storytext

10 jun 2015 6:34am

my first draft is pretty much stream of consciousness

there will be typos & mistakes

my choice of words will often be poor choices

i'm trying to keep the languaging as moderate & as accurate as possible

but i will slip from time to time here too

i will need to continuously reread & improve

better yet

i would love an editor

or even multiple editors

i want you to clearly understand

the intentions of my ideas

i'm not great at nailing this the first time thru

we all tend to write in a language

that makes the most sense to us

but often this misses the mark with others

please help suggest improvements