We live in a world where a woman's choice is in everybody else's hands except theirs. We all have our own opinions and that is completely fine but when it comes to your body shouldn't it be your choice or opinion on what to do? Where I am getting to is abortion, as a woman I know we have the right to our body even if many guys or even some girls think otherwise.
I know that when we are not in the situation we don't really take action or just really don't care about what goes on. I like to think about myself being in that situation and just think about what I would feel and do. It might be harder for guys to understand so just imagine you had a daughter and she got pregnant and wanted to keep the baby, would you make her abort it? Seeing how much she would suffer and the scar that would leave on her for the rest of her life. She could hold a big grudge against you, even if you think you are doing what is best for her. Your opinion is not always the best, sometimes you have to let others be whether you like it or not.
Unfortunately China is one of those places where they think abortion is the correct way to go. They have a new 2 Child policy, why should the government decide whether you have more than 2 babies or not? Us as humans should have the choice on how many and when we want to have our kids. Approximately 40 million girls in china have been forced to have an abortion against their will, is that okay? Is that really okay? Or is it okay for the government and their needs?
Unfortunately we may not change everybody's mind on abortion but we will continue to fight for what is right. I am not saying that everyone should have the same opinion, but what I do want is for people to have their own choice on their body and just overall on themselves.
I was inspired to write this because I feel like we don't have enough people speaking about it and its importance. Voices haven't been loud enough for people to take in notice and as a woman I know I can relate more than anyone.
Your writing was exceptional ma’am! I loved how you voiced your opinion and even had an example to back it up. I loved your piece keep up the good work ma’am!!
--Kayla Lopez
I really like the beginning sentence when it says "where a woman's choice is in everybody else's hands except theirs." This sentence really caught my attention. You also used rhetorical questions that got the reader thinking as they read and I really like it. But at the end of the last paragraph, you could add a comma after "unfortunately."
--Michelle Arriaga
I really loved this piece. There was so much voice and character. This is something I can also relate to so that's another reason why I liked this.
--Jennifer Flores
I'm glad you wrote about this especially since this is an ongoing issue in Texas were they are trying to ban women from getting an abortion after they have reached six weeks of pregnancy. I agree with you women should have there choice on there own bodies, some women simply are not ready to take on such big responsibility.
--Mariela Nazario