Haiku 1, May 2008

(1) HAIKU SELECTIONS

NEO-CLASSICAL

WORLD HAIKU REVIEW Volume 6 Issue 3 - May 2008

Prunus 'Shirotae' in full bloom

NEO-CLASSICAL HAIKU

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THE BEST TEN

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FIRST PLACE

winter:

the river's impassioned flow

to reach pacific shores

Marie Shimane, Chiba, Japan

SECOND PLACE

blossom wind -

the lawnmower's

first sputter

Susan Constable, Nanoose Bay, BC, Canada

THIRD PLACE

roadside laughter...

a flipped glass marble catches

the autumn sunlight

Kala Ramesh, Pune, India

SEVEN HONOURABLE MENTIONS (In no particular order)

snowy night...

waiting for father's breath,

I hold mine

Irene Golas, Canada

voices of autumn--

some leaves will die silently,

some will struggle

Dana-Maria Onica, Petrosani, Romania

spring rain

playing in puddles

making bubbles

Marie Shimane, Chiba, Japan

new moon

a howling wind drowns out

the house crickets

Catherine J.S. Lee, Eastport, Maine, USA

frost-covered window

the fading desire

to write love poems

Peggy Heinrich, Santa Cruz, CA, USA

The wind sends

fallen leaves into

an empty grave.

Zoran Antonic, Veternik, Serbia

end of summer

...my bones turn to mist

Irene Golas, Canada

OTHER HAIKU OF MERIT (ZATSU-EI)

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Yellow leaves...

falling into an open palm

of a beggar

Zoran Antonic, Veternik, Serbia

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spotted faun

softly falling

early snow

Ernest Berry, New Zealand

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jiving butterflies

missing each other--

the day ending

John Bird, Australia

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autumn cool

watching the day moon

turn to blue

the gibbous moon

in a tangle of branches

winter solstice

Susan Constable, Nanoose Bay, BC, Canada

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watching and waiting--

for a total lunar eclipse

the brightness of Saturn

Gillena Cox -Trinidad And Tobago

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a crow wobbles

on the tip of a fir --

spring equinox

wild buttercups

a quiver moves along

the railway tracks

Laryalee Fraser, Canada

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dawn snow -

only the marks of

the garbage truck

misty clouds -

the sky-blue chimneys

of the incinerator

full moon

on the way back from work -

I switch the car radio off

Damien Gabriels, France

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autumn wind --

the old woman tries to hold

her tremor

bone scan --

autumn mist blurs

the pines

Irene Golas, Canada

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lost wedding ring-

fireflies flicker across

the field

Bryan Hansel, Grand Marais, MN, USA

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after many months...

spreading his ashes around

the lilacs he planted

Peggy Heinrich, Santa Cruz, CA, USA

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closing one eye

to view the moon -

autumn deepens

colin stewart jones, Aberdeen, Scotland, UK

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so far in the sky...

the spring moon, and yet

so near in the lake

spring moonset

night dissolves into the lake

bit by bit

Vidur Jyoti, India

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summer morning-

my imperfections

her love nonetheless

autumn dusk:

grandpa avoids walking

over fallen leaves

vishnu kapoor, India

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closing one eye

to view the moon -

autumn deepens

Montrose Basin

a cormorant splicing

two worlds

colin stewart jones

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desert lightning

the thunder

we don’t hear

Bill Kenney, Whitestone NY, USA

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floating moon…

but the stars have no home

in the water

frosty evening --

inside the church, stillness

and melting wax

burning sunshine --

splashes of orange lichen

on the dam

Anthony Anatoly Kudryavitsky, Ireland

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sleepless ...

behind the blinds

an icicle stabs the moon

Maya Lyubenova, Kotel, Bulgaria

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summer clouds —

an umbrella for the hawker

selling greens

monsoon evening —

lightning shows the path to kids

to reach home

spring morning dream —

unwillingly I get up

from 'savasan' (Savasan is a supine posture for rest in Yoga)

Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad, India

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A hog eats

the caps of acorns full

of autumn rain.

Vitomir Miletic – Witata, Petrovaradin, Serbia

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a flash of lightning

splits the darkened sky

scent of wet earth

Gautam Nadkarni, India

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hitori kite/sakabinn katate/haka arau

with his right hand

the man washes the tomb

a sake bottle in another

yuki nokori/aisho wo mune ni/kimi yukeri

the snow is left...

his favorite book

in his casket

kouunki/karasu sekirei/shitagae te

the cultivator leads

the crows ,the wagtails...

on parade

kurumaisu/noru hito mo naku/tsubaki ochi

a camellia falls...

the wheelchair has no one

to get in

nushi yukinu/hakurenn muku ni/yure yure te

the hostess is gone ...

the pure white magnolias

swinging in the air

Hisanori Ogane, Japan

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high meadows--

another summer crosses

the mountain

retouching

the golden strokes in icons

...spring sun

Dana-Maria Onica, Petrosani, Romania

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behind the willow curtain

the pen builds her nest

twig by twig

left inside the room

a party-goer’s coat –

this freezing night

Maeve O’Sullivan, Dublin, Ireland

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lightning flash--

six paper planes

in a puddle

Carol Pearce-Worthington, USA

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Pine pollen -

my red car becomes

dusty orange.

Blue-eyed grass

on my non-mowed lawn -

I move it to flower beds.

Mid-summer night -

the scent of yarrow

in the hay.

Yesterday,

a wavy field of fleabanes -

today, just hay.

Zhanna Rader, USA

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mist wraps

the twilight sky ~ sound

of the vast ocean

the milky way had

vanished ~ crickets listen

to the drizzle

temple pond ~

a solitary bather among

white water-lilies

spring dawn ~

the moon still above

the coconut tree

Narayanan Raghunathan, India

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summer afternoon...

watermelon juice drips

from the cart man's hand

summer afternoon...

the slow walk of

a pregnant goat

k. Ramesh

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waterfall. . .

do darting birds

tickle it?

from the cold

I step into a tap-dance rhythm...

a clock store

temple elephant—

a mahout rides into

the gathering mist

daybreak. . .

mist out of nowhere

slips over the pond

running colours . . .

raindrops slicing

the rainbow

Kala Ramesh, Pune, India

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The blind boy

Holding a pair of fireflies,

Touches his eyes

Firefly flashes light;

The cigar of a man

lights up too

Autumn wind

Fluttering twin-leaves

Become a butterfly

Parimala Rao, India

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Mother's Day:

moose teaches calf to jump

farmer's fence

Ash Wednesday:

priest blesses drivers

of snowmobiles

Janice Jordan Rosenberger, Vermont USA

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early spring

a baby steer weighted down

by its head

spring haze

in the bluebird's beak

tinge of red

bay stillness . . .

the sudden sharp rasping

of mangrove cicadas

almost falling out

of the tiniest sapling

tiny nest

Bruce Ross, Maine, USA

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A flaming maple leaf

on black asphalt - takes me

to next moment

Frost-covered birches

with blue patches of sky -

my winter icon

Riitta Rossilahti, Finland

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heat wave

even the moon

ripens fast

Ann K. Schwader, Westminster, CO, USA

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Flattened wheat

Twisting their necks,

young ears rise

An apricot tree meets

the wall. Young shoots

bend sunward

Moorland –

in a flash a march tit

brushes the mist

Slavko Sedlar, Vrsac, Serbia

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dragonfly....

only one day

at a time

shanna

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April blossoms

drift into yesterday…

the blossoms:

full again

fewer friends

the dragonfly

longing to delay

the final flight

Marie Shimane, Chiba, Japan

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Spring clean in the garden

Hands star'd by thorns

I think briars always win

Sleet falls at a wild slant

Sheets rip-flap on the clothesline -

A sodden slap.

Silver salver moon,

A tea tray to teapot earth –

Who shall be mother

Bee Smith

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Labor Day—

morning glories reach the top

of a silk tree

putting laundry away —

the naturalist’s sock drawer filled

with new-hatched mantis

Nancy Stewart Smith, Georgia, USA

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spring fair

hail bounces

on canvas awning

warm west wind

waving horizontally

loose spider's thread

Andre Surridge, Hamilton, NEW ZEALAND

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afternoon hail,

the bodyguards take cover

in the flower shop

behind the temple

next to the waterfall,

the abbot's Mercedes

Lars Vargo

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under the new snow

even the power plant

looks nice and clean

Vid Vukasovic, Beograd, Serbia

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silent dawn

the tulips bloom between

my daydreams

Bette Norcross Wappner, Erlanger, KY, USA

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desert moon

a coyote leaves

the chicken coop

Easter visit

she caresses the chip

on mother's tea cup

Carmel Westerman, USA

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early frost

my wife inhales the steam

from her coffee

summertime

mocking the mocking bird

mocking me

Gene Williamson, Galloway, NJ, USA

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Spring sea –

Wrinkled from the sun

And the storm

Freezing storm –

A stolen glance of a couple in love

Goes astray into the bus

(Translated from Croatian by Sasa Vazic)

Jadran zalokar

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