GiftOfTheStarsOutline

      • guy and girl see a shooting star, guy has his g/f over, goes to the bathroom and a dying alien shows up.. he has only a few minutes to find someone to pass the gift of the stars" onto, or it will be lost... it's a great honor, and also a great responsibility

        • she asks what it's for, and he tries to explain (to change virtually anything in the universe) - and she keeps asking silly naive questions (you mean like i can make myself a new car?). do I have to join a club of "people with the gift" or anything? im not into clubs. / finally, she accepts the power "okay fine. i'll take it. give it to me".. something unremarkable happens, and the alien turns to ash on the floor

      • her boyfriend comes in and notices the ash "what the hell happened here? where did this dirt come from?"

      • she tries to explain that there was this alien dude, and he kept going on about how he was dying, and he wanted to give his star power, and then I said "ok sure", and then he died and turned to ash. It's not my fault.

      • uhm. that is the most ridiculous thing i've ever heard.

      • well, that's what happened.

        • "uhm. sure. i don't understand why you would do something like this. at any rate, i'm not cleaning this up, you clean it up."

        • "i didn't do anything. you clean it up, it's your room."

        • then the "gift" speaks to her... "Lisa, would you like me to clean up the ashes of my late master?"

        • "What? Where did that voice come from?"

        • him: what voice?

        • Sora: "I am Sora, the gift of the stars. I am inside you now. Would you like me to clean up the ashes?"

        • Lisa: "Yes, please. Clean up the ashes, so my boyfriend will stop being a jerk."

        • Him: "I'm not being a jerk. I didn't dump dirt on the floor. And you're the only once else here. So how did it..." he pointed to the floor, where the ashes had been, but they were gone. "What? Where did they go. A minute ago there was dirt on the floor."

        • "You asked me to clean them up, so this chick in my head cleaned them up. She calls herself Sora."

        • "Sora? Things can't just disappear. What the hell?" He starts inspecting the floor, looking under the bed. He can't find the ashes anywhere. "Did you hypnotize me? What is going on here?"

        • "I told you, this alien dude died. Those were his ashes. He gave me some "gift of the starts" that is some great honor, some kind of magic or something, I guess. And I guess it's named Sora, and she made the ashes disappear."

        • him: "Can you hear yourself? Do you think that all sounds normal? That something named Sora is in your head and gave you magic powers? Did we take drugs? I'm fucking losing my mind. Are you losing your mind? Are we both losing our minds?"

        • lisa: "I guess I'd have a hard time believing it if it hadn't just happened to me. Sora, is there any way you can talk to my boyfriend and explain. I mean like directly?"

        • sora: "Of course, (master). Would you like me to take on physical form, or talk to him in his head?"

        • lisa: "Ooh! She says she can take on a physical form. Do that, Sora."

        • sora: "What physical form would you like me to take on?"

        • lisa: "She's asking what she should look like."

        • him: "What she should look like? This is bat shit crazy."

        • lisa: "Can you look like Jessica Alba? He totally has the hots for Jessica Alba."

        • sora: "Of course." And with that, Sora materialized into the room, wearing an elegant black dress.

        • him: "HOLY SHIT! This must be a dream. Jessica Alba just magically appeared in my bedroom."

        • sora: "I'm not Jessica Alba, I merely look like her because my (master) asked me to. I am Sora. What she has said is true. My old (master) reached the end of his life, and he passed me on to Lisa. She can now call on the gift of the stars to materialize her will, which I guess you might call 'magic'."

        • him: "No fucking way! Are you serious? You can materialize her will? Like anything?" Sora offered a tentative nod. "Can you make her look like Jessica Alba?"

        • Sora: "Of course I can, if my (master) wills it."

        • Lisa" "Shocker here, but I don't want to look like someone else."

        • Him: "Are you serious?!? If you looked like Jessica Alba, then we could kiss, and it would be like my dream come true. Come on. Just for a minute." Lisa scowled at him. "Fine. Well, can I kiss her?" He walked up closer to Sora, getting a better look at his fantasy crush. She didn't back away, or react like a human would. Which made him even more curious.

        • Lisa: "No! You can not kiss Sora! She's not even human. I don't know what she is, exactly."

        • Sora: "Technically, I am a non-concious quantum information processing system. I think you might call me an Artificial Intelligence, though I'm not Artificial, and the term Intelligence is most often associated with concious creativity, which I do not posses."

        • Him: "This is so fucking cool." He poked her. She felt completely real, but she didn't budge or react in any way. He looked at his girlfriend. "Come on. Just one kiss? She's not even real. She's some kind of AI robot or something."

        • Lisa: "Ugh. You are such a Jerk. Sora, can you kiss my boyfriend, like Jessca Alba would?"

        • Sora: "Jessica Alba would not kiss your boyfriend."

        • Lisa: "Ohh for the love of.... Sora, just kiss my damn boyfriend."

        • (they kiss, slowly, then passionately, then he starts groping her sides.

        • "Okay, enough." But they don't stop, and he starts groping her breasts. "I said enough. Sora, I want you to look like an old man, a very old man."

        • He wasn't listening, but something was very strange. The amazing breasts he was cupping in his hands didn't feel so amazing, and he felt some sort of poking on his face, and he opened his eyes to the shocking look of an ugly old man. "Holy fuck!" He stumbled back away.

        • "Muahahahaha." Lisa roared with laughter at her ingenious prank.

        • "That was NOT funny!" He shouted. "Not funny!"

        • "I thought it was pretty funny. Serves you right for being such a jerk and pressuring me to let you kiss another girl, well, sort of."

        • "Lisa, something very strange is going on with you. This thing, this AI, can materialize anything you want, and you are playing pranks on me? Why don't you ask to be rich and famous? Or ask for a fancy car? Or at least ask to be beautiful?"

        • "Are you saying I'm not beautiful?" She said, shooting him a long evil glare, before breaking it into a smile. "Sorry, I couldn't resist. Fine, Sora, make me beautiful. Ohh, and can you make me a little taller too?"

        • Sora, the old man, replied, "I'm sorry, I lack the creative capacity to evaluate beauty. You may simply imagine yourself however you wish, and I'll make it reality."

        • "Okay." Lisa looked down, not really able to see herself, and imagined some small changes.. she didn't really struggle with weight, but she'd always wanted to be a little more trim, with a tight little tummy and a cute little butt, and slender legs. In just seconds, she could tell her body had changed. She ran her hand onto her tummy, and soft squishy feeling she hated was gone. "Wow!" She pulled up her shirt, and was shocked to see the most amazing firm flat shape. She ran her finger across the smooth muscle. "That kinda worked!"

        • "Uhm, Lisa, you have no idea. Look at yourself in the mirror."

        • Lisa turned to the mirror, and while her body was like some kind of perfect swimsuit model, it made her awkwardly normal face look very out of place. "Ugh," she said, imagining her complexion smoothing and her facial features becoming more clean and beautiful, then she added a few highlights to her hair, and finally darkened up her lashes. She still looked like her, just much much prettier. "That's better." She moved and posed herself, admiring her handwork, making a few small tweaks. A little more hip shape, and a little more bustline. "Ohh, and I almost forgot." She had always wanted to be tall. Not just a little bit tall, but really tall. Supermodel tall. She was worried she might scare (her boyfriend), so she stopped at 5'10", then turned to show off her handwork. "Well, what do you think?"

        • (boyfriend) was floored, his mouth hanging open. "You look amazing! I can not believe this is happening." He walked up to her, and paused just before hugging her, "whoa, you're tall!"

        • "Yup," she reached out, pulling him in, and reveling in finally being eye to eye with her boyfriend. "Like it? Am I giving Jessica Alba a run for her money?" She wanted to kiss her boyfriend, but it felt weird with Sora the old man standing there, even if she was an AI, so she willed her away, and she disappeared.

        • "You are blowing her out of the water," he said, genuinely, then he went in for a kiss. It immediately felt familiar in some ways, and strange in others. It was really different to kiss a girl as tall as him, and her body felt amazing, but her kissing was unchanged. Nothing like the passionate kiss he received from Sora.

        • Lisa knew it too. She'd seen what had happened before, and this kiss was not in the same league. She didn't want to just look sexier, she wanted to be sexier. She wanted to be able to kiss like Sora had. Immediately, her behavior changed, as she became more active, turning her head, forcing her tongue and lips to tease and dance with her boyfriend's. It was playful, and fun, and she liked it, and she got the feeling he liked it too, because he rubbed his hands on her and squeezed her tighter.

        • (boyfriend) felt the change. Suddenly Lisa was an outrageously good kisser. He tried to match her energy and skill, as the kiss became more and more passionate. The kiss was so good he didn't want it to end, but he was starting to get really really turned on, and

Where is this going?

  • IDEA 1: Lisa is a clingy naive needy "giver"...

    • self esteem problems, and she gets her validation through sex/tease/attraction

    • she's so needy and clingy that b/f is about to break up with her

    • when he goes to the bathroom, she gets the gift of the stars

    • when he comes back, they have a confusing exchange about the gift/ashes,

    • ...she tries to explain what the gift is...

    • ...but then he resumes trying to break up with her

    • she says "no", she won't accept that, and tries to offer things he's always asked for

      • he tries to refuse, tries to explain that they are just not right for each other

      • she starts a playful game where she changes herself incrementally

        • ? "i bet if I was (taller, sexier, bustier)" -> and she makes it happen

        • finally he's shocked at her changes.. and she explains that's what she's been trying to tell him. it's the gift

      • and she uses to become even more his dream girl... which he's totally into at first

      • ---

      • but then she starts to use the gift to be even more clingy and needy.