Found Poetry

Found poetry:

In my poem I had found the words "you love possibilities and yet could not help us". When i think of the poem i imagine someone reaching out and trying to help someone, so that is what i drew. My picture went through 2 stages. The first one was a hand reaching out and falling apart. This picture looked better but i dont think really fit in so i re-drew it with a hand reaching down for someone. This way it looks like the person who could not help them.

I think my picture turned out decent. I think that the texture of the hand looked pretty good and the cross hatching i tried looked okay. Also the shape of the hand makes sense. I mean that it looks like a real hand that someone would have. I also added a lot of stuff around the hand to kind of make it looks amonous and maybe a little dirty. I mean dirty because the persons hand is coming from something that looks gross. I made it this way because i wanted it to look like the hand was corrupt and that's why it could not help them before it was to late.

The only problem I have with my picture and that i would change is the font of the letters and the gross stuff at the top. I feel like it looks poorly done and the hand looks much better.