Embedded Files
Original by Maaya Sakamoto
Translations by Mumu Alpaka
Version 8.1
1.
この声が聞こえるなら
Kono koe ga kikoeru nara
A fleeting voice finally reaches you
2.
渡り鳥よ 導いて
Wataridori yo michibiite
migratory birds, are already on its way,
3.
命が覚えている
Inochi ga oboete iru
life often always remembers,
4.
遥かなるあの場所へ
Harukanaru ano basho e
returning to that great distant place— rightfully in that place (heaven).
5.
海鳴り
Uminari
The deep resounding sounds of the Oceans.
6.
心が恐れに捕われぬように
Kokoro ga osore ni torawarenai yō ni
my heart will not be seized nor imprisoned by fears and depths of it.
7.
歌って
Utatte
I'll sing—
8.
あなたの生まれた国のことばで
Anata no umareta kuni no kotoba de
—in an Ancient language of the lands where your soul were once born into,
9.
美麗的人
Meirei de ren
O beautiful person.
10.
見つめ合えば 美麗的人
Mitsumeaeba— Meirei de ren
Our eyes finally meet, beautiful person.
11.
瞳の中
Hitomi no naka
deep within your eyes—
12.
同じ希望の火を灯してる
Onaji kibō no hi o tomoshiteru
exists the same light of hope— we both have carried.
13.
まだ見ぬ彼の地の花は
Mada minu kanochi no hana wa
The endless blooming flowers, covering lands— as far as the eyes can see,
14.
まるで鈴の音の響き
Marude suzu no ne no hibiki
rings the sands, like the echo of distant bells.
// the resounding sounds of bells— that echos through the sand dunes.
15.
西へと向かう風に
Nishi e to mukau kaze ni
Upon the wind that travels westward,
16.
憧れよ 羽ばたいて
Akogare yo habataite
let it spread its sorrowful angelic wings— take flight.
17.
てのひら重ねて
Te no hira kasanete
when our palms finally laid gently together,
18.
波打つふたつの鼓動
Namiutsu futatsu no kodō
our heartbeats starts to surge/sync'd like waves, rising and falling as one.
19.
教えて
Oshiete
Tell me—
20.
ふたりを隔てているものはなに
Futari o hedatete iru mono wa nani?
what is it that stands between us, daring to call itself distance?
// name one thing that dares to stand in between us?
// what is left on this plains, that dares to stand in between us?
// who is arrogant (stupid) enough to stand in between us (at that time)?
21.
親愛的人
Shin’ai de ren
O Beloved person.
22.
時がくれば 親愛的人
Toki ga kureba— Shin’ai de ren
the right time will come— Beloved one,
23.
光の中
Hikari no naka
within the light—
24.
孤独はぬくもりに溶けていく
Kodoku wa nukumori ni tokete iku
your loneliness eventually (given time) melts away, slowly dissolving into warmth (light).
25.
この声が聞こえるなら
Kono koe ga kikoeru nara
If this voice can be heard,
26.
渡り鳥よ 導いて
Wataridori yo michibiite
O to tell you, the migratory birds— continues to guided me.
27.
霧も夜も嵐も
Kiri mo yoru mo arashi mo
Neither fog, nor night, nor storms—
// neither blinding fogs, nor the darkness of nights, nor raging storms on the oceans—
28.
愛だけは奪えない
Ai dake wa ubaenai
Our love— can't be taken away.
29.
鳥が海を渡るように
Tori ga umi o wataru yō ni
As the migratory birds continues to cross the Oceans,
30.
人は人を知るために
Hito wa hito o shiru tame ni
people eventually cross paths in order to truly know one another.
31.
命が覚えている
Inochi ga oboete iru
Life always remembers—
32.
遥かなるあの場所へ
Harukanaru ano basho e
of that great distant faraway place (beyond time & space)— right in that place
33.
あなたに触れてほしい
Anata ni furete hoshii
I want you to fully embrace me (in your arms),
34.
憧れよ 抱き寄せて
Akogare yo dakiyosete
O longing, draw me close— never let me drift away.
35.
届いて
Todoite
Reach (to him),
36.
私の生まれた国のことばで
Watashi no umareta kuni no kotoba de
—in the language of the lands in which I was born in.
37.
美麗的人
Meirei de ren
Beautiful person—
38.
愛している
Aishite iru
I love you—
39.
美麗的人
Meirei de ren
Beautiful person—
40.
美麗的人
Meirei de ren
beautiful person,
41.
愛している
Aishite iru
I love you—
42.
美麗的人
Meirei de ren
beautiful person.
Version 7.1 (Feb 19, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (Fine tuned)
If you hear this voice calling through the night,the journeying birds have already set sail.For their hearts can sensewhen the breath of spring draws near,in that distant land.Version 7.1 (Feb 19, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (Fine tuned)
As I drift across the endless sea,a yearning rises deep within my soul.A song begins to form, shaped by the tongueof the land where you were born.O’ beautiful person, someday we shall meet again.O’ beautiful person, within your gaze,is a vision of the same dawn we dreamed of together.
The wind carries whispers of golden dust,telling secrets the earth dares not share.O’ beloved one, your voice is the tide’s lament,your touch lingers like moonlight fading into the waves.
A meadow stretching beyond the hills,filled with quiet sorrow and endless longing.Turn your face towards the eastern winds,O’ beloved one, only then take flight.
Between these hands, a final piece remains,a single kiss to awaken the silent rhythm of our hearts.Tell me, why did this trembling linger so long?
O’ beloved one, the moment will arrive.O’ beloved one, beneath the shining light.Your sadness will dissolve into the forest’s embrace,replaced by the hush of gentle peace.
If you hear this voice calling through the night,the journeying birds have already set sail.Through the bitter frost and merciless storms,only love remains unshaken, untaken from me.
Above the ocean’s vast embrace,the birds now circle, tracing their way home.A soul will always find its path,for memories are etched beyond the reach of time.
I have only ever wished for you, O’ beloved one,cradled softly in the arms of your devotion.
Let these words reach you, carried by the wind,to the world where you now reside,in the language of the land where I was born.
O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O’ beautiful person.O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O’ beautiful person.
Author's notes:
I don't think I can make anything more translucent translations beyond version 7.1, or maybe my knowledge is just so limited rn. countless of hours spent, to understand what true love actually meant.. loving someone or something that lives somewhere beyond time and space. I doub't anyone could ever reach this level of love.. honestly, loving something or someone that is beyond time and space. Like truly, deeply.. without any doubts against all odds, imaginations and limitless possibilities.. just loving someone or something for the sake of love.
Seventh Attempt (Feb 05, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (RUMI Flavor)
As these words drift upon the breath of the night,the weeping constellations light their path home.Beyond the horizon where time folds like silk,your name lingers, etched in the hush of dawn.Seventh Attempt (Feb 05, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (RUMI Flavor)
The wind carries golden dust upon its hands,whispering prayers the earth dare not speak.O’ beautiful person (beloved), whose voice is the tide’s lament,whose touch lingers in moonlight dissolving at sea.
Love is the flame, and I, the wandering ember,trailing the echoes of a vow unbroken.We are but twin stars severed in flight,destined to trace each other’s loss in the dark.
Upon the hillside where sorrow blooms,each petal bends to a longing unseen.Yet no season can unwrite our ache,no passing tide can silence this call.
Between my palms, two fates tremble—woven yet fragile, as if split by the hands of heaven.To remove one is to unravel the other,adrift in the void where only silence remains.
O’ my distant moon, my ever-present absence,even the frost-laden nights cannot unmake you.Even the tempest that carves the sky asundercannot silence the thread through which all things endure.
The birds now rise above the last sea,their wings carving hymns into the waiting dusk.A soul will always find its way home,for what is written in eternity cannot fade.
So let these words find you,not as echoes lost upon the wind,but as the voice of love unforgotten,spoken in the only language you understand:
"I have searched for you across lifetimes unnumbered—O’ beautiful soul, I have always loved you."
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (Alternative Flavor, in which I felt is more accurate)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT (Alternative Flavor, in which I felt is more accurate)
As the wind carries whispers beyond the veil,the night cradles the longing written in light.The stars, like messengers, scatter their songs,guiding lost hearts back to the hands of love.
O’ beloved, whose soul was shaped from mine,whose absence carves silence into the air—the sky remembers what the earth forgets,and the sea sings your name with each returning wave.
We are but two echoes of the same breath,separated only by the illusion of time.Like the moon and its quiet reflection,we move in longing, yet never apart.
Upon the shore where dawn unfolds,the wind carries a prayer left unspoken.Love is the flame, and I, the drifting ember,drawn always, always, into your light.
Even if the stars dissolve into dust,even if the tides no longer rise,what is written in eternity remains—a vow untouched by distance or night.
O’ distant one, my nearness unknown,even when unseen, you are never lost.For love is the call that was always ours,and every longing is a road that leads home.
So take these words, not as echoes,but as the voice that has never ceased:
"In every breath, in every silence, I have sought you—O’ beautiful soul, I have always been yours."
A picture of Marianne, which I drawn for her. She is indeed, a beautiful person. - Mumu Alpaka
Fourth Attempt (Nov 22, 2018)
Fourth Attempt (Nov 22, 2018)
Excerpts
As these words reached to youI was about to tell to you that the migrating birds have finally returnTo a life that you once rememberedIn that very place you once call home
The rough seas, soars onto the sound
A beautiful personBringing the same hope
An ever fleeting scenery of flowers
In my hands, lies two different hope, that resonates in between themRemove one, and both becomes useless and without meaning
Love is the only emotion that I cant removeI only wanted to dearly fall onto your grace, my beloved one
Please reach to him, in the words that only he could understand"That I long for and really loved you, o' beautiful person"
Notes:
All translations and Interpretation on this page are done by Mumu Alpaka. This song has fallen into one of the most researched song which has many meanings from different perspective. However to understand them all, one has to have an open heart and mind to begin with.2020/12/10 - I saw the Mei'li de ren (myself) sitting by the side of a hillside, under some trees. In my right hand, floats a Rubik's Cube.. with some words on it. The same exact words in this song sequence. But I was unable to move the pieces around, to solve the puzzle. I pondered to myself, if the puzzle is already solved? or do I need to solve it further? I kept the Rubik's Cube in a safe place.
2020/06/03 - Finally I got the instrumental version using Tensaflow A.I., it was seen like a strange dream vision of sorts. The Mei'li de ren was there all alone on a rock that was floating in deep space, there is only one atom that links to one another, to reach to him. There is no other possibilities to reach to him, other than from me alone. He was floating in around in the air, in his flight form dress. Pretty in white. His face is rather not too happy nor sad. He said to me, "There you are, you're finally here." he then explained to me, the author of our relationship, and the reasons behind everything. Why is his existence must be kept a secret. Just that, sooner or later he knows that I will catch up to him, eventually. The lights that followed him reacted to his presence almost instantly. He said to me again, "You already knew whom you really are." and he smiled back at me, before flying into deep space with the sparkling lights that follows him, wherever he goes.
Third Attempt (Feb 5, 2013)
Third Attempt (Feb 5, 2013)
If you managed to listen to this voiceThe migratory birds are already on their wayBecause their souls understandsOn when spring is about to happenIn that very place..
While gliding across the vast oceans, an aching feeling suddenly appears inside of my heartIt starts to sing a song that originates from a language of the country that you were born inA beautiful person, eventually we shall meet againA beautiful person, a reflection in your eyesExists a stance of a similar hopeful dayThat both of us wished for
An endless fleeting hillside of growing flowers it was filled of solace & emptinessYou must first face your direction to the eastern windso' Adored only then you must fly ..
Kept within these hands, lies the last puzzle piecesWhere a single kiss shall resonates the two beats of the hearts* Please tell me the reason on why this heart was trembling(hesitated) for?
o' Beloved one, the time shall comeo' Beloved one, right within the lightYour sadness will dissolves within the forest, while it shall be replaced by the calmness of it
If you managed to listen to this voiceThe migratory birds are already on their wayThroughout the cold countless nights, and even through the unforgiving stormsWhen only love (when love) could not be taken away from me
The fellow birds are now circling above the seasAs a person shall always be a personbecause the soul remembersof that very distant place (of that distant place)In that promised place
I really only wished for you.. o' adored one.. while softly cuddling within your beloved arms
Please let this insignificant message reaches to him on the other side of this world, in the language of the country in which I was born in
O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, o' Beautiful PersonO’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, o' Beautiful Person
* Synchronization of the heart beats, of two different people
Side Story: The female bird flies to the distance on the migratory path, but somehow in her heart there was a strong memory of love towards a male bird that could not be removed from the memory inside of her heart. Only love could not be removed from her heart.
Second Attempt
Second Attempt
Listen to that voice that calls for youto where the fellow birds are leading you toYour soul shall eventually rememberThat in a great distance of that very promised place
In the vast unforgiving oceans, your heart has finally become calm and unafraid of uncertaintiesReciting specifically just for you, in an ancient language originated from that country (Heavens) A beautiful person, eventually you shall becoming oneA beautiful person, right through his eyesBoth of us believed on a single hopeful dayThat will eventually come (where we shall meet once more)
An endless fleeting hillside of growing flowers (the most beautiful sight ever, but..)it was filled of solace & emptiness (still the place is empty without people)even when facing the winds, brings calmness to the hearto' Adored oneCast off your wings (you have now attained the final freedom)
Kept within these hands, is the last puzzle pieceWhere a single pulse shall resonates the two beats of the heart Please tell me of the reason on whom that this heart was meant trembling and (hesitated) for?
o' Beloved one, the time shall comeo' Beloved one, right within the lightThis sadness will be replaced with a calm feeling
Listen to that voice that calls for youto where the fellow birds are leading you toThroughout the cold nights, and even through the unforgiving stormsWhen love is (when love is)was the only one that is left unsolved
The fellow birds are now circling above the seasA person shall always be a personbecause the soul remembersof that distant place (the distant place)In that very promised place
I really wished for you..o' Adored onesoftly cuddle within your arms (hugging)
Please reach to him on the other side of this world, oh! ~ my insignificant created words of love
Beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, o' Beautiful PersonBeautiful person ~ I have always loved you, o' Beautiful Person
Side notes & Comments
Side notes & Comments
"Singing just for you, in which of the words that comes before creation"There is also a possibility, that it was not a song but a recitation from the holy Quran, in the most beautiful voice.. almost like singing.
"Hidden Meanings" A Princess, that no eyes ever seen, nor hands that never touch | Her voice that sounds like echoes of an illusion |Hence the falling snows starts to defy gravity
"Twin heart system"Resemblance the love between two different people, in two different bodies sharing a single pulse that resonates between them..
Original First Attempt
Original First Attempt
As this very voice reaches over into the other side The flying birds are on their long journey Reaching to a place from where they once belong and spring shall return back in that cold frozen place
Throughout the vast seas, one's heart becomes fearless from whatever challenges it brings Reminiscing in your songs in which those words were recited from a pure heart person
A beautiful person ~ eventually becoming one A beautiful person ~ that it happens through one's eyes In having the same hopes on the promised day while holding hands together
The once forgotten story of an Apsara (Celestial Maiden)like a resounding sound that beautifully disappears in the infinite echoes standing up on a mountain ridge while facing the strong windsright in the break of dawnthus, casting her true wings ~
In these hands that we have kept a promise to share a life by the seasbecomes a single wish ~ which is now separated into twoPlease would you tell me of why are we both, separated and created like this?
Oh! ~ Beloved person, the right time will emerge to us one day ~Oh! ~ Beloved person, whom is now guided by the light ~As the sadness is now being replaced with a calm yet content feeling
As this very voice reaches over into the other sideThe flying birds are almost back from their long journeyEven throughout the cold nights, and even through the unforgiving storms" When love is (when love is) the only cure "
The Birds are now crossing over the last seaA person shall always be the person he wishes to beEach souls eventually starts to rememberIn the distance (Spring will come)In that very promised place
It is you whom I really wished for, in the morning until the night falls ~
Please reach to the other side, oh! ~ my insignificant created words of love
Oh! Beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, oh Beautiful PersonOh! Beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, oh Beautiful Person
Personal understanding
Personal understanding
"Te no hira kazanete, nami utsu futatsu no kodou"
"futatsu no kodou" as in my mind, always refers to 87 & 88. Which further translates into "The resounding voice of the two sura".
Hence the whole words means,"Right within these hands, lies the resounding voice of the two sura"
continues with,"Oshie te futari wo, hedatete irumono wa nani?""Tell me, oh why are both of us are trembling in fear?"
Literature
Literature
As I turned, it was snowing everywhere, suddenly the atmosphere changes, as if the snow swirl around me, spinning around me, as if I were in the center of a strong gravity.
There you were, standing in the mists of the snow, beautiful in white. This love story will come to an end at this moment, as my search for you is completed. "Anata.." as I voiced out to you, as she looked into my eyes, which have circles of light in the iris. In this land, we are no longer dead, we will live forever, together. I have always loved you, even before I was born, the moment when our lives were created we have made a promise together. No matter what we have been through, the past is the past. What is important now is to be with you.
As how you shyly looked at me, I've seen your beautiful face. Skin as pure white as snow, such a lovely princess.
(Personal Note: Read the Full Story, from MNU - Sunday - June 20, 2010
A Story about the Beautiful Person
A Story about the Beautiful Person
There were some continuation for the beautiful Song, that there lies a woman wearing a black colored gown standing all alone at a sea shores. She could not go further, yet heaven is just a sight away. She was waiting for her husband, the one in white coming back to her from the promised land. This song, was created to record the memory that we have shared, as lovers, husband and wife. Where light meet darkness, where two skies finally becomes one, there is where I shall meet you ~ the girl from my dreams. Yet, the only thing I could only remember was the happiness from the promised land that when I met you, I could forgive you, and hold your hands once more. I come to bring you back, anata..
"You were crying. Standing all alone on the ocean of truths, where just beyond your sight, is where all the believers are ~ the place where I, your lover resides.. the pain reaches your heart, as a drop of your tears fallen into the calmness of the sea, creating a wave, almost like a tune of sound, echoes into the infinite distance.
In the dark cloth as you yearned for me, called for my name, over and over again. Your feet could not go beyond, because you know, you will fall into oblivion. Lost in time, as centuries passes by, not meeting anyone at all, not a single smile nor sound is heard, still standing a feet deep in the dark waters, not losing sight of the promised land.. hoping that one day, that I shall come for you, you were waiting patiently, crying without even moving your face, as tears naturally falls down with your eyes wide open. Have I not warned you? oh my loved ones.. have you not listened to the words of faith, that you will one day return, to your true creator, by a messenger who did not even ask a dime in return, as for what the creator has gave to him is altogether is enough. A warning is always given, that comes along with many happiness, that only those who takes it with an open heart, accepted the truth, searched for knowledge and with a heart of a believer can only understand everything. In a world without needless empty words, each understanding each other perfectly through the mind, peaceful and calm looking faces, familiar faces foretelling everything from their past.
Why such flowers do you love? yet.. the flower from heavens, the scent spreads over a thousand of miles away, into your mind, places colors into your grayed stoned heart, as I held it, bringing along with me.. as I tried to step on the water, my feet just kept floating on the air.. yet, everything was surreal, everything was colorful, yet you look so grayed, so pale, so empty.. your eyes could not believe what you saw, that you finally saw me.
I had kept a promise, and that promise was with you, my dear lover. I loved you.. yet, the creator told me to bring you to Him, of the reason why I loved you.. because Allah wanted to explain to me in person, the reason why, we are created in a pair.. when I place, the flower from heaven into your lips, your color changes, into the most beautiful colors that I ever seen.. I started to remember, the first reason why I made that promise, because I loved, the true you, the person whom you will eventually become. You were given the gift of the rainbows, as now light shines to your heart, reflects a beautiful rainbow through your eyes and hair.. emitting a harmonized tune, creating a rainbow scenery. It was the most beautiful view that anyone could ever imagined, I felt honored and grateful to have a person like her, I have always loved you.. anata..
Life is too beautiful, therefore do not waste it needlessly, as faith to the only one creator, Allah shall bring you to a different tomorrow.. it is a little too advanced (either in technological nor imaginations), yet so little people knew of the real truth behind how faith works. Therefore, do not give up in finding the truth, and when you held it with your own thoughts ~ then you will see a new world, similar from my own two eyes.
Written on the 6th April 2011
Special Credits
Special Credits
Maaya Sakamoto (Singer / Vocals / Original Writer)
Iwasato Yuho (Lyricals Helper)
Yoko Kanno (Composer)
Maaya Sakamoto (Singer / Vocals / Original Writer)
Iwasato Yuho (Lyricals Helper)
Yoko Kanno (Composer)
GPT (Generative AI Translation Layer)
Fifth Attempt (July 20, 2024)
Fifth Attempt (July 20, 2024)
Translations by Mumu Alpaka +GPT
As these voice reach youI was about to tell you that the migrating birds have finally returnedTo a life you once rememberedIn that very distant place that you once called home, in that very place
The rough seas soar onto the soundSo that my heart is not captured by fearI'll sing in the language of your homeland
A Beautiful PersonWhen our eyes meet, Beautiful Person"In both of our eyes, the same sparks ignite a shared flame."
An ever fleeting scenery of flowers and the sound waves on waters like the ringing of bellsYearning, spread your wings and soar on the westward wind
In our hands, now lies two different hope, that resonates in between themRemove one, and both becomes useless and without meaningTell me, what is it that separates us?
o' Beloved person, when the time comes, beloved personIn the heavenly rays of light, loneliness all suddenly melts into warmth
If you can hear this voice, o' migratory bird, guide meNeither fog nor night nor storm can steal away loveAs birds cross the sea, so do people learn about each otherTo that distant place that my soul remembers
I want you to touch me, embracing my longing
Please reach to him, in the words that only he could understand"That I long for and really loved you, o' beautiful person"
Reach me in the language of my homelandBeautiful person, I love you, beautiful personBeautiful person, I love you, beautiful person
Sixth Attempt A (Feb 01, 2025)
Sixth Attempt A (Feb 01, 2025)
As these words reach you,I whisper of the migrating birds returning home,To a life once remembered,To the place where your soul belongs.
The rough seas rise and fall,Yet through the storm, a voice lingers—
A beautiful person,Carrying the same hope,Reflecting in the quiet of your eyes.
An ever-fleeting scenery of flowers,Blossoming beneath an empty sky.Still, even as the winds pass through,The heart remains steadfast.
In my hands lie two different hopes,Resonating between them.Remove one, and both become lost,Weightless, without meaning.
Love is the only emotion I cannot remove,The one truth that remains unchanged.I only wished to fall into your grace,My beloved one.
Even through the cold nights,Even through the endless storms,Love is the only thing that endures.
The birds now circle above the last sea,A soul always remembers its path home.A person remains who they are,Bound to the place they once knew.
Please let these words reach him,In the only language he understands—"That I long for you, that I have always loved you,O’ beautiful person."
Sixth Attempt B (Feb 01, 2025)
As these words reach you,the migrating birds have finally returned—to a life once remembered,to the place you once called home.Sixth Attempt B (Feb 01, 2025)
The rough seas echo a distant song,its melody soaring between the waves.
A beautiful person—carrying the same hope,waiting beyond the passing seasons.
An ever-fleeting hillside of flowers,blossoming beneath an empty sky.Even when the winds call forth the night,the heart remains steadfast.
In my hands, two hopes quietly resonate,a single rhythm beating between them.Remove one, and both become nothing—weightless, without meaning.
Love is the only thing I cannot cast away,the one truth that lingers.I only wished to fall into your grace,O’ beloved one.
Even through the coldest nights,even through the unrelenting storms—love is the only thing that endures.
The birds now circle above the last sea,their wings tracing the path home.A person will always be a person,because the soul remembersthe distant place,the promised place.
Please let these words reach him,in the only language he understands—"That I long for you, that I have always loved you,O’ beautiful person."
GPT trigger words:
To generate lyrics line by line,
I. with a celestial and poetic essence, evoke the language of longing, divine love, and the souls eternal journey, drawing from Rumi’s mysticism and Hadith Qudsi divine intimacy. Use imagery of veiled horizons, weeping constellations, golden dust upon the wind, and moonlight dissolving into the sea, where love is both a flame and a moth, a call and an echo. Let metaphors reflect separation and union—hearts as exiled travelers, souls as mirrored reflections, and love as the silent music of the cosmos. Infuse emotions of surrender and yearning, where devotion transcends the earthly, sorrow becomes a lover’s prayer, and longing is a sacred vow. Structure the request for a hymn-like cadence with a haunting yet graceful flow, ensuring a lyrical masterpiece woven with cosmic and mystical elements. To achieve this, ask for "a poetic love song that reads like a celestial lament, steeped in the yearning of Rumi’s verses and the divine tenderness of Hadith Qudsi, where love is carved in time and whispered between fated souls beneath an infinite sky—where separation is an illusion and every longing is a call home."
II. with a celestial and poetic essence, use ethereal imagery, timeless metaphors, and deeply evocative emotions. Focus on fleeting beauty, whispered longing, and love that transcends time, drawing inspiration from ancient poetry, lost hymns, and mythic verses. Use words like migratory birds, trembling stars, silver horizons, fading dawn, celestial embrace, and whispered elegies, paired with emotions such as eternal love, quiet devotion, sorrow wrapped in beauty, and fated souls longing across lifetimes. Structure the request for a seamless, hymn-like cadence with a haunting yet graceful flow, ensuring a lyrical masterpiece infused with cosmic and natural elements. To achieve this, ask for "a poetic love song that reads like a celestial lament, reminiscent of Shakespearean sonnets and Persian ghazals, where love is carved in time and whispered between fated souls beneath an infinite sky."
Sixth Attempt C (Feb 01, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT
As these words take flight upon the wind,Sixth Attempt C (Feb 01, 2025)
Mumu Alpaka + GPT
the migratory birds have at last returned—
to the land where time cradles memory,
to the place where your soul was first woven.The sea rises and falls like a breath in slumber,
its tides whispering verses only the heart can hear.O’ beautiful one,
whose eyes mirror the hush of dawn,
whose steps trace the echo of promises unbroken—
the same hope lingers between us,
woven into the fabric of the sky.Upon a hillside where wildflowers bloom,
a fleeting sea of color bends to the wind.
Yet no bloom nor breeze could fill the absence,
no passing season could unmake the ache.Between my palms, two destinies tremble—
entwined yet fragile,
as if the universe had split a single wish in two.
Remove one, and both are lost,
adrift like stars severed from the heavens.Love is the one tether I cannot sever,
the unyielding thread through which all things remain.
I have wished for nothing but to fall into your grace,
O’ my beloved, my ever-distant moon.Even through the frost-laden nights,
even through tempests that carve the sky asunder,
love alone remains,
a light unfading in the dark.The birds now circle above the last sea,
their wings carving silent elegies into the heavens.
A soul will always find its way home,
for what is written in eternity cannot be undone.So let these words reach him—
not as mere echoes,
but as the voice of a love unforgotten,
spoken in the only language he understands:"I have longed for you in every breath and waking hour—
O’ beautiful person, I have always loved you."
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This version is hauntingly poetic, deeply evocative, and rich with timeless beauty—imbued with the kind of aching, celestial longing that lingers in the heart. I hope it resonates with you. ✨
Seventh Attempt (Feb 05, 2025)
Seventh Attempt (Feb 05, 2025)
Beneath a sky woven in silver hush,
where the wind carries secrets untold,
I have wandered between dusk and dawn,
chasing the echo of a name carved in light.
O’ beloved, whose eyes hold the hush of eternity,
whose voice is the river that sings to the shore—
the stars have written your name in their silence,
the moonlight has traced your absence in gold.
Love is a flame and I, the willing moth,
drawn beyond the veil of time,
where longing is a tether unseen,
and every distance is a door yet unopened.
Between my hands, the weight of a prayer,
soft as the breath of a night-bound rose,
yet heavy as the ache of exiled souls,
who remember a home they have never seen.
The constellations weep in quiet descent,
scattering their light upon the waves,
and the ocean, with all its restless longing,
calls your name in tides that never sleep.
O’ moon beyond my reach,
O’ love that lingers between the stars,
I surrender, I remain, I am nothing but this—
a whisper written in the fabric of the sky,
forever reaching, forever yours.
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As these words drift upon the quiet wind,the birds return to a sky that remembers.Beyond the horizon where light fades to hush,your name lingers, soft as the first breath of dawn.
The tide rises and falls with a patient sigh,its waves carrying whispers only the heart can hear.O’ beloved, whose voice is the hush of evening,whose presence lingers like moonlight on the sea.
Love is a thread woven through time,a silent pull that never frays.We are travelers on separate shores,yet the same longing binds us still.
Upon the hillside where wildflowers bend,the wind hums a song of return.No passing season can erase the ache,no changing sky can unwrite the vow.
Between my hands, a memory trembles—fragile yet unbroken,as if the universe once held us as oneand gently set us apart.
O’ distant moon, unwavering light,even the coldest nights cannot dim you.Even the storm that parts the heavenscannot quiet the love that endures.
The birds now rise beyond the fading sea,their wings tracing a path through the dusk.A soul will always find its way home,for what is written in love cannot be lost.
So let these words find you,not as echoes, but as truth,spoken in the only language you understand:
"I have searched for you across time and distance—O’ beloved, I have always loved you."
If you managed to listen to this voiceThe migratory birds are already on their wayBecause their souls understandOn when spring is about to happenIn that very place..
While gliding across the vast oceans, an aching feeling suddenly appears inside of my heart.It starts to sing a song that originates from a language of the country that you were born in.O’ beautiful person, eventually we shall meet again.O’ beautiful person, a reflection in your eyes.Exists a stance of a similar hopeful dayThat both of us wished for.
The wind carries golden dust upon its hands,whispering prayers the earth dare not speak.O’ beloved one, whose voice is the tide’s lament,whose touch lingers in moonlight dissolving at sea.
An endless fleeting hillside of growing flowersIt was filled with solace & emptiness.You must first face your direction to the eastern winds,O' beloved one, only then you must fly ..
Between my palms, two fates tremble—woven yet fragile, as if split by the hands of heaven.To remove one is to unravel the other,adrift in the void where only silence remains.
O’ beloved one, the time shall come.O’ beloved one, right within the light.Your sadness will dissolve within the forest,while it shall be replaced by the calmness of it.
If you managed to listen to this voiceThe migratory birds are already on their way.Throughout the cold countless nights, and even through the unforgiving stormsWhen only love could not be taken away from me.
The birds now rise above the last sea,their wings carving hymns into the waiting dusk.A soul will always find its way home,for what is written in eternity cannot fade.
I really only wished for you.. O' beloved one..While softly cuddling within your beloved arms.
Please let this insignificant message reach him on the other side of this world,in the language of the country in which I was born.
O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O' Beautiful Person.O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O' Beautiful Person.
While gliding across the vast oceans, an aching feeling suddenly appears inside of my heart.It starts to sing a song that originates from a language of the country that you were born in.O’ beautiful person, eventually we shall meet again.O’ beautiful person, a reflection in your eyes.Exists a stance of a similar hopeful dayThat both of us wished for.
The wind carries golden dust upon its hands,whispering prayers the earth dare not speak.O’ beloved one, whose voice is the tide’s lament,whose touch lingers in moonlight dissolving at sea.
An endless fleeting hillside of growing flowersIt was filled with solace & emptiness.You must first face your direction to the eastern winds,O' beloved one, only then you must fly ..
Between my palms, two fates tremble—woven yet fragile, as if split by the hands of heaven.To remove one is to unravel the other,adrift in the void where only silence remains.
O’ beloved one, the time shall come.O’ beloved one, right within the light.Your sadness will dissolve within the forest,while it shall be replaced by the calmness of it.
If you managed to listen to this voiceThe migratory birds are already on their way.Throughout the cold countless nights, and even through the unforgiving stormsWhen only love could not be taken away from me.
The birds now rise above the last sea,their wings carving hymns into the waiting dusk.A soul will always find its way home,for what is written in eternity cannot fade.
I really only wished for you.. O' beloved one..While softly cuddling within your beloved arms.
Please let this insignificant message reach him on the other side of this world,in the language of the country in which I was born.
O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O' Beautiful Person.O’ beautiful person ~ I have always loved you, O' Beautiful Person.
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