class struggle outline
Setting
in ancient egypt, in a history forgotten, royalty are like ascended gods, 'god essence' magic makes them powerful and 9' tall
...some humans are granted minor 'god essence', turning them into inhumanly strong 6'-7' demigods
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Summary
Characters
Harem servants
3d assets....
ancient Egyptian desert village + palace (with some hangling plants, water features)
countryside farm
Fruit / vases / stone blocks
Harem room / hung sheets (can we use simulated flat cloth and wind?)
Characters / Clothing
Guards - "ancient armor?" ?
Ancient Wrap clothing
random ideas
after Kossar and Nanu fall in love, Rana could grant Nanu increasing 'god essence' as she serves her. Kossar's and Nanu's relationship changes as she slowly ascends into a 7' demigod... and even though she is assigned to keep him save, Kossar is effectively her pet/slave
even though rana and kossar are not getting along - a fight breaks out between the royal houses, and Rana fears for his safety if any of her family discover and recognize him....
so she has Nanu take him away from the palace to keep him safe...
(maybe this is the reasons nanu gets the god essence? because they wont be questioned leaving the servant's palace)
Nanu has never been out of the palace, so Kossar takes the lead and introduces her to the world. everywhere they go, she's admired and worshipped as a demigod
at first she's just surprised, but eventually she starts to let them worship and pamper her
in a random scene, they witness a man beating his wife. nanu punishes the man, beating him badly and threatening to crush his hand or worse... but his wife interjects, begging her to forgive her husband, he's drunk, and he's learned his lesson, he needs his hand to work. Nanu makes the man swear he will never drink again, which he does as he bows at her feet.
she's amazed the first time she sees the ocean from a bluff.. its so beautiful she gets romantic, and they have sex in the grass
back at the palace, rana's house wins, but instead of ruling together, her brother turns against her, wanting the entire throne for himself. they fight, violently crushing buildings and people in the process. he is stronger, but she uses cunning to ultimately kills him, absorbing his 'god essence' and becoming 9'5" and the most powerful royal. the people cheer her on as their pharoah queen.
publicly she puts some reforms in motion.. to the pleasure of the people...
privately, she ascends the rest of her harem to 7' demigods.
she sends Masud to find Nanu and Kossar and bring them home,
then she sends Jabari and Rehema into the city to select (abduct) four of the most beautiful and talented to be their harem servants
"and what if they refuse?" - "it is not an invitation. you are a demigod
Story Arc
Kossar and Rana become friends as kids, Rana's family crushes Kossar's family and he goes into hiding
Kossar is found (age 19), and brought to Rana, who has ascended to 8' Goddesshood
At first it's fun for Kossar, both reuniting with Rana, and getting to know her two beautiful slave harem girls, Nanu and Rehma.
Kossar tries to explore, and soon realizes he's a prisoner, and protests. Rana has dominion over all mortals, and refuses to let him leave, insisting it's for his own good. he's safer under her protection, Kossar is angry and insolent, and Rana puts him in his place, though she would have killed any other man addressing her that way.
Kossar becomes withdrawn, despondent, depressed.
As Rana is puzzling to Nanu about Kossar's funk, they hatch a plan for Nanu to befriend Kossar, so she can show him the benefits of being a direct servant of Rana. Rana suggests she feign "secrecy", acting like Rana doesn't know, to disarm his anger.
Nanu sympathasizes, seduces, romances, and entertains Kossar, to get him out of his funk. Pretending it's "secret" and "forbidden", that Rana doesn't know. Eventually, they "fall in love". While lying in bed one night, he dreams of "taking her away from here" / but she just laughs. Why would she want to leave? She owns no lands, she has no wealth. If she were on the street, she would be begging for food. / He sours, concerned that eventually Rana will find out about their romance and force them to end it. / Nanu laughs. Rana doesn't only know, it was her idea! / Kossar is confused, not understanding. Does that mean this is all a ruse? / "Why would it be? Certainly I can love you and serve my Goddess at the same time. She was deeply concerned for you, and I liked you, so I asked if I could intervene. She told me to hide it from you, because she feared it would make you angry. None of us knew you and I would fall for each other, but I promise you, she is pleased. Now that you know, you can come with me to see her tomorrow. / What? No. I want to be far away from here and her, and I want to take you with me. / Silly man. She is a God. We have no more chance of escaping her than we do of stopping the Sun from rising. And even if we could, why would we want to? We live in luxury here! And if we serve her well, maybe when we get old, and she's tired of us, she'll give us a house to grow old together in. You have ignored her long enough. It's time for you to see her. You are her servant, we are all her servants. / "Don't remind me."
The next day, Nanu and Kossar arrive to see Rana.
Nanu is excited for the moment.... and coaxes Kossar to speak. / "Nanu tells me this was your idea, her and i being together. I sincerely love her. Thank you." / Nanu glares at him and shoves his shoulder, as if that wasn't all he was supposed to say. / "And I'm here to serve you."
Rana laughs, "you don't need to force him to say things he doesn't mean, Nanu," she gestured the woman over, inspecting and caressing her. Then she addressed Kossar. "I knew you would like her, and you two can have each other, on one condition." She reached for her waist, and swept the cloth aside, suggestively revealing her sex. "I expect you two to serve me, every week, together."
Nanu giggled, "we would be delighted, my Goddess." She hugged up against Rana, and slipped her hand under the fabric of her top, rubbing at her oversize breast. But Rana was still fixed on Kossar, watching his sour face betray him. She gestured Nanu to stop. / "Kossar," Rana said, disappointed. "Perhaps I have been too patient with you, spoiled you. Nanu, should I kill him now, or is he trainable?" / For a moment Nanu's face looked sour, but she wiped it away, "Whichever you wish, my Goddess. But I do believe I can teach him to properly serve you, with a little more time."
"I've given you enough time, but I do have a better idea. Nanu, go to the window over there." There was palpable silence as she walked across the room. "Will you jump, if I ask you to?" / "Of course my Goddess. It is my duty to serve you in life, and in death."
Suddenly Kossar was wracked with freight. "Kossar, you will get on your knees, and you will give me what I want, or you will watch her jump to her death." / "What? No!" Kossar exclaimed. But when he looked at Nanu, he saw the truth, the sadness in her eyes, silently pleading with him. "Wait. Wait," he said, holding his arms out towards Rana. "I'll do it." He stepped forward, kneeling between Rana's legs, approaching her oversize glistening sex. Rana said nothing as she watched him fight with himself, fight with his pride. As his mouth and lips connected with her skin, she could sense his reluctance. She had his obedience, but not his worship. "Is this really so hard? In exchange for all I give to you? I keep you safe, I give you Nanu. And yet you still struggle to accept your place." He was rubbing her sex, but it was not bringing her pleasure. She considered telling Nanu to jump anyway, so he would finally understand his place.
But the fact that he knew him before she had become what she was made things somehow different. She didn't want to destroy that part of him that looked at her and saw girl she used to be, the girl she hardly remembered herself. He clumsily fingered and suckled a bit too high on her clit, and she wondered if maybe he wasn't resisting, but he just wasn't any good at this yet. "Enough," she declared, shoving his forehead hard enough to send him crashing backwards onto the floor. "I will spare her, but you have to do better. Nanu, come here." The girl rushed over from the window. "His proficiency is your responsibility. Each day, see that he is aroused from dawn until dusk. But only allow him one release, by you, himself, or anyone, for every five times he makes a woman rush. And not just you, he has to please Rehema too. Do you understand?" / "Yes, yes of course my Goddess. I will see that it is done." / "Take him out of here, and send me my Femi. Maybe after they've fucked me enough times I'll forget how insolent this one is." Nanu nodded her head, bowing, and grabbed Kossar's arm.
???? maybe Rana gives Nanu a bit of 'god essence' to make her stronger than Kossar, so she can control him. - maybe this was actually a reward for completing her task of bringing Kossar into the fold
Once outside,
Nanu started profusely apologizing, "I'm so sorry my love. I didn't prepare you. I should have prepared you better." / Kossar stopped and faced her. "What?! She almost asked you to jump to your death, and you're apologizing? Would you have really done it?" / "What? Of course I would have, she's a Goddess. If we serve the Gods well we will have a place in the afterlife, if we don't we will find an eternity of suffering. Every child knows this. Would you have me shackle my soul for just a moment of ... I don't even know what. What purpose would it serve? She could easily throw me off or kill me in an instant anyway." She brushed her hand across his brow, wiping away sweat. "Kossar, I fear for you. She has extended you far more leniency than I've ever seen. I don't pretend to understand the will of a Goddess, but I advise you find your place, before you condemn yourself not only in this world, but in the next as well. We are both lucky to be alive right now."
She suddenly hugged him like she was glad he was alive, and he hugged her back, realizing the gravity of the situation. Then abruptly, almost frantically, she kissed him, diving her tongue into his mouth and rubbing her body into his. There was an energy to her passion, and she was so skilled, so seductive, that in moments he had forgotten everything but the feeling of her shape.
Back at the harem wing, they stumbled through the door, barely able to let go of each other. They'd fondled and kissed all through the hallways on the way there. ???
??? Nanu starts her torturous 'training' of Kossar
it's pleasurable and painful, and he tries to resist for a while, but eventually he gives in and gets good at it..
... once again, Nanu insists they visit Rana
Ideas
when Rana first finds Kossar, he's been cloistered in the countryside.. so she easily quells his protests by having her harem girls (Rehma and Nanu) sexually attend to him
however, the longer he stays, the more he wants to explore, and starts to feel 'captive' when he's not allowed.
Rana increasingly makes clear that they are no longer equals. She is a Goddess, and he is a mortal citizen. This makes him want to leave even more.. which she won't allow, supposedly "for his own good". still, she has fondness for him, and wants him to respond to her. when he does not, it's mortal insolence that she would normally kill another man for, but she won't harm Kossar. she becomes angry.
At this point, Kossar is despondent, and doesn't want to interact with Rana or the other harem members. He's barely eating. Staying to himself.
Nanu privately proposes (maybe during a bath?) that she may be able to bring Kossar around, soften him to his new situation, if Rana will allow her. Rana thinks it's a great idea.
Nanu approaches Kossar, sympathizing with his frustration, trying to break him out of his sadness. She uses some humor, and her beauty (in an ultra-revealing coverup - pic pic), to get some response out of him. She acts secretive, asking if she can confess something. She moves in very close, rubbing herself against him as she whispers in his ear, confessing that she's doesn't dare let Rana find out, but she's not always happy here either. "Even though most people would envy to have my pampered life, wanting for nothing, servants at my call - there was a time when I was afraid just being here. I wanted to run, to escape, but I feared what Rana would do to me, so you know what I did?
I died inside, gave up, and started doing whatever anyone told me to. So the boys, Jabari, and another man who'se no longer here, they started to fuck me, day in and day out. At first I hated myself. And I cried - only a little on the outside, but every time on the inside. But the more they did, the more I couldn't think about anything else. Somewhere the pain faded, and I actually started to enjoy it. I started experimenting, I started becoming alive again, and I turned the tables. I remember keeping Jabari hard and begging for three hours, and I made the other man climax four times in a row with no breaks. I had become fierce. I became so good at sex I was genuinely proud of myself, because I had never learned to be so good at anything in my life before that.
And after being reborn, I love being here. It's like home. I get to drink wine, and lie in the sun, and fuck and fuck as much as I want. And I get to serve Rana, which most citizens only dream of. Is that really so bad?
"Nanu, it's not like that for me. I don't belong here. I had a life." He bit his tongue before talking about his real name, his real family. "You just don't understand, you can't understand."
"Ohh, I understand. You're looking through the bars of the cage at what you can't have on the outside, when you should be looking into a mirror, and finding yourself. I can't do that for you, but I can help take the pain away. I see how you look at me. You are free to use me and fuck me any way you need. I welcome it. Or maybe you are dying like I was, and you want me to use and seduce you, make you my toy. I doubt you could resist me."
"Nanu, you don't understand." While he spoke she backed away, standing. She was stunningly beautiful. "I'm not meant to be in a cage. I. What are you ....d-doing?" She straddled him, gently pressing her crotch into his cock.
"Whatever I want." She took his hands, and placed one on her hip, and the other she cupped to her breast, holding it there until she felt him pressing and squeezing her on his own. Then she took his head in her hands, and kissed him. Softly at first, just dancing her lips against his, then deeply, forcing her tongue inward. He responded like any man would, pulling her closer, holding her, trying to get more. In just a few moments he was holding her hips, trying to force her harder against his cock. She didn't resist it. She controlled it. Slowed the pace.
"Growing up on a farm, I can't imagine you had too many women like me, throwing themselves at you." After he had shook his head, she held it in her hands, and stilled her body. "The thing you need to learn, Kossar, is that everyone is in a cage. The world is a cage. What we need to do is find our purpose. I've seen Rana kill men on the spot for being far less insolent than you, and yet she doesn't even hurt you. That's a kind of power. Maybe that's why you're here. Or maybe it's sometime else entirely, but that's what you need to figure out. In the meantime," she pulled his head to her sternum, and started raising and lowering her body, dragging her breasts against his chest, and her crotch against his manhood. "Let me show you what my purpose is."
Story
In ancient egypt, truth is stranger than fiction, as royalty are ascended gods, 9' tall and wielding power and magic.
In a private aristocratic academy, a boy and girl fall for each other as young teens.
They both have strange lives, privileged by almost orphan-like, cared for by groups of nannies. Their families, who are feuding for a chance to ascend to the throne, find out they are together, and forbid them from seeing each other. They meet, declaring their love, before she's whisked away, and the families are wrapped into a feud for survival. Her family starts to win, and his family sends him away to the countryside for his own safety.
Year later, he's tending a simple farm, when guards suspiciously show up to "bring him to the palace".
He tries to flee, but is easily captured, which the guards find humorous.
They ominously transport him to a royal chamber, where he's given instructions to wait here for the Netjeret (or praA sAt - daughter of pharoah). A stunning 7'5" tall woman arrives, adorned in gold and luxury. He's in awe, having only seen them from a distance, until she dismisses her guards, comes up close, and reveals herself to be his childhood love.
At first he's in shock, expecting never to see her again (maybe thinking her dead), and then at her state of near goddess-hood. She briefly explains her family's ascendance to the throne, and her access to the (energy force). How it took her a long time to find him, so they could be together. He is surprised at the suggestion, "how can they be together, when i'm a simple farmer, and you are... this... a goddess of the throne?".. she explains her plan. she is free to take any citizen into her harem, so he can stay with her, but he must never reveal who he truly is, for if her family ever found out, he would be immediately killed. Being 'abducted' into a harem has a bad reputation among the people, so he lashes back about 'not wanting to be her prisoner'. She understands his concern, but implores that it will be a ruse enabling her to keep him close and keep him safe, until she ascends to the throne and as pharoah can reinstate his name, title, and lands. (her language makes it ambigious whether he has a choice or not -- he doesn't)
?? situations...
she insists he stays a few days to think about it. (not allowing him to leave)... and further impresses upon him that he must tell noone who he is, or how they know each other. Then she calls for her guards and two women of her harem, instructing them to 'rid him of his filth, and prepare him' for an audience with her that evening.
he finds out that her "harem" is made up of very attractive men and women, who worship her and spend their days flirting and entertaining each other -- wanting for nothing. Two of the girls pamper, bathe, release, and groom him for an audience with her that evening.
he spends some 'royal' time with her... (with two men and two women of the harem), where she uses them for her entertainment and pleasure in way that's equally pleasurable for him. After which she leaves him to sleep with the gorgeous naked women of her harem.
he's teased for the average size of his cock, because the other two males are ridiculous oddities with massive cocks... ("what is so special about you!?!?" the girls ask).... the goddess explains to the ladies that she got him so they would have someone more their size....during sex acts, as the goddess pleasures him, she directs one of the men with huge cocks enter her... as if it's not strange at all
at first lures him in, treating him like her cherished lost love.. but gradually she treats him more like a plaything..asking him to 'perform' for her entertainment... when he protests, thinking they were "in love", she laughs, explaining that he mis-understood.. she's an ascended goddess... she cares for him, and for this she wishes to restore his family name, but he's merely a subject and will do as she commands..even if it's just for her amusement.
he tries to leave, but finds out he's actually her prisoner... (mostly just on her whim)...he grows despondent
?? idea - she is forced into an arranged marriage / creating jealousy and conflict between her ruling husband and him when she starts to re-fall for him
then her marraige is arranged. she meets the suitor, and he's older and awful... she confides in him, expecting him to understand, but he's still furious at her behavior... and lashes out... she physical establishes her dominance, and "excuses his improper behavior" because she cares for him, but instructs him not to test her... he becomes complacent.. which isn't really what she wanted..
she explains that she's genuinely upset, and wants to talk to him, like they used to... and when he doesn't give her what she wants, she 'punishes' him by having him tied up, instructing her girls to tease but not releave him, and forcing him to watch her fuck one of her huge-cock man-slaves
when she's done, she makes it clear she's not going to give him what he wants, until he gives her what she wants... and instructs her girl-slaves to torture him, to only stimulate him just enough to keep him hard, trying not to give him any relief
he spends the next 12 hours in torture.. first pleasurable, then painful, then agonizing.... by morning he's begging for them to stop because it hurts too much.... occasionally passing out
she visits, and asks how he's doing... the girls give her an update, giggling at how unusually enjoyable it was having him beg and squirm... she wakes him up, and asks if he's ready to submit.... "yes yes, anything." she tells the girls to leave, and gently explains she doesn't want to punish him, he just needs to learn his place, as she brings him to climax..
Then she brings up her conundrum with the arranged marriage. he tries to act like he still cares about her, even though he finds it very hard. he gives her useful suggestions, which she mis-interprets (how?)
?? idea - he falls back in love, and declares his love and desire to marry her
... but she has to let him down easy, as he is grossly mis-understanding that she's a goddess and he's a citizen
?? idea - he starts to fall for one of her harem girls, and she gets suspicious..
they try to hide it, but she finds out, and punishes them both... as if they are mis-behaving pets.
perhaps by commanding her not to touch him, and forcing him to watch her have sex with another harem-male