Post date: Jan 5, 2012 8:03:13 PM
1A: Grammar Review, four exercises from textbook.
2: Revise persuasive essay. Each paragraph needs five sentences. The fifth (or last if more than five) sentence needs to be a transition to the topic of the next paragraph. The thesis statement (paragraph A in the first version--it is the paragraph that states the item the student wants) is one of the last paragraphs. Same thing in different words: The paragraph were you say, "This is what I want" needs to go near the end of the essay.