Here's a ku with an interesting L1 optionality. Let's list synonyms for "evening" and add some to the ku, for comparison. . . dusk, eve, eventide, evensong, gloaming, half-light, last phase, late-afternoon, nightfall, nighttide, sundown, sunset, twilight, vespersCame up with this first :
April evening-
the last crow home
fades to black
Then thought an alternative :
April eventide-
the last crow home
fades to black
Then wondered about other options. . .
April dusk-
the last crow home
fades to black
April eve-
the last crow home
fades to black
April evensong-
the last crow home
fades to black
April half-light -
the last crow home
fades to black
April late afternoon-
the last crow home
fades to black
April nightfall-
the last crow home
fades to black
April nighttide-
the last crow home
fades to black
April sundown-
the last crow home
fades to black
April sunset
the last crow home
fades to black
April twilght-
the last crow home
fades to black
April vespers-
the last crow home
fades to black