Oceans Rise

    • Characters

      • G1 - Leta - 5'7" 18 year old HS junior, hot, but kind of stand-offish

        • #1 lead alien "inhabitant"

      • B1 - Connor - 5'11" 19 year old HS senior, "into" Leta, though she's mostly ignored him until now.

      • G2 - Lucinda (Indy) - 5'4" 18yo HS junior, "into" Connor, short, busty, and brash, not Conner's type

      • G3 - Reina (Rain) - 5'6" 18yo HS junior, "pudgy", good friends with Ethan, secretly desires him

      • B2 - Brayden (Brad) - 5'6" 18yo HS junior, short-and-comic, "into" Lucinda as his "match", though he'd go for any girl

      • B3 - Ethan - 6'1" 19yo jock-ripped HS senior, "into" any hot girl, at the start Leta makes the "cut" (as do other hot girls)

    • Basic Story

      • Introduce basic love triangles..

        • Conner wants leta, Leta flirts with Ethan but secretly wants Connor

        • lucinda wants connor, Brayden wants Lucinda

        • Reina wants Ethan, but he's way out of her league

        • Ethan has no trouble getting hot-girls, making him drawn to Leta's hard to get attitude (though not exclusively)

      • Global changes begin after Earth experiences a near cataclysmic meteor collision. First tsunamis from the collision, then global water temperatures rise, then phosphorescence in the water. Science and news are explaining it as a "freakishly lucky event", and studying the long term effects on the climate.

      • Six kids (three boy, three girl) are messing around at the ocean at night. Step into the water, start playing with the phosphorescence. Suddenly something "attacks" one of them. They don't know it yet, but she was "entered" by an alien parasite that slowly takes over her physiology, making her into something extra-human. The first signs are super-human confidence and strength, then mental control (requires nanite transfer through bodily fluid contact), then healing and body transformation. Eventually the alien's personality starts to take over.... but not before "spreading" the parasite to female friends.

      • Ideas

        • Resolve the love triangles..

          • Leta and Lucinda fight over Connor...

          • Brayden begs to be with Lucinda, and ends up Lucinda's robot slave.

          • Reina eventually enslaves Ethan (though it doesn't turn out badly for him)

          • Eventually Lucinda's alien is killed. Brayden takes care of her as she becomes a nearly mindless female puppet.

        • Meet the rest of "the nine" in this city...

        • Meet "the nine" in another city...

  • Three Act Outline

    • Intro

        • Introduce basic love triangles...backstory of ocean's rising...phosphoresence

      • Act 1:

        • Leta is infected by the nanites. We see it change her, her enjoy it, abuse it, spread it selfishly. We also see its effects on Connor. First turning point: we see the alien start talking through Leta, taking her over. (Will it take her over completely? will it take over the human race? what will happen to connor and leta? Can Connor save her? At what cost?)

        • At first Leta deny's it's a problem. Connor doesn't tell the other infected girls about it, but instead just try to keep them from spreading it even more -- which fails, as they already have. News starts to fill with stories of the infected (and not just from these girls). Eventually Leta can't deny something is happening, becomes fearful of her "blackouts", trusts Connor's explanation. Enlists his help. Now Conner is confronting the alien directly. (her voice is strange when it's the alien) The alien explains and demonstrates the nanites and the mind control over him. The alien explains their symbiotic relationship with species from a superior point of view, and that they have been to Earth before. Connor negotiates with the alien, seemingly making progress.

        • Leta "feels different", and is suddenly overwhelmed with creativity and intelligence. She starts to solve dramatic problems for mankind, while no longer experiencing blackouts. She also begins to get direct control over the nanites, able to convert her body characteristics (impervious to flame, steelskin) She explains to Conner her intent to disclose her inventions and bring the human race into a new era of prosperity. He's overwhelmed by her messiah-istic language.

        • When he arrives the next day at her house, there is a car with one of the other girls. He goes with her, and is taken to an estate home. He goes inside to find Leta literally "giant" (7'2"). "Don't worry, it's still me, Leta." She explains that she calculated the human race will have a 45% better chance of accepting her as an emissary of the aliens with this appearance. She does something like childish-Leta, to humanize herself. He asks about the house, and she explains it's hers, she bought it with licensing royalties for her new inventions. Then she asks if he will be her partner. After some discussion he agrees, and she kisses him, leading to the biggest euphoria yet. She addresses the press, and we get to hear her speech 'to the human race'.

      • Conner and Leta have a night of sex play....seems like a fantasy come true...

        • conflict initiation:

          • The next morning Conner softly wakes up to a conversation between Leta and the other two girls. Unlike Leta, they are "fully alien controlled" (evident in their voice, the purpleish hue of their skin, and bulging veins especially on the neck). They discuss their ultimate plan to save the planet so they can breed suitable hosts for their people, inhabiting the human women and enslaving the human men. ("How are we to save our people if we can not fully control these hosts?")

          • Leta notices Conner awake, kisses him and wills him to relax, stroking his hair. The aliens have a semi-argument, as they question the leader's judgement in allowing Leta's personality to remain.

          • Leta's alien takes full control, transforming her appearance, stands, and reprimands them in a strong superior alien voice. "Do not mistake my subtlety for weakness! These hosts are willful, suppress them completely and they will fight you. I have seen it before." Then her posture softens, sitting by Conner. "You must learn to balance. My host enjoys this human, so I will allow her to keep him close, keep him safe." Her skin calms back to a more human appearance and hue. "You two must make peace with your hosts, or their fighting back will bring the body to ruins, you along with it. They are a primitive people driven by their basic desires. Calm them, Soothe them, appease them, and they shall be yours."

          • As Leta excuses herself, she "gives" Conner to one of her girlfriends (now lieutenants) to watch over. "I need to report to our elders, see that he stays and is not harmed."

        • ---

        • Inciting Questions:

          • Will Leta and her friends ever be human (normal) again? -> No.

        • Will Conner and Leta be together? -> Yes.

          • Will the human race be enslaved? -> ??

          • Will Conner stop the aliens? -> ??

      • Act 2:

        • Conner is "slaved" by Lucinda for a while. (Leta asked for her to watch him, with strict instructions not to harm him)

          • the alien-girl explains that she doesn't understand what the leader sees in him, or the humans. if he was up to her, all unsuitable hosts would be slaves. what is it about this "bond" she indulges with you? Conner tries to explain that humans are not so weak, that they will find a way to fight back. She bores of this, and kiss-injects him with nanites to make him silent.

          • She mechanically explores human sexuality. Awkwardly and forcibly finding his lust for her host-body, nurturing it, and mechanically bringing him to climax. she's perplexed by the whole interaction. Tell me, do you know why (alien leader name) would do this? What purpose does it serve? Conner objects that she is *Leta*, or at least deep down her Leta is in there. That they love each other. That intimacy is a part of the human experience. Ask Lucinda (the name of the girl she's inhabiting). The alien doesn't even know the name of her own host.

          • The alien talks itself into experimenting with the host personality. She compels Conner to explain to the host what is going on, what we are. At first the return of her personality is violent and surprising. She's screams, having been trapped all that time. Conner is forced to dutifully explain the alien inhabitant, why she is seven-feet-tall, the "powers" endowed by the aliens. The girl asks how Conner knows all this, and he gives a short-version of Leta's transformation and his relationship with her.

          • Slowly, Lucinda's demeanor changes, and she "wants" Conner. she displays human sexiness, fueled by the alien powers. She's starts out seducing him, but then she finds out he has no choice because of the nanites, and just starts commanding him to pleasure her. Soon she has him eating her out in an unreasonably extended multi-orgasmic session.

          • When she finally has had enough, she lets him 'free' of the nanites.

          • Connor chastises Lucinda for forcing him to do that, when he's dedicated to Leta. (how could you do that to me? how could you do that to Leta?)

          • Lucinda starts to feel bad, but then she returns to a fully-alien appearance. The alien finally understands what Leta is experiencing. She patronizingly thanks Conner for demonstrating it to her....The alien connects the dots and realizes the conflict that her host and her leader's host both want him. She explains that she will simply suppress the memory. However, in case it fails, she makes some kind of threat to keep him quiet about their interaction...

        • When Alien-Leta returns, Conner tries to "reason" with her to leave the human race alone. (how can she still seem like Leta)

          • First, she demonstrates how few years the human race has on the planet. How without them intervening, nearly all humans would die soon. The humans are being saved.

          • Second, she demonstrates how superior Leta's body has become because of the alien nanite technology.

          • Third, she comforts him by explaining that all humans will be well taken care of. She mocks that he's not a slave to her, but to his own hormonal response. That like human abuse of the planet, the human race is caught in a cycle of abuse of each-other. Men driven to want women, women driven to deny them. (do you remember how much I ignored you before this all happened? She knew you wanted her. She liked it. She just led you on because human cycles are vicious power struggles, including the hormonal cycle.) Can't you see, this is a curse for the self-created human misery?

          • Conner tries to defend himself, humans, love, relationships...... she just turns it on him and shows him how little he can avoid his own lust with some sex play.

        • Brayden finds transformed Lucinda...

          • Brayden and Ethan are at the mall, wondering where Connor is. Brayden sends a text trying to find Connor, just as two cute girls start to chat up Ethan... totally ignoring Brayden.

          • Lucinda is experimenting with her connection with her host.. talking to "herself", when her phone gets a message from Brayden (Brad) asking where Connor is. (Lucinda refers to him as Brad, while the alien keeps calling him Brayden because that's what the phone said)

          • Lucinda+alien have a conversation about Brad, where they divulge that the host puts up with his needy advances because he's a helpful friend. However, the alien knows she can't really have Connor, and she wants a plaything, so she suggests they bring him around. Lucinda tries to keep Brad out of this, but the alien forces her not only to reply, but make it saucy.

          • Brad gets an unexpectedly flirty reply ('Need 2 talk. Cum by?'), and practically jumps out of his seat. He excuses himself from Ethan, who hardly notices because he's still flirting with the two hot girls from school.

          • ---

          • Lucinda and her alien are bickering while looking in a mirror. She's now wearing a purple halter dress. The alien is ruffling through her mind for information about Brayden (like the fact that he stares at her tits). The alien "enhances" herself while Lucinda adolescently protests that she's not going to touch that 'leech'.

          • The alien tells her it'll be fun... talks her up about 'controlling' him.

          • When Brayden shows up (where?), the alien finally asserts herself more. "If you are not going to play along, then I'll handle him myself." Her skin tinges just purple enough to be obviously weird. A few veins become visibly pronounced on her face and neck. (image)

          • Brayden lets himself in because of a note on the door, calling out as he moves towards the living area, "hello? Hello? Lucinda?" He finds Lucinda casually yet flirtatiously sitting on the couch, but looking decidedly different than 'normal'. "Lucinda?"

          • "Hello Brayden. I'm glad you could come by." Her voice has a metallic yet lyrical quality to it. "Please come sit." She gestures to the couch next to her, noticing him already checking out her bursting cleavage.

          • "Wow Lucinda, you look... different." Whereas normally his appreciation started and ended with her tits, this time he noticed her skin was tinted purple, and she had some kind of lines painted on her face. She also looked especially slender in her tight-fitting dress. It all left only one reasonable explanation, "some kind of elf costume? I dig it." As he walked closer, he looked around the room, taking it in. Then he sits down on the couch. "If you're going to ask me to play dwarf warrior and join you for secret cosplay, I'm in!" She didn't laugh, she didn't smile, in fact, he found it quite strange that she seemed to have no reaction at all.

          • "No Brayden. I need to talk to you about something decidedly more... private." She straightened up and slowly inched closer to him. Suddenly Brad felt the hairs of his skin stand on end and wondered if he might be dreaming. Lucinda had never looked hotter, and she didn't seem at all like herself. She never called him Brayden, and her eyes were fixed on him, unwavering. Somehow he also felt a pronounced illusion of her being not only taller, which was as exciting as it was uncomfortable.

          • Brad's reflex to break tension with humor kicked in. He raised his arms and fervently addressed the ceiling, "thank you god." Then he gave her a deliberate once-over, including an especially good look at the skin bursting out the top of her dress. "Luce, my desire to be ravaged by a busty elf girl is no secret. The question is, when did you decide to start making my dreams come true?" He intended it all as the kind of over-the-top flirtation she would normally punch him for, only she didn't. She didn't even react. She just continued inching closer.

        • As she reached him, he felt a chill run through him. Somehow she seemed simultaneously more slender yet bigger than usual. As her leg brushed his, he found himself looking -up- at her face. He only had a moment to wonder why before she started slowly leaning down towards him.

          • The next few moments happened in a flash but felt like slow motion. The pronounced lines on her face stood out more, and he noticed they looked more like veins than a fake tatoo; he felt her breast rub into his arm, triggering a chill of excitement; he didn't know why, but she was leaning in to kiss him! Brad barely restrained his desire to back off and blurt out another humorous tension breaker. He closed his eyes and felt her lips gently connect. The moment swept him off his feet, senses overloaded with the soft warm plush of skin and the wetness of her tongue.

        • Brad was initially stiff, frozen in disbelief. Then, as he accepted what was happening, he fell into the kiss. He reached out for her. Timidly at first, he brought his hand to her hip. Her body felt so solid it surprised him. While her tongue danced in his mouth, filling it with a gentle sweetness, his hand drifted up her side. His sub-conscious had already taken over, brushing his forearm across her breast as if testing the waters. Then his hand drifted, and years of pent-up desire released as he pressed, squeezed, and caressed the wondrously sensuous flesh.

          • Brad now truly felt like he was in a dream, every bit of the moment entirely surreal. His fingers traced across her chest at the neckline before digging in, alternately pulling at the fabric and pushing into her soft flesh. The taste of sweetness in his mouth was momentarily overwhelming, before he felt her tongue slow and retreat. Brad opened his eyes to find her looking off across the room. "See, I knew you would like it. Go ahead, do with him as you wish." Suddenly the lines on her skin faded.

        • --- Lucinda is handed "mind control" of Brad, through the nanites ---

        • Brad felt confusion washing over him. He wanted see what she was looking at, but he could hardly turn his head, like he was half-asleep. Then he realized not only was his hand still digging into her top, but he couldn't feel it or the rest of his body. He forced words out in a slow slurring mess, "wwwhhaaaa, iiiisssss, haapppennnningggg?"

          • In the blink of an eye dark lines carved onto her face, and she looked across the room. "Less forceful. He's not unwilling." He felt his lips and face relax, and quickly looked to see her staring into a mirror - like she was talking to herself.

          • Feeling returned to his limbs, and he felt his fingers gently caressing her nipple through her dress in a pleasant action that was not his own. When Lucinda looked at him, the lines on her face were still deep and dark. "You are ours now, Brayden." Her expressionless piercing gaze was unnerving, but he couldn't will himself to look away.

          • A moment later, the lines again disappeared from her face, and color seemed to return to her skin. Brad had no idea what was happening, but this was no cosplay makeup. Lucinda blinked, opened her mouth, and turned her head at odd angles, as if she was waking from sleep herself. When she finally looked down at him her eyes were softer, and her lips cracked a smirk. It was the first moment she'd seemed like herself since he arrived. "Well Brad, looks like you finally got your hand into the cookie jar." She darted her eyes down to the fingers still digging into her dress, kneading her nipple; fingers he could feel, but couldn't seem to control.

          • Brad's humor reflex kicked in and he started a quippy reply, "and what a fine..." His reply was stopped short, his jaw locking up as she brought her finger to her own lips in a shushing motion. She waved her hand, and after his fingers left her dress, he felt himself crawling down onto the floor. He could feel the motions, he just couldn't stop them.

          • Lucinda smiled as she crossed her legs on the couch. "I think it's time for a break from your sexist pig humor. Maybe I'll treat you like the dog that you are." Brad found himself on all fours, nosing up to her leg. "There, there my little pet." She brushed a hand through his hair. He couldn't understand his own actions, but they somehow felt right, like he wanted to do it. A dark line throbbed on her face, and she looked away, addressing herself in the mirror again. "Leave me be, I'm just having a little fun."

        • --- the alien pulls Lucinda's strings, and makes her desire Brad ---

          • Suddenly Lucinda uncrossed her legs, as she grabbed at her own crotch, moaning, "uhhh!" She felt herself not only incredibly turned on, but with a suddenly desperate desire for Brad. Before she knew it, her legs were spread suggestively wide. "Ohh, that sneaky bitch. Looks like you're not the only one with a puppet master." While her finger suggestively drew down his cheek, her face pouted an objection, "nooooh! This is not me, this is *her*! I put up with your ceaseless flirting because you're a good friend."

          • Brad hardly noticed her protest. He was too entranced with the way he was following the finger on his chin like a magic leash, leading him right between her sexy spread legs. He couldn't tell if he was dreaming, in a trance, or dead and gone to heaven. Kneeling between her legs, he looked up at her otherworldly beauty. As long as he had admired her, Lucinda had been a short, barely plump, well rounded girl. The girl sitting in front of him had Lucinda's face, but she was slender, voluptious, and tall.. very tall. She seemed like an idealized version of the girl he knew.

        • He felt his hands fall on her firm thighs, rubbing the fabric of her dress. The pout disappeared from her face, replaced by a look of longing as her head tilted and she made out breathy separated words, "God .. your hands feel good.... I should not ... want this." He watched her fingertips gently brush down her collarbone and onto her breast. "It turns me on when you stare at my tits Brad, even when I fight it." Her face pursed, "ahh, what am I saying!?"

        • Brad felt his fingers slip under her dress, and she briefly closed her eyes as he traced the edge of her panties. A moment later, she slipped her dress off her shoulders, exposing herself.

          • ?? where next ??

            • the alien forces her to confesses to enjoying his advances

            • maybe this whole thing could be more structured.. the alien uncovers the truth and reinforces it?

            • We could hear the alien talking, or maybe Lucinda hears the alien in her mind?

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        • Conner and Leta come upon the two girls, now both in a half-alien half-human state. Their forms approaching "perfection". They have five slaves attending to them, but the slaves are fully compelled, without their own will -- like robots.

          • Leta begins a conversation with the other aliens which now becomes a different kind of argument.

          • The alien-girls have embraced her partnership with the host, but in a different way. They pull the hosts desires like puppet strings, and control the sexual slaves. They have reported to the elders about how unique the human race is. How different and pleasurable a partial bond can be. They have accelerated plans to inhabit hosts, in the interest of better understanding this phenomenon.

          • They leave, where alien-Leta confesses her concern over the pattern occuring. She relates the story of another alien world, where their people mis-used this type of hormonal connection. It ended in tragedy not only for the hosts, but for their people. alien-Leta agrees Conner is right, that they must do something to stop this.

        • world-wide news spreads quickly, as in every city of every nation nine "inhabited females" have appeared and declared themselves as the emissaries of a new phase of the human race.

          • many cultural reactions to them, including women who want to join them, men to want to worship them, men who want to stop them.

      • Act 3: Resolve the love triangle (Leta kills Lucinda's alien. Conner becomes hers. Lucinda becomes Brayden's)

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Bigger story outline....

Act 1: Intro...

      • Contact

        • Five kids are messing around at the ocean at night. The boys (except Connor) flirt overtly with Leta, and she habitually scornes their advances with prepared sound-bytes. Connor uses more subtle body language (walking next to her) because he's actually into her, but she explicitly makes distance between them.

        • One of the other guys steps into the water, starts playing with the phosphorescence. This encourages all of them one by one, even amidst disgruntled suggestions that they "shouldn't be in there. they are supposed to stay out of the water."

        • Suddenly something "attacks" one of them, sending blood into the water and pulling her under. Her boyfriend is in stunned shock and his friends drag him away as they run for safety. ("come on man, she's gone")

      • He keeps looking back from around a corner, and as they run out of sight he sees her head peak up out of the shallow water as she crawls out. He runs back to her. Making the final approach with caution, calling for her, trying to get a signal that she's okay.

      • She calls back, "yes, help me connor." as she flops down onto the sand, her breath is heaving and exhausted. He takes her hand and she squeezes back while she closes her eyes.

      • "are you okay? there was alot of blood out there." She doesn't answer, and seems out-of-it. He sees that her shorts have been ripped apart, and are in tatters hanging from her waist. He checks her bottom half for the source of all the blood in the water, and finds nothing, except a bit more exposure than is decent due to the tattered shorts. "leta, leta, are you with me? We need to get you to a hospital."

        • "no no, I'm fine." she startles awake, groggy, and pulls herself to her feed. "just get me home. I need to go home."

      • Pause - morning at Leta's house

        • Leta wakes feeling unusually refreshes, energetic even. She awake early and her behavior is a bit "bouncy". Her family asks her when she came in last night, implying it was earlier than usual. She explains she had a bit of a stomach bug so Connor brought her home, but she feels fine now. Her mom says something complementary about Connor.

      • We learn more of the backstory about the meteor, oceans, and what is happening on the world stage....

      • Changes begin - Leta's "influence"

        • We see the friend's back to quasi-normalcy, meeting at the mall, relieved that Leta is okay.

        • Leta shows a new interest in Connor, explained by her interest in his bravery "saving" her from the beach. Connor is kind of hanging on her every word, which she oddly doesn't seem to mind. (she never would have stood for it before)

        • The boys and girls start to naturally split, but Connor lingers. Leta gives him some explicit direction to go with the boys, like she isn't bothered by his obedience, but also like she owns him. ("it's okay, we'll catch up later")

        • Boys

          • ... the boys give Connor the macho thumbs up about Leta being suddenly into him (nice move!) with undertones of being jealous

          • ... but razz him about acting so pussy whipped, hanging on her and her every word... he denies doing it, which just starts a humerous boy verbal brawl

          • they check out some hot chicks they see at the mall, one of them chats her up. they look at watches

        • girls

          • Leta is hanging out with the girls shopping at the mall. They discuss their budgets, their goals, and the boys. They razz her about suddenly being into Connor after scorning him for so long. She admits they are probably right, but that she just felt something.

          • She's trying on something she wants. The girls critique it as perhaps "showing a little too much", and gently suggest that while they are all trim, a dress showing that much middrif is designed for someone who is all bones. Still she wants it.

          • The dress had not tag, and turns out to be more expensive than she thought, way above budget. She really wants it, so she tries to play all coy, and suggest that the item was actually marked with a different price. She sells it much harder and sexier than she normally would, and the male teller gives her a "special discount" (tell you what, since you're such a good customer). He writes his phone number down and slips it into the bag.

          • The girls all laugh their way to the yogurt shop, in disbelief she was able to get such a big discount. They question whether she's actually going to call him. (No way, but I'm going to look hot in that dress!)

          • girls run into the boys, causing the girls to tease them .. (following us?) but Leta takes the opportunity to redirect the group so she can spend time with Connor. The girls are susprised she bailed on shopping so quickly. The boys are unsurprised that Connor follows her like a puppy dog, they all humerously talk about the "new couple"

        • Leta and Connor

          • They are walking through the mall, small-talking. (thanks for bringing me home last night ... etc)...

          • When Leta suddenly pulls him running down a hallway (quick, over here!). She's unexpectedly aggressive, getting in close. (Something else happened last night. I feel something. A connection between us. You feel it too don't you?) He nods, though he would nod at anything with Leta suddenly this close, face to face, her body pushing him into the wall. She kisses him. He's tentative at first, but it's much more than a kiss, more like a drug. He wants more, and starts pulling her into him, sucking at her lips and tongue. A minute later, she presses herself away, declaring (that's enough, for now, I need to get back to the girls) she leads him out of the hallway, adding (but I have a feeling you and I are going to be seeing much more of each-other). he smiles back. (not realizing he was just infected with some of the alien nanites)

      • The connection - Leta's special connection with Connor, and with the ocean

        • -- connor is doing something he should stay with (Summer job interview?), but suddenly he has to go for an unexplained reason.

        • -- elsewhere, Leta is annoyed, because she needs trivial help with something (she's waiting for a ride from her mom, but she's late). Suddenly, out of nowhere, Conner drives up in front of her. She's casually surprised that he's at that odd location, but he explains it away (just in the neighborhood, need something?). Yes, she needs a ride, she gets in, texting her mother not to bother coming by.

        • Leta says she doesn't need to be home right away, and implies they should go somewhere semi-private together. He takes her to the beach park, which they both know will be empty on account of the ocean warnings.

        • While there, Conner notices something strange.. normally the phosphorescence isn't visible in daylight, but the water seems to be pulsing near her as they walk along it. He encourages them away from the edge, which she graciously credits to him as another event "saving her", "watching out for her", before she sits down on the sand, pulling him down with her.

        • She starts another "moment", tucking in close, and tells him how she knows how long he's been into her. How he holds doors for her, pays attention to her outfits. ( how long have you been wanting this? eight months? a year? and I've been practically ignoring you. I have to confess something to you Conner, I've been putting you off, because I'm kind of a bad girl. )

        • (No no, you've been really nice to me.) Meanwhile, she's sits up, untucks her shirt, unbuttons her shorts, and starts to shimmy them down her legs, leaving her bottomless. (Leta? It's broad daylight, what are you doing?) He starts to look around, worried someone will see them.

        • (Stop worrying, nobody comes out here anymore. Arn't you more interested in why I'm taking off my clothes?) His attention stopped drifting. (I have something for you to do.) She started unbuttoning her shirt. (Girls talk alot, and you know what the girls say?) Conner shook his head, too focused on the line of skin revealing up her middle. (They say you are really talented with your tongue.) She unclasped the front of her bra, leaving them both loosely hanging on her shoulders. (I'd like you to show me. Think of it as an entrance exam.)

        • Conner was stunned, taking a moment to register and feel the rush of adrenalin, before moving in to kiss her. She leaned away, so he did the next best thing, and kissed her tummy, working his way towards her exposed breast. He took her nipple in his mouth, lapping and sucking on it, before he started working across towards the other. (Uh, Conner?) Her voice held a confusing mix of pleasure and displeasure. He looked up. (That's nice, but I'm about to dock you points for failing to understand the instructions. I'm horney as hell, and I want you to go down on me.) Conner was again a bit stunned, having never heard or expected Leta to talk to him, or anyone, this way.

        • Not a moment later, she took her hand, and started gently pushing down on his head, coaxing him towards her sex. He got the picture, and started kissing down her torso as she laid back on the sand. (Ahh. Mmm. Just about. There we go. Yes. Be patient now, I'm in no hurry. Mmm. Yes.")

        • Conner never would have predicted the sequence of events to bring him here, nor that it ever would have happened. However, that moment, eating her out on the beach in broad daylight, was the sexiest thing he'd ever done. Somehow, like the kiss, it was more than just the act. It was like a drug. He had to force himself to pace, trying to let her savor the moment. She was clean and sweet, almost like a surreal dream.

        • Leta laid there on the beach, also not quite sure how all of this had come out of her. It was very out of character for her. She actually wasn't a "bad girl" at all, though she not only hadn't second guessed herself, she kind of liked it. She stretched her arms out in the sand, selfishly enjoying the feeling of Conner's tongue lapping between her legs, and felt a warm tingly wetness surprise her fingertips. It surprised her, as she had thought they were easily eight feet from the edge of the water. Still, the thought drifted away as she enjoyed Connor. What neither of them could see, was that the water had crawled up the beach, and was not only touching her, but radiating waves of pulsating light. Something was inside her, it was connecting with something out there, and Leta would never be the same.

      • It spreads- Leta's physical changes begin, everyone notices. she ropes in the girls

        • -- They are all meeting out for a "group date" on Friday. Dancing at an all-ages club. Leta comes in her "new dress", and everyone is *stunned* at how good she looks in it. There is not an ounce of fat on her midsection, causing the faint outlines of her abs to be visible without her even having any kind of six-pack. They don't notice that she's also taller. Connor is immediately intimidated at how hot she looks, until she cuddles right up to him for some PDA. He gushes compliments on her, which the girls reiterate (wow girl, I want what you've got)

        • (I have been doing something different. Maybe I can show you later girls. For now, lets shake it down.) She leads Conner and the group out onto the dance-floor, where she proceeds to show off sexy dance moves. The feel of the whole group has changed, with Leta the 'alpha' and everyone taking her lead. The boys because of how sexy she is, the girls because of how envious they are.

        • While dancing, she has a sexually teasing conversation with Connor... filling us in on their off-camera escapade. How she's looking forward to another 'service' of his. He teases back that maybe it's time for a mutual exchange. She retorts, confirming that she's "taken care of him" several times a day, citing the handjob she gave him in the car, another in the restaurant bathroom just a bit ago, and another one she's planning to give him later. (Most boys wouldn't complain about a three for one exchange, but if you want, I can make you work more for it) He backpedals, and she fades back into her sexy dancing, not responding.

        • The other boys are enrapt watching her, despite the illusion that this is a group in the middle of a crowded dance-floor. In fact, the boys in the group are not the only ones watching her. The man who gave her the "special discount" on her dress comes up, comments how good it looks on her, and gets her attention for a moment, making Conner feel a little awkward. The boys razz that he better defend his turf. He finally moves over to her, and she swoops him up in PDA, introducing him as her boyfriend, and dropping her tongue deep down his throat right in-front of the guy. Conner is taken by surprise, and finds himself overwhelmed by her scent and touch. Even amidst the satisfaction, he feels a deep loss and longing as she pulls away, and they both see the guy fade off into the crowd. She explains it's the retail salesperson who sold her this dress, drawing attention to herself. Then she excuses herself and grabs the ladies for a trip to the liu.

        • When they get in the bathroom, out of nowhere, she kisses one of the girls. It takes her by surprise, but she feels the 'drug' and is quickly into it, grasping for more for as long as Leta stays with her. The other girl is left awkwardly watching, confused. When they finish, the girl razzes them about it. Leta explains it was an impulse, and belittles the girl for being so close-minded. You wanted to know how I got these didn't you? She makes visual reference to her abs, which impossibly seem even more defined than before. Both of you can have what I have. You want it don't you? (nods) Then kiss her. Show me you're serious. (The banter goes on, and she finally gets her to kiss the other girl, spreading the control nanites) We'll do it tonight. I'll tell you when.

        • --- the night continues, until it's time to leave, and then Leta orchestrates it so her and the girls all go in Conner's car, separating the group. The boys are no longer thinking this is cool, especially the boy who's frequently amorous with both girls. However, the girls insist, making up the lamest story ever about why they all need to go with Leta. (for a girls sleep over?)

        • Conner didn't believe that story, and questions "what the heck is going on?" because even he can see this is weird. Leta tells him to drive to the ocean, which he does, though he's still probing to know what's going on. The girls just start teasing him, (maybe they want him all to themselves). Eventually, Leta tells Conner a totally fake story about how that whole ruse is because the girls are into each-other, and they all want to head to the ocean to make out. Conner doesn't buy it, so the girls "demonstrate" by macking on each-other in the back-seat of the car.

      • That gives he and Leta the illusion of more privacy, but Connor is now thoroughly distracted by sexy-Leta and the two lesbos making out in the back. They all tease him to keep his eyes on the road while simultaneously teasing him to keep his eyes off it.

      • ---

      • Eventually they arrive at the beach, stumbling down towards the phosphorescence. Leta kisses Conner and gives him clear instructions to wait there on the sand, which is is perplexed about, though he complies. She leads the two girls out into the water amidst Conner's protests from the sand. He tries to follow but feels sick, falls to the ground and decides to rest a moment.

      • When Leta and the girls are in the water and out of earshot, she explains a reduced version of what happened to her "that day" - that something joined with her. Something magical. They need to go deeper. It's going to hurt a bit, but they know how to be gentler now. Once they are waist deep, the girls hold hands in a ring, and the first girl winces painfully and starts to breathe heavy.

      • When it enters the second girl, she resists, trying to fight it off thrashing around in the water. Leta is talking her through it (it'll be okay), but she falls over in the water. Leta calls for Conner to come out to them. The three of them carry her out of the water, and onto the sand, where she's panting and her dress is torn slightly. They lie her down. Conner chastises them for being out in the water, and suggests they take her to the hospital, but Leta says she'll be fine. Just give her a few minutes. She puts the focus on the other girl, (how do you feel?)

      • (Good. Normal? Kinda energetic actually, like I just got my second wind. Did you ever just look at how pretty it is?) She gestures out towards the water. Leta cuddles up to Conner, and coaxes him down onto the beach with her. The girl joins them as they all look at the phosphorescence. Patterns of light, dancing around. Not ordered, not random, hypnotic.

      • They stare for several minutes until the other girl sits up. (Wwhaaat, happened?) She says in a groggy stammer.

        • Conner gets serious, straightening up (we really should take her to a doctor.) He stands, but the girls all stay seated.

        • Leta matter of factually responds. (She's perfectly fine. She doesn't need a doctor. Let's get your over-active mind something to focus on. Come here.) As he approaches, he starts to tingle all over, like during their kiss. He's giddy with excitement as she holds out her hand for him. (You're sharing a beautiful night on the beach with three pretty girls. I really appreciate you bringing us out here and keeping us safe. In fact, I have an idea to repay you that I think will solve your little mutuality problem.")

      • ("What mutuality problem?") the more awake girl interjects. Conner's simultaneously excited, and turning beet-red. The previously sleepy girl finally shook her head back and fort and came out looking suddenly bright eyed and awake.

        • ----

        • escapade with Conner

        • ----

        • how does he get "sworn to secrecy"? Simple mind control?

      • Less than subtle -

        • update

          • -- by four weeks later, the changes to the three girls are far from subtle. They are paragons of fitness and muscularity, something which is easier to hide than the fact that Leta is a full seven inches taller (6'2"), while the other girls are five inches taller (5'11" and 6').

          • ..the two other boys have faded out of the picture, weirded out and driven insane by disbelief. Instead there is a new boy and a new girl, in addition to "random wanna be followers" and lots of "doubters" of various kinds.

        • We enter Leta teasing with her slight 3 inch height advantage, kissing Connor. We get to see Connor's drug-like reaction to her bodily fluid contact.

      • (Leta asks Conner what he wants, but in a strangly alien voice and demeanor) He pressures for her to give him whatever she has, what she gave to the other girls. She struggles to explain that she can't, that it only works on women -- without explaining the gory details of it inhabiting her insides.

        • (So you mean what else do I want?) which lands into a teasing sex-charged conversations about their very recent escapades - starting a very mechanical but humerous conversation with the "alien" about how perhaps "this one" is sexually oversimulating you. (no, no!) No? Well then perhaps you can answer my question. What do you all want? -- The "you all" begins to show that she's becoming something not exactly human, though he mistakenly takes it to mean "men", which provides a few more minutes of teasing. (The alien responds matter of factly. Very well. I can see it makes you more cooperative. There is that what you like? -- she starts stroking him -- Now, tell me. What do humans really want? What drives you?) (Connor is a bit shocked.. What, are you not human anymore?) (Do I not look human? I'm just something... more.) Registering the shock on Connor's face, the alien puzzles for a moment.

        • Then shakes her head violently, and out comes Leta's softer voice. ("What just? Ohh Conner, kiss me again.") She kisses him, and it lures him in. Afterwords, he struggles to explain something is happening to her. (Leta, I think something strange is going on.) (ya think?) (No, I mean. I had a whole conversation with you just now, but it didn't seem like you. You kept asking what I want, what humans want.)

        • "Huh, really? I do keep thinking about that lately. Maybe I was daydreaming. I do that sometimes." She stands and kind of prances as she taslks. "I do I feel I could do so much more. Parents, teachers, they all say we should do something with our lives. I want to help people. I want to change things. And this thing that's happening to me. Have I shown you how strong I am now? Here, try to bend this." She hands it to Connor, who can't budge it, and just shrugs as he hands it back. With some effort, she bends it back and forth several times like it's plastic. Connor is a little shocked. Then she sits and puts it over her knee, raising her arms and shoulders to get leverage to press as hard as she can onto it. Connor is staring, but this time more at the way her posture exposed more cleavage. When she proudly produces the half-flattened steel bar, she catches him staring at her tits. (Well, at least you won't be my competition as long as I have these babies.) She makes fun of him, even as she flirts more.

        • Then the phone rings, and the crew is getting together.

        • ---

        • They convene at the library, of all places, because that is where the 'changed' want to meet. We see size comparisons with the two other girls, as well as meet the new "followers" (one boy, one girl) who kind of puppy dog around the other two girls. After some fun play outside, they all go in.

        • The changed head for the Internet terminals, and start talking physics. Connor notices Leta is using that slightly weird voice again.

        • It sounds exciting, but quickly goes over the heads of the unchanged, who decide to take a snack break. Outside, the girl starts chatting up about how she can't wait to get what they have. (what do you mean?) Duh? Have you not noticed? These girls have grown half a foot in a month. There is obviously something up, and it's happening to all of them. I want to know, because I want it! Don't you? Speaking of which, you've been around them the whole time, how come they haven't let you in on their little secret? (Connor dodges the fact that he knows it only works on women. Dreading the day this punky little girl will tower over him too.)

        • When they get back to the library, the changed girls are gone. They all shrug and wander off. Connor texts her, and she tells him they needed a field trip, that she's be available at her house at 7pm.

      • Connor makes contact

        • That night, Conner is back at Leta's again. The conversation is a bit awkward because of Leta's "time gaps". (So where were you all when you left the library?) (you want to talk about the library?) She's coming on strong. "I was thinking we should watch a movie, just to see how many 'intermissions' you might need." He doesn't immediately respond, and looks a little forelorn. "Okay, something is up. What is on your mind?" (Leta, there is something serious happening to you -- besides these physical changes. When you were at the library, you were talking in that strange voice again. It's like you're two people now. Do you even remember what you did this afternoon?)

        • "This afternoon? Of course. We... I uhm.. What did we?" Her head puzzled to the side, then suddenly her body straightened oddly. Her next words came out in that strange voice again, "Connor, let us speak plainly you and I. You are obviously aware of my presence in this host. You're attempt to alarm her is in conflict with my goals. Do you not enjoy the changes we've made? Do you not enjoy her taking you as a companion?"

        • "No, no! It's just. What is going on here? What is happening to Leta? Who are you?"

        • "We are from another, start system, as you call them, far outside your galaxy. We have come here to help your species." She ran her hand down Connor's shoulder, and he reflexively pushed him back to get some distance from the alien voice.

        • "You recoil. Why? We have no wish to harm you. Hmm, increased heart-rate, increased blood-pressure. You are afraid of me suddenly. Our models failed to predict this outcome. Tell me Connor, what frightens you."

        • Connor stood, giving himself a more confident footing. "Are you kidding? You took over my friend! You can't just do that. Where is Leta? Give her back."

        • "I see. Possessive. Bonding. Protection. Identity. Individuality. These traits are stronger in your race than we anticipated. She can do so much more with my help. We have been waiting to take full control as we have much to learn about human social interaction. However, time is running out. You don't see how much peril your race is in. Without technological adjustments, the carbon saturation in your atmosphere will reach critical levels for your species in less than three hundred lunar cycles. We need your help now, Connor. Tell me, what adjustments to our demeanor will relieve this fear you have of us?"

        • Connor stood, stunned. First at the reality that he seemed to legitimately be having a conversation with some kind of alien. Second, that it has just asked him a question. It has asked his advice. "Well. You can start by letting Leta be Leta."

        • "Release control? Sigh.. We have tried this in the past, and it has not fared well. You see, hosts seldom have the self-discipline to moderate the special gifts our presence offers. Rather than serving the good of the species, they tend to merely indulge themselves and enslave others. In fact, it happened long ago here on this planet, in a debacle I'm embarrassed has been entombed in your human history. You know her as Cleopatra."

        • "Leta is different. She wants to help people. Just today she was saying how she could do so much more to help people. Give her a chance."

        • "Curious. We warn that you may be enslaved by her, yet you trust her more than you trust us." The alien pauses, thinking and looking at Connor. "We will have to think on this further." With that, she sat on the floor, legs crossed and relaxed. She closed her eyes and just sat quietly. For a minute, then another minute more.

      • Connor sat down on the bed and watched, well, nothing happen. That is, until her hands flung to her head in a flash and she screamed out. "Arhhhh!"

        • "What? What? What is it Leta? Are you okay?" She shook her head, violently at first, then more comically, finally ending in a peculiar smile.

        • "I - think - I'm - all - right." The voice was hers, but her movement was strange, her head peering around the room. "Things look a little - different." She looked right at Connor, "like did you know that your left ear is 1.8 millimeters higher and 0.4 millimeters taller than your right ear? And your heartrate is high, but dropping. Wow, how do I know all that, and what had you worked up Connor? Did I have another blackout?"

        • "Uhm. You could say that. Sit down because you are not going to believe this." Connor tried to explain his conversation with her alien passenger. It was pretty hard for her to believe.

        • "I see. So there is an alien inside me trying to take over, but you convinced them not to?" Leta stood from the ground, approaching Connor with her typical sexy demeanor. "I suppose I am deeply in your debt. Any ideas how you'd like to begin my repayment plan?" With that Leta pressed her lips into his, and their tongues intertwined. This time it was as electrifying for her as it was for him. Her eyes went wide, and as she pulled free, there was a curious look on her face. "Connor. There is something very very different now. I can.. I can..I can feel you."

        • Connor just looked back at her puzzled. "I mean, I can feel your hand.." Suddenly Connor's fingers were flexing and moving, yet the limb felt dead to him like it wasn't even there. "Connor, why are you moving your fingers like that?" He didn't answer, because he didn't know. Leta finally noticed the terrified look on his face. His arm promptly went limp. "Wow, am I tripping on something, or what?"

      • "Uhm. Leta, I'm telling you, this is the aliens. This is what they are doing to you. You need to be careful."

      • "I admit, that's pretty weird, but aliens? You sure you didn't slip me something special in that drink? It's hard to explain, but there are just alot of ideas running around up there." Leta pointer to her head as she sat next to Connor and rambled on. "Like I know that the atmospheric carbon concentration reaches critical levels in twenty-five years, that natural means can only extend that by about 14 months, and I can recite the DNA sequence for a form of salt-water algae which can extend that by fifty five years. I can save the human race from global annihilation. Crazy!" She shot a funny smile at Connor. " She shot a wry smile at Connor. "You don't look impressed."

        • "Uhm. No. It's impressive. Saving the human race is good." With how long she had talked there, he felt like he needed to do his part in the conversation. "I mean, it's really important, and it's not everyday someone invents algae. It's the aliens, they are trying to help you. "

        • "Okay, okay. You know I love your imagination Connor, but this alien thing is a bit overdone." She pushed him over and straddled him. "How about you imagine something more fun, like my boobs getting bigger. I've grown so much in the past couple months you never know what could happen." Conner wasn't one to deny her advances, so he quickly accepted the topic change. Leta was still just smiling a silly grin back at him, unbuttoning her shirt. "Like what you see?"

        • Connor just smiled and enjoyed her striptease. However, something did look different about her. Had her shirt looked that stretched out a moment ago? He didn't think so. By the time she dropped the shirt off her shoulders, she was positively busting out of her bra. "Holy crap, your tits are bigger!"

        • "Ohh. Are they?" Leta felt herself as she responded with a faux melodrama. "Wow, you're right, they are much bigger all of a sudden. What could have caused that?" She winked, as she reached to unclip her bra. Suddenly, the heft of her huge breasts drooped down against her chest. Leta wrinkled her face. "Aww, big and saggy. That can't be very attractive."

      • Her face pensed in concentration, and a moment later her breasts gently rose up and firmed as if they were on some kind of magic remove control. She looked down at herself and smiled, "ahh, much better."

          • "Uhm. They did say something. I forget. You have to cherish and please me forever, I think." Leta was smirking, pushing Connor onto his back as she brought her new breasts closer and closer to his face. "Oral sex anytime I like." She wrinkled her nose at that one.

          • "I thought we settled on once a day, and two handjobs. Plus, don't you think it's a bit early to be renegotiating? There might be some big new opportunities. Here, let me show you two of them." With that, Leta casually laid down, smashing her huge breasts into his face. She didn't move around, or make flirty movements, she just laid her weight down onto him as if it was just a comfortable spot, her breasts wrapping around his face from his ears to his chin.

          • Connor kinda tried to respond, but he couldn't easily move his face, wedged between her tits like that. He brought his hands to their sides, and just ended up squirming and rubbing a little. "Having trouble down there? You okay to wait on that renegotiation? Just see what comes up?" Connor did his best to nod his head. "Good."

    • Girl with a cause

        • When Connor visits the next day, Leta "feels different", and is overwhelmed with creativity and intelligence. She starts to solve dramatic problems for mankind, while no longer experiencing blackouts. She also begins to get direct control over the nanites, able to convert her body characteristics (impervious to flame, steelskin) She explains to Conner her intent to disclose her inventions and bring the human race into a new era of prosperity. He's overwhelmed by her messiah-istic language.

        • ..she needs a few days to work on some stuff.. and tries to rush Connor out of the place. He protests "for her safety", she starts teasing him, gets him excited, offers him oral if he'll leave her for a few days. Just until the weekend. He agrees.

      • Shock and Awe

        • ...they spent the next several days sexting...

        • When Conner arrives on Friday, there is a car with one of the other girls. He goes with her, and is taken to an estate home.

        • When he arrives at the estate, he goes inside to find Leta literally "giant" (7'2"). "Don't worry, it's still me, Leta." She explains that she calculated the human race will have a 45% better chance of accepting her as an emissary of the aliens with this appearance. She does something like childish-Leta, to humanize herself. He asks about the house, and she explains it's hers, she bought it with licensing royalties for her new inventions. She bends down to kiss him, and he awkwardly backs away. She's half surprised, half irked, but just plays it off with humor.

        • "It's okay if you need a little time to warm up to the new me." There is a knock on the door (the press is here) "Of course. Connor, I have a speech to give, would you like to join me?" He hesitantly agrees, and they hold hands walking towards the front of the house. Conner feels awkward waling next to a girl who's shoulder is above his eyeline. At the door, she faces him and bends down, "Would you like to be on TV? All you have to do is stand-straight and look as regal as you can." (sure, i guess?) She takes him out front and addresses the press. We get to hear her speech 'to the human race'. Conner is totally shocked by the whole whirlwind.

        • She closes her speech, and dismisses the press, leaving with Conner back inside. Her "staff" blocks off the press.

      • Conner is in disbelief

        • Inside, she briefly addresses him. "you did well. I'm sure that was alot to take in. Come, let's get away from all that for a while." She hurries him back into a private family room, sitting herself on the corner of a large sectional couch. Conner is taken aback by the "scene" of her sprawled out and making the couch look tiny. She waves him closer, "come on Conner, it's me, I don't bite."

        • Conner stammers as he walks closer, "I know, it's just that I can't believe this is really you." He stops in front of the couch, giving her sprawled out form yet another once-over. "You're giant!

      • --- [ which leads to a conversation about how she's different and how she's the same.. which allows her to flaunt her physical size and strength differences. ]

      • Her face winces into a playfully wry smile, "Giant!? You really know what a girl likes to hear," and she pokes him gently in the belly for effect. "Seriously though, it's still the same me, Conner. I still like to put carmel corn on my ice-cream, I still like to curl up and laugh at a good horror film, and I still think that your cowlick is cute." She playfully flicked as his hair before pulling at his shoulder. It seemed like a gentle gesture, but Conner felt tossed like a ragdoll. He instinctively caught his fall by kneeling on the cushion and reaching for the couch-back, nearly crashing onto her. "Awww, " her face winced briefly in disapproval. "I guess some parts of this are a little unbelievable. Like how much you seem to be avoiding me." She shifted her body, sinking down into the couch and looking up at him in a playful way.

        • Conner quickly defended himself, "I'm not avoiding you! It's just, well, this is alot to take in, and then that *speech*!" He forced some of his barriers down, straddling her and trying to relax. It was weirdly the same yet different, looking down at the same beautiful Lexi, only oversize -- like someone pushed the 130% button on a human copy machine.

        • "Aww. I thought you would have fun with the changes. You certainly did last week!" She smiled as she chided him, then teasingly glanced down at her own chest. Memory flashed into Conner's mind, and he still wondered if he'd dreamed it. One moment she had been teasing him, the next her breasts had grown larger right in front of him. It was too surreal to believe. Just like her current seven-foot-tall self. She layed a hand across her tummy, and started to suggestively tug at her shirt.

      • "Be honest, haven't you always dreamed of a girl with big, huge, giant..... brains!?!" Her opposite hand poked him in the side as she started laughing. He'd been watching her suggestive tease, so her turnabout was quite a shock. She continued her mockery, exaggerated by the deliberately sexy tone in her voice. "Doesn't it turn you on that I can ... lick.. global warming." She arched her back, stretching her arms up over her head, the physical motion a mimicry of her verbal self praise. Then her hips rose, lifting him with surprising ease, and causing him to grip the couch for balance. "Or maybe you just want a better look at my body ... of patents." She laughed, then her abs began rhythmically rising and curling in a way that seemed like an exercise routine turned into a sexy ride.

      • She was still gyrating his weight like it was no effort at all. He might have objected to the mockery, if not for how her sexy voice and playful motions seemed to be building towards something. That's when he noticed it. Her top began stretching tight against her skin. "However, before things are under control, we're going to see another big *expansion*." His eyes went wide as, in a matter of seconds, her breasts doubled in size and started to jostle with her movements. "In fact, I'm going to need another set of hands on the situation." Conner realized his face was winced in shock and tried to relax as she settled her body back onto the couch. Her breasts now perched on her chest like two inviting mounds of sexy fun.

      • ... ????

where is this going?

    • the alien needs to talk to conner again

    • maybe she should get taller slower (first 6'2" ?)

    • maybe she's "tormented" by her teen hormones... maybe her growth is a bit un-controlled when she gets turned on