todo
more AshxAddison
more Regan/Addison PDA
more size comparison / handling
more Luna 'keeping him healthy' (food? forced workout?)
more immature moments for Ash (he should be an adult with child-like tantrums)
investigate look/personality 'styles' for women
mention luna's upcoming birthday
tracking implant
where to explain glimmer more?
Resolve : "College basketball played on the flat screen television. Women, twelve to thirteen feet in height, ran up and down the court, taking shots at a hoop hovering twenty feet above the ground."
Broad Notes
Political Stances - equalist, protectionist, claimst
Characters
Luna - 23yo (Oct 10) - (orig 5'3") - "full athletic C" - 10'11" - 900lbs - long dirty blond - athletic proportion
ex. (raechelle chase, pic pic pic pic pic pic pic pic - pic pic) or (pic pic pic)
job - para-legal
she's still benevolent, but uses her intellect to his and her benefit in more sly ways (tricking, trapping)
personality - cheery, positive, equalist, loyal, never jealous, open-minded (enjoys watching regan try on lingerie), embarasses easily
submissive, assertive - she figures out what others want, and takes action for them to get it
married a couple of months @ ch1
Ash (Ashland Trotter)- 23yo (Nov 2) - 5'9", near 155lbs
job - copy writer for a sports news show (supposed to be a software developer!)
personality - reserved, submissive, passive / dependent
why did ash marry an unascended?
likes to do things himself.
thinks ascended Luna will "be able to do fun things, like carry him"
Regan - 23yo - near 11'6" - DDD(F) nut brown hair (pic) - "significantly more full figured than Luna" (her tits are literally bigger than Ash's head)
ex. denise milani (bikini pic pic pic pic / bedroom pic pic pic ) (dress pic pic pic pic pic pic pic ) (tshirt/casual pic pic pic pic pic pic picpic pic )
job? - in law-school
personality - aggressive, loyal, troublemaker, honest, charismatic, dominant
has a thing for Luna, was her college roomate and is her best friend
visits a healer once a month
married to addison, 1 year @ ch1
big talker in bed
"snatches Ash off the ground at every opportunity"
"you do what I say for your own good"
Addison - 25yo - D/DD - 10'11" - angled bob crimson streaks against dark brown
ex (pic, pic pic pic pic) (pic) or (alice goodwin pic pic pic ) or (michelle lewin pic pic pic pic pic)
job - law enforcement of some kind... detective? handling male victims of abuse?
personality - passive, stoic, rebel, recluse, bottom (though not submissive)
"never needed a Healer", incredible self control
really likes Luna, but less vocal than Regan
Harley - 12'6" - - store manager at "Secret of the Goddess" (pic pic)
personality - outgoing
unmarried
...
Yuma - 32yo - 10'6" - japanese, lithe, straight black hair (pic pic pic)
job - Copy writing supervisor (Ash's boss) for sports news show
personality - playful, inspiring
?? married (poly/6 wives)
Amy - 25yo - 11' - drop-dead-gorgeous, brunette, perfect curves, always dressed to show them off (pic)
job - admin and coordinator for sports news show (drop dead gorgeous)
?? unmarried
other ex
Inspiration
http://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=4590&index=1
1% of society is male, most men are healers (because of intellectual inferiority)
men must marry by age 25
change: men injected with the live male mutated ascendancy virus at age 18, no near-age restriction
change: ash is a copywriter (not a software developer)
Questions
if R/A have been L/A guardians for 4 years, why did they only recently go on a hiking trip, and get carriers?
what is Luna's interest in women?
"My wife hugged as much of Addison as she could, nuzzling the side of her face against Addison’s shoulder and chest."
Regan has a crush on Luna. How does Addison feel about Luna?
can they get implants? -> no, but there is an expensive procedure involving repeated surgeries and healings to change size
given Regan's obvious flirting with Luna, what is her 'marriage' like WRT other women? Open? Closed?
what is the mechanism of Ascension? (virus? nanotech? unknown?)
who is their fourth wife? definetly an Equalist. -> Amy? Yuma? Random interviews? -- need more characters
how did luna and ash grow up together? -> tiny commune?
why did ash marry an un-ascended, when he could have had his picked of ascended?
why would ash have avoided ascended contact so strongly, only to embrace it when Luna ascends? Is the embrace always timid, because of his pre-disposition?
how does Ash feel about Addison?
"[Ash] feared Addison and Regan knew it.."
Why is Ash still complaining about riding in a car-seat?
Why is this the first time they've been on a long hike, or needed a carrier?
Did they recently move to Topeka, KS together?
If so, that might explain why good hiking trails are newly available, compared to where they lived before.
Where did they go to college? Where did they grow up? (we know L/A grew up together, but I don't think we know where)
Answers:
how long have R/A been around Ash/Luna? "the last four years"
where do they live? (it gets cold, but not too cold) -> Topeka, KS
has ash ever had any intimate experiences with an ascended (before they married)? -> no?
"Luna never wanted to ascend. She’d promised me when we’d first met as children and before we’d married. Together, we’d face the challenges of an oversized world, fighting fear with shared laughter, and discouragement with heartfelt embrace."
"By law, all men wed before the age of twenty-five.The majority tied the knot on their eighteenth birthday, and once married, they rarely appeared in public outside of their jobs."
legal "rules of engagement"
public female nudity is allowed, and common. male nudity is prohibited, except brief exposure.
carrying is allowed, unless protested by the man, unless he would be in danger
teasing, suggestive language, is permitted
female to male suggestive contact, such as petting, fondling, or other sexual touching, is permitted as long as the man does not protest
kissing, sex - are illegal unless married, or prior verbal confirmation is granted (how is that proven?)
public sex is illegal (but not very well enforced)
legal Guardian requirements
keep men safe, no excessive risks (men are too rare)
keep men healthy, healthy diet, appropriate exercise (for longevity)
keep men cared for and free of burden, by being head-of-household and providing for them (for happiness)
timeline
d0/Sat: Ascension (October 4th)
d1/Sun: chat with Regan, L reads Guardian Handbook, tracking implant for ash, tumor scan check for Luna ; ice-cream overdose ; vamp game ; first kiss ; first ascended sex
d2/Mon: morning, shower, ash @ work, lunch w/addison, romantic dinner
d3/Tues: Piano, dinner with the gang, talk of luna's career, wardrobe / action for Luna
d4/Wed: Fashion Show, discussion of Luna's extraordinary law/bar exam progress (tension)
d5/Thurs: tense morning, accidental confide in Yuma, Reconciliation (ash "all in")
d6/Fri: (October 10th, luna's birthday)
d7/Sat : large park visit with crew
how do ascended refer to male arousal / erection, to make it 'casual fun'?
neutral: wagging, showing, playing, trying to get my attention, reacting, responding,
playful: happy stick, little gun, stiffie, playtime, little unit
climax: little accident, accident, soiling, cleanup, wetspot, mistake, slip,
Luna, Ascended.
macro view...
1st week:
luna/ash new patterns, regan visits healing center. Luna's Birthday
ash harassment at work
1st weekend: oct 11
Amusement Park / "big scare" ash abduction.
2nd week:
luna running ash ragged. regan cares for sick/sleepy ash. regan/luna intervention turns intimate.
alt: regan teaches luna how to care for ash
luna @ work
2nd weekend: oct 18
'park picnic' , casual sunday
3rd week:
addison upset over regan/luna
addison/ash get closer, luna abuses her control over ash
3rd weekend: oct 25
4th week:
regan/addy tag-team 'proper' guardian care of ash. famous athlete takes an interest in ash.
4th weekend (nov 1)
wealthy-halloween-party, several men. R/Add have their way with one. athlete puts the moves on L/A
ash's birthday on nov 2
5th week: hawaii trip for Ash's birthday
climax -> L/A/R/A action
-- 1st week
goals
luna starts to enjoy her ascension
Ch1. Good Morning (luna and ash shower for the first time) (d2, hp)
Ch2. A day at the office (we see a typical day for Ash at his job) (d2, ns)
Ch3. Lunch with Addison (d2, ns)
Ch4. Good Cop bad Cop (d2, ns) - ash/addy shopping
Ch4. Romantic Dinner (d2/mon, s) pic/pic - 2nd luna healing. long night for ash.
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Ch5. Ohh so Talented (d3/tu) - luna's talents grow. eve with the girls. long night for ash.
Ch?. Healing Center - regan visits a healing center
Ch?. Study Night (luna helps Regan study)
after dinner... ash needs some sleep, luna helps regan study.
luna demonstrates her amazing knowledge of KS law. (she read that book, and a few others)
regan flirts with her, ALOT.
Ch?. Luna's Birthday (d6/f) - dinner at a restaurant, more L/A bedroom time.
-- 1st weekend (oct 11)
Ch?. Big Scare - ash is taken. addison's heroics recover him.
rainy sunday. everyone consoles, dotes over, and protects ash.
Luna asks for "help", she doesn't know what she's doing. Regan steps in ad connects with her.
sunday morning football
-- 2nd week
goals
luna: doesn't trust herself. more protective.
Ash: not getting enough sleep, trouble at work, gets a cold. stays home sick with Regan.
Ch?. Luna @ Work - (raise/promotion, BAR pass)
Ch?. Climbing the Ladder -- Ash's boss sexually harasses him.
Ch?. Celebration - drinks out for Luna to celebrate her new promotion/salary.
Ch?. Home Sick -- Ash is home sick from work. sleeping. Regan concerned.
good spot for a bachelor episode?
Ch?. Confessions - L/A heart-to-heart...
ash confesses harassment at work
luna confesses her 'new outlook' accepting being his Guardian caretaker
Ch?. Law and Fashion (d5/th) (redo as Regan/Luna scene)
-- 2nd weekend (oct 18)
Ch?. Park Picnic (d7/sat, ns, introduce Luna's sympathy to poly)
-- 3rd week
goals:
Addy/Regan tag-team taking care of Ash the way Guardians are supposed to
ash get some special treatment at work, draws them all into the life of famous people
Ch?. Morning Routine - Regan wakes and runs Ash through a health morning routine
Regan fitness intervention. (measurement, displeasure, forced treadmill exercise?)
Ch?. Luna's first case @ work -
Ch?. Healthy Dinner - Addy cooks up an overly healthy dinner for Ash, alongside their caloric intake.
Ch?. Gracious Host - ash gets the attention of a famous athlete @ work
-- 3rd weekend (oct 25)
Ch?. Living the Life - they attend a party invite from the famous athlete..
Regan seduces a man for her and Addy.
athlete corners Luna/Ash, puts the moves on them.
Ch?. Morning After - Addy is glowing. L/A confess their awkward experience
-- 4th week
-- 4th weekend (nov 1)
Ash's birthday nov 2
Ch?. Weekend Hiking (poly "tryout")
-- 5th week
Ch?. Beach Vacation
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-- random chapter notes...
Ch?. Ash Addison Regan - random ideas
Ch?. Up All Night
Ch?. Evening with Friends (introduce draft, poly-exemption, Luna's poly interest, yuma offer)
Ch?. Unexpected Confidences (Yuma councils him on his situation with Luna)
Ch?. Finding a Wife
----- TV Show Ideas
Random ideas forming....
Ash home sick from work (watched by Regan)
Regan/Ash are out on the town, Ash is accidentally glimmered (how?). Regan has to 'relieve him'.
Luna is using Ash a little too much... Regan/Addison are upset, try to intervene.
Luna & Regan hanky panky
how does it first happen?
flirting with the four of them? drunk? Regan is wearing something risque (pic pic pic)
Luna wants to feel her tits... "you never used to ask before"
Regan hits on Luna (when they are alone)
Regan hits on Luna (when Ash is there)
Regan has dreamed of kissing Luna. She asks for an exception to their little rule. Just one kiss. It turns into something more steamy than Ash expected, with Luna squeezing Regan's tits.. only eventually breaking free and apologizing for getting carried away... regan says she can do it anytime.
Luna whisper confesses to Regan that Ash really wants to play with her tits.
Regan teases Ash, which is really teasing them both.
After a bit on the couch, Regan offers to go to bed with them
...after this Luna & Ash renegotiate the kissing rule (ash can only kiss women they've agreed he can trust, Heal, be alone with ... her, Regan, Addison)
-- visit a bar (ns) (threat/attack on Ash)
Luna/Ash excited to be able to travel by themselves. Luna is in a super-sexy dress from her new wardrobe.
When they arrive, Addison is already there. Regan hasn't arrived yet. ladies eye Ash and send him drinks (as typical), sit with them and flirt, touch him, push the boundaries
When Ash isn't being teased, he's checking out the crazy bar scene. gorgeous ascended women hitting on each-other..
Addison steps away.
Live band plays, singer comes to their table after. asks if they want to come backstage. (ash is the celebrity)
Luna/Ash go backstage, where we get to see the Ascended drug scene, and the band's expectations that they came back to gang-bang Ash. She's outnumbered and doesn't know what to do.
Suddenly Addison appears, hits someone. Then tells Luna to wake the fuck up and get him back. Addison beats her way through the women. Eventually they get Ash back, and get out of there.
When safe, Luna finally swears, "holy shit". Addison admonishes her for being so reckless. She needs to take being a Guardian more seriously. The world is a dangerous place for men, for Ash. Regan arrives, asking what happened.
-- Visit to the mall / lingerie shop (ns)
luna's been promoted
We see more of how Ash gets lots of attention, and Luna carts him around. She likes that he gets attention, and he's hers.
Ash doesn't like clothing shopping, but he's slightly more interested now that it's Luna. There is some lingerie shopping.
...maybe during some commotion (alarm?), Ash gets taken. Luna uses her GPS tracker to find him quickly. Ash is thankful. They talk about how it may be getting too unsafe for him to be in public.
-- visit historical district (buildings preserved from 1800-2000, during the transition) (ns)
-- draft is official, and is a minimum 4-month draft, starting in two weeks
puts even more pressure on Ash/Luna/Poly, Luna was already onboard, Ash agrees
Ash proposed to Regan/Addison (w/Luna), they are thrilled, discuss the 'marriage merger', Regan teases Ash
-- Luna and Regan go on a work-trip
Regan is doing an internship at Luna's law-firm, and the two of them are being sent on a two day trip
-- a way for us to get to know Addison more....
-- maybe Ash breaks through to Addison, and gets her to turn on her darker side
idea 1: "you know what I want? What I've always wanted? A man to handle me, to spank me." She turns around, posing on all fours, her ass as a target. "Come on Ash. You wanted to know. This is what I want. Spank me." He swatted at her ass, finding it rock-hard on contact. "Come on. I didn't even feel that. Really throw yourself into it." He winds up, and smacks her hard, yelping in the process as it stung his hand while she hardly felt it. "Get yourself a little sting there did ya?"
idea 2:
Addison asks him what it feels like to be taken-car-of all day long. he doesn't think he is, doesn't think it's so bad. Addison wishes she could be taken care of, but since he can't exactly care for her, they'll play a little game. She's only going to do exactly what he tells her. There is a bit of a standoff at first. Finally, he gives in, asks if she will make dinner.
she smiles and heads off (now you're getting it). she makes dinner sets it on the table. He struggles with his chair, manages to get into the booster, but his chair is not pushed into the table. (Addison, will you push in my chair?) Which she gladly does.
After dinner, he asks her to get him out of the Chair, and clean up after dinner.
idea 3:
- subplot.... ash/luna forced to go poly?
-- draft starts up (but they need 5, not 3)
they interview "applicants", the applicants think they are only being interviewed by Ash, but their situation is "unique".
they accept two more women, but they don't fully 'trust' them...
-- household tension and demands
pressure for Ash to stop working, so he has time and energy to service five women more often...
safer - full-time companion coverage for ash
-- one of the women is secretly a militant, trying to steal ash...
ash is nearly stolen, but Luna had a guard detail watching Ash..
Luna confesses that her work/income situation is a bit more extreme than she let on. she's filthy rich.
other ideas
Luna's has a new understanding of Regan and Addison affection towards Ash. Luna softens her hold on Ash, letting him "heal" Regan and Addison, and slowly (and at times, uncomfortably) entering into a polygamy
Luna starts to read voraciously, and (with conflict) finds out she's a genius, after Ash helps her get over it, she becomes a wealthy inventor.
"male safe" summer time bikini beach vacation (airplane?)
Ascended women take away more male rights
Luna/Regan leave Ash with Addison (overnight) after they are Poly
after Ash starts Healing Yuma, he gets an opportunity to anchor a pre-recorded segment (women are turned on hearing men talk about sports athletes)
Ash/Luna invited onto TV exclusive, highlighting their relationship before and after ascension, paid handsomely
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Ash/Luna near a pregnant woman (pic)