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Warm-Up Paragraphs Cycle 7
#1 2/8/24
Topic Sentence: Author, Singer, Actor
Detail 1 - Laurie Halse Anderson
Sub Detail 1,1: Suspenseful and informal
Sub Detail 1,2: Voice in the writing and beautiful detail
Detail 2 - BoyWithUke
Sub Detail 2,1: Feeling
Seb Detail 2,2: Chill
Detail 3: Adam Sandler
Sub Detail 3,1: Funny
Sub Detail 3,2: Excellent acting
Conclusion: after all
When it comes to favorites, singers, authors, and actors are easy to pick out. Firstly, my favorite author is Laurie Halse Anderson, the writer of my favorite trilogy, Chains. When LHA writes, so much suspense shines through while there are so much informal aspects in the text as well. She also puts so much voice and writes beautiful details in all of her pieces. Secondly, Boywithuke is my “singer.” Boywithuke adds so much feeling in his songs, and almost all of them are relatable. His rap songs are also chill. Finally, Adam Sandler is by far my favorite actor. He is so funny in every movie, from Happy Gilmore to Billy Maddison. While he is funny, he’s also an excellent actor. After all, I love singers, authors, and actors!
#2 2/8/24
Topic Sentence: The rush of games is coming!
Detail 1: THE CHAMPIONS League!
Sub Detail 1,1: Action, action, action.
Sub Detail 1,2: Copenhagen is a nice fixture that will be fun and enjoyable to watch.
Detail 2: Premier League Galore!
Sub Detail 2,1: Chelsea, Brentford, and Everton are all fun fixtures to enjoy.
Sub Detail 2,2: And after that, the derby.
Detail 3: Haaland, Haaland!
Sub Detail 3,1: The striker is back!
Sub Detail 3,2: Goal after goal after golazo.
Conclusion: After all
It’s here lads! The rush of games for Man City is going to be so much fun. Firstly, the Champions League is back again! There will be action and goals in Man City’s fixture. Copenhagen is also a nice fixture that will be super enjoyable to watch. Secondly, Premier League Galore! Who doesn’t love having fun fixtures like Chelsea, Brentford, and Everton in two weeks? Also, after these fixtures, we get an Etihad Manchester Derby! Finally, Haaland, Haaland, he’s a blue just like his dad. The fantastic striker is back better than ever. He’ll score loads of golazos as well. After all, what Man City fan is not excited for our rush of games?
2-13-24 #3
Topic Sentence: Perfect lineup
Detail 1: Haaland and De Bruyne link up
Sub Detail: Tactically perfect for scoring
Sub Detail: Playmaker in midfield
Detail: Defensive wall
Sub Detail: We know Copenhagen is hungry
Sub Detail: Ruben Dias, Stones
Detail: Last season's lineup
Sub Detail: Good taste of 22/23
Sub Detail: Chemistirized.
Conclusion
CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! The Champions League is back and Man City are in it to win it. The lineup is the definition of class, and I’ll be telling my three favorite parts of it. Firstly, Kevin De Bruyne and Haaland are the perfect link-up. Tactically, Pep will be super pleased with how the goalscoring comes from those two. De Bruyne is a playmaker in midfielder and he not only can help Haaland, but everyone on the pitch will benefit from his giving. Secondly, the backline is a defensive wall. We all know Copenhagen is hungry, but they will never be able to get past Kyle Walker. Also, in the CB roles Ruben Dias and John Stones are going to dominate defensively. Finally, there are no new signed players in the starting xi, so it will be a good taste of last season. Being able to see a lineup that Pep has worked with before will be excellent and it will definitely satisfy all the fans. It is highly chemistrized too, so the plays on the pitch will be perfection. After all, I’m so excited for the match, and like I always say, CMON CITEH!
2-14-24 #4
Topic Sentence: Great Copenhagen game
Detail 1: defensive and decisive
Sub Detail 1: great scoring
Sub detail 2: Chance making precise
Detail 2: King kdb
Sub detail 1 goal and assist
Sub detail 2 amazing
Detail 3: gg
Sub detail: defensive
Sub detail: goalkeeper
Conclusion
Yesterday was an amazing Champions League night in Denmark. Firstly, everyone was defensive and decisive. The defensive style of play helped produce three helpful goals. The decisiveness improved the flow of the game. Secondly, King KDB showed a masterclass. He had a goal and an assist and played an excellent game. He was the hearth of all the gameplay that occurred. Finally, it was a great effort by Copenhagen. They played defensively throughout the entire game. Credit to their goalkeeper as well. After all, I loved watching the Man City vs Copenhagen game.
2-15-24, #5
Topic: Wonka was a somehow good movie
Detail: The musical was good
Sub Detail 1: Wonka was a good actor and he had singing
Sub Detail 2: The singing helped the movie flow
Detail: Amazing actors
Sub detail 1: like real life
Sub detail 2: suspenseful
Detail 3: emotional and lesson teaching
Sub detail: I cried at the end
Sub detail: moral of dreams
Conclusion
I watched Wonka the other day, and it was somehow good. Firstly, the musical aspect of it was amazing. Wonka was such an amazing actor and he sang beautifully. The musicals also made the movie slow and add some humor. Secondly, the actors were amazing. Wonka was such a good actor that he made it seem like real life! It was also very suspenseful, and without the fantastic actors, it wouldn’t be so suspenseful after all. Finally, it was an emotional and lesson-teaching movie. I even cried at the end. It also taught a great moral of keeping your dreams. After all, Wonka was a great movie and I didn’t expect it to be.
2/16/24 #6
Topic sentence Man City vs Chelsea
Detail: Brother Rivalry
SD: Loud House
SD: Nailbiting
Detail: Amazing Match Home
SD: Great Players
SD: Possession to City
Detail: Haaland and De Bruyne
SD De Bruyne Playmaker
SD Haaland Goalscoring
Conclusion
Man City VS Chelsea at home is my favorite match of the season, and it’s happening tomorrow. Firstly, the Solovey brother rivalry takes place. With my brother supporting Chelsea, and me supporting Citeh, it will be a loud house. The suspense of my brother’s Chelsea chants and mine combined will make a nail-biting game. Secondly, it’s an amazing match and it is in Manchester. There will be great players from both sides, but the City chants will make the City players play better. Also, all the possession will go to Man City, so that’s another bonus from home. Finally, Haaland and De Bruyne are the link-up of the century. De Bruyne will make great plays that make a decisive game. While Haaland is a goalscoring machine. After all, I am so excited for Man City VS Chelsea and CMON CITEHHHH!
#7 2/20/24
Neil Maupay is going to be put in his place
Detail 1: blue cards are coming but he going to get a yellow for now
Sub detail 1: all he does is complain and its annoying
Sub detail 2: arguing with refs playstyle+
Detail 2: Brentford dont know the etihad
Sub detail: we crushed um at the gtech
Sub detail: phil foden masterclass
Detail 3: Ivan toney, more like Ivan phony
Sub detail: free kicks are his only skill
Sub detail: he only scores against mid-clubs
Conclusion
CMON CITEH! Tomorrow is Man City’s double GW fixture against Brentford, and the whole squad is ready to put Neil Maupuy in his place. Firstly, he won’t be ready for when blue cards come to football, but he likes to farm yellow cards. All he does is complain to the ref and it gets annoying; which deserves a blue card. Also, arguing with refs is like a playstyle+ in Fifa for him. He doesn’t stop and the refs probably hate him. Secondly, Brentford have no idea what will hit them at the Etihad Stadium. We crushed them at GTech and made that look easy, playing them at home is going to be a walk in the park. With Phil Foden’s masterclass, he’ll walk on the pitch knowing one thing, to score another hatrick. Finally, Ivan Toney is more like Ivan Phony these days. His only skill are freekicks, and he always gets easy positions. In fact, he only scores against mid clubs. After all, Brentford are going to be ripped apart at the Etihad. CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! CITEH!
# 8 2/21
The brentford game was a bloody mess and heres how to fix it
Detail 1: 2x cdm would help enforce the defense against teams that attack on the break
Sub detail: matheus nunes next to rodri would be one way to solve that getting on the break problem
Sub detail: rodri can also play back more if nunes is besides him
Detail: set pieces careful attacking delivery
Sub detail: freekicks taken long and aim haaland
Sub detail: corners taken to far post or pass long
Detail: wing play when doku comes on
Sub detail: creativity when he came on
Sub detail: little dribble ins
Conclusion
The game against Brentford was a good win, but I have to complain a bit about the lack of tactics from Pep, which a city fan should never expect. Firstly, if we played a formation with two CDMS we could have defended better against the attacking side. Matheus Nunes would be an easy answer to this problem as he could be versatile when Brentford was on the break. Also, Rodri could have played more back if Nunes was a reinforcement and Alvarez could have taken a benched match. Secondly, if we were more thoughtful when taking set pieces and delivering them we could have played so much better. Freekicks could have been taken longer and aimed at Haaland for headers. And for the corners, they could have been taken as a long pass or to the far post. Finally, we could have played on the wing when Doku came on. That would give us creativity with dribbles. Doku could also do a little dribble and score like he always does. After all, at least we got three points and I’m satisfied.
#9 2/22/24
Real Madrid - Where Have They Gone Now?
Detail 1: The el classico died
Sub Detail: No more Messi and Ronaldo
Sub detail: Pep Guardiola and the special one Mourinho
Detail 2: What big players? None
Sub detail: Apart from Bellingham and Vini, Ronaldo, Bale, Benzema, and all the big players left
Sub Detail: Also, no player rivalries
Detail 3: The La Liga, is more like the Waaa Liga.
Sub detail: It’s not that competitive anymore
Sub detail: Farmers league???????
Conclusion
Real Madrid is a legendary club, but I have to admit that the hype for them has just died down over the past few years. Firstly, the El Classico has died. The famous rivalry is just not what it used to be with Messi and Ronaldo going head to head, and all the clashing on the pitch. Pep Guardiola is no longer up against “the special one,” (which he is obviously not as being sacked by Roma and has trash tactics) Jose Mourinho because Pep is now crushing it in the Premier League, managing Man City and going up against the new hot managers like Jurgen Klopp, and Mikel Arteta. Carlo Ancelotti is not that good. Secondly, where have the big players gone? Apart from Bellingham and Vini Jr, Ronaldo, Bale, Benzema, and all the big players have left and either retired or have continued on with their careers. Also, there are no big-player rivalries. No, you're not, you’re telling me that Pedri and Bellingham are a rivalry? No way. Finally, the La Liga now is more like the “Wa” Liga because no one really cares about it. It’s not that competitive anymore, and Real Madrid just dominates it, so why support them as a bandwagon? Wait a second, La Liga is turning into a farmers league! After all, Real Madrid might have won the most trophies in football history, but now, now, who cares?
Jeremy Doku - Top 3 Features
Detail 1: Creative Skills On The Wing
Sub Detail: Gets Past Defenders
Sub Detail: Influential and Inspiring Style
Detail 2: Speed
Sub Detail: Assisting Goals
Sub Detail: Zhuzh When Playing
Detail 3: Chemistry WIth Players
Sub Detail: KDB
Sub Detail: Haaland
Conclusion
Jeremy Doku is one of my favorite football players right now, and in this warm-up paragraph, I’ll be writing about my top three favorite things about him. Firstly, his creative skills when on the wing make him a fan favorite. You might have seen him in the Bournemouth game when he got past defenders with flair. His creativity also is very inspiring and influential to young fans. Secondly, his speed and decisiveness make him a superstar too. His speed helps him assist goals a lot. Also, he has so much zhuzh when he picks up the pace. Finally, his chemistry with the City squad. KDB, his Belgian teammate has great links with him. Haaland, too, Doku is good friends with. After all, Jeremy Doku is awesome.
#1 2/27
Luton Town VS City Match Preview
De Bruyne + Haaland
Link up
Assist + Goalscorer masters
No rodri, oh no
Game won game lost with rodri ratio
Center of the pitch goes to.. Matteo kovacic
Stefan Ortega masterclass
Great keeper in training
Ederson bench + goats
Conclusion
CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! Luton Town plays Man Citeh today, and we’re ready to crush it! Firstly, the De Bruyne and Haaland link-up is insane. When you have a masterclass midfielder who assists countlessly and Haaland, who scores constantly you can’t imagine the boom that goes on. Also, De Bruyne and Haaland didn’t play the last game against Luton. They aren’t ready! Secondly, no Rodri on the starting XI, we don’t know what’s going to go down now. The games that we have won with Rodri Verse and the amount of games we’ve lost without him are crazy. Though Mateo Kovacic gets the position when King Rodri isn’t there, like in the Huddersfield match. Finally, Stefan Ortega Moreno is here! He is a great keeper in training and he deserves a start. Ederson is on the bench along with amazing players. After all, CMON CITEH!!!!
#2 2-29
Pep Guardiola
Detail: Tactics
Genius
Conductor
Detail: Trophies & Clubs
Career Man
Trophies Lifted With Barca, City, and Bayern
Detail: Impressive and talented clubs
Sub Detail: Likes of messi, neymar, suarez
Sub Detail: Erling Haaland, KDB
Conclusion
Pep Guardiola is the best manager in the entire world. No questions asked. Firstly, his tactics go crazy. A good word to describe the man is genius. Some people say he is a conductor, with his cleverness and leadership. Secondly, the trophies he’s lifted are insane. Champions leagues with talented clubs. He’s also lifted trophies with talented clubs, his career, man. Finally, he has managed some of the most impressive and talented clubs - ever. With the likes of Messi, Suarez, Neymar on Barca, and Bayern players. He made Lewandowski! He also managed Man City! The best club in the world! After all, Pep is a legend
#3 3/1/24
It's me birthday
Detail: See my camp friends
Sub Detail: Best people in the entire world
Sub Detail: imma crush them in laser tag
Detail: see me family
Sub detail: i dont see um much
Sub Detail: me grandmas birthday cake
Detail: My presents + manchester derby day before
Sub detail: hopefully soccer stuff fingers crossed
Sub detail: MANCHESTER DERBYYYYYYYY
Conclusion
This weekend, it’s my birthday, and I am so excited. Firstly, I am going to see my camp brothers! They are the best people in the world and seeing them is so much fun. When I see them, they won’t expect how I’m going to beat them in laser tag. Secondly, I get to see my family! Because they all live in Maryland, I don’t see them much so I can’t wait to be able to this weekend. I will also be able to have my grandma’s banana cake, which is delicious! Finally, I get presents, and there is a Manchester Derby! Hopefully, I get soccer stuff. (fingers crossed) Also, the Manchester Derby the day before is going to be crazy! I am so excited! After all, I can’t wait for my birthday!
#4 3/6/24
CITEH VS COPENHAGEN CMONNNNN
Detail 1: Oscar Bobb Bobb BOBB
Sub Detail: Norwegian Wonder Kid
Sub detail: Goal Contributions
Detail: JOSKKKKKOOOOOO GVARDIOLLLLL AND RICO LEWIS ARE BACK IN THE CHAT
Sub Detail: Best fullbacks in the world
Sub Detail: Class playmaking skills
Detail: Matheus - Matheus - Matheus - Matheus - NUNESSS
Sub Detail: Portuguese Legend 😍 🇵🇹
Sub Detail: Creative CM
Conclusion: Might have no foden.. BUT WE HAVE CITEHHHHH
CMON CITEH! Today is the 2nd leg of the Round of 16 Man City VS Copenhagen game and we have a 3-1 aggregate lead, and I’m soooo excited. Firstly, our own, Oscar Bobb Bobb Bobb! He is so good, that he is a Norwegian Wonder Kid at the age of 20! He also has so many goal contributions for his amount of starts. Secondly, Josko Gvardiol and Rico Lewis are back in the chat; C’MON! They are the best fullbacks in the world (along with Walks) and have the ability to turn a game on its head. This means that they have class playmaking skills to help push Man City’s attack more often. Finally, Matheus - Matheus - Matheus - Matheus - NUNES! In my heart, he is a Portuguese legend. 😍 🇵🇹 He is also so creative which makes him an awesome replacement for injured CMs. After all, De Bruyne, Foden, Bernardo, and Walks might be on the bench… but we’re Manchester City. Nothing can stop us. CITEH! CITEH! CITEH! CITEH!
#5 3/8/23
Man City VS Liverpool, It’s time to get serious.
Detail: A fit squad except for Jacky G
Sub: Great 11, this decides the future
Sub: Gvardiol fit and ready
Detail: Haaland and De Bruyne Link Up + A Phil Foden in top form
Sub: Foden is doing amazing lately
Sub: Haaland is scoring over and over again, and so is De Bruyne assisting.
Detail: An injured Liverpool squad
Sub: No Mo Salah
Sub: Likes of Connor Bradley on the RB
Conclusion
Man City VS Liverpool is a decisive game, and it’s time to get serious. Firstly, we have a fit squad except for Jacky G. Having a fit squad will help Pep choose a great XI, which is the XI that will decide our future. Also, Gvardiol is fit, how bout’ that? Secondly, we have Haaland, De Bruyne, and Philly Foden, who are all in great form. If it is UCL or the Premier League, he is on top form. Not to forget about scoring Haaland and assisting De Bruyne! Finally, an injured Liverpool squad is like a dream come true for this fixture. No Mo Salah or Jota, not even TAA! Oh yeah, youngster Connor Bradley is NOT going to be ready on RB! In conclusion, CMON CTEH YOU CAN WIN THIS!
#6 3/12/24
Foden talent
Detail: Goals
Sub d: nice ones
Sub d: decisive ones
Detail: Assists
Sub d: constantly
Sub d: being great every game
Detail: flair
Sub d: creative on the wing
Sub d: finish the corners
Conclusion
Phil Foden is an amazing player for Manchester City and I can see him one day winning the Ballon d’Or. Here’s why. Firstly, he is scoring goals. All his goals are pretty darn nice as well. All his goals are very decisive too. Secondly, let’s talk about his assists. He is constantly assisting game after game and it’s amazing to watch as a city fan. Also, he is keeping up his form with the assists and golazos! Thirdly, his flair is absolute class. He is creative on the wing and getting past amazing defenders. Though he does enjoy finishing the corners, and it is annoying. After all, Phil Foden is amazing!
#7 3/13/24
Topic: pet peeves
Detail: Germs
Sub detail: when people dont wash their hands
Sub detail: little tinyyyy things that only i see with my germaphobic eyes
Detail: People with no ball knowledge
Sub detail: especially messi bandwagons
Sub detail: americans *cough*
Detail: THINGS THAT LOOK OFF or NOT SYMETRICAL
Sub detail: random spot in the wall or a little crum, pillows not fluffed or lined up
Sub detail: Ms melvins tack in the wallll
Conclusion: EVERYTHING
I have many big pet peeves that annoy me, but here are three in general. Firstly, GERMS! When people don’t wash their hands and touch something, or even give someone a high five right after it is gross. When it comes to germs, I notice things that only I see with my little germaphobic eyes. Secondly, people with no ball knowledge, or people who think they know stuff about ball annoy me so much. Those Messi bandwagons are so annoying. I bet that if Messi never moved to Inter Miami you wouldn’t be supporting that dumb MLS club that no one cared about before Messi, Suarez, Busquets, and Alba. Also, Americans are by far the most annoying when it comes to soccer and when they support the US team in the World Cup, they just aren’t being real and spreading beyond their horizon. Finally, things that aren’t symmetrical are torture! A little spot on the wall, something out of order, a little crum, pillows not fluffed or lined up, literally everything annoys me. You can’t forget about that random tack on Ms Melvin’s wall. Before I end this warm-up paragraph I have honorable mentions: yappers and egotistical people. After all, everything annoys a person named Noah.
#8 3/14/24
IM IN THE CAPE GAZETTE SUIIIIIIIII
Detail: Excited
Sub detail: I DID THISSSS
Sub detail: our work paid off
Detail: proud
Sub detail: Complimenting article
Sub detail: I am happy happy happy
Detail: Motivated
Sub detail: free motivation ya know
Sub detail: Pressure!
Conclusion
I am in the Cape Gazette! Woohoo! Here are 3 traits I’m feeling after the big excitement. Firstly, I’m excited. I did this, why not be excited? Our hard work paid off! Secondly, I’m proud. It was a very complimenting article and why wouldn’t I be proud? I am just overjoyed and full of pride because of it! Thirdly, I’m motivated to keep going. Like Erling Haaland said, “Take everything as free motivation.” But on the other hand, it gives me pressure to keep the work up! After all, I’m famous!
#9 3/15
Topic
Detail: flavors dont work
Sub detail: and expensive
Sub detail: GIMMICK
Detail: doesnt stay cold
Sub detail: when im tired uhhhh
Sub detail: flavors aren’t refreshing
Detail: overall dumb
Sub detail: wayyy too expensive
Sub detail: ain’t worth it
Conclusion
Air Up is a total scam, and here’s why. First off, the flavors are mid and don’t work. They are way to expensive as well. It sums up to be a gimmick. Secondly, it doesn’t stay cold. When I’m tired I hate that it isn’t cold at all. The flavors aren’t refreshing; so cold or not, it’s dumb. Thirdly, it’s stupid and the science isn’t sciencing. Once again, it’s too expensive for it’s worth, and getting it is a waste. It may make you look popular or have one of the cool trends but no, just no. After all, DO NOT GET AIR UP.
(#10 3/18/24)
Topico
Detail 1: Arsenal
Sub Detail: It’s title race time bois!
Sub Detail: Easy Win @ Home
Detail: Real Madrid
Sub Detail: To Prove The Best In The World
Sub Detail: 2 Legs, Second @ Home!
Detail: Chelsea Wembley
Sub Detail: We’re Ready
Sub Detail: Defend The CUP
Conclusiano Ronaldo SUIIII
Man City’s next three games are very decisive. Firstly, we have Arsenal at the Etihad on March 31st. It’s title race time for real now! It is also a very easy win at home. Secondly, Real Madrid in the UCL. It’s the game to prove we are the best in the world. As a bonus, the second leg is at home, Real Madrid is going to be shattered like they were last year, just wait. Finally, Chelsea at Wembley. We’re more than ready to face the mid-table mandems and beat them. We’re defending the cup! Defending the cup! After all, CMON CITEH!
Warm-Up Paragraphs Cycle 9
By Noah Solovey
1, 3/21/24
Topic: play that goes wrong
Detail: funny
Sub detail: humorous
Sub detail: improvisation
Detail: Choreography
Sub detail: things falling and breaking
Sub detail: Dangerous
Detail: great acting
Sub detail: cessel
Sub detail: thomas
Conclusiono Ronaldo suii
In England, I saw a hilarious play called, “The Play Goes Wrong,” and here’s why I loved it. Firstly, it was extremely funny. The humor aspect of it was excellent, considering that it was like two plays in one. I do not know if they had some improvisation here and there, but either way, the actors were talented. Secondly, the choreography was something else. Credit to the stage crew who timed everything perfectly with things falling and breaking. I can’t say it wasn’t dangerous. Finally, the show couldn’t be complete without the great acting. Cessel was one actor! Also, Thomas was amazing with his timing. After all, I loved “The Play That Goes Wrong,” and you would too.
2, 3/22/24
Topic: ENG VS BELGUIM
Detail: Wembly
Sub detail: FOOTBALL
Sub detail: FANsssss
Detail: ENGLAND and BELGUIM are goatssssss
Sub detail: Foden, Bellingol, Stones, Chilwell, Konsa, Trashford, Madisson, Deccy Rice, Palmer, Lewis, Walker, Kane, Saka, Toney, Watkins, Mainoooooo, Bowen, Gomez just ws all around chat
Sub detail: Doku, Lukaku, Tilemans, Onana, Sels, Theate, Bakayayo, Castange, Trossard, Mangala, Vertogen
Detail: Action and footy all on one
Sub detail: doku’s pace and skills
Sub detail: Lukaku worldie
Conclusiano Ronaldo suiiii
In England, I went to an international friendly: England VS Belgium, and it was amazing. Firstly, this one isn’t that important but one word: Wembly. The football fans were amazing, especially the Belgium ones. Also, it’s football not soccer for your information. Secondly, the teams were amazing. Talk about Foden, Bellingol, Stones, Chilwell, Konsa, Trashford, Madisson, Deccy Rice, Palmer, Lewis, Walker, Kane, Saka, Toney, Watkins, Mainoo, Bowen, Gomez on England; let’s hope we win the Euros. Then you bring up Belgium, Doku, Lukaku, Tilemans, Onana, Sels, Theatre, Bakayayo, Castange, Trossard, Mangala, Vertogen; and Doku is amazing. Finally, footy, action, and golazos all together. Doku’s pace and skills were amazing. Oh, Lukaku, too, the worldie trivela assist. Conclusion, football is the beautiful game and will always be the beautiful game.
3, 3/25/24
Topic: Fun parts
Detail: Tower of london
Sub detail: cool
Sub detail: crown jewels
Detail: Houses of parliament and Buckingham palace
Sub detail: great tour
Sub detail: I COULD TOUCH THE GUARDS (i was soooo close to them)
Detail: Rocket boat tour across the thames
Sub detail: fast
Sub detail: i saw lot of cool stuff
Conclusiano Ronaldo suiiii
There were so many fun parts of going to London. Firstly, the Tower of London. It was so cool. I got to see the crown jewels there! Secondly, the Houses of Parliament and Buckingham Palace tour. It was a great tour. I was so close to the guards, I could touch them. Finally, the rocket boat tour across The River Thames. It was extremely fast. I saw a lot of cool stuff on it. After all, England was very fun.
4, 4/26/24
Topic: food in London and Amsterdam
Detail: Dishoom
Sub detail: tasty
Sub detail: the pao and chicken were top-class
Detail: Fatoush
Lebanese amazingness
The bread and dishes
Detail: Wagamama
Sub detail: Chinese
Fast service
Conclusiano Ronaldo suiiii
The food on my vacation was amazing. Firstly, Dishoom. The pao and chicken were top-class. Secondly, Fatoush. Lebanese at its best! The bread and dishes; were just yum. Finally, Wagamama. The Chinese food was delicious. Oh, and the service was very fast, After all, I love international food.
5, 4/27/24
Topic: Amsterdam
Detail: Bikes
Sub detail: Around Vondell Park
I fell once lol
Detail: Canal Cruise
Sub detail: great tour guide
Sub detail: cool canals
Detail: Anne Frank huis
Sub detail: Fascinating
Sub detail: Emotional
Conclusion
Amsterdam was an amazing place to visit, and here’s why. Firstly, I had the opportunity to join the locals biking around town. I biked around Vondell Park with my family and it was awesome. I even fell once! Secondly, I took a canal cruise with my family. The tour guide we had was great and told so much detail. The canals were cool as well, there was even a canal with 7 bridges! Finally, and my favorite part, the Anne Frank Huis. It was an eye-opening experience that left me in tears. The emotional journey Anne Frank went through was fascinating. After all, Amsterdam was one of my favorite places ever.
Dutch Translation
Nederlandse Vertaling
Amsterdam was een geweldige plek om te bezoeken, en dit is waarom. Ten eerste had ik de kans om samen met de lokale bevolking door de stad te fietsen. Ik fietste met mijn gezin door Vondell Park en het was geweldig. Ik ben zelfs een keer gevallen! Ten tweede maakte ik met mijn gezin een rondvaart door de grachten. De gids die we hadden was geweldig en vertelde zoveel details. De grachten waren ook cool, er was zelfs een kanaal met 7 bruggen! Eindelijk, en mijn favoriete onderdeel, het Anne Frank Huis. Het was een eye-openende ervaring die mij in tranen achterliet. De emotionele reis die Anne Frank doormaakte was fascinerend. Amsterdam was tenslotte een van mijn favoriete plekken ooit.
6, 4/8/24
Topic: meeting locals in London and Amsterdam
Detail: Arsenal fan
Sub detail: Played with ben white
Sub detail: Lifelong Arsenal fan
Detail: Jhon
Sub detail: Nice story
Sub detail: loves the boat
Detail: Meeting English locals
Sub detail: British accent
Sub detail: so nice
Conclusion
Meeting locals on my vacation was awesome. Firstly, the Arsenal fan I met on the tube was a fascinating person. As a kid, he played alongside Ben White. That’s what makes a lifelong Arsenal fan. Secondly, Jhon was an interesting man. He had a nice story about doing things that you love instead of for money and was such a nice man. He loved boats, so he took a job as a tour guide who took a boat across the Amsterdam canals. Thirdly, all the English locals were very nice. I liked their British accent! Also, they were just kind and relaxed people. After all, I loved my vacation.
7, 4/9/24
Topic: Real Madrid VS Man City, My XI Changes
Detail: KDB for Kovacic
Sub detail: Kovacic just plays and doesn’t do anything
Sub detail: KDB coming off of a brace is just perfect
Detail: Ederson for Ortega
Sub detail: He’s fit
Sub detail: Better then Lunin, but ederson goes crazy in ucl
Detail: Formation change
Sub detail: 4-1-4-1
Sub detail: Rodri with width and haaland with more goalscoring support
Conclusion
CMON CITEHHHH! Man City face off against Real Madrid, and I know we’re going to put up a great performance, but Pep should listen to me with how he could change his starting XI for the match. Firstly, KDB should be starting instead of Kovacic. Kovacic is just a player on the pitch, who just makes passes and doesn’t get any goal contributions. On the other hand, Kevin De Bruyne is coming off a brace and his 100th goal and is perfect to face Los Blancos. Secondly, Ederson has to play in the UCL instead of Stefan Ortega Moreno. Even though Ortega is amazing, to be honest, a fit Ederson is a common sense to start. Even though Ortega is better than Lunin, Ederson would tower off his skill. Finally, a formation change. 4-1-4-1 is a perfect formation that could easily improve fluid football. Rodri with width and Haaland with more support to score. After all, CMON CITEHHHHHHHH!
8, 4-10-24
Topic: Anne Frank Huis
Detail: When walking through the annex, it was very emotional thinking about the journey Anne Frank went through.
Sub Detail: She almost survived WW2
Sub Detail: She stayed hidden in an Annex, which I walked through
Detail: She kept an amazing diary with beautiful words
Sub Detail: She wrote about her life in her room in the Annex
Sub Detail: I saw the real diaries.
Detail: The walking tour taught me so much
Sub detail: Otto Frank, Anne’s Dad survived
Sub Detail: The Annex was hidden behind a bookshelf and neighbors ratted her family and the other stay-ers out
Conclusion
During my trip to Amsterdam, I had the chance to visit the Anne Frank Huis, and it was an experience I’ll never forget, here’s what I learned and loved from my experience of going to the Anne Frank Huis. Firstly, when walking through the Annex, it was very emotional to think about Anne's heartbreaking journey in her life, and seeing where she spent two horrible years. Even though Anne Frank didn’t survive the war, but was so close to it, she left such an influential story and made a mark in world history. I found it fascinating to walk through the very Annex Anne was hidden in. Secondly, she kept a beautiful diary with wondrous words while staying in the Annex. Otto Frank went on to publish this keeping of hers when she passed away due to Typhoid, and it became the most famous book about the Holocaust. I had the chance to see her actual diary, and it was beautiful. Finally, the audio-guided tour taught me so much that I never knew. Otto Frank, Anne Frank’s dad, survived the war and sadly passed away in 1980. Also, the Annex was hidden behind a bookshelf, and the only reasons Nazis found the hiding spot was that the neighbors of the Anne Frank Huis ratted them out. After all, it was an emotional journey walking through the actual Anne Frank Huis.
9, 4-11-24
Topic Sentence: 3 things I’ve written in the past 2 months
Detail: The Doku Dance, The Man, The Myth, The Cityzen
Sub Detail: Great Biographies that took a lot of research
Sub Detail: Well Organized
Detail: Back to Edgware Road
Sub Detail: I’m working really hard on it
Sub detail: Amazing experience
Detail: Loads of football stuff
Sub detail: fun
Sub detail: opinion
Conclusion
I’ve written many, many writing pieces, and in this Warm-Up Paragraph, I’m talking about 3 things I’ve written in the past 2 months. Firstly, two biographies on city players: The Doku Dance and The Man, The Myth, The Cityzen. I’m not kidding when I say these great biographies took a lot of research. They were well organized when I finished them, and I can’t say I’m not pleased to see how they turned out. Secondly, Back to Edgware Road, which is still in the making. I’ve worked extremely hard on this collection and I’m so excited to post it on my website when I’m done. It is a collection of stories and pieces from an amazing experience, going to London and Amsterdam. Finally, loads of football stuff. It’s so much fun to write about footy! Also, I get to yap about my opinion! Who doesn’t love that? After all, every day I keep working hard to continue writing.
#10, 4/12/24
Topic Sentence: Riding the tube
Detail: Mind the gap
Sub detail: No one is gonna fall through a 1 inch gap
Sub detail: when you have five seconds to get on you tube nobody is going to mind that gap
Detail: The doors close in a split second
SD: man what if someone got stuck and then it started moving honestly
SD: Just give us time godddd
Detail: SLOW DOWN THOSE ESCALATORSSSSSSS
SD: PEOPLE ARENT THAT FASTTTTT
SD: Also there is this thing called a lift
Conclusion
The tube is an amazing part of England, but there is somethings they might want to fix. Firstly, stop saying mind the gap when the gap is as small as a piece of dust. No one is going to fall through a 1 inch gap. Also, when you have five freaking seconds to get on the tube, screw the gap just get on the tube for god sake. Secondly, those doors close in a split second. Man, what if someone got stuck in the doors and the tube started moving. Just give us time. Finally, slow down those escalators in the tube station. People aren’t thaaaat fast. Also, there is a thing called a lift. After all, (then start reading the warm up paragraph again, it loops :))
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