. "That's too bad. I need someone to cheat with, you know, to even the score with Todd here. I figured if I got it on with one of you, at least he'd trust it was only a one time thing." The guys are taken off-guard, some calling out her "fucked up" ideas, others interested, telling Todd they'll bang her if that is what he wants. Todd blows up, drags her away, and yells at her for doing that to his friends. She patronizingly apologizes, while remaining unsympathetic.

      • Idea 2: Todd meets with his guy friends, and Tessa overwhelms one of them with a kiss, just as he arrives. Conversation ensues about how fucked-up that was. She explains 'her side' of the situation, Todd defends himself. She confesses that it didn't feel like cheating. She just jumped on him because Todd was showing up.

      • Idea 3:

  • Act 3:

    • Todd finally dumps Tessa,

• Topic Concepts

  • Flashback intro to characters "before the change"

    • Scene: Todd, Jed, Jed's mom dying of the plague (introduce Daisy but don't make it seem like she's important)

    • Scene: Todd and Tessa dating (set tension expectations about what might happen with Tessa)

  • Door-Replacement Episodes

    • Flirted with - turns out to be a young daughter 'misbehaving'

    • 'taken advantage of' by attractive, older, sexually-forward while socially awkward carrier (kinda like a pool boy affair)

    • 'repeat customer' - 'repeat appraisal / indecision'

    • double-carrier girl-girl couple "toys" with everyone who visits

    • make small office 'carrier accessible' (carrier employees/clients ducking under doors while he's there)

  • Chauvinistic carriers

    • carriers berate "normal" service workers (starbucks?)

    • carrier interviews and harasses non-carrier (ups job? actor?)

  • Segregation

    • restaurant 'carrier section' with tall tables reserved for carriers and their guests (Todd can't sit until Daisy shows up)

    • separate raised 'carrier counter' at the starbucks

    • Carrier club wont let Todd in without a hefty cover, or a carrier escort

    • restrooms have become carriers vs non-carriers (no more men vs women)

  • Random Ideas

    • a. he's forced to sit in her lap (bus? carrier bar? limo?)

    • b. he's mistaken for a 'pet' at a carrier function

    • c. he goes for coffee with her and one of her carrier friends, the friend discusses borrowing each other's admirers like they are property (as well as physically flirting with him, maybe momentarily trading them as she inappropriately fondles him to check out his equipment)

    • d. they run into his ex-g/f, she's kinda spiteful and jealous (daisy defends him - "you had him, you let him go")

    • e. ? she gets a new (carrier) boss at work? compromising situations for him.

    • f. Daisy and her dad interaction

    • g. Daisy's brother Jed visits, awkward for Jed and Todd (as friends) adjusting to Daisy's new role in both of their lives

    • h. societal strain around non-carrier rights and abuse

    • i. daisy visits his "normal sized" apartment ..

      • sits on the table instead of the chair - http://jacbj.deviantart.com/art/in-home-08-410019484

      • bend down to a "low" shelf - http://jacbj.deviantart.com/art/in-home-17-410020944

      • man handle - http://jacbj.deviantart.com/art/in-home-17-410021224

      • on his lap on the couch - http://iamthetetsu.deviantart.com/art/Relax-time-333358018

• Main Story

  • 1.1 Day-In-The-Life (of a door reconstructor)

    • Todd, the 'door reconstruction' business, and carriers.

  • 2.1 Reunited

    • Todd and his friends are at a bar when they spot an outrageously tall carrier (7'5"). Everyone in the bar is gawking. Turns out it is Daisy, a friend's younger sister who had a crush on him when she was 12.

  • In a world where she's lost relationships with her mother, brother, and father... connecting with Todd is like a breath of fresh air.

    • Only now she's 18yo, and a 7'5" tall 'carrier' who makes a living by frequenting a carrier social club -- which means she knows all about what 'admirers' want -- and she's not above using that knowledge to seduce a real-human connection out of Todd.

    • ???

    • Tessa barges in, assuming he will choose her. He doesn't. She makes an exit.

    • Daisy steps up her flirting, but keeps her clothes on.

    • Daisy explains her family rifts. How her life isn't all roses, in fact it's a bit solitary. The few friends she still has outside the club find it awkward to meet her in public. (she doesn't explain why, but it's the way they get ignored and treated like second class citizens around her) ... She's laying the suggestion on thick (ohh, it would be so great just to have some to go out and do something normal with. Go to the mall. Watch a movie.)

    • Finally he asks her to go to see a movie. She responds with excitement as if she wasn't basically begging him to ask. She says she is off Thursday night and agrees to meet him at the theatre at 7pm. He should pick the movie.

    • ??? how do they end the evening? She suggests he heads home before one of the girls at the club parts him with his money. (Still thinking about Tessa? Stand up and let me fix that.) She kisses him, then pins him against the wall, teasing him physically and verbally about her 7'5" stature. (Maybe after the movie we can head back to my place. Would you like that?)

  • 3.1 movie night

    • He's hardly thought about anything else for the last three days, as he nervously arrives at the theater.

    • At first he's not sure where to meet her. Then he sees a head of red-locks and bare shoulders poking a foot above a small crowd. He heads over, circling to get in front of her as they snap pictures. He hears her sassy conversation with someone is getting their picture taken (A little closer. Relax. I don't bite. Though you are going to want to look at the camera instead of my tits) The crowd laughs. (Get him from the waist up or he'll have hell to pay when his girlfriend sees this.) The crowd laughs again. (Enough guys, any of you girls want a picture?).

    • Todd realizes she won't see him, so he grabs a chair and stands up on it. He's immediately stunned at the amount of middrif showing between her tiny jean shorts and white tank top. A short guy who's head is a good six inches below her shoulders is pointing at her abs as he talks to his friend. Though Todd is more drawn to the way her tight tank puffs her tits into a glorious display of cleavage.

    • She notices Todd just as a girl is stepping close to get her picture. (Okay boys and girls, that's enough. My date is here. Come on, make way, make way.) Her arms quickly part the crowd, cleaning an opening to Todd. She walks up to his perch in the chair, eye to eye with him in her flats. She plants a soft kiss on him. He's quickly lost in her, reaching his hands around her bare torso feeling her hands on his sides.

    • As they part, he realizes they are still surrounded by onlookers, some of whom are capturing evidence of their kiss with their phones. (Can a girl get some privacy?) she taunts the crowd. They spread out a little, but don't really disperse. People are still taking pictures.

  • Todd forgets about the crowd when her attention focuses back on him. (How was your week? Did you miss me? She couldn't stop thinking about him. She almost called him last night when she got off work.) He says she should have. (It was 4am, trust me, I would have seemed like a stalker. Have you decided what we're seeing?)

    • He lays out three movie options. One is a classic date-movie appeasement choice (a story about a semi-dorky serial bachelor who is approached by a hot carrier, only to find out she's his newly orphaned daughter from a college sperm donorship), another is a sexy carrier-action hero flick (featuring young scantily clad carrier star Eva Anders).the last is a carrier-twist remake of the graduate (Benjamin is a female carrier who starts an affair with her father's business partner, only to fall in love with his son.).

    • Daisy offers some quip commentary about each - interspersed with his descriptions. 1. (dad is confused by his attraction to his hot carrier daughter? little too close to home. pass. / 2. good fallback. It's fun to watch Eva kick some ass. Anything else? / 3. are any carriers even old enough to be mrs. robinson? (no, they twisted it. Turned the young boy into a carrier who seduces Mr. Robinson, then falls in love with his son) -- ohh, let's see that.

  • movie ticket booth

    • • guy working the booth only looks at her. only talks to her. asks them what they are seeing. When Todd throws a chip on the counter to pay, Daisy thanks him for it, but then has to hand the chip to the clerk for him to even notice it. Clerk gives her the tickets and the chip, which she gives back to Todd.

      • At the collection booth, they greet only her, ask her for her tickets. Todd practically has to shove them into his hand for the clerk to notice. (ohh, excuse me) He gives the stubs back to her. (here you go miss) Todd holds his hand out, and watches the clerk's jaw drop at the sex appeal of watching Daisy slips the stubs into her top. She notices Todd's hand outstretched as she reaches to hold it. (ohh, i'm sorry. I'll just hold onto them if that's okay. Want any popcorn or snacks?)

    • Concession

      • Daisy leads Todd down the concession aisle, where guys right next to them are gawking and talking about her as if they can't be heard. (holy smokes look at that one. she's got to be seven foot six. i'd like to climb that.)

      • Daisy leads them near the front of a somewhat long popcorn line. The concession operator excuses himself from a customer mid-order (what can I get you miss?)

      • (I'll take a C-Small popcorn, and did you want anything Todd?) Todd was paying more attention to how she had just cut the line, how quickly everyone accommodated her, and how invisible he was starting to feel. He shook his head. (That's it.) A few moments later the man handed her a huge bag of popcorn, which she handed to Todd. It felt like a small grocery bag. He followed her as she grabbed an equally oversize bottle of water out of the carrier drink fridge. (We can share this.)

      • At the cash register, he struggled to get the oversize bag of popcorn to settle on the counter so he could get his wallet out. He felt her hands on his shoulder. (This is on me, you got the movie. Here...) She handed him what felt like a two-liter bottle of water, so big around it started to slip out of his hand. As his other hand reached to catch it, he hugged and tossed the big popcorn a little, causing a little spray of kernels up into the air. Fortunately, Daisy was too busy paying to notice.

    • Class Struggle

      • As they walk, she puts her hand atop his shoulder and talks about how it's been ages since she's seen a movie in the theater. He can feel her more than see her now, the presence of walking along-side someone eighteen inches taller, his shoulder bumping her ribcage, her hip brushing his elbow. She talks about the last time she was in a theatre must have been before the change. Halfway to their movie, she reaches down for some some popcorn and finally notices how awkward it is for Todd to hold the giant bag and bottle. (Ohh, I'm sorry. Here let me take that. She hoists the giant popcorn bag up out of his arms as she pops some kernels into her mouth.) Then she gives him a squeeze. (Ohh, this is going to be so much fun!)

      • They walk by a group of young guys who are all staring at Daisy. Todd overhears part of their conversation. ("...holy smokes, look at her body. I'd be her water boy in a heartbeat...") Todd thought it was very rude, and turned to send an evil glare at the punk, only to find he was so glued to Daisy he didn't even notice.

      • Todd realized he had fell behind her long strides and had to take a couple quick steps to catch up. (Did you hear that?) Daisy looked down and just shook her head as she crunched on another little grasp of popcorn. (I guess I understand why everyone stares. I've done my fair share of checking out Carriers in public, but are people always so rude? They don't seem to even notice that I can hear them.)

      • (Rude? You mean those boys back there?) Daisy laughed. (That sounded more like a compliment. Don't mind them. They're just jealous. As for them not noticing you, that's just how people treat carrier companions. Get used to it, because it's going to happen every-time we're together.) Daisy reached over his shoulder and pulled him in, his arm awkwardly jabbing into her side before he could get it around her. Only his thumb and pointer finger fall onto the fabric of her stretchy tank top, the rest of his hand feels the bare skin of her torso. (Though if it's bothering you, you're not paying enough attention to me!)

      • They both chuckle, and for a second or two he can't think about anything other than the feeling of his hand against her bare skin as they walk. Then they settle closer to each other, and suddenly the curve curve of her boob fills his view, conspicuously moving as she walks. Most of it is covered by her tank top, but a sliver on the side is bare, and he finds his eyes drifting towards it. Todd judges it to be no more than four inches away, almost directly in front of his face.

      • For a moment he feels sub-conscious, and looks up towards her face. Daisy notices and smiles down at him briefly before her arm leaves his shoulder. (Excuse me miss? Would you like assistance?) At the door to their theater there is an employee standing behind a giant wheelchair who waves to Daisy. From the perplexed look on Daisy's face, Todd can see she has as little idea what he's talking about as he does. The attendant quickly filled in the blanks. (Would you like assistance into the theater? While there are approved carrier rows inside, we're sorry that the entrance hallway is only six foot ten and has not been adjusted to accommodate our most important patrons.)

      • (Ohh, no. I can manage. Don't you think?) Daisy relaxed and looked down at Todd. Was she asking his opinion? (Come on.) Daisy grasped his hand and led him towards a door-frame barely taller than her shoulders. She turned to the attendant as she ducked under it, (Don't worry, my boyfriend loves watching me squeeze into tight things.) She laughed and left Todd no time to react as as she hunched and led him through the dark entrance hallway.

  • Inside

    • • Inside it looked like any typical theatre, filled with seats that would have no chance of fitting a carrier. There were only two people inside, a normal couple in the middle of the theater who merely glanced their way for a moment, before looking back at the rolling movie preview. Daisy's hand left his as she rose up the aisle stairs shockingly fast, taking the small steps three at a time. Todd made haste, shuffling up the steps behind her as fast as he could without falling.

      • At the top was the row of Carrier accommodated seating. Three rows of seats had been removed and replaced with what Todd could only describe as oversize chase loungers. Daisy was already atop one right in the mid-point of the row, and as Todd made his way across, he quickly noticed the cushions were a surprising three feet off the aisle.

      • Daisy was giddy. (This is downright lavish. I can't believe this is the first time I've been to the movies! Check this out!) Daisy reached behind her and up came a bar holding some kind of curtain between the booths.

      • (Yes, it was actually pretty terrible before those privacy curtains were installed. People would come up and snap flash photos of the Carrier row right in the middle of the movies.) Todd tossed the big water bottle up on the cushion, and did his best not to look strained as he pulled himself onto it. (Though today we practically have the theater to ourselves. I guess people are just not into the classics.)

      • Before Todd could crawl to the back of the chase, Daisy leaned behind him, pulling up the bar and curtain on his side. The effect was surprisingly private. With both curtains up, and the long chase several feet above the row below, Todd couldn't see anything but the giant screen ahead of them. (Wow, this is really nice. You Carriers get all the perks.)

      • (Ohh, you have *no* *idea*.) Todd turned to see Daisy lounging back, one arm stretched across the back, the other reaching into the popcorn bag. She looked like someone relaxing in their own living room. Todd moved the water bottle next to the popcorn, and sat with both between them. Somehow he felt simultaneously too far yet too close to her. Then he felt her hand grasp his. (Todd, thanks again, really. I haven't had a night out like this in as long as I can remember.) Todd just smiled and nodded, and almost on-que the lights dimmed and a title sequence started to roll.

    • Movie Starting

      • Todd had seen the original movie, and recognized their attempt to mimic the scenes. It came across a bit more comic than the original, especially watching a seven-foot-tall college-age carrier barley fitting in a small convertible. Several scenes in, Daisy landed the popcorn bag in his lap despite his waving it off. A moment later she pulled at his hand, gesturing him closer. As if she wasn't intoxicating enough already, sliding over to her sent a chil through his spine. Daisy leaned back further into the corner, slowly coaxing him closer, until they found a position with him lying against her.

      • While Todd found it as distracting as it was comfortable. Not only could he hear faint sounds of her breathing above his ear, he could also feel his shoulder and neck pressing into the underside of her breast. Not that Diana seemed to mind. If anything she seemed to be encouraging it. After a few moments he was able to get his mind back on the movie, distracted only as her arm occasionally reached a small clutch of popcorn around him and into her mouth.

      • The screen action is heating up enough to grab Todd's attention, as Brandy Braddock, the college carrier, gives Mr. Robinson a ride home after his keys go missing at her parent's house. She follows him inside as he looked for the spare set, and quite quickly she is standing in his bedroom doorway, uncomfortably blocking him in as she starts to peel up her shirt. "You didn't lose your keys, Mr. Robinson. I hid them. You see I've been watching you, and I've decided you're just the kind of man who can show me how to properly make love." The man is stunned and babbling half sentences about how she should stop, put her clothes back on. She walking towards him now as she lets her bra slip to the floor, and Todd is feeling quite excited both the scene and the proximity of his date.

      • "But you don't want me to go, do you Mr. Robinson? I see the way you look at me. You like my body, don't you? Nobody will know, they are all back at my house." He's back against a wall now, the camera angle accentuating her twelve inch height advantage. She nuzzles her head down against his, and he seems to lack any will to resist her now. "I just want to be close to you. Touch me, show me what to do." By now she had coaxed him onto her bare breast, and he was already suckling away at it. Down below, she started unbuttoning his pants. The camera angles tastefully hid the suggestion that she was now gently stroking him. "You like that, don't you. I want to do it, to make you feel good. Mmm. You want more, don't you?" She was stroking him more vigorously now, and while he was clearly enjoying it, there was also a bit of conflict showing. In just minutes he'd gone from trying to find his keys to getting a hand-job from his business partner's daughter. He came standing up, before collapsing onto the floor right there. Brandy seemed unfased, and merely looked down at him as she licked his semen off her hands. "I like how it tastes Mr. Robinson. I can wait until next time. For now you should get dressed so I can take you back to our house."

      • "Next time? No, my wife would leave me, or kill me. This was a mistake. There can't be a next time! Please, I can't lose my marriage, my kids. Hell I could lose my job. What have I done?" He was talking to himself more than her now. She confidently knelt down next to him, still topless.

      • "Listen Mr. Robinson. Nobody will know. I will be very discrete, so long as I can see you again. Don't worry about when. I'll find the appropriate time." She leaned in and kissed him square on the lips. He kissed back, but he seemed more dumbfounded than anything. "Now, clean yourself up. I'll be waiting in the car." She stood before snatching and quickly slipping back on her discarded garments. "And don't forget your spare car key."

      • With that the scene cut to a music montage of her driving him back home. Her beaming a smile from ear to ear like it was the first day of spring, him looking like he was terrified, not only of what had occured, but what might occur in the future. Only as the on-screen steamyness settled down did Todd realized just how much his arousal was showing. He tried his best to non-chalantly adjust, incredibly self-concious of Daisy's easy eyeline right down to his erection.

      • Apparently he wasn't subtle enough, as he felt Daisy's hand on his just a moment before she suggestively whispered into his ear, "what have you got going on there? Does miss Brandy have another admirer?" Her fingers slipped under his, sliding against his jeans, gently searching until they found his erection. "Don't worry, I'll take care of you." She stroked her fingers gently against him, and he thought she was going to jerk him off right there before her sassy punch line, "just as soon as we get home."

      • Despite her declaration, Daisy didn't stop her distractions. She left one arm wrapped around his neck, down his chest, and fiddling with his erection. Todd tried to get his attention back on the movie. Brandy was now playing a dangerous game, using innuendo to flirt with Mr. Robinson right in front of her own family. Only the two of them understanding her true meaning. Then came the scene where their son Liam came home from college. He's boring, and engaged, but Brandy's mother insists the two of them should meet up to chat about old times, recalling the two of them playing together as children. Mr. Robinson suggests he's very busy, very busy and probably wouldn't have time. Somehow the more he discourages her, the more interested she is. She starts suggestively contradicting Mr. Robinson, letting some of her sexual dominance flow over into their subtext. Finally she resolves she's going to meet him. Those bits were all Todd could follow in between the soft strokes of Daisy's fingers.

    • Then Todd heard the faint sounds of motion near his ear, and made the mistake of leaning his head to find out why. Turns out Daisy was sliding her fingers up and down along the neckline edge of her tank top. Even in the dim light, the plumped shape of her breast was not subtle. Her eyes were still on the screen, so at first he thought maybe she was doing it subconsciously. However, as he watched, he realized she was slowly inching the fabric over, exposing more and more of her breast. Despite the awkward craning of his neck, he couldn't stop watching. Finally she whispered, "you like my body, don't you Mr. Robinson?"

    • Her other hand was no longer at his crotch, but on his backside, applying pressure, coaxing him towards her. He didn't remember deciding to move, he just found himself rolling towards her. Before he knew it, she held his head against her, his cheek sinking into one breast as he stared inches across at the other. He could hear the movie playing, but he had no hope of seeing the screen now, and honestly, he didn't care.

    • He resisted the urge to wrap his leg over her and finish the maneuver by climbing right on top of her. Instead he ran his hands up her bare torso, enjoying the feeling of her skin and the tight muscles underneath. In front of him her show continued, now coaxing her breast in as much as she pulled the fabric out. He could see the color of her areola peeking out now, and couldn't stop himself from rubbing his cheek against her. Or maybe that was her hand moving him against her. He felt coaxed forward, and found his face falling into the gorgeous plump curve of her bare cleavage. For the first time, he put his lips against her breast, kissing and suckling at her. Her fingers stopped the subtle tease, and pulled her tank top low enough to expose her nipple before gently pressing it into his mouth and holding it there.

    • Todd was swept up in the moment. He sucked at her tit, enjoying her subtle response, feeling her nipple harden. His hands drifted down her body, running along her shorts, and towards her crotch before being unexpectedly grabbed and stopped. It took him out of the moment, as he pulled his face out of her boobs to see what was the matter. (Sweetie. These shorts are too tiny for you to make me all wet down there. The movie's almost over. We'll go to my place right after.)

    • Todd didn't realize how much of the movie he had missed. He glanced at the screen to see seven-foot-tall Brandy rushing up the steps of a wedding chapel, presumably to interrupt Liam's wedding. Before he could see much more, Daisy pulled at him gently, and he took the offer, lying against her and nustling his face right back into her tits. She chuckled, and he realized too late that she was just trying to stop him from blocking her view. It didn't stop him from bringing his hand up and watching himself caress her bare breast and nipple, but then it also didn't last long. Just a few minutes later she pulled at her top, tucking her tit back into it. Todd took the hint and sat up in time to see the credits rolling. Peeking over the edge of their lounger, he could see the theater was empty, the other two having either vacated quickly, or long ago.

    • Her place

    • She turns the Dodge Challenger over to the valet. They have a hard time keeping their hands off each other as they silently make their way up the elevator and into her apartment.

      • Once inside, he's shocked at the amazing view of the city. She stands with him at the window until she's been patient enough. She starts backing away towards the bedroom, and presses a button on the wall, causing motorized shades to start blocking the windows. (Something tells me that isn't the view you came here to see.) He starts following her, and before she's at the bedroom door, she's pulled her tank-top over her head, tossed it to him, and is working her tiny shorts down off her hips.

      • Todd follows suit, pulling his shirt off, and unbuttoning his pants as he she crawls up onto her giant bed clad only in her panties. She lies on her side, her stunning body an incredible display of curve and muscle. For a moment he remembers this is the same little Daisy he's known since he was a kid, despite his entire being telling him otherwise.

      • She notices his pause, and teases him about it. (What's wrong? Not as sexy as the last Carrier who put her body on display for you?) Daisy's hand slowly runs up her tummy, before tracing around her tit, suggesting the possibility of touching it without doing so. The motion was so sexy it caused him to gasp.

    • (Hah. No. God, you are so sexy. The sexiest woman I've ever seen.) He gently crawled up on the bed, but something kept him arms length away. (I just can't believe you're Daisy. The Daisy who used to chase Jed and I around in the backyard.)

    • (Well, I'm not exactly the little Daisy you once you knew. I'm a little older, a lot taller, and maybe a *tiny* bit more confident.) As if to unnecessarily reinforce her point, she lifted her top leg, bending it into a pose that left her legs suggestively spread. Then she held her hand out towards him. (Come here, I don't bite.) As Todd met her hand, she firmly pulled him close and pressed him onto his back, nearly into the very center of the oversize bed.. Then she leaned in, and they kissed deeply for what seemed to Todd like hours, though it was obviously only a few minutes.

      • (Todd, you should know I have every intention of completely ruining you.) Diana was leaning over him, a bare breast pressing into his shoulder as she suggestively dragged her fingers against his chest. (You are going to want me so bad you won't be able to remember another girl's name.) Todd liked her sassy humor and chuckled. (Ohh that is not a joke. This may be your last moment of free will. If you have any doubts, now is the time to voice them.) She seemed as serious as she was sexy.

      • (Do I have free will right now?) They chuckled together. Todd was not reconsidering, he was not going anywhere. In fact, he found it hard to believe Daisy was this into him.

      • (I do have a few confessions to make.) Todd felt the pit of his stomach sink. (I don't mind you calling me Daisy out of nostalgia, but when we're intimately engaged, I'm Diana, not Daisy. Okay?) Todd nodded. (Also, I can get a little rough once I get going, as in, you might get a bruise or two. I don't want to feel bad about it in the moment, so I'll just apologize in advance, okay? I'm sorry.) Todd smirked confidently and shook his head. Hurt? Right.

    • (Good. Let's just start slow and focus on you.) Todd felt her fingers slide down his body, gently running across the fabric of his underwear. She kept her eyes intently focused on his as she rubbed and teased him. It only took seconds for him to fully respond, and while she can't have been surprised, Todd noticed her crack a tiny smile. (Looks like your little guy is ready to come out and play. Excuse me while I go properly introduce myself.)

    • As Todd puzzled at the meaning of her comment, Daisy crawled up the bed until her knees were almost at his shoulder, then she leaned down over his body, leaving him to watch the side of her breast as it came to rest on his chest. Todd tingled with anticipation as he admired his view of her back and side.

      • (Come here buddy), he felt her fishing his cock out of his underwear, (it's time for us to be properly introduced.) Moments later, he felt the wetness of her lips and tongue on him. With him barely in her mouth, she gently teased, while making a melodramatic humming sound as if she was kissing.

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    • know some habits are hard to break, so we're going to do a little re-programming exercise. I'll keep making you feel good, as long as you keep saying my name. You can call it out, tell me you want me, beg me not to stop, or even tell me what to do -- just so long as you us my name, Diana. Ready?)

      • Todd wasn't sure whether she was serious, or just making up a sexy game, but it sounded simple enough. As soon as he nodded, he got his first taste, as he fingers immediately left him. (Diana! Diana!) She smirked, and put her fingers back on his cock, slowly stroking it. Less than a minute later, she slowed and stopped again. (Diana, please more.) She resumed.

      • Then she slid herself up a little, bringing her tit distractingly close to him. He gave the bottom of her tit a little lick before she pulled it away, once, then twice. Then the motion of her hand started to slow again. (Ohh Diana, don't stop.) She leaned her tit in towards him. (Diana.) She brought it closer. (Diana.) She placed it against his lips for a few seconds before pulling away. He decided to get enthusiastic. (Diana! Diana! Diana!) She smiled and leaned in, jamming her nipple right into his mouth, smashing her tit into his face as he sucked away for half a minute.

      • (See that's not hard to get right.) She pulled away but kept stroking him. (Now, we're going to see which of Diana's tricks you like the best. We'll start like this.) Her stoking went from just smooth gentle touches, to her palm deliberately working the entire length. Todd closed his eyes and relaxed, enjoying the rhythmic calming sensation. (Hmm, next we'll try this.) He felt her palm on the head, rubbing it back and forth against him. The sensation was entirely different, less calming, more exciting. He felt his muscles react and tense up. (Good, now how about this.)

      • He could feel her fingers tracing the rim, rubbing and and teasing around it. She kept it up, and in a minute or so his breathing was staccato. (Ohh, don't stop. Diana, don't stop.) His eyes were closed, as she complied with his pleas and continued for a few minutes longer.

      • (We'll get back to that, let me just try a few more things, okay?) Todd nodded, and he started to feel random touching and rubbing in different places. He couldn't even really tell what she was doing. Except that all of a sudden she did something that sent waves of pleasure up his groin and spine. His hips tensed, and he felt himself reaching his crotch towards her as if it would enhance the sensation. (Ahh there it is, you're little magic spot.)

      • She integrated it into her previous motions, tracing the rim, rubbing the head, punctuated by intense moments pressing into that magic spot. His vocal patterns were involuntary now, sounding out the waves of pleasure. He did his best to fit her name in when he could. (You like that do you?

      • (Now, I'm going to make you a very special deal. Guys would kill for this deal. I will wrap my hand, lips, tits, or clit around that wonderful cock of yours, anytime you want, as long as you say my name. Deal?) Todd nodded, mostly focused on the stroking.

    • Movie Ideas

      • key movie scenes

        • Brandy Braddock (Benjamin) initiates the "seduction" with Mr. Robinson.

        • When Mrs. Robinson comes home.. and Brandy flaunts her control of Mr. Robinson

        • When Brandy takes an interest in his son Liam (Ellaine), who is engaged to be married to a normal

        • When Liam finds out Brandy is/was having sex with his father.

        • When Brandy steals Liam from the alter

      • key interaction moments

        • Daisy snuggles him up to her (and he observes her)

        • Daisy plays off some 'scene' where Brandy is seducing Mr. Robinson (or Liam) and does something to Todd

        • They kiss.. it gets a little too heavy, she stops it

        • The movie ends, and they are tangled around each other not moving

    • Her place

      • he arrives, shocked at how opulent it is

  • 3.2 meeting the guys

  • 3.3 A typical night in (6 months later)

    • they've moved in together, he comes home from work, she treats him, then has to head off to work (11pm)

  • 4.1 Job Conflicts

    • Having a carrier g/f at home, means he doesn't get as awestruck by them on his door-reconstruction job. This of course makes them try even harder, which makes him try to dodge even more -- the whole thing starts to create situations which are awkward and semi-unbelievable.

    • She sort of pays him to quit this job, suggests he quit the business, and invites him to visit the club for some 'special flirty treatment' by the other girls to get over his jealousy

    • He visits it, which is pretty awesome. The girls give him a 'super flirt' treatment.

    • She makes him an offer he can't refuse. As her "partner", he can have 25% of her wages, for coming with and keeping her safe. He's not really interested, but he asks what she makes in a day. Typically Six to Ten thousand, so your cut would be $1500 to $2500. He coughs and practically spits out his drink. "Are you kidding!?"

    • "Nope." She pulls a wad of cash out, and flips through the bills, handing him an uneven stack. "Here, $1800 is your cut for today. Take it." She shook the bills at him. He felt mixed emotions and didn't know what to think, but he would certainly like an extra $1800. He took it from her hand. She smiled ans he silently and awkwardly stuffed them into his jeans pocket. "It's well worth it to me to see you more, and keep you away from those tramps. Besides, it makes my job easier, because I'm more in the mood to flirt when you're around. Can you go get the car?

  • 5.1 Club Partner

    • Daisy makes Todd a "partner" for her at the club. (aka, she pays him not to work)

  • 6.1 Todd Life Dilemma

    • talks to his guy friends about how he wants to go back to contracting, but can't afford to because she pays him too much

    • they make fun of him. he says it's "not as rosy as they think", starts to go into detail.. only a minute into his monologue, they finally get his attention enough to point out she's now standing right behind him.

    • she reacts with humor, but also by 'threatening' him, maybe one of his friend's would feel differently about dating a carrier... flirting with his friends

    • ?? maybe she says she has a friend who would love to meet one of them... invites them down to the club to meet her.. getting awkward for todd

    • ?? at the club, she comes back out dressed to work, and rubs his nose in his earlier comments a little.

    • ?? then she offers to lap-dance for any of them...

• -------------------- Story -----------------------------------

• 1.1 Day-In-The-Life

  • Todd shows up to replace some residential 6'5" doors at a house with carrier.

  • A young woman carrier answers the door, wearing jeans and a stretchy low-cut tank. Towering over him (6'8", 7' in heels), she invites him in, (her language a bit youthful)... she excitedly points out the doors he's going to replace, "i can't wait to stop ducking. do you need anything else?"

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  • he has questions about the new door height tradeoffs - new doors are 8', ceilings are 8'3" after floor and ceiling drywall. he recommends doing the doors at 7'5" instead, or the molding is going to look funny hitting the ceiling. he says he'll bring one up to 7'5" and she can check it. he goes to get his ladder, and mark the new moulding height. she heads off for some water and says to 'call for jen' when he's ready.

  • --

  • he has the first door cut to 7'5", calls for her. She shows up and walks up to it pretending it's a threshold, "it feels okay, and I'm heels. how does it look?"

  • with a little hair-volume, she's pretty close to the door-frame, but she's not going to hit it, "you're not going to hit it, but it's really about how it'll feel. here, let me measure" he leans in to measure what he can already easily eyeball as about 3", but what he's really noticing is the amazing view down her cleavage. "Yup, you have about 3" with those heels on, so normally you'd have what, 8 to 9 inches?" he was used to carriers accentuating their height with unusually tall heels. Really though, he was just buying more time to stare down her shirt -- while she was staring off to the side.

  • She laughed, "These heel's aren't that high, though that's a good point. With my taller ones I'd probably need to duck, but I certainly don't want the molding to look bad just because I wear some tall heels once and a while. What do you think?" She cleared her throat. "Uhm. Mr. Contractor? I'm up here." He realized he was caught in the act still staring down her shirt and snapped his eyes to hers, embarrassed.

  • "Uhm, I'm sorry, I was just thinking about the cleav--ance, ohh crap, I mean the clearance." She wryly smirked up at him as he stumbled over his words, talking quickly to try to cover his slip-up. "I think 7'5" is your best bet. For sure it's a trade-off, but unless you wear your high heels around all the time, I think it's the way to go." She didn't respond, causing him to worry he was about to lose the job. This was a pretty lucrative gig, so he couldn't afford that. "I'm really sorry about the staring. I need this job. It won't happen again."

  • Her face relaxed as she chuckled slightly. "You should see the look on your face. Relax. I don't mind. It's part of being a carrier." She reached past him, leaning on the opposite edge of the door frame. Her posture was more relaxed and flirtatious at the same time. "As for the cle-ar-an-ce, I trust your expert judgement."

  • The way she was posed opened her neckline even further, and he found it literally impossible to prevent his eyes from darting for glances down her shirt. "Besides, I can see you're *obviously* an -admirer-." Her identifying him as such caught him off-guard. The term was the polite, almost flirtatious moniker for those who were drawn to and idolized carriers, like moths to a flame. Impolite terms being 'supplicant', or simply 'supp'.

  • "If you do a really really good job," she shifted her weight slightly, seemly enjoying his struggle not to look, "maybe i'll let you admire some more." Despite being at a higher vantage point than her due to the step-ladder, he started to feel pinned into a corner with nowhere to go. Just then he heard someone coming from the other room.

• "Jennifer!?" His voice was stern and gruff. "What did I tell you about distracting the contractors. This man charges by the hour, let him do his work!" The man who came through the door looked to be easily in his mid fifties. Her posture changed quickly as she turned to face him.

• "But D-aaa-D!? I didn't *do* anything. I was just tal-king!" The adolescent whine that came out of her with the sexy flirtation that had just been going on. How young was she, and what did she mean by 'do anything'? Her father was close enough now to see she easily had more than a foot of height on him. "He wanted to measure, make sure the height was right." He eyed up at her suspiciously.

  • "Alright. I don't want to see any funny business. I'm sure he's thirsty, why don't you go get him some water?" With that she smiled and looked at me briefly before heading for the kitchen. With her out of the room he turned to me. "I apologize for her. Ever since the change she acts like it's her job to constantly flaunt it. I hope she didn't offend you." Todd shook his head. "One day she's going to realize she doesn't have to listen to me , no idea what I'll do then. Anyhow, I'm Zed, we spoke on the phone." He held his hand up and he shook it. "If she gives you any trouble, just hollar."

• ????

• 2.1 Regrets

  • Todd is at a bar, talking to his buds about "what happened next" with the teen-carrier. How she proceeded to overtly flirt and distract him periodically. How she propositioned him to meet her around the side of the house, graphically telling him what she'll do to him. How he somehow found his better judgement, finished the job, and got out of there.

  • As his friends are laughing and kicking him for not jumping on the chance, across the bar he sees an old girlfriend (who he broke up with), who is now a carrier. he tries not to be noticed checking her out. his friends notice and razz him about being a supp puppy. they realize the girl is his ex-g/f and push him to go talk to her.

  • eventually he does, she flirts and flaunts. he asks her out "you mean on a date?", she laughs and ices him cold, "you can't afford me." She explains that she's not an escort, men donate generously just to take her to dinner.

  • he becomes slightly obsessed, wanting to go to the bar just to see her. she flirts and teases him, going out of her way to rub his nose in the fact that he broke up with her. "i bet you'd do anything to take it back now", "thought about giving you some pity sex".

  • eventually his friend's can't take it, tell him to go to an 'enhanced' social club to get it out of his system.

• 2.1.1 Reunited

• spectacle club

  • a mutual exchange club, where men pay a huge cover charge, and "carriers" are tipped to dance, flaunt, and flirt in close proximity (no stripping)

  • brokering - he asks the waitress how this works, and she points over to a pool of carriers sitting alone at the bar, and says if he would like to buy any of them a drink, she's happy to bring it over. he agrees. She stays, expecting something else, finally explaining that carriers looking to enjoy their evening want to do it with a generous gentleman. he drops a 20 on the tray. 'a very generous gentleman', he drops one, two, three more 20s. She finally nods, confirming he is very generous. then starts advocating that she can make sure the girl is deserving of his generosity. that it would be a shame to deliver his affection to the wrong kind of girl. she asks him what he likes (blond, brunette, saucy, demure). she knows just the person and would be happy to make an introduction, but still stands there, eventually clearing her throat. 'Certainly that introduction is worth a small token as well' he grumbles, and drops yet another 20 on the tray. 'Excellent, you are in for an exciting evening!'.

  • He watches her walk over to the carriers, and sees her talking to a gorgeous tall brunette girl. Any lingering doubt washes away as she smiles his direction, and starts to walk over. She's wearing a black dress with a seriously deep plunge, practically to her belly button. He's in awe watching her walk over in confident strides, checking out her body the whole time. He politely stands up as she approaches, which only accentuates how amazingly tall she is. (7'4" in heels, 16" taller than him, the plung-explosed portion of her breasts at eye-level)

    • inspiration

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  • "No way! Todd?!?" something is familiar about her voice, when he looks up he is shocked to recognize her, though it takes him a minute to place her. "It's Diana!" He realizes it's his friend Jed's little sister.

  • "Daisy?! Uhm. Wow." he's shocked at her changed appearance. Tries to come up with something useful to say. Offers to let her off the hook and find a different 'evening companion'.

  • "Nonsense. It's so great to see you!" She finds a way to politely hand back his money. "You gave the waitress way too much for a drink. Here is your change.

  • during the dance, they have some awkward conversation where he asks why she works there, she implicates the other side effects of the 'change' (high libido). how one boyfriend just wasn't enough, she was cheating on him every day. She finally decided this would be easier. at the job she usually finds 'two or three decent guys a day' to satisfy her, with no attachments. (he's a little shocked at how frank she is being about having sex with men at the club) she tells a brief story of how her sexual modesty went out the window because of the change.

  • the chime sounds ending the dance, and she sits close and jokingly 'upsells him' to more time, teasing him as if he was a normal client. he's conflicted, realizing he had come here to pay for this, but that now he was going to be paying his friend's little sister. finally she breaks the ruse, and tells him she's totally kidding, she can't take money from her close friend. He's also conflicted about this, because he absolutely wants it to continue. she teases him a bit about his erection, and how hot he is for her... and then asking why he's there.

  • he launches into a micro version of the story about his ex-g/f, and how she just teased and tormented him. how she has so much presence now. coming here was his friend's idea, and he came to get her out of his system.

  • "she shouldn't be so dismissive, you know not everyone is attracted to the change" she discusses and demonstrates the change and how it might intimidate some men.. merely turning him on more.

  • 'let's get her out of your system for good, shall we?" she propositions him to have sex, even as her libido is driving her a bit out of control.

  • she has sex with him, teasing him with her 'enhanced' body the whole time. it doesn't last too long, but she likes it, and it calms and refreshes her.

  • club hookup

  • she really should get some more 'paying clients', which he's disappointed by, but takes as his cue to exit the weird situation. as she's dressing, she explains that she'd love to 'do this again', implying that she'd love to fuck him again, he agrees it would be nice, mentions another day he could come by. she was thinking more like in an hour. she makes jokes about how there is 'not much to do' there, but if he wants he can 'hang out with the girls' in back.

    • 'come on', she leads him backstage and introduces him to a couple other transformed girls in the dressing room. (he's special, not just a mark, but someone she knew from being a kid) she talks very frankly to the girls about how they can 'fluff him', but not wear him out, she wants him again. Which is some kind of honor code, but it makes him feel like property in an odd way. That is until she leaves and the girls show their stuff, asking him questions about how he knows her as they flaunt and tease him with their bodies. Eventually getting a rise out of his flacid spent member.

  • she comes back in after her mark, counting money into a box, before sitting on-top of him and inspecting his erection. she starts having sex with him very slowly, talking to him about how 'rough' it must have been hanging out with the girls back here. she's heavily affected by the sex as she tries to converse with him, climaxing long before him, and riding it out slowly. She candidly admits how much she'd love to have him back here as a fuck buddy, because some days are real slow for 'good johns'. it's somewhat objectifying, but not in a way he's exactly opposed to.

  • then she asks if she can hand him off, "since he's still hard". the girls have a sort of "code". he's shocked, but agrees. she calls to her girls, and one quickly appears. she offers him up, which she gladly accepts. they switch, and the other girl is quickly riding him. she comes quickly as well, before handing him off to the other girl. he's getting much closer now, though the girl tries to stave it off for him. soon his 'friend' is stepping in, making sure he gets a climax this time. talking about how the girls will sometimes 'abuse' men back here for hours. how they are in pain, but can't seem to say no.

    • finally Daisy comes back. they greet each other, "how was it?" she drops a thick stack of $20s on the counter. She gives him a little story, but says she couldn't stop thinking of him. "How was hanging out with the girls?" She puts him on the spot and talks explicitly about it.

    • ???

    • ?? he asks her to the movies...she's kind of surprised, but agrees.

• 3.1 movie date

  • she shows up at the theatre... spectacle of the carriers there

  • there is a 'carrier section' in the back, to keep them from blocking the view.

  • it doesn't take long before she's breathing heavy into his ear and fondling him

3.2 meeting the boys - he's both intimated and complemented by her

• • she comes out to the bar. the guys are really curious and into her. "i thought carriers didn't have boyfriends'

  • 'we generally don't. our libido is too high, but your boy here is my new stud."

  • someone brings up her working at the social club.

  • she slaps it in their face, by saying they can come down and look, but Todd is the only boy that gets to touch.

• 3.3 A typical night in (6 months later)

  • they've moved in together

  • he comes home from work sweaty, she has dinner ready for him, almost june-cleaver style ... with a sexy edge

  • she flirts with him excessively from the moment she gets in the door. (how's my favorite admirer?)

  • Her behavior is a mixture of 'entertaining admirers' but in a more personal manner, which he finds very arousing and exciting.

  • they eat dinner. She asks about his day. she emphasizes and fondles him to "make it all better".

  • she excuses herself to get ready for work (even though she doesn't plan to leave for another hour, 11pm),

  • he settles in to watch some TV, she comes out looking super-hot

  • she treats her body like a tasty treat for him, something he can nibble at whenever he wants. Interrupting herself because of his staring ("here sweetie, take a little nibble.") encouraging him to suckle at her tit while she continues her story.

4.1 Job Conflict

• • Having a carrier g/f at home, means he doesn't get as awestruck by them on his door-reconstruction job. This of course makes them try even harder, which makes him try to dodge even more -- the whole thing starts to create situations which are awkward and semi-unbelievable.

  • Daisy is young, with charged emotions and the arrogance of being a carrier. She demands and then seduces Todd into letting her introduce herself at his current job... asserting this will cause the other carrier to back off.

  • Of course this does anything but, and now he's getting forced into situations that are very compromising for him and his relationship. The woman threatens to ruin his relationship as she forces herself on him, "do you think she'll really believe you tried to stop me? You're an admirer."

  • While Daisy assumed she fixed everything, he struggles how to explain that things did not go well. When he finally blurts it out, she declares that he'll just have to find another job, that she can't have her boyfriend getting felt up every day. This ticks him off, because she's basically doing the same thing at the social-club. She defends that it's 'different', that there are boundaries. He protests that she's willingly doing it, so this should be no big deal.

  • "Do you like it?" she challenges, "having these female clients throw themselves at you? You do don't you? Well, I don't like it. It's not like we need the money, I make 10x as much at the social club. It doesn't even matter if you work or not."

  • He's kind of surprised at the whole direction. "no, i have to work. I can't just sit around and be a house husband."

  • She sweetens up her approach... "You won't be just sitting around. You can renovate *our* house. If you need money, I'll give it to you." She flaunts her body a little. "Besides, then you'd be here when I get home, so I could relieve the pressure built up from thinking about you all day long." She hugs up close. "Doesn't seem like a terrible deal. Man of leisure by day -- spoiled by your own personal carrier by night." By now she's fondling him.

  • "When you put it that way," his body shudders as her fondling sends a chill up his spine, "it sounds like every man's dream." She nods, unbuttoning his pants. "Though something about it. Doesn't seem very. Fair." Her touch was constantly interrupting his thoughts as she showed a sour face. "You flirt with men all day for a living, but women can't flirt with me?"

  • "I told you, my work is different. There are boundaries. It's in a public club. Plus, you work in their homes, and we both know with you carriers have the upper hand. One of them could sweep you into her bedroom and reach her hands into your pants." He could tell she wasn't being that serious, because as if on cue she reached her hand into his underwear, grabbing his cock.

  • "Before you knew it, you'd be memorized. Admiring her big luscious breasts as she stroked you. Tell me you could resist it." She held her arms tight at her sides, plumping her breasts together. Even without her demonstration, he knew he couldn't resist. He hadn't resisted. He should tell her what really happened, but after she finished what she was doing right now.

  • "I know! Maybe I could get you a job at the club! Then you and I could spend our days together too! I bet they need a handyman. Or maybe you could bartend." A sparkle was lit up in her eye at the thought, distracting her slightly from her stroking.

  • "I don't think that's such a good idea." He already wasn't thrilled about her being paid to flirt with admirers. Having to watch it sounded like a terrible idea. Her hand slowed and she straightened her posture, obviously taking the conversation in a more serious direction.

  • "Why? You want things to be fair? You want carriers to flirt with? I'll make you a deal. You can flirt with any carrier at the club. Some of the other girls do it, bring their boys in, and we give them a little extra attention so they don't get so jealous. A little tit-for-tit if you know what I mean." She chuckled after rattling off her obviously memorized bad pun in a way that made it sound like some kind of inside joke among her carrier friends.

  • "Tell me, how much are you getting to put doors into this slut's house?" Her hand was resting on his crotch now, but not moving. He wasn't sure if this was more or less distracting than when she was handling him. It took him a moment to process the question.

  • "Three doors, three days, fifteen hundred." She smiled wide, looking like she was uncomfortably holding something in. She stood up, floated to a kitchen drawer, punched a couple numbers into a small safe, grabbed a wad of cash, and counted some out before heading back towards him holding what he was expecting was about to be some kind of uncomfortable payoff.

  • "Here. I'll pay you four thousand just to quit *this* job. Deal?" She held the cash down to him. The whole situation was awkward. His pants were still open, her shirt was rustled, showing off her tits in a sultry way, and she was trying to give him a pile of cash for doing basically nothing.

  • "Daisy, really? Don't do that." He buttoned up his pants and sat up on the couch. "If this woman makes you that uncomfortable, I'll just quit this job. Done. No problem." Her face lit up. Somehow he felt like this whole thing would allow him to dodge the bullet of explaining what really happened, and it would certainly prevent it from happening again. Which he was pretty sure was a good thing.

  • "Wow, now I feel like the jerk." She sat down next to him. "Here, it's yours. Consider it a gift. It's only half of what I made today, and I don't even know what to do with it anyway. Maybe it'll make it easier for you to turn down the next job from someone like this slut." She held the uneven stack of bills towards him, and when he didn't take it, she set it on the coffee table.

  • "Now that your week is freed up," she leaned in close, wrapping her leg over his lap, "I do think you should stop by the club. Trust me, it'll be worth your while." Her fingers had slid down his chest, and were already creeping under the band of his underwear.

  • "Ohh really?" She nodded, biting her lip in a sultry manner. "I guess I could manage that -- now that my calendar is clear." His chest briefly tensed, another involuntary movement brought on by her fondling over-exiting her nerves.

  • "Excellent. Now, if you'll excuse me sir, I have an admirer I must attend to." Without waiting, she leaned into his lap, and a moment later he could feel her lips and tongue lapping on him. He felt like he was in heaven. He wondered what he did to deserve a carrier for a girlfriend, let alone one who lavished him with so much incredible sexual attention.

  • He thought about her suggestion for him to quit his job. Then he wondered how long she's be this enamored with him, and what would happen when it ended. It sent a different kind of shudder down his spine. However, he lost the thought. With her tongue lapping at him, it was hard to think about anything else.

4.2 Trouble sleeping.

• • He wakes up, counts almost six grand she gave him in just two days. He starts to do math in his head about how much he can make taking her up on the offer. $1500 a day average, in a week he'd make $7500; in a month, $30,000; in a year, $360,000. He didn't know if he'd ever make that much in his life. Then he remembered this was only 1/4 of what she was making. He struggled with the math in his head, forcing himself to recalculate it a few different ways before believing how much she was making just innocently flirting with guys.

• 4.3 The Deal

  • Their morning routine and breakfast. She's in comfy exercise gear, as she always works out in the morning. Keeping herself in shape. Their conversation suggests both that they had wake-up sex, and that this is a pretty frequent occurrence.

  • "I have a question, about the club." She feigns dis-interest. "Do you really get paid a million and a half dollars a year just to innocently flirt with men?" She doesn't answer right away, seeming to carefully consider her words.

• "That depends on your definition of innocent. They never have intimate contact with *me*, and I have never give anyone a way to reach me outside of the club. However, close contact with a carrier is like crack for an admirer. They always get excited, and sometimes we might encourage that excitement to it's logical conclusion. It's somewhat cruel not to. Does that bother you?"

• Todd looked at her as she casually bit into her toast as if she hadn't just explained that she sometimes gets guys off at the club. He could feel anger swelling. Was she serious? Why hasn't she told him this before? And what in the hell was she doing getting bent with some woman at a door-renovation job flirting and getting him off for?

• "As for the money, that number sounds about right. Are you thinking about my offer? You'd make about $400k, which has to be more than you are making now."

• "Fuck the fucking deal. You are telling me that you jack of guys at work, and you never thought to mention this before?" She sat at the table, cold faced and un-reacting. "And you're making this huge deal because one door-reno client was a little aggressive and stepped over a boundary? What the hell?"

• She took the last bite of her toast, before standing up with her plate. Walking her alluring 14" height advantage right by him on the way to the sink. She turned on the water to rinse it.

• "Look, I can see you're upset. Maybe we should have talked about this before, but you know what the club is about. You were just there yesterday." The water was off, and she was approaching him, her arms open. He held his ground, thwarting her advance and leaving her standing inches from him. She leaned against the counter, and her proximity began its typically arousing effect on him even in this very inconvenient moment.

• "Don't be like that. I can see you're ego is bruised or something, but think about this for a minute. I'm a seven-foot-tall carrier, and a pretty smoking hot one too. I can have *any* admirer I want, and I want you. Have you ever wondered why that is?"

• "My mother died. My brother went into a tailspin. My dad hardly talks to me; I don't know if it's because I remind him of mom, or because of the change, but the result is the same. I have no family." Todd was shocked. He kinda knew, but he never really knew. From the way her voice wavered, and her eyes were welling up with tears, this was the most vulnerable thing she's ever told him. "That's why I started hanging out at the club to begin with. Just to have someone who didn't shut me out, and you know what, I like it. It feels good to be admired."

• "Then you come along. For some crazy reason, you feel like home to me. I don't know what it is. I don't know why it is. I just know it is. So I do my best to give you everything I have." Her words held a new resolve, as if this was the light at the end of the tunnel. He was the light at the end of the tunnel. He really had no idea he was this important to her.

• "Do I enjoy getting paid stupid amounts of money to flirt with guys who would die to be where you are? You're damn right I do. Sometimes they seem like nice guys, who just want a moment with a carrier, one little special moment. They've given me thousands of dollars I can use to make moments I want, moments we want, so I don't see the harm. I put my hand on their pants; I rub a few times, and they head off to the bathroom never to be seen again."

• "I didn't choose to get the virus. It took away my mom, it took away my family, it took away my chance at college. This is what it gave me, I'm not going to give up the money to be a barista at starbucks. If you can't handle it, I'll be really sad, but I understand. If so, please just go now." Despite steadiness in her voice, the tears streamed down from her eyes, and her breathing was heavy and uneven, like she could break down at any moment.

• The whole thing was a lot to take in. He really had no idea what he thought about all of this, but he knew he didn't want to walk out the door. Daisy, Diana, was the most amazing thing that ever happened to him. He reached an arm to her waist, and it took her no time to respond, she immediately wrapped her arms around him, pulling his head tightly into her chest, but not in the sexual way she normally did. She started bawling, her emotions having broken, and she just squeezed him tight.

• "I'm sorry Todd. I don't want to lose you." She wept between her words. "I didn't break the rules, this stupid virus did. I know it's a bit unconventional and screwed up, but this is who I am now. I like my life. I like you. No. I love you. I love you, Todd." He felt the force of those words hitting his chest like a freight train. Every moment he had ever puzzled and wondered what she saw in him seemed silly. He realized she had also exhaled strongly, and was no longer crying. It was like a weight was lifted off her. He always felt like she was the one doing things for him, he didn't realized he could do this for her.

• He inched himself away from her, tilting his head to find her eyes, still puffy and red from her crying. Once he found them, he looked deeply at her, and realized he felt the same way. She was home. He felt tingles of anticipation rising in his back and spine. "Daisy," should he say it? Would he mean it? He wasn't sure until it came out. "You are the best thing that ever happened to me. I love you too."

• With that her face turned into the most beaming smile he'd ever seen, still mixed with puffy red bloodshot eyes. She reached down, hoisting him up by the arms and setting him on the kitchen island, briefly squeezing him again. When she let go, she was crying again, but a different kind of tears this time. "Please tell me this means you can handle it, that you'll stay. We can have such a great life. You get you own private carrier dream girl to admire, and well, I get to feel like I'm home."

• "Is that a marriage proposal?" His question started her laughing which sent them both laughing. "I guess I can handle it... some-how." He let the laughter and levity play into his words. He spread his arms out and waved them like they were weighing items on a scale, "normal life, or unconventional life with my wealthy dream girl carrier. Hmm. Tough decision.

• "I don't think it's even that hard to handle really. I mean, I'm a guy after all. What I don't understand is why you were so bent about my client flirting. It felt like a double standard. What if some client, or a carrier at the club gives *me* a little happy ending. Are you going to be upset?" Her face winced a little in thought before she answered.

• "I'm not sure. You're the only one who gets to pleasure me. Maybe I want to be the one to pleasure you." The pace of her words suggested she was thinking it through right there, puzzling it out. "Would I mind if you got your client off? Ohh, definitely. Maybe it is a double standard. Is that wrong? If I want you all to myself?" She cocked her head to the side.

• "But I didn't mind the girls at the club giving you a treat." Suddenly he understood. He thought the girls had been trying to take it too far. He had stopped them. He started shaking his head. "Ohh, you didn't let them? Because you thought it would upset me. *Now* I see why you were all confused."

• "I know what bothered me about your client." Her eyes stopped their wandering and fixated on him. "I remembered what it felt like before the change, when a boy was pushing himself on me. I don't like that your client was forcing herself on you, putting you in an uncomfortable situation. If anything were to happen, it's not like it would be your fault, because you couldn't exactly stop her." He winced, smiled, and nodded all at the same time. Suddenly he understood what this was all about. He would probably feel the same way, if Daisy wasn't seven-feet-tall and more than capable of holding her own. He also wondered if he should tell her it had gone too far.

  • "You're *my* admirer, I want to protect you from..." Suddenly she stopped, like she saw something in his eyes. "She did didn't she. She forced herself on you." There was a tad bit of brewing rage in her voice. "Didn't she? What did she do?"

  • "Yes, I'm sorry. I wanted to tell you, I just didn't know how. I thought you'd be upset." Her face looked stern and resolved now, like she was going to punch someone, hopefully not him. "I also felt guilty. I wondered if I should have stopped her. I mean, it wasn't like I was hitting her to get away. I don't know what happened. One minute she was harmlessly flirting, the next minute she had me pinned and was reaching into my pants. It's like she got off on the fact that I couldn't stop her."

  • "I knew that carrier was no good. I've seen it before. Power hungry bitches who think they can take anything they want. We can go to the police you know. File a report. Technically that's rape." He braced his hands up, wanting her to slow down. That sounded like a disproportional reaction.

  • "No, no. I'm fine. I quit that job thanks to you. It's not like I was hurt or anything. It didn't emotionally scar me, it was just, weird and awkward. I was more worried about you and how you would feel. I'm sorry I didn't do more to stop her." Daisy's face was still winced up in anger.

  • "Pissed is how I feel. I want to go down there and give her a little piece of something right in the face." She shook her fist right up near his face, marking the first time he saw Diana look a little menacing.

  • ?????

  • "However, I also want to just get you away from her, from them. Have you thought about my work partnership offer? I wondered how anyone could turn it down, but I see now that you didn't

• ???? "In fact, if you want the girls at the club to pass your cock around like a lollipop, you let me know, I'll hold it for them." His eyes went wide, and he had to replay her words in his mind to even believe she'd said it. Daisy had surprised herself too. She enjoyed letting her flirty work-persona into her personal life, but it was new letting her work into her personal life. She found the thought kind of exciting. "Got your attention there did I?"

  • ????

• 5.1 Club "Partner"

  • a day in the life of todd "working" at the club

• 6.1 "maury pauvich" like talk-show on TV

  • "ohh hun, come in here and check this out.. carriers on TV"

  • two short ~5'5" men who want to date a stripper (one admirer, one not). "you both told us you like sexy brunettes, with big knockers. is that right?" they nod. Two hot girls come on, one carrier (7'6"), one short (5'4"). They strut and 'mock striptease' for the audience. After asking what the guys think of the girls, Maury sends them to the 'opposite' guys. The non-admirer looks disappointed, and the admirer is just rubbernecking the carrier. he asks the non-admirer if he's ever dated a carrier (no, he's never even been this close to one)

  • --- maybe there is a curtain separating them? so the short-stripper can't see the carrier?

  • They talk to the carrier about dating first. She finds short guys sexy. She admits to finding both boys attractive. They talk about the difficulty of dating as a stripper (as expected, most guys eventually get jealous of the job. less well known, they treat them like they should always be working). They ask her to talk about what she likes to do on a date (slightly more private dates, avoid too much carrier attention). They ask what's better about dating a stripper (more sexually open minded. most girls hate their men going to a strip club, while we don't care (he just better spend more on me than on them!) Then she describes how she knows exactly how to 'flaunt' herself for her admirer. maury follows up, asking her to give us an example. she demonstrates on the non-carrier. He looks... uncomfortable. Maury asks if he thinks that sounds like a sexy date, if he wants her to demonstrate again. the audience is roaring, he just says 'no, thanks'.

  • The admirer is salivating. Maury asks the admirer if that turns him on, he gushes about the carrier, despite having a sexy girl in his lap. maury asks if he's ever dated a carrier? (no) have you ever thought about it? (he laughs. are you kidding? it's my dream.) so you would give up the girl in your lap to go on a date with the carrier? (uncomfortable question, but he says definitely yes as the girl mock-pouts) Maury turns to the non-admirer, and asks him if he's willing to give up his date with the carrier.. which he quickly agrees to. "well then, looks like he's passing on your date. any last words for him?"

  • The carrier makes a big deal out of her 'switch', "you don't know what you're missing". The girl's switch, the short-stripper visually gawking the carrier as she moves to the other guy. As she curls onto him, the non-admirer has a beaming smile on his face. Maury asks if that's more his speed, he nods.

  • Maury turns to the admirer, who is already cozy and snuggling up with the carrier. "looks like you're ready for your date right now. (audience laughs) he asks the carrier if she finds this unusual. (no. she's used to admirers finding her intoxicating, especially at first. It's half her fault, fanning the flames. she does something to flaunt even more.) He starts to ask the admirer what he likes to do on dates, but realizes he's almost 'drunk' intoxicated, and just leaves him to enjoy himself.

  • Maury turns to the short-stripper, repeating the dating questions. she explains a pretty typical date, except that she wants to starts it by getting him off - she calls it a 'happy beginning'. he probes more about it. she knows she's sexy and likes to talk about sex, but she hates it when her man is constantly adjusting a stiffie. On a date she wants her man to be relaxed and enjoy her company, so it's just better if she gets him off first. The guy she's sitting with 'adjusts' and Maury catches it, 'like that? doesn't it just tell you he's turned on?" (no, it just makes him seem uncomfortable and not satisfied. it's not their fault really, the blood rushes down there and then they can't think straight. I'm sure he'd have a whole lot more to say if I had a minute to take him in the back and get him off)

• 7.1 Todd Tested

  • Everyone knows Todd and Diana are a "thing" at the club, despite their openness about Todd getting 'treats'.

  • Tessa comes in and 'takes over' his treat, but starts to take it too far (stripping and grinding on him). The girls warn that she's going to far, but she defers to Todd, seducing him to confirm he doesn't want her to stop. They leave, as Tessa slips herself down on him, fucking him right there in the club. Meanwhile she's talking dirty, burying his face in her huge tits, and getting him to tell her how much he wants her.

  • Finally, Diana bursts in, having been 'summoned' by the girls. She starts lashing out at Tessa. (Seriously? You had your chance at him, and you threw him to the street. Why do you have to screw with him like this?) Diana pushes Tessa off him.

  • Todd starts to realize what happened. (Ohh Daisy. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I don't know what...)

  • Diana turns to him. (Todd. This is not your fault. I told you, you can't resist her, you can't resist any of them. That bitch took advantage of you. Get dressed.)