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--- In simply_haiku@yahoogroups.com, "donbairdsr" <kungfuinfo@...> wrote:
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> Hey John,
>
> This is different. Oddly enough, it reads as three separate statements to me. I'm sure that's your intention? (with a question mark). Possibly I should read it as L1/2 are together? There is a clear break between L2/3, to me. Interesting.
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> --- In simply_haiku@yahoogroups.com, "haiku crossroads" smallworld_1@ wrote:
> >
> > For me, a haiku appears as plasma, a tentative vortex, a wraith from a
> > place where logic thins out; which comes into focus out of the blue when
> > observing a small surprise - often whilst leaning on a gate in a
> > shadowed valley, or squatting on an upland tumulus, eating crisps with
> > the mountain spirits in the drizzle and the early morning mist.
> >
> > parts of sheep
> > visionary toadstools
> > Neolithic ghosts
> >
> > statics, swirls,
> > betwixts,
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > jp
> >
>