what Asha wants - outline
story
inspired by Deepest Desires - https://giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=119026
short (5'3") and inhibited girl with a "nice guy" boyfriend (5'9")...
somehow she gets a ring "with a mind of its own" that serves her wishes, even as it makes her serve it.
the more it happens, the less she questions it, and the more she takes advantage of it.
characters
Asha - 20 - indian, short (5'3"), long brown curly hair, cute and a little busy
chip on her shoulder about being short, not very comfortable with her body -- more sweet, unassuming, surprised
w/ring, unassumingly pleased at how people are 'doing what she wishes' (until it gets out of hand)
5'3" -> 6'2" (initial) -> 6'4" (volleyball) ->
Mark - 21 - short (5'9"), hunky (wrestler), Asha's best-friend, but with Rachel
Asha's friends
todo
add an early occurrence of object teleportation
acts
1 - intro the situation, effects
? Asha makes Mark immune to her desires, and 'always her trusted friend'
2 - introduce conflict ... ?
Asha is tired of being told "no" - snaps, starts to take what she wants
grows the vollyball team
grows her friends
reverses the dynamic with Mark (treats him like a plaything)
Asha finally gets to steal away her crush (Mark) from sexy Rachel, using the ring
3 - ending
Asha crushes/kills Rachel (jealousy)
Asha makes herself
situations
Rachel firming/growing/teasing/pleasing Mark
how? -> asha gets mad at Mark (why?) - Rachel swoops in
Asha grows the vollyball team
Asha takes over a sorority house (the nicest one on campus (tri-delt?)
... intro plan
paint a picture of few month old college couple with a cute, short, and inhibited girl Asha, and a sweet boy Mark
show her friend Rachel being too-hot-to-handle for Mark...
show Asha is frustrated at being short, even though Mark obviously doesn't mind (being short himself)
.... more backstory, including Asha's car always having trouble
somehow Asha gets a ring "with a mind of its own" that serves her, even as it makes her serve it
ring starts by solving her 'problems' for her (her paper is mysteriously already written, her car issue is mysteriously fixed, her lazy/slacking/bitchy roommate is nice)
moves on to smoothing over her anxiety about getting physical with her b/f. (it makes her more attractive, makes him tell her how into her he is - but also how he's in no hurry)
intro
"incident"
while the two are sitting in a public place (campus green?), they notice a tall sexy girl who is "impossible not to notice". the attention the woman gets from Mark frustrates Asha , and she lashes with jealousy -- he diffuses by saying she's tool tall for him anyway.
Still, seeing the woman ignites her frustration about being short -- she vocalizes the frustration, she wants to be the tall hot one (so people would check her out, so she'd look thin, so dresses would fit her)... as she rants, the ring transforms her shockingly taller (6'2"), taller than Mark even.
Asha finally notices Mark looking at her funny. He tries to explain what he's seeing without sounding crazy. Which mostly fails. She eventually insists he's crazy and stands up. When he stands up to her, dwarfed by five inches, she's shocked, looks for the source of a trick, and finally starts to feel faint, leaning on him and then sitting back down on the bench. They chat for a moment about how this "can't be happening. this doesn't just happen."
Someone she knows walks up, says hello, then quickly apologizes for mistaking her for Asha , who she obviously can't be. Asha tries to insist she is herself, but her friend thinks it's a relative (Asha's hot cousin or something) Mark is playing a joke on her. Eventually her friend walks off, and Asha/Mark conclude they should probably get out of there and figure out what is going on. On the way out, she's enamored with how people are checking her out (just like she wished), and already feeling more confident about herself.
At Asha's place, Mark starts talking about what they should do... (See a doctor?) She's not concerned about her health, or how it happened. she's busy making height comparisons, to kitchen cabinets, the refrigerator, the bar, the door, and then Mark. When she starts comparing her height to his, he's flustered that she isn't more concerned. All she's ever wanted was to be tall, so she doesn't care if it's a dream, or hallucination, or what, she's going to enjoy it. She steps away and asks him what he really thinks of the changes (does he like her long legs, does she look thinner, hotter), unknowingly the ring coerces him when she asks him to "be honest". he gushes a little, and she ends up seducing him. she's floored by how good it feels to be sexy, so she seduces him into intimacy (her/their first time).
she's afraid of how her friends will react. how to explain it. they brainstorm a story about a medical condition, but admit it makes no sense it would happen "overnight"... something magically "comes up" that keeps her away from her friends for a few days. (she starts sneezing, and suddenly has the flu, doesn't feel so well. spends a few days in bed.)
After the flu, the first friend she meets up mysteriously already knows "she had a rare hormonal surge that caused the change". It surprises her and Mark that they accept it so easily. Yet friend after friend is the same story, they just accept it. A few more 'strange events' from the ring .. (barista handing her a particular coffee on-the-house without her ordering, professor offering her notes and a take-home test on account of her metabolic condition)
in private, she no longer feels self-conscious, and kinda wants to jump him... but she thinks it's not "her", so she just makes some moves (making out, putting his hand up her shirt) and then stops, saying she like it, but she still wants to take things slow
They have a "date night" to see a movie, with more strange coincidences (traffic lights in their favor, theatre-projector breaking on the action-film her b/f wanted to see, so they have to see the date-movie she wanted) Her b/f is starting to notice the strange pattern of coincidence around her. Tries to mention it in the theatre, but she just flirts him off the subject. / Back at his place, his normally messy room is mysteriously clean -- she thanks him for it, because she hates his normal mess. He points out the strange coincidence, he didn't clean his room. That isn't been happening every since that day she just 'got tall') -- (she gives him trouble for complaining about her height and hotness) He insists he's not talking about that. Monologues about several coincidences. She's not interested in wondering why. She's glad things are going her way, and he shouldn't be complaining because things are going his way too. She proceeds to undress, and seduce him. First kissing and fondling her, then a hand-job making a mess in his underwear. when he comes back from cleanup, she's naked, and encourages him to kiss her body, pressing him down until he's giving her oral.
In the light of day, her b/f hasn't let go and is instead obsessing over these 'coincidences'.... she gets a box of promotional clothes in the mail which just happen to fit her, walk signals turn on right as she reaches the street. cash register is broken so they don't have to pay for lunch. -- her b/f tries to point it out, "isn't that weird?" she flirts with him, how she didn't notice because she's too busy thinking about what he did to her last night, and when he can do it again.. which she gets sour about because she remembers tonight is his 'study night' / one of her girlfriends shows up, and she decides she wants to talk to her privately. "don't you have a class you have to be in?" he suddenly realizes he does, and runs off. (another coincidence)
after a very brief smalltalk, Asha starts an overly frank discussion with her girlfriend about intimacy. oral vs sex. how long she should wait to have sex with her b/f. some discussion of why she doesn't get a hotter boyfriend. (xyz is her b/f, and he makes her scream in bed, why would she get another?) she pins her friend into admitting that Asha is now so smoking hot she could practically have any guy.
that night she's at home, flipping through websites for club-wear, imagining how good her new body would look in some of the outfits, excited about it. it gets her kind of wet, and she starts touching herself, when suddenly the doorbell rings.
It's her b/f at the door, because she texted she "really needed printer paper", which she doesn't remember doing. she distracts him, asking him to come and weigh in on her outfit shopping choices. he protests, that he has too much homework to do to screw around. she asked him to show it to her. He pulls it out, and it's mysteriously done, which he doesn't remember doing.
she pulls him towards the bedroom, and the two outfits she was looking at online are laid out on her bed. Without showing surprise or missing a beat, she does a 'fashion show' encouraging him to be 'brutally honest' about what he thinks of the outfits... causing some comically candid observations about which outfit he prefers and why. / She declares they are going out dancing. He softly protests, he's not really a bar-goer, he's also not dressed. she encourages him. he'll have fun. besides, he looks like all the other guys who go out, and everyone will be looking at her anyway.
Later, at the club, she's getting lots of attention for standing 6'5" in her 3" heels (now 7" taller than him, the top of his head at her lips), and for an outfit which leaves little to the imagination. At first she's practically making out with him on the dance floor. Then she notices some of her girlfriends chatting up some guys. She drags her b/f over to them. The guys all starts focusing on her, instead of her girlfriends, which annoys them. she kind flirts and toys with the boys, flaunting that she does plan for someone to have their hands all over her naked body tonight, but that 'someone' is her b/f here.
By the time the guys give up on her, her girlfriends have all wandered off. she comments about it, and her b/f clues her in, that she's a bit too much competition. she's a little dense, so he has to explain it in painful detail for her to get it. That she just stole all the guys who were hitting on her girlfriends. she was just being herself, and is annoyed at the problem. "well. I guess I just need hotter friends."
she drags him over to where her girlfriends gathered, and does a little monologue. (that her b/f clued her in, and she apologizes) they all gush in friendship, how they know she didn't mean it. they understand. -- Meanwhile, Mark notices they are all getting slightly taller and hotter, until they all stand taller than Mark, who is totally shocked. One of the girls who was previously a couple inches shorter than him gives him a strange look eye-to-eye. He tries to get Asha's attention away from her love-in with her friends, and eventually pulls her "to the dance floor", pointing out what just happened - that this has gone way beyond 'coincidences'. she looks over, doubtful, and comments that at least the boys from before are back talking to them. he insists they ("should get out of there.") she flirtingly admits that's something can agree on.
--
at home, we catch the tail end of the marathon 'him pleasuring her orally' session.. after-which she fondles him checking to see if he needed another handjob (no, looks like three tired him out)
In the silence, his mind drifts back to the elephant in the room, her girlfriends suddenly becoming taller and hotter, just like happened to her. what is going on? (she *finally* caves, admits that she's not blind. sometimes things she wants to happen just seem to happen. she recounts some small odd but noticeable events where she wanted things, and they just happened (like him coming over that night, and his homework being done). and what happened to her girlfriends...so maybe something did happen to them. she wanted hotter friends, and those are her friends, so now they are hotter. )
He is a bit surprised she's taking this so casually. (Doesn't that seem a little weird to you, that you want something and it just happens? it's friggin crazy! I feel like I'm going crazy just watching it happen.) "Ohh, sure, it's weird, but it's also awesome. I wanted a latte, I got one. I've wanted to be taller all my life. Now I am. What's so wrong with that? Though I still haven't figured out what to tell my parents."
(You're parents? This could be the most remarkable thing that has ever happened, to anyone, and you're thinking about your parents? Have you tried experimenting with it? Wish for something. Wish for *me* to be taller.) "hah, of course you would wish for that. It doesn't work that way. I tried. Whatever is going on doesn't take requests. It seems to pick random things I want, and right now I'm pretty sated. After all, you did just give me seven wonderful orgasms." She playfully kisses him in appreciation, which occupies him for a minute.
He comes out of the kiss with renewed determination. "Wait. how come it didn't affect me? You wanted hotter friends, but it only affected your girlfriends. Are we not friends?" she put on a sour look and reached for her underwear, slipping it back on, only making her look even more sexy. he took the hint, and slipped his boxers back on before sitting next to her in an all-too serious posture.
"You're my *boy* friend. Plus, I like you the way you are. Being taller than you makes me feel more confident, which you have obviously been the benefactor of, have you not?" Her lips wrinkled into a sly grin at her reference to their dramatically increased intimacy. "Then there is the little matter of your mysteriously completed homework. You're welcome!" she playfully poked him. "Now, if you're done playing Sherlock Holmes, it's time to brush our teeth and get some sleep before the sun comes up."
The next day Asha's girlfriends all call for a meet-up on campus. They don't exactly remember what happened that night, but they know the changes happened. They wonder if it's the same hormone disease that hit her, and if it's contagious. Asha makes up a story about how it's not contagious, but they might have all been exposed to the same source. She says she'll talk to her doctor about it, but recommends they don't worry, just enjoy it like she has. They agree not to tell anyone (just them and Mark know about it). They talk about the hot men they were making out with. A guy comes up, and pays attention to one of her girlfriends, instead of Asha, which she's pleased about.
Asha breaks off, and visits a professor... flirts and gets more preferential treatment (though it's really the ring)
While walking back, she has to pee, rushes into a nearby building, and finds herself in the sports-center. She chuckles about how she's always wanted to play vollyball, and wanders by a practice session. minutes later the women's vollyball coach is introducing herself (i don't know you, so you must not be on scholarship. you come by to play?).... turns out their star forward just injured her ankle, so there is a big opening on the team. she agrees to show up for practice tryouts that afternoon. on the way out she awkwardly stumbles on the stairs. Notes to herself that she better not be a clutz on the court.
One of Asha's girlfriends (Vikki) is in one of Mark's classes, and corners him afterwords.
Vikki used to be three inches shorter (5'6"), but now she's an inch taller (5'10"). She talks about what happened, and how weird it is, calling herself "about the same height as him" even though she's clearly an inch taller. After making some specific comparisons, she starts empathizing about how it must be really different for him too. She saw them dancing, and sympathizes how she thought it was kind of rude for Asha to be wearing heels.
The tall (6'2") guy Vikki met at the bar notices her, and strolls over, at which point Mark gets a closeup view of a little too much PDA before he wanders off to his next class.
Mark says goodbye to some guys after drinks in the evening. he texts Asha asking to meet up, turns a corner, gets a text to look-up. Sees her sitting at an outdoor table a few feet away from him.
he sits with her, commenting that it's really getting 'spooky'. She's becoming a bit overconfident about it, and comments that she knows he loves it. The waitress comes, and before he can order a drink, she's setting down drinks in front of them. He asks for a menu, but she says their food will be out in just a few minutes. "like that. how did you do that? order a drink to show up minutes after I turned the corner." (you know how. the same way I made the women's vollyball team this afternoon.)
what? you did? congrats! I didn't know you wanted to play vollyball. (That's because I couldn't, at least until today. Now I'm suddenly very good at it, and they had an opening. My classes haven't been taking up much time, so I need something to keep me busy while you're unavailable." She laughed, took a drink. "I figured you'd enjoy coming to the games."
"Alright, I guess I can get into that." The waitress interrupted, dropping by the meals they'd never ordered. "At least you won't be the tallest one around anymore." As he took a bite of his burger, she had a funny look on her face.
"About that. When they took my vitals for the roster, I came in at six foot four. I made them measure twice." Mark was shocked, and felt a growing unease in his stomach. With a critical eye, he suspected her stature was different, even just sitting across from her.
"Asha ! Seriously? How are you going to explain that? Don't you think this is getting a little out of hand?" She set her burger down, chewing slowly, as if to demonstrate she wasn't going to be drawn into his alarm. She calmly took a sip of beer to clear her throat.
"First, it's not like I asked for it. I just wanted to play vollyball, and there I was, two inches taller and down a cupsize. Second, great things are happening for me, and I like it. I don't need or want to explain it. Lastly, I don't expect that tone from you. I expect you to be supportive, that is if you still want to be my boyfriend. Do you still want to be my boyfriend?" She picked up her burger, taking another slow bite, as if she hadn't just made a near ultimatum.
Mark looked across, part of him attracted to her more than he'd ever been, but another part of him almost afraid of her. Afraid of her growing confidence, and whatever was causing these things to happen around her. "Yes. Yes, I still want to be your boyfriend. I just worry. We have no idea how or why this is happening. What if you want something dangerous, and happens?" He took a bite of his burger, trying not to think about the possible consequences.
Asha shrugged her head, "why would I want something dangerous? That's ridiculous. I'm a good person, Mark. Besides, what would you have me do? Go into a hospital and tell them what's been happening? They would put me in a psyche ward. Believe me, I've thought it through. For now, we're keeping this quiet. It's our little secret."
As her words sank in, they each took bites of their meals. In the silence, she felt a distance between them she didn't want. "Mark, I do appreciate your concern. If something bad or dangerous starts to happen, I expect you to tell me right away. In the meantime, can you please just enjoy dating the newest member of the vollyball team? Just think, you'll have an excuse to visit practice and watch us all jump around in sports bras." She brushed her leg against his under the table.
"Alright, alright. With that, I should probably go finish my homework." He waved the waitress down as she walked by. "Can we have the check please?"
"Excuse me? You already paid it, and thanks for the generous tip. Did you want to order something else?" Mark shook his head.
"No, no thanks. I just forgot." The waitress cheerily sped away as he looked at Asha with a bit of an evil eye. "I suppose I don't have homework to do anymore either?"
"I dunno. Do you want homework to do? I don't want you to have homework to do. I can think of *much* better things for us to do tonight." Mark opened his bag, and sure enough hours of assignments were already completed in his hand.
vollyball game (her second?)
the free ticket Mark has is seated with Asha's girlfriends (and Vikki's new boyfriend). He's pretty surprised to see Rachel's changes in the light of day.
Rachel's hello hug is distractingly physical (6' and busty). She takes charge, and seats Mark in the middle, between her and Vikki. Rachel proceeds to flirt/tease with Mark. (ironic, isn't it? you turned me down because I was too tall, and suddenly your girl is the tallest girl in school. It must be really different between you two now.) Yeah, you don't know the half of it. Though mostly things are different in a good way. (Look! There she goes now.) Asha makes a play at the net, and the crowd stands and cheers. Mark feels dwarfed by Rachel and her boobs.
As they sit back down, Rachel resumes her banter. (I guess Asha has some moves after-all. Speaking of which, I hear she finally let you off first base.) Mark is a little shocked, and doesn't know what to say. He looks over at Vikki, who is knee deep in PDA with her guy.
observations: Asha's 'amazing' game winning plays... how good she looks in sports-gear.
... bar after vollyball
they all head out for drinks.
when Asha arrives with a 6'2" teammate, she greets Mark with her 6'4" stature (7"). Asha introduces her teammate to Vikki, Rachel, and Mark. Her teammate accidentally voices her susprise at Mark's height. Asha defends him, "he's not short, he's just right." Asha hugs him into her, "besides, it's the talent that counts. Honey, what do you say we demonstrate some of it out on the dance floor?" Asha drags him out.
On the dance floor, Mark asks her how the game was. She explains a good play is such a rush. how she loves being the tallest one out there. Then she seductively dances, grinds, and makes-out with Mark. After a kiss, Mark thanks her for not wearing heels. She whisper teases him about it, "aww Mark, that just makes me wish I did. Then I'd be so tall I'd have to bend down to kiss you." As she said it, he felt her changing. Her hips and shoulders rising, her chest lifting into his view until he was looking right at it. He looked up to see her smirking back, "see? looks like my mysterious hormone dysfunction just kicked in. isn't that sexy?" She leaned down, planting a short wet one on him before standing back up to her shocking new 6'8" height.
"Asha !" Already the dancefloor was parting around them, people staring up in awe at Asha. She looked around, most of the dance floor filled with people notably shorter than her shoulders.
???
how do we add Mark/Asha intimacy?