Next, before we get any further...
I think understanding the scoring is the next most important thing after understanding the general concept. Before we get too ahead of ourselves with ideas or getting started... let's look at the scoring.
Logically, the place that makes the most sense to start with is Criterion A. Below is the rubric from IB that the report is scored against. We will look at the rubric here, and then compare it to a student sample from the IB.
NOTE: Evidence of consultation is often included in the appendices. There is no evidence of the consultation in the appendices.
Based on this submission, and the rubric above, what do you think it scored. Explain your decision.