Never have I ever felt this way before; never have I felt this way for something that isn't even mine. I could even say that I'm in love. It's the most perfect and prettiest thing I’ve ever seen. Its beauty is incomparable, it doesn’t matter it’s form or shape, whether it is bright or not, its uniqueness stands out from everywhere. Surrounded by a billion other pretty things but she's the first thing that my eyes go looking for. I'm pretty sure that I'm not the only one to see her like that, I know that every time I look at her someone else is looking at her on the other side of the world, admiring her as much as I do.
I have an album of pictures about the moon. It's been several years since the moon had had such a meaning to me .My writing is very descriptive of my personal view towards the moon. I used metaphors ,some sort of personification and imagery in my writing.
I love this piece of writing since I myself share a love for the moon. It’s a connection like no other where there’s no judgment. Something so simple yet so fascinating. Something that gets overlooked because it’s always there.
--Yourlen Ramirez
This Memoir is beautiful, the descriptiveness it has, but also that phrase of "Surrounded by a billion other pretty things but she's the first thing that my eyes go looking for" was so beautiful and impact full. I was honestly surprised it was the moon i thought it was a star.
--Obed Ramirez
I enjoy the imagery in this piece. The diction is beautifully webbed together and I love the romantic theme.
--Nija Young