Sentence variety
word choice (especially verbs)
strong, active, precise
watch out for too similar traits
what's important about Charles and his mother's request
What is significant about killing Dr. Manette of all people? What's the irony?
thesis statements
many nobles just like the Evremondes
Foulon the ????
the Marquis with his chocolate
willingness to die vs a willingness to kill
Defarge as a hypocrite