pp. 2-3, Elen Coaler: Their Background should be "Aldin", not "Aldis".
pp. 4-5, Liza Rookbane: Swift Shooter Liza adds her Strength (4) to damage with thrown blade (1d6+4) and rapier (1d6+5). Crossbow damage adds Perception (0), so is correct.
Dual Weapon Fighter Liza adds her Strength (4) to damage with longswords (2d6+4). She changes her Defence to 11, not her Speed.
pp. 6-7, Beatrice: No notes.
pp. 8-9, Hugo Shelley: Under Scout Hugo, delete the extra parenthesis after "Stealth".
pp. 10-11, Nidae Dal: No notes.
pp. 12-13, Volata Caribus: Under Arcane Volata, "Add: Enhancement to Arcana" should read "Add: Arcana: Enhancement". (Standard Volata has no arcana.)
Swashbuckling Volata should move 1 or 2 points from Fighting to Accuracy, as he no longer has any Fighting weapons.
pp. 14-15, Jansen Keppler: No notes.
A quick summary of the seven starting characters follows:
Actions card: Under Minor Actions, Press the Attack and Prepare are out of alphabetical order. (This was apparently done to avoid an awkward column break after the second header if they appeared in order.)