4 seasons

Lake

spring

only my song

disturbs the wind

summer

only my campfire

disturbs the stars

autumn

only my memory

disturbs the trees

winter

only my eyes

disturb the view

pic: free clipart

jp© 15 February 2007

E P H E M E R A

Responses to the haiku for 15 February 2007 by Chaffinch [ jp ]

Gosia Zamorska

2007-02-13 01:23:52

I'm under great impression.

This is the thing I've been trying to say all my life.

Excellent ( ) not bad (✓) could do better ( ) don’t call us, we’ll call you ( )

Bill Kenney

2007-02-13 07:47:14

A moment that goes on and on.

Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)

2007-02-15 00:23:31

Truly striking ku!

Rita Odeh

2007-02-15 03:31:47

A delightful haiku.Enjoyed.

BUT THERE'S ALWAYS ONE

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b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2007-02-15 06:57:27

spinner, there's nothing new under the sun; newness is in that which is being seen by a person for the first time, though experienced many times previously by others. if we searched far enough, pass our first encounter, we shouldn't be surprised to see (it) having been done times before, even word for word.

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no reflection, chaffinch

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racing pass

greying clouds...

the snow moon

Excellent ( ) not bad ( ) could do better (✓) don’t call us, we’ll call you ( )

John

2007-02-15 07:34:54

spring lake -

only my song

disturbs the wind

-chaffinch

There seems to be an interesting sequence to my little haiku - I will follow this trail (the best haikus are absent of their author, even if in the first person?).

NOTE: 'chaffinch' is an anonym of mine (of course:)

Dirk van Nouhuys

2007-02-15 09:08:04

Wow! Great!

laryalee

2007-02-15 22:49:53

Oh, I really love this one!!!!

Collin Barber

2007-02-16 10:51:25

Dirk says it all for me. Nicely done.

Collin

John

2007-02-16 12:42:10

summer lake -

only my campfire

disturbs the stars

autumn lake

only my memory

disturbs the trees

..This could drive a person nuts!

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