The single most useful thing we can do to keep on track with our haiku (not an epigram masquerading as a haiku!) is to ask ourselves:
DOES ANYTHING HERE INTERRUPT THE DELIVERY OF THE EXPERIENTIAL IMAGERY?
If something snags us on the verbal, then that something needs corrected. Definately. Then we can study check-lists and evaluate them with clarity. This initial question, though, holds it all together.*
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*Be careful - painting by numbers is ubiquitous, sadly.
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23-09-11
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