Table of Contents (p. 2)
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Introduction (p. 2)
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Chapter One: Adept Creation (p. 3)
pp. 11-12, Polytheism: Canonical and Barred powers should be separated by a semi-colon, but only two entries (Order, Sun) do this.
p. 14, Thaumaturgist Heroic Path: Summon Outsider cannot be a starting power; it has a prerequisite of 6th level.
Chapter Two: Supernatural Skills (p. 15)
p. 16, Knowledge (astrology): Under Determine Inception, "heaves" should be "heavens".
Chapter Three: Supernatural Feats (p. 19)
p. 22, Mind Trap: There is already a Psychic Trap power (not feat) in the core rulebook.
Chapter Four: New Supernatural Powers (p. 27)
pp. 30-31, New Supernatural Powers: On p. 31, "Summon Farie Folk" should be "Summon Faerie Folk".
pp. 32-33, Binding: Under Hold Creature, does the parenthetical last sentence refer to the save attempt (in which case it's redundant) or to the time to cast the power (in which case that should notes under Time)? The texts states that Supernatural Slumber is more difficult to cast than Chaining, but both have the dame Difficulty number. Metamorphosis and Minimus seem to be effectively identical--why not just merge them?
p. 33, Bless: Under Bless Water, "Holy waster" should be "Holy water".
p. 34, Blood Shaping: Anemia could be accurately be renamed Hemophilia.
p. 37, Digital Form: The prerequisite should be "Computer Link".
p. 38, Drain Ability: Change "skill check" to "power check".
pp. 38-39, Electronics Shaping: Insert a horizontal line between the Prerequisite and Haywire. Under Supernatural Security Pass, capitalize skill names (Disable Device, Computers).
p. 43, Infuse Projectiles: In the last sentence, does "an additional amount of fire damage" refer to the damage bonus in the previous sentence? (The phrasing could be a bit more polished.)
p. 43, Life Drain: "Mental Contact (see description)" should be in the same line as Fatiguing, not a Prerequisite.
p. 44, Linguistics: Should "their adept level" read "your adept level"?
p. 44, Magma Shaping: Under Magma Geyser, "the widen power" should be "Widen Power".
p. 58, Multiple Grapples: The aid bonus may be higher than +2 (see core rules, p. 9).
Chapter Five: Supernatural Items (p. 59)
p. 60, Single-Use Supernatural Item: If using the Specific Craft Skills from the True20 Expert's Handbook (pp. 20-24), use (chemistry) for (alchemy), (mechanical) for (bowyer/fletcher) and (gunsmith), and (visual art) for (calligraphy).
p. 62, Permanent Supernatural Items: In the second paragraph, insert a period after "receptacle for the imbued powers" and change "items)." to "items.)".
p. 63, Buying and Selling Supernatural Items: Instead of doubling with each power, increase by 100%. (Example: 4 imbued feats should cost 500% [+400%] rather than 2^4 = 1600%.)
pp. 63-64, Sample Golems: The natural armor entry should not be italicized. Only the first part of each line under Flesh Golem should be italicized.
Chapter Six: Optional Rules (p. 65)
p. 70, Rain Dance: The Supernatural Power lien should be moved to after the description paragraph.
pp. 72-73, Gathering Mana: Change "wind elementals" to "air elementals".
p. 76, Casting Runes: In the fifth paragraph, change "name, identity, and alignment" to "name or identity"; True20 uses Nature instead of alignment.
For runes that emulate powers, do they use a standard power check (adept level +3, plus key ability)? (Per p. 12, Rune Casting, the key ability is Wisdom.)
pp. 76-77, The Three Attets: A list of the attets might be useful:
3 x 8 = 24, not 32.
p. 77, Maat & Maug Forms: 3 x 8 = 24, not 32.
p. 77, Bytarun; p. 79, Os; and p. 80, Wyn": How do you carve a fabric cloak? Shouldn't that be "woven" or "embroidered"?
p. 78, Hegal: Under Hegal-Maug, "lighning" should be "lightning".
p. 79, Rad: The "1st" after "Attet" should not be bold. Under Rad-Maug, "boot's" should be "boots'".
Chapter Seven: Adept Organizations (p. 81)
pp. 82-83, Illuminates of Thanteros: Change "one-another" to "one another".
p. 83, Monks of Medmenham (The Hellfire Club): Should "Francs" be "Francis"?
p. 83, Thule Society: Under Supernatural Philosophies, "Runecasting" should be "Rune Casting". Under membership, "neo-nazi" should be "neo-Nazi".
Index (p. 84)
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License (p. 86)
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