Alien Ray Gun outline

  • Basic Story

    • Bradley stumbles upon an alien crash site, and makes off with an alien "reconstructor", capable of changing the size of matter.

    • The aliens are beetle-like parasites, that graft into a host's spinal cord, controlling and slightly enhancing them.

  • Characters

    • Bradley Hawthorn - 17yo - 6' (pic)

    • Steven 17yo - 5'11" - best friend (after pic)

    • Laura Hawthorn- 18yo - Bradley's sister. 5'8" - dirty blonde - (before pic)

      • Kitty - 18yo - 5'6" - petite/waif/brunette - (after bust pic pic pic pic)

    • Mrs. Hawthorn - 42yo - 5'6" - short-dyed-blond-hair - (pic)

    • Mr. Nick Hawthorn - 45yo - 6'1" - investment banker (pic)

    • Allison - 25yo - 5'8" - dad's g/f and former secretary, blonde, trim (ex brittany hawks pic pic, heather graham, pic pic pic)

    • Kaitlin Landry 18yo - 5'6" - brunette - (after bust, joey fischer pic pic)

    • feds

      • Nancy Stugart (pic) - 28yo phd exobiologist

      • Phil Upson (pic) - 50yo nasa propulsion scientist

      • Federal Agents (pic)

  • todo

    • make Nancy a little bigger.. (aliens make a device, and take out an entire power station giving her just a few inches)

      • make someone else big.

      • Kaitlin forces herslef on Bradley.

  • Ch 1. Catastrophe

    • Bradley finds the ray-gun. experiments on objects, Laura, Allison.

    • confesses to Steven, who boosts himself and Kaitlin, but just a little bit.

    • confesses to Kitty, boosting her bustline.

      • Laura gets ahold of the device, growing huge (50') and setting out to teach her b/f a lesson and smash the school.

      • Bradley grows Kitty huge (50') to chase and stop her. They shrink Laura down and run.

    • Ch 2. alien contact

      • introduce Nancy, with her and the feds taken over by alien parasites.. reports come in of the giant girls

      • show Laura's state @ school, her capture by the feds, her enslaved.

        • "this one's brother and the one named Kitty have the reconstructor"

      • We see Bradley and Kitty, bickering over what to do with the device.

      • Steven & Kaitlin shows up at the half-demolished Hawthorn residence, after having seen the videos of Laura and Kitty -- where they run into Ms Hawthorn. / Nancy and an agent take away Ms. Hawthorn. / Bradley calls Steven. They agree to meet at the old mill. Bradley asks him to bring camping gear, water, food, sleeping bags, pick up his computer from his dad's, and turn off his cellphone immediately, so they can't track him.

  • Ch 3. regroup

      • Laura-host shows up at Mr. Hawthorn's, looking for Bradley. Kills her father. enslaves Allison.

      • Steven & Kaitlin go to Mr. Hawthorn's, see Laura leave. Steve goes inside. Allison tries to enslave Steve, but he slaps the bug away and escapes.

      • S/B/K/K meet at the Old Mill. Kitty super-sizes Kaitlin. Hormones take over.

    • Ch 4: heist

      • Morning at the old mill. Comedy. Breakfast. Kitty declares she wants to go get the alien spacecraft. Hatch a plan for Bradley to visit a cafe to use a computer and see if he can find out where it is.

      • B/S/K/K review their plan to get the spacecraft out of the airport hangar, before getting huge and doing it.

      • cut to mrs hawthorn in custody

        • Allison confronts her, introduces her to her enslaved-Laura (her daugher)

        • enslaved-Laura is in the middle of threatening to enslave her mother, showing her an alien beetle, telling her it won't hurt at all.. when the building starts shaking and moaning like it's under attack. Laura runs out of the room. Moment's later, the roof comes off. giant-Kitty grabs Mrs Hawthorn. Steven has the ship, as they escape.

      • Nancy rushes into the incubator room, checking that the larva were not harmed. She talks over a plan with Allison and Laura. They have to split up. She and Laura have to get the remaining four beetles to safety, while Allison watches over the incubator.

    • Ch. 5: Awkward

      • Back at the Old Mill.. awkward discussions with KKSB & mrs hawthorn. Hatch a new plan to kill the incubator.

      • Laura is checking on Dylan's house, sees an agent who reminds her of Dylan. Drags him into Dylan's bedroom and rapes him.

      • Second attack commences. Mrs Hawthorn grabs Allison, who distracts her and K/B. S/K destroy the incubator. Nobody sees the army show up until a rocket explodes in the side of Mrs Hawthorn. killing her and sending Allison dropping to her death.

    • Ch. 6: On the road

      • in the car... they have to go on the run. They talk about Bradley losing his parents. They talk about money. Their life. It doesn't matter, they have to leave now. They turn out of town.

      • Nancy+enslaved-Laura enslave an army general.

    • Ch. 7:

    • ??? where are we going?

      • after hearing the whole story, kitty wants to get big again, and go get the alien spacecraft.

      • Bradley could go into a public library, watching youtube videos of them hoisting the alien craft, finding they are guarding it in a hangar at the local airport.

      • B/S/K/K attack the airport....tearing through the hangar, grabbing the spacecraft... (Bradley is again riding along with Kitty)

        • what are nancy/allison going to do?

          • allison could confront mrs.hawthorn in custody. flaunt how easy it was for 'this host' to seduce her husband. however, he was of no use to them, so he's been dispatched. mrs. hawthorn is outraged that she killed her ex-husband, and she corrects that technically 'the host known as Laura' did it. pressures her for details about where she can find Bradley (showing off and describing host-infected strength boost from adrenalin)

          • nancy could start building an incubator for the alien beetles.

          • nancy could go meet her boyfriend (so he's not suspicious), and seduce him (with awkward parasite inspired dialog)

          • alien-Laura could threaten to infect mrs hawthorn, disclosing how the beetles work, and that soon they will have many more of them, only to be interrupted as 50' Kitty and Kaitlin tear through the hangar to get the alien ship. Kitty sees and grabs Mrs Hawthorn. Steven grabs Laura

        • The aliens reconvene, discussing how now that they have the ship, and the reconstructor, they need to split up, go to ground, and survive. They can't move the incubator until the larva hatch. They leave Allison to guard the incubator, and Nancy takes the remaining four beetles.

        • Back at the old-mill..

          • disclosures are a bit awkward, as Mrs Hawthorn has to get over the oversize busty teenagers. She explains the alien parasite beetles, they inspect Laura (back to normal size), and how it's buried into her neck. They try a few ways to get it out (heat, shock), but the host starts to scream, and they are afraid of hurting Laura.

          • They hatch a plan to destroy the incubator. they wear leather collars to try and protect the entry location.

            • They go in again, K/K/S/mrs H big... They tear up the entire airport, killing a few agents, until they find the incubator and Allison. Mrs H grabs Allison, who starts engaging her to stall for time. Bradley tries to talk her down from killing Allison. Kaitlin and Steven crush the incubator. Nobody sees the federal agents with a bazooka until the explosion tears away half of Mrs. H's torso, crumpling her to the ground in a bleeding mess.

            • The three of them run.... K/K/S/B get away.

        • Nancy meets with an army general, being debriefed on her view of the alien threat. She sits, and an alien beetle immediately crawls down her leg onto the floor. As she continues her explanation, the beetle makes it's way towards the general -- that the aliens seem to be primitive insects, and that the only threat is the alien technology, which seems to have fallen into the hands of a teenager named Bradley Hawthorn. / "Yes, I've been briefed on the device, and I saw the two giant human corpses firsthand before we incinerated them. Hard to believe it was even possible until I saw it with my own eyes. We'll track down the suspect and the device. Is that all, Ms. Stugart? Ouch. What the heck was that?" He slaps the back of his neck, but it does nothing to stop the alien beetle burrowing into his spine. A moment later, he looks up at Nancy. "We are three. This host wants to mate with that one." / "The male of this species is highly predictable."

  • Questions

    • what final size was Laura shrunk to? what happens to Laura after she's shrunk?

      • 8'? - police/fire try to calm her down and find out what happened. feds show up and get 'serious', cart her off.

      • how does the town handle loss of it's high school building?

      • how does Mom/Dad react to their destroyed house and their giant daughter?

      • how does the town (world?) handle knowledge of the giantesses?

        • Laura and Kitty's friends recognize them in the videos, which means the authorities know who they are too.

      • do Bradley and Kitty keep the gun away from the authorities? how?

        • ? give it to steven for safe-keeping... he and kaitlin play with it

        • ? hide it...

        • ? go on the run

        • ? they and the gun are captured.

      • what happened to the alien(s) that crashed?

        • they are still tiny, as the gun is needed to inflate them.

        • feds clear the crash site, find them.

      • how do Bradley and Kitty use the gun?

      • what do Steven and Kaitlin want, since they are 'in the know'?

Ch. 2 : alien contact

    • return to the alien crash site.

      • federal agents have a perimeter roped off. A field agent introduces the two science experts, a hot young female exobiologist (pic), and a geeky middle-aged expert from NASA.

      • The older geek is a bit flustered by how attractive the woman is, "you're an exobiologist!?" struggling to stop staring at her cleavage. She holds out her hand, introducing herself, "Nancy Stugart, Ph.D. biological sciences from Berkeley, head of the DARPA west-coast exobiology field team." He shakes her hand, still peaking at her cleavage. "Maybe we could get past the part where you stare awkwardly down my shirt and move onto the science?" The field agent describes the situation, with a suspected alien vehicle crash in the forest. "If you're going to pull me off a date to go tromping in the woods, you'll need to give me some boots and a field kit." / "Of course, the supply van is right over here."

      • The field agent escorts them to the crash site, where the NASA geek investigates the margins of a buried object about eight-feet in diameter. "This is truly remarkable. The dirt around it is fused, as if mere contact melted the soil." / The woman sees a partially open door of the ship. She takes out a specimin jar, and prys it open some more, bringing protests from the NASA geek. A strange unfamiliar large beetle-like insect scurries out onto the edge of the ship, and she declares "they are insects." She slowly approaches with the specimin jar, trapping it, and closing the jar before she realizes a dozen more have come out of the ship. She sees one on her arm, and slowly lowers another specamin jar towards it as she feels a pinch in her spine.

      • She comes-to with the geek checking on her. "are you all right? You must have fainted there." / she makes an excuse, stands up, feebly attempting to rub dirt off her white skirt "remind me never to wear white when i'm on-call", and starts geeking out with him, asking if he saw the evidence of nano-materials in the ship hull. / he's startled, "i thought you were an exobiologist, what do you know about nano-materials?" / "you can see it much better in the hull interior, take a look." As he leans over, inspecting inside, she lowers an alien insect onto his neck. it rears, and punctures his skin, digging into and wiring into his spine. When it's finished, it settles onto his skin, looking like a black blemish or tatoo unless inspected up close. / he turns, looking her in the eye for the first time since she arrived, "we are two. this one strongly wants to mate with your host" / "perhaps later. right now we need to secure our ship. Those men dressed in black appear to be guards of some kind. Their males seem to find my host distracting. I'll get their attention while you implant our workers. / A call comes in about the giant 50' tall girl destroying the school building. "they have the reconstructor."

      • ??? where is this alien plot going?

        • exobiologist ant-infects the feds... (the same feds that later show up to capture Laura)

        • after capturing Laura and her Mom, they interrogate them, then ant-infect them

    • return to the school.

      • show police and fire freaked about what they are seeing as they watch giant Kitty walk away. captain gets crazy recap of what happened from the chopper, questions that the chopper really saw two -- confirms they are no longer at the scene. sends his men in to survey the damage. / fire crew finds Laura, head still weeping in her arms. ranting about how she "didn't mean to hurt him". he explains this is a dangerous area, and they need to get her out of there. "i'm going to take a look, see if you have any injuries, can you lift your head for me?" he inspects her, then calls on the radio "have a 10-52 on the west corner, i'm going to walk her over. -- okay, now we're going to take this real slow, take my hand, and if anything hurts, just sit back down.".. she stands up, and shocks him, standing 2' taller than him. "holy crap you're tall." / "thanks, but you should have seen me a few minutes ago. I was crushing this place to the ground until my little brother showed up." he staggered back away from her, concerned about both her unstable demeanor and her admission. had she been the one destroying the school? but how? / she let out a haughty chuckle, "what? are you afraid of little old me?" / suddenly, two agents in black suits are bearing down on her with guns from a few feet away, "please stay where you are, ms Laura Hawthorn. we are going to take you in for questioning." / "aww. want to cuff me officers? I've been a bad girl." she put her hands behind her back, turning to show she was ready. / "Fireman, please back away from the suspect. Miss, lie down on the ground with your hands behind your back."

    • Bradley and Kitty in the park

      • after a little making out, Bradley protests. the authorities are going to be after them. they probably already have his sister. they have to figure out what to do. / "well, it's not like you need to finish that history paper, with the state your sister left the school in." after laughing, they started at each other for a few seconds, reality setting in. "we could just turn ourselves in. we didn't do anything wrong. we stopped her." / "turn ourselves in? then they'd have it!" they both looked to the device, sitting on the ground a few feet from them. "you saw what my sister did in a few minutes. you think we can turn that thing over to the government?" / "no, you're right. we have to hide it, or destroy it. we have to destroy it." she snatched up the device, mocking an attempt to break it in half with her hands. / "wait! what are you doing? that's mine. give it back!" he lunged for the device, but Kitty's size advantage allowed her to easily parry him with her longer arm.

      • ?? maybe she teases him for having an alien size changing device, and the most interesting thing he can think to do with it is give girls bigger boobs.. not that she's complaining.

      • ??

    • Steven and Kaitlin show up at the half-demolished Hawthorn residence.

      • They marvel at the damage to the house, and to Laura's car. They see Ms. Hawthorn, worried for her kids.

      • As Steven is talking to Ms. Hawthorn, Nancy and an agent show up. Insisting she needs to come with them.

      • Steven's phone rings. It's Bradley. Steven explains some strange people just took away Ms. Hawthorn. Describing Nancy and the agent. / They agree to meet, out by the old mill. They leave in Kaitlin's car.

Ch. 3: regroup

    • Laura shows up at their father's house with an agent, searching for Bradley.

      • Laura ignores her father as he freaks out about her 8 foot stature. Then she forcibly questions him. "you are this one's father. where is bradley?" / he gets aggressive, demanding she let him go, to know what's going on. / "my host hates this one." she snaps his neck, dropping him to the floor. "you on the other hand," she turns to allison, "Bradley likes this one. we can use her." / she forcibly restrains Allison as they infect her

    • Steven & Kaitlin stop outside Mr Hawthorn's house.

      • Steven sees an agent stand guard as a freakishly tall woman enters his dad's house. Ten minutes later, she re-emerges, and he recognizes the woman as Laura. Steven waits for them to leave. He asks Kaitlin to stay and keep the car running as he heads inside.

      • Allison answers the door, asks who he is (friend of Bradley's, stopping by for his computer). She invites him in to check the spare room. There's no computer. Steven turns to find her coming at him with her shirt unbuttoned, "well, they left me all alone here. maybe a strapping man like you can help me scratch an itch. Especially a man with such big muscles." She squeezes his bicep.

      • That's when he notices the bright red bug climbing over her shoulder. "Holy shit, what's that?" He swats it off her, and she screams an inhuman scream, "No!", before turning to focus her attention on the bug. Steven doesn't know what's going on, but realizes this is weird shit and runs out of there. On the way out, he sees a leg through the kitchen door, and looks in to see Bradley's dad lying on the floor, his head crocked unnaturally to the side.

    • Old Mill

      • Steven and Kaitlin finally arrive at the old mill, stepping inside to see a freakishly tall busty chick has Bradley pinned up against the wall, kissing him. Steven clears his throat, interrupting them, and seeing that it's Kitty. He makes a quippy comment about her hotness. Kaitlin punches him.

      • Bradley asks about his computer. / "They must have taken it." He comes over, hugging his friend. "Buddy, I'm sorry, but your dad is dead." Steven shakes his head, stunned. "Laura and some guy in a suit were at your dad's. Laura went in and came out alone. When I went in, there was this blonde woman, and this freaky red bug, and when I swatted it, she got all concerned with the thing, like it was her pet or something, so I ran. Ohh, and dude, your sister was freakishly tall, like her," he pointed to Kitty, "only taller. There is some freaky shit going on around here."

      • "What do you mean his dad was dead? You didn't fucking say anything about his dad being dead." Kaitlin says, freaking out, smacking Steven.

      • "Calm down Kaitlin," Kitty offers, her size quickly commanding authority. "We need to figure out what the hell is going on. Steven, your sister smashed her boyfriend and destroyed a whole school. Do you think she hates your dad enough to hurt him?"

      • "No. I don't know." Bradley is sitting on the ground, upset, shaking his head. "This is all screwed up. People are getting killed. Maybe we should destroy that thing."

      • Kaitlin raised her hand, interjecting, "uhm, maybe you could make me tall like her before you do? I'm just sayin', if you're going to destroy it."

      • Kitty dispelled her concerns, "nobody is destroying anything. Right now this device is the only advantage we have. We just need to figure out what to do with it. However, it's getting dark, so we'll need to hold up here for the night. Did you bring the camping supplies?"

      • "Yeah, they are out in the car. Bradley, come help me grab them." Bradley and Steven made for the car.

      • --

      • (steven guy-chats with Bradley about how hot kitty is now. how the tall-chic with boobs thing is really working for her. how he can really get some action tonight.)

      • --

      • inside, Kaitlin formally introduces herself, "Kitty, I don't think we've ever formally met, I'm Kaitlin Landry." The girls shake hands, Kitty awkwardly bending down on account of being a foot and a half taller than her. "Do you have the device? Because I'm starting to feel a little vertically challenged here. Especially if there is any trouble tonight."

      • Kitty laughs. "I suppose you are going to be standing watch. Wouldn't want you to be unprepared." She reaches deep into a nearby cabinet, pulling out the device. She checked the toggle, and a couple quick strikes of blue light streamed from the device. Kaitlin was a foot taller before she turned the device on herself, evening the score. "We girls can't be too careful." The girls both laughed as the guys came through the door, arms full of camping gear.

      • Steven took one look at the two eight foot tall girls, and dropped the cooler he was carrying. "Holy shit! We head out for one minute, and it's girls gone huge in here. Bradley, you better get that thing away from them before we have another incident."

      • Kaitlin sauntered towards Steven. "I just want to be able to hold my own in case there is any trouble tonight." She enjoyed the feeling over towering two feet over the boys. As she stepped up to Steve, she grabbed his shoulders and thrust her boobs an inch from his face. "You're not going to give me any trouble, are you, Steven?"

      • Steven looked around Kaitlin's imposing form to speak to Bradley, "It's a warm night. We'll take the porch and give you two some privacy in here." He grabbed a sleeping bag, and pulled at Kaitlin, surprised at how hard it was to budge her.

      • Steven hardly had her through the door before he felt her huge hand on his arm, hurting him a little as she pulled him in. She was leaning over as her palm wrapped around the back of his head, forcing his lips to hers, her tongue forcibly invading his mouth. When she let his head free, she whispered to him seductively, "how about you lay that sleeping bag out so a girl has a place to sit."

      • Kaitlin liked watching him hurry around below her, straightening out he blanket. He was on his knees when he looked up at her, as if waiting for her next instructions. ???

        • ??? how does kaitlin assert her dominance over him, and their 'past disagreements' in the relationship

      • ---

      • Meanwhile, inside, their departure had left Kitty and Bradley in a moment of awkward silence before Bradley spoke up. "Did you really need to be bigger?"

      • "Need? Define need?" She stepped up to him, her inflated chest now popping out of her top inches from his face. "If you think it's too much, the device is right over there. I was thinking you might like this." She hugged him into her, squeezing the side of his face into her half exposed breast.

        • ??? remind him of his ride inside her shirt

Ch. 4:

    • Morning comes at the old mill.

      • Bradley wakes up with big-Kitty spooning him from behind, one of her tits spilling over his neck. He pretends to be asleep, enjoying being up against her. He notices some sounds from the porch, and realizes S/K are awake. He listens for a while, and it quickly becomes obvious they are fooling around outside. His thoughts are interrupted by Kitty's voice, "you don't have to pretend you're still sleeping. I don't bite."