Poem Of The Month: March 2010

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"Emotional Map of Greater Belfast" by Ray Givans.

Taken from the Collection "Going Home."

February’s Poem Can Still Be Viewed Here

EMOTIONAL MAP OF GREATER BELFAST

For Tony Martin

1. ARRIVAL

On this, his first visit, my artist cousin uncurls

a map of Greater Belfast, brings with him

a baggage of colours transported from Manhattan

to his studio in pollution-conscious Portland.

They’d smear blood red across this city’s

northern quarter, plumes of smoky-black

igniting in nightfall messaged bottles,

flame-green flak jackets and scowl

of riot shields overlapping in pale washes.

2. THE FIRST TEMPTING

Looking down from Napoleon’s Nose I tempt

you to paint a troubled scene. No need

to finger the terraced rows below, we’ll

delve in archives at the Linen Hall,

uncover skinny lads in scruffy clothes

posed before a smoking burnt-out van

with hands and scarves to mask their faces. Perhaps

you’d add a cudgel to the smallest nipper’s hand

and paint the eyes less harshly; big and watery

and sad. Some sap green and ochre, some soft blue

and yellow to smooth the hard edges of the canvas.

3. THE SECOND TEMPTING

Or might I tempt you tonight from the tallest

rooftop to look north: two bridges straddle

passive Lagan’s mauve and blues. The quayside

lights submerge as apparitions, or tiptoe

as angels swayed by the genteel plash of water.

Distant, unpeopled, the city sparkles with clusters

of mellow suns and stars, and arcs of red

and yellow half-moons.

Above,

the sky is stroked with salmon pink and muted

turquoise releases a genie of dispersing blue

into misty-eyed, chocolate-coated hills.

4. RESOLVE

I offer you these options, assured that either

way you’ll make a killing, back in the USA.

I make you think about the spin-offs: posters,

postcards, the tea towel images …

But

looking down you won’t be bound within

these hills and lough and sky. Your eye decodes,

your hand will sift the pieces of an elaborate

jigsaw, etch in black and white the keys

of distant terracing, that slots in perpendiculars,

horizontals as if to form the facade of a Roman temple.

The scene bleeds its reds to the north of the slate-

grey, curvaceous Lagan.

5. THE JOURNEY

I STORMONT

We balloon down across the city.

I flick through a tourist guide, ‘What to See’,

veer towards Stormont’s Portland stone;

hover over the hum of coaches. Its flock,

unleashed, click Sam or Mary-Bet before

the mile long steep incline.

Wanting more

you throw out ballast. We rise above the uniform

rows of lime trees, dip for you to pluck

a bunch of broom, alone, in open fields

beyond the Ice Bowl.

II TULLYCARNET

As we soar

above Langholm, Stornoway and Selkirk’s high-

rise flats, you put the broom in an endangered

living window, with tieback shimmering

curtains as parenthesis. It burns with an iridescent

flame.

III ANNADALE

Upwards

&

onwards we view the Lagan from Annadale.

At ground level, road and railings and river

are understated, bland. Only the people

looking downward, introspective, draw

on blue and brown and yellow, as perpendicular

trees and lighting pull the eye to the skyline.

The treetops are delicate as dandelion clocks: a breath

might feather their leaves to the distant liquid

horizon, where sycamores red-tongue the sky.

IV SHAFTSBURY SQUARE

You simplify the colours:

all lines swirl, a flood

as black & red rockets.

White vapour-trails

intersect in a splash

of vermilion: white

slicks, a fluid screen.

V DIPTYCH

It could be any back street

near the Hammer or Lower

Ormeau. A wall is daubed

with conflicting flags,

graffiti. In front you extract

the features of an old man;

glasses, not quite fitting,

corrosive teeth, face

etched with fault-lines,

wide, hospitable smile.

At his feet the pigeons pour

over pockmarks. Several

congeal in a many-

headed mass. One

with wings outstretched

rises into clear

tranquil blue.

A Very Interesting Clip On Google Video

Poets Exposed: Ray Givans

Charmain Porter talks to some of Northern Ireland’s finest poets. From the age of 19 until he was 24 Ray Givans wrote poetry but then he stopped to concentrate on teaching. He talks about how a poem written by George Best inspired him to start writing poetry again.

EMOTIONAL MAP OF GREATER BELFAST

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Preview Ray Givans' Collection: Going Home

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A mother, exhausted

lies full-length

on a bed of straw.

Her baby is pale, delicate.

The nurses in Mater and Ulster

uniforms crouch between

the snorting donkeys, look

at the mother’s broad

smile. Two windows,

partially open, are rapped

by symmetrical branches

of a tree rocks that rocks

backwards and forwards.