My memories are like a replay mode
I am most of the time living in my memories because happy memories
The carnival rides the late nights coming home
The friends in apartment complex
Go-kart rides
Bumping into other people
The ticket prices
Pizza afterwards
Now i'm just reminiscing those times
It gets me sad because a child is unworried
We grow and our minds expand showing real life
Still good times yet stressed minds
I gave life now she needs to grow happy
In that state where our minds are imaginations
Where she stay smiley
Her turn
What inspired me to write this down was the fact that we are all growing up leaving childhood memories behind. We are growing and when we think about our fun times we say “then it will be our kids turn. “ Well, it really will be that way. Everything good we experienced, our kids in the future will remind us of us.
This a relatable poem that alludes my reminiscent memories, I liked the structure of the poem, I enjoyed the specific details you included in the poem.
--Harvey Rocha
What I really enjoyed about this poem is that each stanza makes you think back to past memories and how things used to be in simpler times. The figurative language is very nice and enhances your poem.
--Angie Moran