Manicured - outline

  • Characters

    • Noah -

    • Kevin -

    • Ms. Landry (pic pic pic pic) - Their main Manicured teacher.

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    • Amelia (pic pic pic pic) - Their "sugar". -

  • Part 1 - School @ Manicured

      • In a world where women are 8-9' tall, men are sent to boarding schools to be "man-i-cured" for work as a "manertainer' (often in clubs).

        • conversation, serving a woman

        • penis etiquitte class - what a woman likes and doesn't like about a male penis - she likes getting a visible response because of her sexuality, and while brief or accidental touch is pleasurable, he should never try to get more, either by asking, or bumping or rubbing against her - however subtle he might think this seems let me assure you it's extremely obvious. She expects him to take care of his own business and the mess).

    • Part 2 - A new home

      • As Noah graduates, he expects to meet his new owner and his lifelong job, and instead is greeted by a rare "sugar" (the term they use for the minority of women who choose to privately own and provide for men - the majority prefers equal same-sex partnerships).

    • (picpic pic) Amelia is young, gentle, wealthy, and drop dead gorgeous. At first she treats him like a prised possession in their wealthy household - despite some scolding from her mother(s) at letting him get too comfortable (don't let him eat at the table, etc). She teases him and brushes his crotch to turn him on before encouraging him to take care of himself. He starts to excuse himself, but she encourages him to do it there... because she's curious... she sees the way he looks at her, and it becomes a 'thing' for her to let him masturbate while seeing her half naked teasing.

    • He becomes quite smitten, and practically worships her, which she loves.

  • Part 3 - pecking order

      • However, after the honeymoon wears off, Amelia uses her natural dominance over him for the entertainment and pleasure of her and her friends - in ways that to him seem demeaning, but to her seem completely natural. He brings it up with her, and she plays along, melodramatically faux apologizing while simultaneously teasing and manipulating him. She admits this must be what her mother meant when she insisted toys need to be reminded who the boss is - and she playfully threatens to teach him a lesson (taking him over her knee?). This begins a playful banter between them, where he suggests how she should give him freedoms and equality, and she playfully agrees while simultaneously doing just the opposite.

  • Part 4 - whipped

    • Despite appearances, this makes her very fond of him, and she actually becomes more protective - making excuses for him to get out of taunting and service to her friends. When he brings it up privately, she tries to make a joke of it, but then she breaks down and admits she feels something for him, while simultaneously getting intimately close and touching him. When she starts brushing his crotch, the sensation is overwhelming and he asks what she's doing in stuttered speech. She explains that 'mother says', this is what men dream of, but that I had to be sure I wanted to keep you before I do it. Because touching like this will make you more than just a servant but an adorant. (do you know what that means? No. -- that he'll worship her and do anything she asks).

  • Part 5 -