Table of Contents (p. 2)
Insert a space between each "Chapter" and the chapter number.
Introduction (p. 2)
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Chapter One: Warrior Creation (p. 3)
p. 4, Mercenary: "Jack-of-all Trades" should be "Jack-of-All-Trades".
p. 5, Commander: The second "spend" should be "spent".
p. 7, Berzerking: This header should be "Berserking".
Chapter Two: Skills and Feats (p. 11)
p. 19, Helpful: A good enough Aid check result already grants higher bonuses.
p. 20, Instant Stand: The Kip Up use of the Acrobatics skill already does this.
p. 22, Strafe: Delete "the" in the first sentence.
Chapter Three: The Arsenal (p. 25)
p. 26, Concealable Scalar Vest: In the main text, this item's name is "concealable" but the armor table gives it as "concealed".
Chapter Four: Expanded Combat (p. 39)
No notes.
Index (p. 63)
No notes.
License (p.64)
No notes.