cut

leaving their ivy

a kaleidoscope of butterflies

use the broken window

Evening from the Northern Hemisphere all:

Very Happy

To cut (sic) a long story short, let's see what we have, using the above ku as an example. . .

As well as splitting two sections of a ku, for contrast /comparison; the split may also serve as a pivot (the cut's dash is, in optional effect, a hinge). Let's see what that looks like. . .

  • FORMAL JUX OPTIONALITY

  • leaving their ivy

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies- <-- hinge (pivot)

  • use the broken window

  • leaving their ivy

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies

  • use the broken window

  • FREE FORM JUX OPTIONALITY

  • leaving their ivy

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies

  • use the broken window

Because a cut emphasises the subsequent phrase, that phrase is dominant as a response to the call - so to say. Usually a punchline. Therefore, the question is one of emphasis vs fluidity.

  • leaving their ivy

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies

  • use the broken window

  • leaving their ivy

  • a kaleidoscope of butterflies-

  • use the broken window <-- cut risks L3 overemphasis?

What do you reckon? Something for us to ponder. . .

jp

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08-04-13

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