characters:
[pairing off, narrate each mini-date] [what is different about the different girls?]
- Becka Allerton : athletic build, tallest (6'6" ?), proportional C, blond 'wholesome sporty' look, vollyball player
- Suzanne : most curvy, most busty, (6'2" and now proportionally DD), dark curly hair
- Lynn : asian, thinnest yet athletic and newly busty (D), (6'4"), long straight dark hair, also a vollyball player
- Annie : 'girl next door', 6'5", proportional C, brown straight hair,
[what about the boy-dates?]
- Rick Keefer: 5'10" pre-med, Annie's b/f (4" delta)
- Brian : 5'10" business major, Lynn's date, (6" delta)
- Steve : 5'6" math major, Suzanne's date (8" delta)
- Alex : 5'8" lawyer, Becka's date (10" delta)
Part 1: Hasty
Rick is a med student, Drew is an art major (college?)
boy and girl date (near end of college), summer comes, they "break".. he thinks he should be dating up, planning on med school, she's from a small town
he gets a job with a drug trial, the trial is a stunted growth therapy
explanation of his duties, explanation of the advanced trigger mechanism, and how they design a trigger based on standard diets
the trigger therapy works with the pituitary, so by controlling the immune reaction to the trigger, and the number of active pituitary years left, they can tune the therapy to the desired growth
he's sent to a small town, unexpectedly the small town his ex-gf is from, to do machine calibration and measurements
he's surprised to find out his ex-gf is in the stunted growth therapy, he questions, but they need 'control' subjects
she is excited to spend more time with him, but he is only there for a short visit, they agree on lunch
he shows up to pick her up, and her sister answers the door and flirts with him, tells him about how she hopes to go to (the same school) next year.
his ex comes down, they head to lunch, he talks about the study
she flatters his knowledge of medicine, and how she could never understand the trial... he explains the designer trigger system
'but if they trigger on carrots, and i don't eat carrots, how would that work'..
he explains they use a chemical present in everything, iodine, which is a supplement to table salt
'really?' if I eat extra salt, would it have a greater effect? 'well it's possible, but the amount of salt you'd have to eat is, impractical'
she pours a little extra salt on her fries, talks about the results she's seen so far, and starts teasing him about how she should conduct her own little study
back on campus, he receives data each week about the patients.
There is a meeting to discuss how the preliminary numbers show overwhelming success (examples of fairly small, but important gains)
He identifies the patient that's likely his ex, he is surprised by the increases
eight weeks later, he's sent back to her town for the conclusion of the study, really hoping to run into her
he runs into her, and she's noticably taller (5'10") and sexier (figure), he comes on to her
she stops him from making advances while also being a flirtatious tease... didn't he want a break? she feigns an ethical problem related to the trial.
where are you staying? maybe she'll stop by his room later, she's might want to take her new body for a spin
he's pacing around his hotel room, unsure if she's even going to drop by
she arrives, flirts with him, he can't keep his eyes off her new figure, she seems to enjoy every minute of it
'you never looked at me this way before' 'almost as tall as you are'
teasing, etc. etc.
she uses some of the same 'breakup' lines on him, makes it clear they are not back together
Part 2: Unexpected
back on campus he analyzes the final results, back to just work, finishing out his internship
several weeks later school is back in session
he sees his ex. she's excited to be even taller (only an inch taller), 'will this continue?' -- 'it should be slowing, as it's related to pituitary activity'
he wants to meet out for drinks, she reluctantly agrees
at a bar... when he gets there, she's chatting up one of the basketball team members, his heart sinks
she dismisses the basketball guy, but when he leaves, she makes it clear she's lusting after him
they chat a bit, he backpedals about breaking with her
she stands, wearing heels she's easily a few inches taller than him and taunts him for it
around campus, he sees her a couple times with her new basketball guy, and tries to put it out of his mind
at a bar with his friends, he's scoping out girls when he sees her again far across the room. She looks even taller and sexier, and his mind can't help but want her over the other girls around (comparing), but she's with a bunch of other guys.
she looks over, and registers his glance and waves. he responds with a defeated wave back as he turns to try to focus on other girls at the bar.
a moment later he feels hands on his shoulders and hears his name in excited exclamation. "i thought that was you"
turning he sees that it's not his ex. "Annie?" Looking up into her eyes she's seems even taller than her sister! "Wow do you look different."
She reaches out and gives him a big hug, and talks about how excited she is to be on her own at college. That her major is medicine... she's surprised and impressed at what is possible after participating in the study.
'I didn't even know you were in the study. how did that happen exactly?' -- 'ohh, they wanted sisters of different ages to look at long term effects, we both still check in every month'
One of the tall guys from her group comes up and tries to pull her away to a big frat party. She declines, and settles in to catch up with me.
she explains they are friends of her sister's new basketball boyfriend, and that she's really not into the jock/frat atmosphere. she's surprised her sister chose him over me.
Talking to her I'm still partially in shock that this is the Annie I know. She used to be a tiny 5'5" stickfigure, and now she was over 6' tall and stacked. I admit I was periodically distracted by her bustline.
she confesses that she could use some help with her med classes.. flirtatiously asks me to help her study
meet up with her at her dorm to study
notice how super hot she is, seems like she's being flirty
her roomate comes home and breaks the mood
after finishing the quiz stuff, she says she's meeting some friends out on friday and invites me to meet them
At the bar, I walk up to her, but it's accidentally her my-ex (her sister).
She's surprised I'm looking for her sister. If she's grown out of me, her sister really has.
Her boy comes up, and I get a little pang as they kiss right there in front of me.
I excuse myself which they completely ignore, and walk away across the bar.
I'm grabbed by the arm and pulled onto the dance floor by her sister, who is dancing in a circle with some girlfriends.
After a song, I offer to get them a pitcher. She reminds me she's underage, but I point out that nobody cares in here.
I bring back the drinks, we all take a breather from the dancing.
Her friends head out to the dance floor, but she declines and stays back with me at the booth.
She asks about her sister. Confesses that I seemed to still be into her.
I deny it and explain that I broke with her before the summer, besides, that treatment seems to have turned her into a different person. There are just memories there. She can date who she likes.
She gets close. So you're saying you're 'on the market'? I confess I am. She's obviously flirting heavily now.
'you know i've always had a huge crush on you', 'oh?', 'why do you think I always was the one to answer the door when you dropped by to see my sister?'
i'm getting hot and bothered. she is too close not to kiss.
her sister walks up, 'sis I need the keys to my car back.' as we part the kiss, she sees me and laughs. "satisfying your childhood crush I see." she stands up, and it's clear she's at least a few inches taller than her sister. 'you're really passing on billy for him? you know Billy's not going to wait around, he can have any girl he wants.' -- 'i already told billy i'm not interested.' --- 'don't say I told you so when you completely grow out of little xxx there. Remember what they said at the last check-in.' As quickly as she had shown up, she disappeared.
'She really has changed'. She reached her hand out to me. 'you want to get out of here? I could use some fresh air'. I took her hand.
We walked towards the housing side of campus.
'i felt like i used to know my sister, but ever since the therapy changes, she's become so selfish. It's like suddenly the world is the ** channel. you should see the way she acts to those guys. I assure you, you don't want to be around it.' She grabbed my hand tight and switched into her chipper flirtatious attitude. 'Take my advice, you're much better off with me. Do you think you could bring yourself to see me as more than her little sister?'
'You really don't seem like her little sister anymore. When you stood up you looked even taller than her!"
She laughed and poked me. 'Ohh you know what I mean! I want you to see me as more than sweet little Annie." She wrinkled her nose at the absurdity of what she said. "..more than sweet little sister Annie."
We both stopped and moved closer. "I think I can do that," I confessed. A slow moment later we kissed again, just a soft kiss. She smiled and we returned to walking. Something her sister said was really starting to knaw at me.
"I think there is more chance you'll start seeing me as little xxx. What did they say at the last check-in?"
"Ohh, don't you let my sister get to you. She's just jealous. That trigger therapy is based on the pituitary. It slows in the late teens, so the trigger is ending for her."
"So that's why you're taller than she is."
"Yes, she's 21 and her pituitary is already slowed, while I'm only 18. Please let me know if I ever start to act like her. I may not be little any more, but I want to stay sweet Annie." We stopped as we came to a crossroads, the walkway to her dorm on the left, the short walk to my apartment on the right. She hugged me close. "I'm really having a great time tonight. I don't mean to seem too forward, but could I come by your place, at least for a while? It's just that my roomate seems to treat weekends as a revolving door of men. Going up there so she can make out with a boy while he pretends not to stare at me is not my idea of the right way to end this evening.
She didn't have to ask me twice. "Of course." I pulled her close and kissed her, then we walked off towards my place.
I closed the front door with us both inside. The rest of the walk to my apartment had been quiet, and I admit a little nervously hurried. I wasn't quite sure where this was going. Was she going to stay the night? Did I want her to? Just a few weeks ago I thought of her as the little bubbly Annie that would answer the door and joke with me. I didn't want to push, but the more I was around her, the more I really wanted her.
As I turned around she lunged into me for a kiss and I ended up pressed back to the door in the process. It was an unusual feeling, being kissed by someone my height, even a bit taller. My hands found their way to her hips, and I could feel her breasts smashing high into my chest. As I pulled her towards me, her posture straightened and my head tilted back to keep our tongues locked. After a few vigorous minutes we both calmed and she sighed as our lips parted. "Well, I could be a tiny bit more than sweet Annie."
(she's entheusiastic and a little awkward, which combined with her spankin body is disarming)
(more making out, heavy petting, then she goes home)
? [montage dating, then thanksgiving. then Annie's 6'1". ]
Part 3: Expansion
the spread begins.
freak accident with a girl (Becka?), he's pre-med, he treats her (with iodine on the wound).
a few minutes later, she starts to heave in pain and he realizes she's growing.
she's bursting out of her clothese. it ends with her confused and embarassed.
he puts two and two together and explains the trigger therapy. (doesn't explain the iodine)
she's delirious and exhausted and falls asleep.
the obvious fact is that the trigger serum seems to be spreading
normal dietary iodine is causing slow growth among some female students
follow becka as she figures out the trigger
follow (new character) suzzanne as she has a freak iodine accident
Part 4: Acceptance
rumor starts
rick pushes for the trial to get to the bottom of it, they pass it off (none of the girls were in the trial)
the trigger girls get together, they start to be seen around campus..
rick thinks he should get to the bottom of the situation, annie agrees to meet the trigger girls
annie forms a common bond over growth spurts
annie agrees to participate in some kind of trigger-girl prank, girls bond (maybe when one of them confronts a professor to ask for a better grade?)
rick and his friends watch the trigger girls around campus
we get to see the athlete boys getting insecure over trigger growth, annie keeps quiet but they push her and she reveals her b/f actually likes it, they want to meet him (some insecurity includes not getting any)
Part 5: Safety First
annie reports girls are obviously still growing (and talking about it)
rick inisists on meeting them to explain the dangers, becka challenges him and puts the idea in Annie's head to administer the trigger (becka also discusses dropping their jock boyfriends)
annie pushes for more trigger doeses.... a few scenes of him resisting and the finally submitting.
interspersed scenes of rick's friends talking more about the trigger girls, and annie (suspecting her, then it's obvious, and they want rick to introduce them)
interspersed scenes of the trigger girls breaking up with their jock boyfriends (one refusing action, another seen with a normal girl)
becka calls rick asking him to set it up (a chance to introduce his interested friends to them)
Part 6: Connections
rick brings a few of his friends to a trigger house mixer, college craziness ensues
Part 7: Do's and Don'ts
annie moves into the sorority house
some of rick's friends can't stop talking about the girls...
Brian buckles down in his studies to impress Lynn.
Steve is getting love-school from suzanne, despite suzanne constantly flirting with Rick and getting him to set her up with other friends.
Alex dates becka for a few weeks but stops calling. she sees him out with another girl. Plots a little revenge by secretly dropping her trigger doses. One of Suzanne's hookups is infatuated with Becka and she hands him off to her. They date as she continues to execute her plan. narration also follows the struggles of alex and his new g/f
attending a vollyball game where the trigger girls unfairly win. steve/suz/boys dynamic. boys defend themselves from taunting by the jock ex-boyfriends
they want to expand the sorority. "application" for new girls draws a small group of freshman group. intersperse rush-hazing
if i were 7-feet-tall essay to a partner; bring the shortest guy contest (promise a kiss); (make them recite the essay to their shortest guy?); dress up as a trigger girl - two of the girls pick each-other? (they are gay/bi)
eventually Steve meets a girl, but can't give up his 'study hours' with suzanne. he pushes for her to get triggered, tries to get her into applicants, she doesn't agree. talks about it with suzanne (trigger her just a little, not too tall)
Rick somehow gets tricked into being Suzanne's work-slave for the night, she teases him, but has an agreement with Annie with a bunch of ground rules (earlier narrated)... what do they do about steve?
freshmen girl applications show up. annie and suz talk for the first time after 'the evening'.
? strange dynamics of suz/annie/rick/steve & g/f
Part 8: Heisenberg
Steve's g/f knows he's seeing someone, it starts a fight, he brings up the trigger. she's reluctant, but when he brings her to visit the trigger house she gets excited. midway through she realizes a connection with suzanne and storms out. he tries to reconcile. she's somewhere between inadequate and disguusted that suzanne is what he wants. they part the year on uncertain terms.
one new girl is selected for the new year. She's admitted with a set of laws. (no spreading or attempt to spread any knowledge of the trigger) Becka has rick administer one trigger before summer break. portray her anticipation and excitement. (she starts petite and 5'3")
Becka invites Rick to officially stay in the house next year as their medical staff
girls pull another professor intimidation stunt, but they are overconfident because of how easily it worked last time. they push it too far, things get a little out of hand... (they rip his shirt, he threatens to call security), Suzanne steps in to save the situation by getting much more sexual, having them take some incriminating photos of him. tell him he should keep it all quiet if he doesn't want the photos out. She whispers secretly that he should give her sorority sister a B if he doesn't want to hear from them again, and an A if he wants them to know these special visits arn't so bad afterall.
Summer internship returns Rick to the trigger town
funny home dynamics with annie, her sister, their parents
Rick and Annie fight about the Suzanne encounter, leave it on bad terms
drug therapy has spread, rick investigates local schools where pituitary nudging is already creating some strange discrepancies in teens
Part 9: Midas
Becka secured a much bigger sorority house
Rick shows up, and Becka announces he'll be managing the trigger from now on. there is a little turmoil about rick and annie's split. annie keeps her distance. Becka also announces that they'll all be doing a trigger dose.
new girl meets for her trigger dose, gets sweet on rick in sympathy for his breakup. intersperse her transition from a petite 5'3" to 6'3" and the attending attitude change
Brian and Lynn are still an item. Steve is disappointed not being able to rekindle with his g/f, Suzanne is just plutonically counciling him.
Rick manages the trigger dose for each girl, tries to be very medical and offical, taking measurements, etc, but they just tease him, especially Suzanne. Annie never shows for her dose.
Rick meets up with his buddies on campus. They want to know if Annie is fair game. They both tease and congradulate him for bunking up at trigger house.
Becka starts to treat rick as a confidant, seems to be coming onto him but neither make a move.
Rick's reputation (for staying with the girls) spreads on campus. A couple different girls start to ask him about triggering them, he pretends not to know the substance and encourages them to rush for next year. He shares this news with the girls, they decide they should all watch out for him. He thinks they are being silly.
He starts to notice that girls on campus generally seems taller than they should (natural effect of the drug spread).
A couple girls corner Rick, start to push for him to give up the trigger. Lynn and new girl (currently only 6'1") come to his rescue, 'save' him and tell them he's off limits, property of the trigger sorority. New girl takes it on as her project to watch out for him.
Rick starts to study for MCATs, meets his study group bi weekly. One week two girls in the study group trick him into meeting just them. They calmy disclose their desire for the trigger, and make a case that the trigger house is being selfish in keeping this private. He tries to stick to his party line that he doesn't know the substance, but they don't buy it, afterall he's pre-med. They acknowledge that he must be getting treated pretty well over there to be so loyal. Who is he dating now, not with Annie anymore? Maybe they just share you? He denies it, but they challenge that he never gets any action with the girls, he can't deny that. They talk about what it must be like to be surrounded by such hot, busty, amazon women, how most boys would be be trying to sleep with every one of them. They point out that they can offer him something they don't think he's getting at trigger house. He hasn't left yet, and so he must be curious. They challenge him, 'do you really want to know?', he submits. They full on mack each-other right there in front of him, and then respond "Threesomes." They paint a picture of the exchange, he gives them some trigger doses, not enough for the trigger girls to even notice, and we can be very appreciative. After breaking out of the shock of their proposition, he collects his things, confessing 'even if he could do what they are asking, he'd have to think about it'. They approach either side of him, "have you ever been with two girls before?" He confesses no. "Can we give you a taste of what what you'd be missing?" He puts his things down and doesn't resist. One girl kisses him, the other girl kisses him. They push his seat back away from the table and proceed to undress each other in front of him. Once down to their bra and panties they both sit in his lap. They rub four somewhat small breasts in his face, as they kiss eachother. [how can they talk about the trigger? say how much better they would look with the trigger?] [how far do they go?]
girls at the sorority start to get posessive of rick, resulting both in his pleasure, and some unexpected reactions (infighting)
Part 9: ??