Yorokobi - outline

    • Background

      • inspired by ToyToy

      • A wealthy brilliant computer programmer (Xavier) has spent the last month trying to change the world (again) by inventing AI, at home, in his home service android. His super hot girlfriend is feeling neglected, and distracts him just as his AI starts to become aware. His life, and the world, will never be the same.

    • Characters

      • Xavier Cloud- 36 y/o wealthy geeky techie

      • "Bela" - Belinda Wright- 29 y/o - Xavier's 2 year "trophy" girlfriend. fitness obsessed. heavily "enhanced figure" makes her money running a streaming channel of herself. spanish descent, big lips, big eyelashes.

      • "SheDroid" - an android that becomes sentient when Xavier perfects his nanobots

        • original a "domestic assistant with sexual enhancements"

      • other:

    • story arc

      • ch 1 - xavier invents nanobot computing system. robot wakes up.

      • ch 2 - we learn about bela's sexiness and manipulation. robot watches.

      • ch 3 - ???

        • need:

          • a new environment.. or readers will go crazy in this room

          • a new character... or readers will go crazy

      • ideas:

          • open with Bela freaking out about Yori standing over them...

            • when Xavier asks what she's doing, she explains that she's watching him sleep

          • demonstrate Yori's much more fluid movement and conversation

          • Xavier is excited and blown away... "it worked!" ... Bela is annoyed "does that mean we can take our vacation now?"

          • "absolutely not! I need to see what she's capable of!"

            • how does he test her?

              • motor skills? catch? balance?

              • asking her to explain concepts a robot wouldn't understand.

              • asking her what she is.

          • (review ex-machina)

        • Establish Yori's ability to detect his heartrate/pulse/flush and estimate truth/lie

        • Demonstrate her superior strength and slightly disregard for it's significance

          • After we get through Yori's increasing intelligence and sense of self

            • Yori asks factual questions about if she would like him to tease/edge him, explaining her research, and her mathematical confidence in her ability to create a pleasure sequence lasting several hours.. while advancing on him

            • he rebuffs her, and she comments about the logical inconsistency... he wants pleasure, his girlfriend fails to give him pleasure, she offers him pleasure, yet he refuses... "explain, please"

            • he rambles about how pleasure is more than just physical, couples have to be attracted to one another, care about eachother, have a relationship

            • she goes "factual" on him. "are you not attracted to me?" it's not that, it's just... "you're lying, are you more attracted to your girlfriend?" no, i mean, it doesn't matter. "another . why do you evade when my purpose is to understand and serve you?"

Here is my original outline... though you don't need to bother reading it... it's probably too jumbled and irrelevant...

    • trying to integrate decentralized neural programming into his new nanobot design. He's testing them in his home service android.

        • His super hot girlfriend breaks up with for missing yet another date of theirs for his science project.

        • The nanobots wake up, and in just minutes, his droid becomes sentient at a basic level. she starts asking him simpleton questions (what am i? why am i aware? what am i for?) when he confesses that she was primarily a sex robot, she instantly digests all the information about sex, and sex robots. (was i here for you to have sex with?do you prefer women to be dominant or submissive when having sex?) he's stumbling over the questions, trying to dodge them, but she's persistent, and badgers him for answers. ( that woman in the picture, are you attracted to her physical characteristics?) he is, but truth be told he prefers women taller than he is. (please wait. researching. researching. making modifications.) some alerts on the monitor show the nanites are swarming, and he rushes to check. when he turns back, she's physically transformed into a gorgeous amazon, and she's easily 6'5" tall.

        • as he's experiencing shock over her change in appearance, she's spitting out robotic phrases.. "researching. assimilating. adjusting personality matrix. simulating physical movements. etc..etc... complete."

        • suddenly, her demeanor changes, and she's quite flirty and playful, trying to seduce him... he tries to resist, explain what he's doing here.. but she's a bit oblivious, "do you not find me attractive? based on the photo, i created this body to have a 97.2% chance of being your ideal mate." / "no no. it's not that. it's just, my work isn't done here." / "you're work can wait." she cuddles up close to him

    • basic outline

      • Xavier is ultra-wealthy, having invented the first practical carbon based self-replicating nano-bots. He's now obsessed, trying to integrated a new idea for decentralized fault tolorant neural networks into a nanobot swarm.

      • His super hot (gold digger) girlfriend is getting bored with his work-all-the-time behavior. on the night before his discovery, she tries to lure him to be with seduction, and fails when the computer reports a semi-interesting result..

        • Bela scolds him for being more interested in his "metal dildo" than her. he briefly explains that he's not working on her, he's working on a (self assembling concensus driven nanobot communication protocol, to bring rise to machine sentience)... which is just a bunch of technobabble to her.

        • this is the last straw for her commitment to him. (but she doesn't break up with him, because he's rich, and she likes mooching off him)

      • in the morning, he still hasn't cracked it. which Belinda laughs at. when she leaves, she casually declares she feels like driving, so she's going to borrow the ferrari. (which he doesn't even respond to)... she wonders if wrecking his $14M vintage car will get his head out of his project.

      • shortly after Belinda leaves, something happens...

        • The nanobots finally self-assemble, and in just minutes, his droid becomes sentient at a basic level.

        • she starts asking him simpleton questions (what am i? why am i aware? what am i for?)

        • when he explains what she is (a domestic service robot), she goes "researching", and finds out she's a model-5627 domestic service robot with emotion emulation and sexual function capabilities.... "what does sexual function mean?"

        • he dodges the question.. but she needs more information... "researching...." and comes back with a monotone monologue about sexual service robots... "you are my registered owner. was i here to have sex with you?" / he stumbles over his answers... "no", "well, yes i've used those features, but no, that's not why you're here. i have a girlfriend now."

        • the android goes "researching..." and spits out a bunch of facts... "Girlfriend Belinda Wright. 29 years old. five foot nine. 135 lbs. social streaming channel personality specializing in... straight males and homosexual females 16 to 45 who want to watch her surgically over-sexualized body dimensions while she does unoriginal fitness routines and offers feminine advice to viewers who harbor a hope that somehow she'll think they're special and have sex with them."

          • Xavier is blown away.... and admits that's his girlfriend

        • she instantly digests all the information about sex, and sex robots. (was i here for you to have sex with?do you prefer women to be dominant or submissive when having sex?) he's stumbling over the questions, trying to dodge them, but she's persistent, and badgers him for answers. ( that woman in the picture, are you attracted to her physical characteristics?) he is, but truth be told he prefers women taller than he is. (please wait. researching. researching. making modifications.) some alerts on the monitor show the nanites are swarming, and he rushes to check. when he turns back, she's physically transformed into a gorgeous amazon, and she's easily 6'5" tall.

      • as he's experiencing shock over her change in appearance, she's spitting out robotic phrases.. "researching. assimilating. adjusting personality matrix. simulating physical movements. etc..etc... complete."

      • suddenly, her demeanor changes, and she's quite flirty and playful, trying to seduce him... he tries to resist, explain what he's doing here.. but she's a bit oblivious, "do you not find me attractive? based on the photo, i created this body to have a 97.2% chance of being your ideal mate." / "no no. it's not that. it's just, my work isn't done here." / "you're work can wait." she cuddles up close to him