power of suggestion outline

    • Characters

      • ted - british 18 year old high school senior

      • celine - 18yo gorgeous cheerleader looking girl (who is actually an illusion), and who is scorned by the popular kids at a new school

      • vanessa - her "alter ego" enhanced form for ted (shocked orange/blonde hair, busty)

        • http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/187/1/d/alpha_by_ariane_saint_amour-d3l8xzv.jpg

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    • Premise

      • a mutant girl with the power to project illusions still doesn't "fit in" with the popular girls, but she befriends a boy

      • alternate: when Celine, the most popular girl in school, takes an interest in Ted... he's excited. until he learns she's a manipulative illusionist

    • Story

      • Act 1 - Intro

      • new "gorgeous girl" moves into high-school (senior) who looks like she should head the cheerleader squad is somehow "shunned" by the popular kids (her negative attitude shows)

      • this leaves her an outcast.. tossed aside by the popular kids, too cute for the nerds

        • a "brain" with a british accent befriends her as a curiosity, they get along,

        • eventually he confesses to 'researching' her, where she came from, her old school, etc. she reveals her secret.... her appearance is an illusion

        • he's shocked that, given she can create any illusion she wants, she is imitating the boring high school cheerleader chicks

        • "what would you have me do?" (she doesn't explain she has an addiction problem with making illusions)

      • he feeds her "simple" ideas, from mundane to dramatic .. they all seem innocuous, so she decides they are okay (i can do them)

        • they pull some pranks to humiliate the popular girls (giant zit) then to scare them (fake bloody finger in the locker)

        • they meet after school and are brainstorming he comes up with an illusion to steal money (from a 7-11)

        • after one of the pranks, she's super excited, having fun with someone for the first time, things get unexpectedly playful and flirty, she kisses him

          • he's perplexed more than anything.. "are you attracted to me?" ... she jokes "i can make you look like whatever i want, remember?"

          • she projects him into an illusion of a hot tv-star, and he's surprised when his voice comes out like the star too... she has to explain that it isn't just a visual illusion, it's mental projection. she plays some "old tricks", making it seem like she instantly teleported from place to place in the room several times (while telling him what she likes about him). then stops her games to kiss him.

          • "are you attracted to me?" -- (you're very attractive) "that's not what I asked. I guess I knew this was a bit too bubblegum and blonde to float your boat. how about this?" her hair becomes brunette with glasses, and her clothes become more conservative, making her a more serious/adult version of herself. then she projects a of a whole outdoor scene of her swinging a croquet mallet and talks with a British accent. then she smiles and has terrible teeth, makes a joke about British bad teeth.

          • he voices some cerebral and lame words of restraint...

          • then he feels himself pushed, and a more normal (but still brunette) version of her falls pressed him against a wall as the croquet illusion disappears. "look. I may not know how to get the 'in' girls to like me, but I assure you I can seduce anyone, including you. I've seen enough pinups to know what teen boys are looking for."

          • with that, her hair becomes hip shades of orange and blonde, and her chests begins to visibly swell, increasingly showing the top of two swelling breasts down the neckline of her button shirt. she started opening buttons to make room, and soon they were undone down to her bra-strap, with huge tits bursting out of the middle. "go ahead, every boy wants to play with a pair like these."

            • inspiration :

              • http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/187/1/d/alpha_by_ariane_saint_amour-d3l8xzv.jpg

              • http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/200/4/3/busting_out_by_ariane_saint_amour-d6e6z8y.jpg

            • http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/117/f/f/2011_04_27_by_ariane_saint_amour-d3f1l7m.jpg

              • http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2011/079/3/9/2011_03_20_by_ariane_saint_amour-d3c3ovw.jpg

          • he voices some lame objection about how this "isn't her"

          • 'are you gay? I guess I could be a man if you are in to that kind of thing." (dramatic pause) "totally kidding. look. i know you're stalling because your'e a virgin. Trust me, you're not going to care about that in a moment. I have a confession to make. I did a little research about you too. I stole your password, fished around in your browsing history. I know you're looking for *much* more in a woman, arn't you?"

          • With that her body surged shockingly taller. "In a way it's like fate really. You're attracted to something that doesn't exist, and my entire existence is all in your mind." her eyes rose to even with his as she leaned in for a kiss. when they finished, she stood several inches taller than him. "this is what you're attracted to isn't it? not just a tall girl, but a phantasm, a mythical amazon. let's call her Celine."

          • (she teases 'down' to him, rubs his face in her tits, continues his fantasy scene. then stops him, tells him he can play with her all he wants, if he just admits he's attracted to her, but he better make it good.)

          • he can't resist. he starts describing how turned on his is by her body in his 'cerebral' language. as he does she 'plays the part', enhancing it further, handling him, getting him off.

          • afterwords she shrinks returns to her typical self (but keeps the shocked hair)

        • dark side revealed

          • --- this is when we find out why she's transferred between so many schools

            • her controlling and inappropriate illusions get out of hand, eventually resulting in others finding out about her (And thinking her a freak)

          • she confesses her "problem"... how making illusions kind of gets her 'drunk' and things get out of hand... so now she just does her appearance

          • she is scantily clad and way-too-sexy for school. he comments about it. she explains that it's just for him. everyone else is seeing mild mannered "Jenette", for you, i'm "Celine". i want you to spend the day thinking about getting me alone.

          • she instantly treats him like her boyfriend-in-tow at school. not even giving him a chance to decide.

          • ?? when the jocks start to make fun of him, she bolsters her appearance just enough for them to notice, and flaunts on him.

        • after school, she wants a partner in crime for more illusion theft. he tries to talk her out of it (that was an experiment, not a profession!)

          • she 'teases' him into it (if you won't do it for me, maybe you'll do it for Celine.) her body changes without becoming outrageously tall. she kisses and seduces him. they do the robbery illusion again.

          • at home he tries to protest the robbery, but she just goes into seduction mode -- talks about how hot it makes her. 'so hot i feel like these clothes hardly fit me', she says tongue-in-cheek as she starts to explode out of them.

          • ---

          • another day, they have a small disagreement at school (about whether she can come over to a gathering at his guy-friend's house). she uses an inappropriate illusion which only he can see to turn him on (becomes busty, scantily clad, nearly nude), threatens that he's going to have a pretty visible stiffy if he's not careful. levers him into saying she can come.

          • ---

          • when they reach the door at his friend's place, she suddenly looks sexier and bustier than she did earlier. "what? you want your friend's to be impressed don't you?"

          • at the house she's meddlesome with the boys. flirting with all of them in a semi-inappropriate way.

            • they are playing a game, and she 'upps the ante' with her illusions

          • --

          • (she needs to do something 'abusive' with him through her illusions. they need to be endless. she can't stop herself)

      • (random scene)

        • she doesn't want him to go home. so she makes herself ravishingly hot. then minigts big.

      • (random scene)

        • she pokes fun at him for staring at her enhanced bustline, and how boys have no control.

        • he claims he has control, he just decided to look.

        • she challenges him on that. "you check out girls all the time. i bet you can't avoid checking out tits for even a whole hour"

        • he takes her up on the bet. she plays dirty, using her illusion to bust-enhance the starbucks girl, making it impossible for him not to look... the woman says something because his staring is making her uncomfortable. he apologizes

        • he scolds her for playing dirty, not fair at all. "ohh life around me is not fair." as she bust-enhances herself.

      • Act 2 - knowing her is a curse

        • her illusions become more and more abusive.. she always gets her way, no matter how petty or small.

          • which movie they will watch. him doing her homework.

          • starts with innocent tricks (bad grade, hot teacher hitting on him)

          • then to hanky panky (illusion sex in class, makes his father see an illusion of his mother to let him "sleep over" at her house while her parents are away)

          • moves up to manipulation (seduction to change the subject, make him feel naked to force him out of a public room,

        • she confesses she is illusion addicted, explains why through demonstration.. how high it makes her to command the attention and mental image of others

        • however, her illusions are more and more abusive, trapping, controlling, and ultimately making him a prisoner of her mind

      • Act 3-

    • ALTERNATE "power of suggestion" -

      • girl has the power to control hallucination / perceived reality (but only for one person at a time?)

      • she gets a crush on a guy at school, cant help but use her power to get his attention

      • becomes a funny paradox.. nobody knows why he's into the fat chick, but he sees her as a beautiful hot girl

      • 'in your face' dialog where his friend's want to know why he's dating the fat-chick, which gets weird when he insists she isn't fat.

      • dialog with her about how he doesn't get why folks rag on her, she just always changes the subject

      • situations where she constantly tries to keep her physical distance, to avoid shattering the illusion

      • finally she feels guilty doing it to him (and he's pushing for contact which is going to reveal her. she 'confesses'. he doesn't believe her. she refuses to show him the real her, because he's the only one who looks at her with desire and doesn't want to lose that. still, if what she's saying is true, it would be easy to show him 'something'.

        • she projects a different outfit, and changes her hair color... which floors him

        • she makes a fake object and tosses it to him. she's astonished when he catches it. "you can feel that?" (yes)

        • she gets excited, grabs for his hand, only to realize a few moments she hasn't moved at all.. only her projected self is holding his hand.

        • they kiss / embrace

      • he decides to 'go with it', accepting he's the only one who gets to see her like this

      • as a result, she starts to open-up and explore her capability with him.. starting with simple tricks (what's she's wearing, minor appearance changes), moving on to environment changes (the beach)

      • during their banter of her goading him to design the evening's halicunation, he gives a big disclaimer, and then sheepishly asks for what he's wanted all along, his amazon/minigts fantasy. she acts stunned, slackjawed, like that's way outside the bounds. she'll have to think about it.