I'm looking for some brainstorming on a story idea. A good brainstorm generates lots of ideas that bounce off each-other so please post any idea you have however big or small. I tried my best to keep this summary short, as it's not supposed to be a story in-itself, but an outline of a bunch of concepts. However, various sections ended up with a bit more story detail worked in to try to relate what I'm thinking. Please share your thoughts about the numbered sections or what should happen in between.
SUMMARY:
A new drug therapy technology is developed where a long-lasting dna-based protein factory is injected into the patient and then mediated by an extra chemical which is delivered in a controlled fashion. One early application of this technology is in stunted growth, where the pituitary slows delivering insufficient HGH (human growth hormone). A study is fairly successful, but seems to have effects which outlast both the intended duration and the intended patients. As the therapy starts spreading to the general population, and some college students learn the specific trigger chemical, some unnatural reactions result.
SKETCHES:
part 1: hasty
Part 2: Unexpected
Part 3: Expansion
(5) A few months later the big accident takes place. He's working his weekly campus first-aid station hours, and a girl comes in with a bad gash on her shin. Becka was playing vollyball on the sand court when there was a collision and she landed badly on the one of the net stakes. He sterilizes and dresses the wound and leaves her with some forms to fill out while attending another student. Several minutes later, he hears her crying out in pain.
(6) Rushing back in, she is heaved over grabbing at her stomach. She moans and cries that it hurts all over. He's not trained to deal with anything major, and it must be something more than a skinned knee. He asks her a series of questions about what more might have happened to her. Did she eat anything unusual. Was she sure she wasn't in some kind of fight? did someone attack her? Just as he's suggesting he call an ambulance to take her to the hospital, her pains starts to subside and she calms down on the aid-station cot. As she's no longer leaning over clutching her stomach, Rick can see that she's now visibly busting out her spandex sportsbra, and on second look can see she seems just a little bit taller, a little bit bigger, than she was just minutes before. He glances over at the iodine antiseptic and draws a far-fetched conclusion that it somehow must be the trigger therapy. However, when asked she denies ever having heard of any drug study, and certainly wouldn't have participated in one.
(7) Rick contacts the administrators of the trigger study. And soon there are rumors that Becka isn't the only girl on campus with an unusual growth spurt. Everyone quickly agrees to switch the student first-aid antiseptic to a different chemical as a precaution. However, the trigger study administrators soon drop interest in an investigation, as none of the affected were in their study. Rick becomes preoccupied with figuring out the connection. He starts to watch Becka around campus. Annie misinterprets his purpose and confronts him with a bit of jealousy. He breaks down and explains his concern, how there could be some kind of epidemic if the drug from the study is somehow spreading. Annie is relieved at his explanation and then curious that there could be other 'trigger girls' like her and her sister. Annie agrees to find out what she can.
Part 4: Safety First
(8) Annie befriends the trigger girls with the common bond of unusual growth spurts. After a couple weeks she reports to Rick that it's clear Becka and the other girls are still growing. Rick is at first concerned with the cause and what kind of danger they could be in. However, as Annie explains the differences she observed, that they had dramatic overnight growth spurts, Rick's concern turns to relief and fascination as he realizes they must be self-administering the trigger. He's interested in the details, and as Annie answers that she thinks Becka is at least three inches taller her own 6'1", Rick uses a nearby computer to confirm that Becka's Volleyball profile lists her height as 5'10" at the start of the season. He shares his stream of consciousness about what is going on and his relief that even if the drug is unintentionally spreading, hopefully it wont have a material effect on anyone not administering the trigger.
(9) Annie introduces Rick to the trigger girls so he can explain what's happening to them. They are fascinated to know the details, though dismissive at his warnings about administering the trigger anymore. He gleans from the conversation that Becka is the only one that knows what the trigger is, and that she likes it that way. Becka turns his caution towards Annie, and challenges him that Annie might be considering getting a little boost. Would he really find it so bad if she gained another couple inches? Annie tries to confess she's already taller than she needs to be, but Becka reminds her she really wants to know what Rick thinks. Becka easily traps him into confessing he finds Annie more attractive at her current stature than a short year ago when she was a 5'5" little girl. She stands Annie next to her, and drawing attention to more differences than just their height she challenges Rick to swear he wouldn't like it if Annie received a trigger dose. He's trapped, and can't lie right in front of Annie. He dodges the question by stating that his primary concern is for her health. Becka goes back and forth with him, making clear to everyone that he'd only be more attracted to Annie if she received a trigger boost. Annie is increasingly surprised and fascinated at the whole interaction. Becka returns to his caution and agrees to heed his warning as she acknowledges there could be health consequences they are not yet aware of.
(10) Becka then addresses the other girls and diverts the conversation to an entirely different topic, that they should stop struggling with their jock boyfriends who are only concerned with establishing their own superiority. She uses Rick to confirm a new set of assertions, that there are boys out there that idolize the trigger girls, and would be happy not only to be with them, without any frustration at their height, but would encourage them. He of course knows several of his friends that have mentioned and been fascinated seeing the trigger girls around campus, and confirms as much.
(11) Annie spends the next few days basically begging for Rick to give her a trigger does. If he doesn't do it, she'll have to turn to Becka. She prays on his concern for her safety, and he finally caves. After getting an inch boost overnight, the next several weeks are punctuated with her periodic pressure for another dose. Rick always resisting at first in the name of safety, asking her to wait a little longer, and then finally caving in. Looking back he can't believe she's grown 6 inches taller in 4 weeks, in addition to her 'other' increases. She's now known as one of the Trigger Girls, a term that has spread around campus, he's also getting increasing pressure from his friends to about what it's like to date her. Some make fun of him, others are envous and want to be introduced to the other girls. When Becka declares it's time for them to meet boys who can really appreciate them, it doesn't take Rick long to assemble some interested friends.
Part 5: Connections
(12) A couple weeks later Rick and his friends show up at the trigger girls unofficial sorority house. His friends, having seen the girls around campus with huge athletic jocks, wonder why they are even being invited, thinking it's some kind of joke. Rick's g/f Annie answers the door towering over them nearly 7' tall in heels and a few more inches up the front door step. She assures them it's no joke as she greets Rick, hugging him, kissing the top of his forehead, and taking his hand as she addresses his friends. 'The sports jocks have fragile egos, ever since the girls decided to be taller than they are, they whine and fight about it like babies. The girls are done with that.' She leans over to bring her eyes to the same height as one of Rick's friends, placing her free hand on his shoulder. 'If you boys had a girlfriend taller than you, do you think you'd wine and complain about it?" They shook their heads. 'That's exactly why they want to meet you.'
(13) Rick and his friends are led to the living room and an amazing sight. The Trigger Girls were all present, lounging on pieces of living room furniture obviously too small for them. Even though Rick was used to being around Annie, and seeing them all had become a semi-regular event with his girlfriend among them, the sight of four amazon proportioned college girls laid out and focusing their full attention caused his heart to skip a beat. [how many are there? 3?] Becka is sitting at one end of a couch, her legs extending across and taking up the rest of it. She asks Rick to introduce his friends, and makes her pick first, making it clear which boy her date is with. [introductions]
(14) [pairing off, narrate each mini-date] [what is different about the different girls?]
- Becka : athletic build, tallest (6'6" ?), proportional C, blond 'wholesome sporty' look, vollyball player
- Suzanne : most curvy, most busty, (6'2" and now proportionally DD), dark curly hair
- Lynn : asian, thinnest yet athletic and newly busty (D), (6'4"), long straight dark hair, also a vollyball player
- Annie : 'girl next door', 6'4", proportional C, brown straight hair,
[what about the boy-dates?]
- Rick : 5'10" pre-med, Annie's b/f (4" delta)
- Brian : 5'10" business major, Lynn's date, (6" delta)
- Steve : 5'6" math major, Suzanne's date (8" delta)
- Alex : 5'8" lawyer, Becka's date (10" delta)
(14a) Lynn proceeds to 'interview' Brian for future income potential. She's coming across as materialistic. He has family money, so his disinterest in a gold-digger causes him to look around the room, she both encourages him, and explains that her job is pleasing her man. She uses the third person in telling him how wet it makes her to turn on her man in public when he can't do anything about it, while simultaneously demonstrating with examples. She sits across his lap. She continues to tease him while pushing him to confess which of the other girls he thinks is more attractive, and then specifically what is more attractive about her. She apologizes for being naughty, and confesses if he were her partner he'd have every right to carry her off into private where she could be punished and told exactly how to make it up to him.. He wants to be on the other end of that what-if situation. She toys with him as he has to confess he's very interested in having a partner like that, and tries to justify with his future earning potential. He doesn't however, have the leverage to carry her off, in fact he's pinned into the chair by her. She retorts that she needs more than earning potential, that she needs a man who can really take charge. She plays it off like maybe she just wasn't naughty enough yet, and eventually gets him to command her to take him to her room.
(14b) As Becka and Alex become acquainted, she stops his attempts to sit on inappropriate furniture (coffee table, end table), eventually offering him her lap, since there isn't any other place to sit. It doesn't take long for the two of them to be wrapped around eachother on the couch. A little later still they are full on making out, and despite his attempts to get her to retire to privacy, she wants to stay right there. Eventually couple after couple leaves the room until they have privacy right there in the living room. When he jokes about it she laughs, tossing him about and causing him to spill wine on her shirt. After chiding him for doing it intentionally, she leads him to her room as he gets a first taste of their height difference. [consider brief carrying] In her bathroom she strips right in front of him to wipe herself clean, instructs him to clean the wine out of her shirt right away so it doesn't stain. He's staring at her naked top as she finishes wiping herself up and she teases him for it. Eventually she puts on another shirt and waits for him to finish his clothes washing duties.
(14a.2) After leading her date to her room, Lynn starts in with an obviously rehearsed and playful apology for how bad she's been, with a little bit of explicit description of the 'bad' things she did thrown in. This is the first time he's stood next to her, so he's also getting a full dose of the six inches of height she has on his 5'10". She promises to do whatever he wants to make it up to him, but first she really deserves some punishment, and if he's truly going to teach her a lesson he'll give her a good spanking. She expresses relief at how much better she'll feel, and quickly gets on her knees bending over the bed, looking back over her shoulder expectedly. He wants to have sex with her much more than spank her, but he plays along and steps up to give her some swats. She hardly notices, so he steps up the effort, but even smacking her pretty hard, she hardly notices. Her rear is solid and he feels his hand is taking most of the punishment against her jeans. When he says as much, she blames it on herself trying to get off easy. She stands up and wiggles out of her jeans, leaving a tiny black lace panty visible as she settles back into position. After a few swats on her bare bottom, he's getting really turned on, but she's still not being punished. She points out that her bottom doesn't even have any red on it, and suggests he try his belt. He's reluctant, but agrees and a couple swats later she's letting out shrieks of conflicted pain that she clearly enjoys. He counts ten before stopping.
She sits up next to him and expresses relief that he punished her far less than she deserved, followed by their first kiss. Short and soft at first. "I promise no more teasing." He was looking up at her face as she slipped her hands into his hair and brought her lips down to his to resume her kiss with much more passion. While enjoying the motions of her tongue, his hands reached down against her bare hips and slipped up under the edge of her shirt. Again she briefly pulled away. "Let me get that for you," as she quickly pulled her shirt over her head and tossed it to the floor. Her slender torso and arms over her head made him feel short sitting next to her, but most of his attention was on her breasts looked plumped and pushed together in a black lace bra.
(14c) Steve is nervous and the more Suzanne flirts the more he talks about coursework. she breaks away and finds out from rick he's a virgin. [she also complements and teases rick with how she'd like to borrow him from annie] when she returns to her date, she encourages him to talk about school while simultaneously turning up her flirtations. She unbuttons and fidgets with her blouse until he can no longer keep his train of thought. When her games force him to confess he's a virgin, she acts melodramtically sympathetic to how tough it must be as a college senior. She tries to help him brainstorm with him what he could do about it. (hire a call girl. go home with someone drunk one night at the bars. etc. etc.) until eventually she pretends to accidentally stumble on the idea that she could help him lose his virginity. Even though she's clearly not his type, if it would help out his little situation, she'd be willing to do it as a friend.. at first he stumbles over his responses, as he's not only attracted to her, but severely smitten. However, the more she downplays it as a simple thing, the more he relaxes and agrees with her. [you've built it up in your mind, but it's not a big deal. i've slept with boys much less interseting that you, and for most of them the whole thing only lasted a few seconds.] Becka and her date are full-on making out next to them, and she chides them for doing it in the living room, before suggesting that the two of them leave to give the makeout twins some privacy. Up in her room she changes the subject in a way that seems overly plutonic and when he finally has the guts to ask when she could help him, she unexpectedly drops what's she's doing and suggests they do it right then, immediately starting to strip off her top.....
(14d) [what to do with Rick and Annie?] maybe they are just peeping in on the couples at first, wondering how it's going. Annie asks Rick to get them all some drinks. Upon returning, they start to notice all the flirting and teasing. Rick mentions Suzanne's remark about trying to borrow him and annie laughs, confessing she's been joking about it all week - though annie knows she's quite serious. Annie jokes about how she's been trying to see what she could get in exchange, and has fun joking about Rick as her property. She recounts her suggested 'fees' for each successive level of intimacy Suzanne would be entitled to with Rick. [household chores and homework favors?] Annie jokes that she'd be happy to strike a deal because she'd be happy to get the payoff, and Rick isn't sure how to respond... whether this is just all joking fun or actually a real possibility.. which starts to get him excited. It also causes him to watch Suzanne a little more closely, notice the way she's fidgeting with her blouse, and check out her impossibly huge rack. Annie teases him for staring before dragging him off 'better remind you which girl gets to have her way with you'. [perhaps the interaction is not covered, as we've seen alot of annie and rick in previous chapters.]
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Part 6: Do's and Don'ts
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Part 7: Heisenberg
Part 8: