10/17
Post date: Oct 17, 2011 8:20:20 PM
Rewrite your essay. Your essay must be divided into paragraphs. Please make these changes or additions to each paragraph.
- The first sentence must be short (topic sentence)
- The second sentence must be a longer version of the first sentence (expand)
- The third sentence must do one of these
- provide sensory words (words related to sight, sound, texture, smell, or taste)
- give an example of what you are talking about
- state a fact about the paragraph's topic
- state an opinion about the paragraph's topic
- use an analogy, simile, or metaphor to describe how the topic is like or similar to some other thing
- The fourth sentence must give more information on anything from the first three sentences (elaborate)
- The fifth sentence should move the reader to your next topic (transition)
Note: You are not allow to begin two sentences with the same word per paragraph. Same instructions stated differently: No two sentences in any one paragraph may begin with the same word. Within one paragraph, all sentences must begin with a different word.