Farm Zoo - outline
Summary
cute 25 y/o young man's car breaks down near a farm, and he finds a very weird scene, where everyone is afraid of a young (seemingly 15 y/o) girl. / it seems to inviting, but a weird family member offers a sinister warning ("you should leave now, run"), but the young girl tells him to "scram", and "leave my visitor alone". the weird family member hobbles off, wincing in pain. / turns out she has supernatural powers to make things the way she wants (and force people to do things), she's actually closer to 19 years old, but just stays 15 because she liked it and sort of "froze" all their ages, with all of them her prisoner.
Characters
Liam - 25 y/o 6' tall guy who's car breaks down - attractive - working on-site sales followup for a commercial farming chemical company
Suzie Personas (brunette, glasses)
"Becka" - 6' (pic pic pic) - blonde - "friend from highschool" (and the first girl she kissed)
Other
"Dad" -
"Mom" -
"Jacob" - brother (who should be 22, but is stuck at 17)
"Crazy Uncle Wallace" - tries the most to warn Liam, but gets punished for it
Questions
What are the limits to her power?
power?
a) she can change reality (in limited ways?) -> she needs to be able to make them do things....
b) she distorts perception (she can't actually change reality)
not omniscient
She can't leave the farm
Where does she come from? What is she?
Can we do something to get rid of Liam, so there can be episodes?
maybe the whole thing is a time-singularity, and once he figures out to free himself he's back in his car driving on the hwy?
Long Arc
Day 1-3: Liam is glad to stay and enjoy the weird farm (and outrageous sex with Dani) for a few days
Day 4-6: Liam needs to get back to his life, but increasingly improbable things "keep happening" to bring him back
4: his car runs out of gas
5: he gets a flat. then his jack breaks trying to fix it
6: he finally gets onto the road, and then the "woman of his dreams" (super dani) flags him down with a broken down car, wearing a halter bikini and jeans,
he simply has to stop, and he asks her what's going on.
she claims to be trying to get to their farm, because she's a high-school friend of Dani..
but somehow the whole thing seems so unbelievable that he doesn't really believe anything she says, even as he picks her up and takes her back to the farm.. In his mind, everything becomes, "of course" because he can now see something is "wrong".
Day 7: The gig is up.. Liam has realized something is weird, and confronts her about it...
it happens because he insists he wants to help her, and challenges her to 'make him tell her the truth' if she doesn't believe him. so she does. and what he says is so heartfelt she breaks down in tears. then asks her what she thinks he should do, and he says to let everyone go, and she agrees to only if he'll stay 100% honest with her. He agrees.... and then she playfully turns it on him by seducing him and using his honesty against him.
a new stable state is reached, where she doesn't imprison anyone.
Peculiar Events
??? somehow she has to show the reader how she has her family as prisoners really early
Crazy Uncle Wallace telling him to "get away" as he's accepting their hospitality
the family insists he can stay as long as he needs.. it gets kinda boring living on a farm, they're happy for the company
phone "is curiously out... happens alot around here"
Suzie's older hot sister Danika suddenly showing up, and everyone stumbling to backup her existence
including Suzie "manipulating" a photo Liam already looked at to put her in it, causing him to remark
Dani declares that Liam can sleep in her room, and when he says a couch will be fine because he doesn't want to displace her, she explains that he won't be, because they're going to share the bed.. which everyone oddly says "sounds like a great idea", "much more comfortable to sleep in a bed".
"are you saying there is a problem with my daughter? some reason you don't want to share a bed with her?"
When Liam doesn't think it's appropriate to fool around, Danika "calls her parents in"... they are happy that she found a boy she likes, and they profusely encourage them to "have at it" "have as much sex as you want" "we won't hear a thing" "nothin' unusual about that... most all we do on farms is tend the animals and have sex"
When they're fooling around, Dani senses him getting closer, but tells him "no no. you can't come until i say so".. and as she has never had an orgasm, once she does, and she proceeds to get really into it, including having 12 consecutive orgasms during sex, it becomes very conspicuous that he doesn't come until she says to, and then when she says he can, he instantly does. afterwords, he remarks that it was the most amazing sex he's ever had..
In the morning, Liam calls is boss about the situation, and finds him strangely accommodating... that there is no rush, and when he asks where he's staying and what the nightly rate is, and Liam says he's staying at a nearby farm and they won't let him pay, his boss gushes even more that he should just stay a few days since he doesn't have a new job for him anyhow, so he doesn't know which way to send him, so he might as well stay right where he is
he relays the "news", and asks if it's too much trouble for him to stay a couple days, they're all thrilled for him to stay as long as he likes... Dani makes a not-so-subtle reference to about "mom, maybe after a few days of fucking his brains out, he might not even want to leave", causing him to spit out his drink...."you might be right honey. you fuck his brain out.". he comments that he's never met a family like this one.
Dani takes Liam on a picnic by the lake/river... opening up by saying she really wants to get to know him, because she feels she can be really honest with him, and hopes he can be honest with her.. he says he will be... "cross your heart and hope to die?"... but then she backpedals, she doesn't want him to die, and instead states "if you lie, you'll apologize and ?? " asking him lots of questions about his life outside... his work, his life, and eventually....asking him overly specific questions about his girlfriends... did any of them want to have sex as much as he did? what's your favorite kind of sex?"
she catches him with only 2 lies, and she remarks that he's impressively honest, but she's also a bit disappointed, because she was hoping for more kisses. so she makes the questions even more direct and hard for him to answer honestly...
"are you most attracted to girls taller or shorter than you?" -> no preference (lie). shorter? -> no (truth). taller? wow, you're pretty tall. i wouldn't have guessed that.
"is there anything he fantasizes about a girl doing to him?" -> yes (truth).
"what
he also asks her questions
he asks how his car is going to get fixed... she answers that he doesn't need to worry about that. "it'll be fixed in two days, right dad?"
Dani continues to sex him up, and ask him tons of questions... and the answers keep bizarrely finding their way into his life.. weird things also keep happening
they cook his favorite (and unusual) meal for dinner
she asks/forces him (during tease) to tell her about his ideal woman.... and, coincidence, "wow, you basically described my high-school best friend, Becka" ... she ruffles around for a picture, and shows him a girl who is gorgeous and shockingly like his description.. Dani confesses that there's actually more to that story, because she and Becka were into each other... they never fooled around or anything, but they used to do some kissing and heavy petting. "does that bother you? that I like to kiss pretty girls?" (no, he likes to kiss pretty girls too). "You know she sometimes visits around this time of year, if you stick around a little longer, you might be forced to share the bed with the both of us." ..it sounds like more of a flirtatious joke than anything else to him.
Day 4 his car is finally fixed.. but when he tries to drive it away, it runs out of gas in the driveway
Day 5 he gets a flat tire, and when he tries to fix it the jack breaks
Day 6 after he drives away, Dani gets upset, and starts lashing out at her zoo-family
her mom reminds her that if she really wants him to love her, she gas to let him make his own choices
Dani is insistant that she won't force him, but he will be back today
he finally makes it onto the highway, but stops dead in his tracks when he sees a gorgeous girl, in a halter and short-jean-shorts, fitting Becka's description is standing in the road, waving him down.
somehow this is so unbelievable he realises "something is up", though he doesn't know what.. he can feel the conspiracy not to have him leave
when he drops off Becka, and she apparently pickpockets his keys during a senusous hug goodbye, he doesn't fight it.. now he just wants to see what is going on
Becka hugs Dani last, and full on macks on her in full view of Liam.. after the kiss, Becka quips about being anxious to get her in bed. Dani confesses that she's into Liam, and that she'll be sleeping with him. To which Becka suggests that they're best friends for life, and any man Dani is into, she's into too. (which is actually really weird) Becka then flitatiously asks if Liam is okay "sharing the bed with the both of us"? And how she can't promise nothing will happen. Which he certainly is okay with... / this prompts her to give him back his keys, which he pockets and doesn't use to try and leave.
Dinner that night is even more awkward for the family, with *3* suzies at the table, suzies brother totally leering at Becka, and her teasing him about it... and oddly suggesting that maybe if he "helps keep Liam around, maybe he'll get his own visitor"
When it's time to end for dinner, Dani and Becka get up in unison, ask the family to clean up, and head-upstairs because they have "alot to catch up on". Dani also asks mom and dad to use their bed, since the three of them will be sleeping together, which of course they are okay with. Dani asks Liam to give them a few minutes to freshen, and then come up.
When the older girls go upstairs, Liam tries to ask the family "something weird is going on here. what is going on here?" but Suzie is still there, so they are very afraid, and deny seeing anything weird.Even as he lists out a bunch of really bizarre coincidences. They all seem to wait for Suzie to speak. And the little girl points out that the only thing "weird" is that he's still down here talking to the family when her older sister and her beautiful friend are waiting for him upstairs.
When he enters the room, the two girls are already down to underwear and kissing in the bed. Dani offers a faux apology about "not being able to help herself". Becka offers up that she's thinks the three should share each other. They both hold out their arms calling him over to the bed... which is so ridiculously improbable, it is again, conspicuous.
The girls start kissing him, and each other, and he comments about how insane it is, to have gone from his car breaking down, to staying at a random farm for six days, where he has the most outrageous sex, and then the hottest girl he's ever seen just happens to be staying over... the girls giggle at the compliments, and start double teasing him, as they giggle to each other about what they're going to do with him. After some flirtatious stalling, they start with a double-blowjob. But they can't keep their hands off each other, and pretty soon they both start playfully arguing about who is going to get on his cock first. Finally Becka asks how many times Dani had sex in the past week, because she hasn't had sex in a month.... Dani gives it up, and encourages her to climb on, getting behind her and reaching around to finger her.
...the sex continues, and while it does... a new attitude is setting into Liam. When Becka compliments him on his stamina, he's no longer surprised he just simply admits that they can fuck him as long as they want, because he won't come until Dani tells him to. WHich they giggle at and Becka thinks is amazing. Then she starts to come, and come and come, like 6 times in a row... "holy fuck, where did you find this guy, Dani? I've never had such mindblowing orgasms" / "I know right?"
the sex goes on for what seems like hours, and Liam's mind spirals into a whirl of disbelief and confusion.
Finally, when the girls have had enough, they tell Liam to tell them how he wants to be finished. He finds the whole thing so silly, he teases them for being done so soon, and says he wants to fuck Dani from behind while she eats out Becka... making them each come three more times. Then he'll be done... The girls giggle, and assume their positions eagerly... The scenerio plays out to a T, and then Dani tells him he can come now, and he unloads with incredible force into Dani, before collapsing between them on the bed.
Day 7
breakfast, the family asks if he's going to be heading out.. and he just smiles funny, and says no, he thinks he'll be staying a while longer. He sets his car keys in a kitchen cabinet. They all seem a little surprised, and suggest that's a great idea.
They all eat breakfast, with Dani and Becka on either side of him, pretty blatantly fondling him under the table and giggling about it the whole time. Liam strikes up a chat with Jacob, asking if he gets to date much. He says no. Liam asks if he plans to go to college. No, Jacob is going to stay and work the farm and take it over one day. Then Liam flat out asks why nobody seems to mind that the two girls are pretty obviously giving him a handjob under the table. Jacob doesn't flinch, and just offers "don't see any reason to be bothered by it, i guess."
Liam comments that this is the kind of life he could get used to. Then he stands up before anyone is done, and with a tenting hardon, and declares that the "three of us" are going to go fuck in the barn for a while, and then maybe fuck in the meadow. Sound good? ("sounds good to me") everyone replies.
Ohh, Becka, would you mind doing me a favor, and charity fucking Jacob? Seems like the kid hasn't had sex, maybe ever. The girls look at each other funny, and Becka responds, "i don't see why not," come on Jacob, holding out her hand. Liam interjects, and adds that he was thinking "right here, at the kitchen table." He starts to push plates off the side, rhetorically asking the mother, "you don't mind do you?" as he shoves their food onto their laps or the floor. ("No, no. That sounds fine. I'll clean this mess up later.") / The Liam coaxes Jacob onto the table... and then looks to Becka, who smiles, and then climbs atop Jacob.
Liam hugs Dani, and comments that her friend Becka is amazing. This seems like the kind of place that you'd have to be crazy to leave. Dani gets gushy, and asks if he really means that.
He does, but you have to tell me. What is really going on here? Dani feigns ignorance. So he litters off most of the sequence of improbable events... finishing with the present moment, where Becka is fucking her brother, just because he asked her to. Dani defends... "did you *want* her to say no?"
Liam pushes.. "Dani, the gig is up. What is going on here? They are all terrified of you. You do anything you want around here, and right now that seems to extend to anything I want."
Dani doesn't give in... "I don't know what you mean... farm life is just really that good." Behind them, Jacob climaxes, and Becka offers a sweet comment before she climbs off him.
Liam yells loudly that whoever is behind all this, better meet him outside to explain. Otherwise he's leaving, and for good this time. He walks over and picks up his keys off the shelf and heads outside.
Becka and Dani go outside, and he asks if they are both behind it then. They "don't know what he's talking about. they just don't want him to leave. Dani says they talked it over, and Becka will stay if he does. "Just think, you can have us both whenever you want.. and we can send the rest of the family away, so we'll have the whole house to ourselves. The farm's paid for, and there is always enough food there for eat. Liam can quit his job, never have to work again. And if the two of us are not enough for you, we can pop out some babies and raise a family of our own, just the three of us.
What if I said I'd stay, but only if the rest of the family goes free, like really free. Not just to a neighboring farm. Gone forever, to wherever they want to go. Dani bites her lip, and turns to Becka. I dunno. If I let them go, would you really stay? Forever? With the two of us? Because momma says you won't love me if I force you to stay.
Okay, Dani? I'm only going to ask you this one time, and I need you to be completely honest with me. If you're not honest with me, there is no way I could ever love you, understand? (she nods) How are you keeping them here? How is any of this happening?
Becka disappears, and Dani sluffs to the ground, crying. Liam just waits, not saying anything. Finally she speaks, "I make them stay. I can make them do anything. I can make anyone do anything.." She looks into his eyes, "but I never make you do anything.. well maybe one or two little things, but not really anything you don't want to."
"I understand. I understand. When did this all start?" / She's crying as she answers, holding her head in her hands. "I barely remember. When I was twelve or thirteen. I got sick everytime I tried to leave the farm, but when I stayed here, I felt better, I could make things happen. That's how it started. By the time I was fifteen, my family was both afraid and mad at me all the time. Mom finally tried to stand up to me, but I didn't want to hear it, so I just forced everyone to be nice to me. I know it was wrong, but it was so nice, that i want it just to stay like that, so I kept myself 15, kept Jacob 17.. and just made them all act like the perfect family.
"It's okay. You're going to fix it. I don't know how you're doing this, but you're going to fix it, because I'm here. And for reasons I don't fully understand, you love me, and i love you." Then Dani really started bawling, and hugging him and whimpering, "i love you, liam, i will never stop you, but please don't leave me." over and over.
????
somewhere Liam is arguing with her, telling her that he cares about her, but she has to stop. she doesn't believe him, so he challenges her to 'make him tell her the truth', and she does, and he does care about her. After tears and a breakdown, she wants to let everyone go, but it's hard. somehow they barter a deal where she can still force honesty out of him, but she lets everyone go.
Day 8? 9? 10?
After a few days of fragile normalcy, the family is starting to trust she won't control them, and is going out on errands during the day and such. Jacob left and hasn't come back, but Liam tells her not to worry. He may come back in time, and if he doesn't, then that's okay too.
When her mom and dad are out, she snuggles up to Liam, and asks what he thinks they should do that day.
Day 35?
They all greet for breakfast, and it's actually really *normal*. Nobody is a jerk. Nobody is afraid. They all help cook pancakes. Jacob (who is 22 now) grabs an apple and says he has to run, because he's going to be late for work in town. He asks where the keys are, and mom gets them down off the cabinet, exactly where Liam put them when he decided to stay.
Cut to Liam and Dani walking out the door after breakfast. and then talking a walk towards the stream, hand in hand. Dani uses the time to learn about the world, "tell me about Paris. have you been there?" / "No, but I've seen pictures," and Liam describes it in vivid detail.
When they get to the meadow, a picnic blanket, picnic box, and sunshade magically appear, right where they want to sit. Liam, explains that one day soon, when she's ready, he's going to need to take a trip away from here, to see his family, to see some things in the world, but that he promises he'll come back, okay? She nods, and weeps a little. "It's okay. I'm not going yet. And when I do, you'll be fine, and you'll miss me, and you'll be happy when I'm back... the way normal people miss loved ones when they're away." / She nods, "okay. i know I can do it."
They hold each other in silence on the meadow for a while. Then Liam has a more chipper, lighthearted question. "Will we ever see Becka again?" Dani, flips over and pushes him to the ground, "I knew you liked Becka more than me!" / "No, it's not like that. I guess I just wonder.. If you stayed 15 for years, and you were Suzie, and you, and Becka all at the same time, could you be more like Becka? Or bring her back, so it could be the three of us?"
"Of course I can! Would that make you never leave me?" She playfully pouts. / "No, no." he laughs. "but you've been really good with Jacob, and the family, and with me.. and this thing you can do is part of who you are, so you need to learn to be good to yourself too." / "Did you just try to make it seem like bringing back Becka was for me? Because that's totally for you!" She puzzled for a moment. "I have a better idea. Tell me about your fantasy girl. Be really honest, and I'll be her for you. Can you do that?" / "I'm actually not sure." / "I can compel you to." / "For this, you might have to." / "Okay, how about this. Whenever you have a fantasy desire, you'll feel gently compelled to whisper it to me, and you'll feel completely comfortable doing so, no matter what it is, knowing that I'm going to love it as much as I love you." / "Uhh, Dani? That might make me whisper to you all day." / "I'm okay with that." He starts to lean in, but tries to stop himself. "It'll be more fun if you don't fight it.. Try it for a day or two, and if you really don't like it, just tell me and I'll take it away." / He nods, and feels himself pulled into whisper. "I want you to have a body like Becka, but with slightly bigger breasts, and..." / "Hold on, small adjustment. I like this, but you sound a little demanding. You should start your requests with the phrase "it would please me if", let's try again. / he leans in, "It would please me if you had a body like Becka, but with firmer fuller breasts, and even taller; and if you would relentlessly tease me whenever we're alone; and if Becka could join us at night at least once a week; and if..." / "Ha Ha, okay, okay... we might need to slow this down. How about (four fantasies every morning, or two per waking hour???)." / "Okay.. Yeah, that's probably better." She stood up off the picnic blanket, and reached her hand down to him, / Her body shimmered and shifted, and the shape changed, becoming more sexualized, and then taller, until she was about an inch taller than he was. "Is this good, or is your fantasy taller? How tall do you want me?" / he leaned in to whisper, "It would please me if you were taller. For now, four or five inches." / "Hmm... my family is going to wonder where this came from, but if I can't do everything i can to please the love of my life, then I'm the one who's trapped." She gently started rising again, only stopping when she could look clear over his head. "That's a nice perspective... how do I look?" / "Amazzzziinnn...." his words were cutoff as he felt her hand brushing the front of his crotch. / "This part I already wanted to do. I was just holding back."
...???
teen’s car breaks down near a farm, and he finds a very weird scene, where everyone is afraid of a young (apparently 15?) childish girl. / weird family members offer sinister warnings ("you should leave, leave now"), when the little girl is not around.
Behind his back, she conspires to keep him there, and talks to her mother about what she's feeling (attraction), and how she plans to keep him and earn his affection. Mom gently explains that it's improper for a man to sleep with a 15 year old girl, to which she furiously fusses that she's not fifteen, she's just likes staying fifteen. "Ohh I know dear, but if you want a man to be attracted to you, you'll need to look and act your age... and this one has already met who you are now." But she's not deterred, and materializes a hot "older sister", and proceeds to be both the young and old sisters at the same time. Mom gives her some more advice about how if she wants to experience something real, she shouldn't force or control him.
The older sister declares the guest should "stay in her room". he doesn't want to "put her out", he can just sleep on a couch, but she says that's nonsense, he won't be putting her out, she'll stay in there with him. he thinks that sounds really improper, but when he looks around at the family, the parents and whole family professes it's a "great idea" and "you shouldn't think twice about it" ... and she drags him up the stairs
ch 2 - bedtime
they clean up in the bathroom then crawl into her bed.... which he feels really awkward about... she offers silly platitudes "don't tell me you've never shared a bed with a girl before." and "there are no extra room silly, so unless he wants to crawl in between mom and dad, this will just have to do."
only she has no intention of sleeping... as she quickly cuddles up to him and starts brushing her body into him, making seductive bedroom talk. he stops her, and insists this is not appropriate. that her parents were nice enough to let him stay the night, and that it would be terrible for him to do anything with their daughter. This prompts her to yell for her parents, who come running into her room. / She puts it to them directly... "I like this boy, he seems to think it'll bother you if we kiss, fool around, or have sex tonight, here in my room. Please tell him it won't." / To which her parents weird profess, Mom: "Ohh, of course not, peach. if you like him, that's all that matters." Dad: "What are boys and girls supposed on a farm, if not some good fucking. Do you two lovebirds want to take our bed? It's bigger." / Girl: "No, that'll be quite all-right. You can go now." / "Great, well, you two have fun... and don't worry about being noisy, you're dad and I sleep with earplugs in so the roosters don't wake us up, we can't hear a thing."
When they leave, the situation is so weird he's still not into her game plan, and pushes her away when she tries to touch him. She gets a furious look, and almost "does something", but holds herself back, and asks why he's avoiding her... asking if he finds her attractive, as she seductively takes off her shirt. Then she declares that we're going to do this differently, he's going to remain nice and calm, and if he doesn't she's going to scream for her daddy to come running. Hear? Then she takes his hand, and puts it on her breast, encouraging him to caress her, and asking if he likes it. Then she reaches towards his crotch, warning him not to jump this time, and gently fondles him. When she makes him hard, she comments, "see, you must like this at least a little bit. You don't mind if I keep touching you like this, do you?" / "N-No. Not at A-All." he stutters out. Then she nods, and leans in to kiss him... softly at first, then passionately. When they part, she compliments him on being a good kisser, and asks if he thinks she's a good kisser too. He does, he thinks she's a very good kisser. Around the farm, they always say, if you're going to do something, you might as well be good at it. Her momma taught her all about kissing, and about other things too.
She re-positions to get her lips close to his cock, and rhetorically asks "you won't mind if i give a little kiss down here, too, will you?" He doesn't refuse... and she licks and sucks and teeases and strokes his cock for a few minutes. At some point he's getting excited / close to climax, so she stops, and scolds "no, i didn't say you could cum yet. you can't cum until i tell you."... and he feels a sting and instantly urging to finish disappear, but the arousal, hardness, and pleasure remain. / It's weird enough that he actually asks, "whoa, how did you do that?" / "Farm girls have their ways."
Then she suggests that "before she takes him any further, it's time for him to return the favor," and she lies on her back with her legs suggestively spread. He's struck by the awkward near 'demand', but before he knows it, he finds himself weirdly compelled to get up and go down on her. As soon as he puts his lips to her, it feels really right, and she starts praising, moaning, and even directing him a little. Though sometimes it's almost wordless .. "no, not there, over... yeah, right there." and he finds himself enjoying the fact that it's somehow easier to know what to do with her than with other girls, who he always finds a bit of a challenging mystery. After a while, she's getting more heated, and telling him to go harder and faster, and then telling him to stick his fingers in her, and then forcing his head into her crotch, and screaming louder, and louder, and louder, exclaiming almost in surprise, like she's never orgasmed before "holy fuck! i can't believe this", while she's tensing and lifting her hips to try and push them harder against his tongue. He doesn't realize it, but the entire bed has lifted off the ground. "(name) this is the best thing i've ever felt. ohh my. ohh my. momma never told me. wah..wah.wah..wah..i think it's happp-pp-pp-e-n-ning.. ohh my god!" When she finally climaxes, the bed slams back to the floor, startling him and smacking his face sharply into her pelvic bone, causing him to exclaim "owww!"
She apologies and dotes on him, "come here", point out that his nose is red, kissing it, and asking if it's okay. "Good, i'm here to take good care of you," and she reaches down to stroke his cock some more. While she does, she keeps exclaiming things like, "i never knew that would feel so good. if I had known, I would have done that long ago." / causing him to timidly ask if that was her first orgasm. / "Wasn't it obvious? Shit." Then she asks a bunch of naive questions, like "Does it feel that good for everyone?" "how is sex different?"and "Is it the same for boys?" he stutters, trying to answer while she strokes him.. she asks if she should stop, which he definitely does not want. At some point he explains that girls can cum multiple times in a row, but boys usually only once and then they need a long break. Which gives her a little "ooh, really?" surprise, and causes her to reassert that it's a good thing "you're not going to cum until i say so, right?" -- To which he nods, but doesn't totally understand. The longer her teasing goes on, the more pressure he feels, but as she suggested, he doesn't feel like he's going to cum... it's just becoming more pleasurable and torturous.
At some point she excitedly declares she wants to try sex, and "see what's that like?".... / "you're a virgin? ohh, of course you're a virgin. Are you sure you want to lose your virginity here? with me? right now?" / "Why not? I want to see what it's like, and if it's not better for me, which you said for some girls it isn't, then you can just go down there and do what you did before a few times, right?" / She doesn't wait for an answer, climbing ontop of him, and gently lowering herself down, with a little wince of pain and a sour face, declaring that "it hurt me". / he apologies, he should have explained, that's just something that happens the first time. "wow, you really don't know anything about sex, do you?" / which wounds her and brings out her little sensitive kid persona for a moment, and some declarations that "momma says i can do anything i want to do, and that if I put my mind to it, I can be amazing at it. so don't you try to tell me otherwise." / he genuinely wasn't trying to offend her, so he backpedals, apologizes, and asks if it's still hurting her. / she explains what she's feeling, "it's still a little uncomfortable, but it doesn't hurt anymore. what do i do now?" / he explains that it can often be uncomfortable for the first couple times, but that once she relaxes a little it'll feel better... / she smiles and brightens, "ohh okay. so i just need to loosen a little?" and starts moving gently, and in just a few moments, he can feel her tightness and clenching dissipate, and she starts to move a little more, "ohh, yeah, that's much better... mmm... i think i got it now."
she braces herself in a sexy pose, and starts pumping up and down on him, and in just a couple minutes, she declares, "wow, it's starting to feel really good again... ohh my.... holy shit." then she starts to gyrate and bend her body. "it's not just down there this time... i feel like it's all over." she inspects herself, exclaiming "look how hard my nipples are!" squeezing them in her fingers.
However, by this time, he's losing himself to his own sensations, which have been building this entire time. He feels himself tensing more and more, as it becomes more and more pleasurable, but each time he thinks he expects to cum, he just doesn't, and instead winces out with a little whimper of frustration. She slows a little, and checks on him... asking how it feels for him... / he is a little rambly, gushing praise, about how sex has never ever felt this good before. it's so amazing. / she smiles, and humerously compliments herself. "good. i'm glad my first time is the best sex you've ever had." / "it just keeps going, and going, like he wants to cum, but he can't. and everytime he can't it feels better." / "well of course, silly. you won't cum until I let you. other girls don't do that for you?" / "ohh fuck. other girls *can't* do that. I don't know how you're doing it. But it's so fucking amazing."
But she stopped listening to him, and started arching her back and wincing. "ohh fuck. ohh fuck. i'm sorry sweetness. I don't mean to cut you off, but here it... ohh fuck... here it... fuck. yes. yes. ohh god." and she climaxes again, but keeps riding him. "ohh baby that was a little softer but ohh so, good... wait.. shit. is this really happening again? uhh, uhh, uhh, uhh. fuck." .... (and we montage to her fucking him for another ten-fifteen minutes, counting her climaxes up to 13.... while he's so enrapt he's bracing and grabbing at her, and screaming about how good it feels, but also about how he wants to cum... because it kind of hurts, but it feels so good.
she get control of herself and slows down, declaring that she better let him cum so they can lie together, or she's going to get lost in it and just fuck him for the entire night. / to which he's panting and begging "yes please, ohh please. fuck. can i come now? please." / "yeah baby, you can come now." / and instantly, on cue, he convulses and blows his load into her, as she gently rides and milks it out of him, "yeah baby, you had to wait a long time.. it feels good to finally cum doesn't it? You did so good for (her name). I'm so proud of you. You're my new favorite thing in the world. You need anything else, sweetness?" / he shakes his head. she rolls off him and lies next to him. "well i do think that sex is one of the most amazingly fun things in the world." / "holy shit. I don't know what just happened, but *that* sex, with you, was the most amazing sex in the world." / "i'm glad you think so, because i'd like to do it a few more times before you leave us, if you leave us."
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ch 3. breakfast in the morning
both sisters are in an unusually good mood.... the older sister hanging on his arm, the little sister 'doting' on him, bringing him a plate of food, orange juice, etc.
in fact, after a few minutes, the whole family is in a really good mood... and starts to compliment him on how fortunate it is that, if his card had to break down, it did so close enough to their farm for him to stay a while. mom comments that her daughter seems really happy, so you two kids must have had fun last night.
The guest apologizes, realizing how loud they were, "i hope we didn't bother you"... and everyone simultaneously chimes in, "did you make noise? we didn't hear a thing. not a peep. slept like a baby."
The older sister declares that dad will take the tractor, and tow his car back from the road, and the two of them can have a picnic by the river. The family chimes in, "a picnic! sounds wonderful". / he feels like he should at least help with his car, and tries to insist he should go with her dad... maybe even get a ride to town... / but she glares, "no, tell him daddy, you'll take care of it" / her dad agrees, "no, we don't get many visitors, and my daughter has really taken a liking to you. Plus, you'd really just be in the way. give me your keys, i'll go with my son, tow your car here, and you two can go have a beautiful day in the sun. / "excellent," she declares, and she pulls him up from the table, declaring that she's going to "show him the barn", and asks her mom to make them a picnic lunch.