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--- In simply_haiku@yahoogroups.com, "donbairdsr" <kungfuinfo@...> wrote:

>

> Hey John,

>

> This is different. Oddly enough, it reads as three separate statements to me. I'm sure that's your intention? (with a question mark). Possibly I should read it as L1/2 are together? There is a clear break between L2/3, to me. Interesting.

>

> --- In simply_haiku@yahoogroups.com, "haiku crossroads" smallworld_1@ wrote:

> >

> > For me, a haiku appears as plasma, a tentative vortex, a wraith from a

> > place where logic thins out; which comes into focus out of the blue when

> > observing a small surprise - often whilst leaning on a gate in a

> > shadowed valley, or squatting on an upland tumulus, eating crisps with

> > the mountain spirits in the drizzle and the early morning mist.

> >

> > parts of sheep

> > visionary toadstools

> > Neolithic ghosts

> >

> > statics, swirls,

> > betwixts,

> >

> >

> >

> >

> > jp

> >

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